The second book in the Caladan trilogy, The Lady of Caladan picks up where The Duke of Caladan left off.
The illicit drug Ailar has resurfaced on Caladan, confounding the Atreides government. To complicate matters further, the Baron Harkonnen issues a challenge to his nephews, Feyd and Rabban, to come up with individual plans to hurt House Atreides as a test to demonstrate their fitness as his potential successors. (I don’t find this arc particularly believable…but, oh well.) Jaxson Aru continues to work his schemes as the leader of the Noble Commonwealth rebellion, wreaking havoc across the Imperium. Shaddam is ever Shaddam, and Count Fenring has his hands full managing the political fallout of the Emperor’s new spice surtax, while simultaneously hunting down a rogue group of smugglers stealing spice on Arrakis.
While I’m finding some aspects of the story to be enjoyable, the plot is characteristically thin. Unfortunately, Brian Herbert and Kevin Anderson are just terrible when it comes to creating something that comes together in a cohesive way, and I can’t help but find myself frustrated with them at times. (For example, at one point they write in an attack on the Imperial palace by having a terrorist fly a stolen Imperial ship into it, and then they make the statement that such a direct attack against the capital hasn’t happened since the attacks on Salusa Secundus. This is despite the fact that a mere two or three years before these events (see Princess of Dune), the rebel leader Moko Zenha directly attacks the palace using stolen Imperial fleet vessels, some of which literally crash into the palace. It’s the exact same plot device. Granted, PoD was written after this book, but you’d think that if they cared about cohesion across their stories, they’d have these things in mind.)
The other issue I take with the Herbert/Anderson style is how contrived their plots are, and just how convenient and small their portrayal of the Dune universe really is. A small example is when Jessica is reassigned to House Tull on Elegy, and of all the planets in the Imperium, her estranged Duke Leto just happens to travel there at the same time without any knowledge of where she is. Another example is when Xora and two other Bene Gesserit sisters travel to Caladan on separate trips, and both Feyd’s assassin and the Lady Jessica happen to have perfectly random chance encounters with the aforementioned parties at just the right times. And how about Halleck getting nabbed BY THE HARKONNENS, AND having his implant discovered? *massive eye roll* In an empire of a million worlds, things happen in such convenient ways and in such tiny circles. Where is the imagination here?
I love Dune, and I love the Dune community, which by default extends to Brian and Kevin’s books. But they’re not great, and that much is well known. Unfortunately, writing dozens of books doesn’t necessarily make you better at it. It’s sad that they can’t do such a rich universe any justice. Where’s a mentat when you need one…or just a good editor?
But my complaints aside…I am still (relatively) enjoying this trilogy, once I work through the sporadic episodes of irritation which arise from reading it. I find Jaxson Aru’s character arc to be interesting, as well as Giandro Tull’s. Both are sympathetic characters. Leto’s story is developing nicely as he goes underground in a deadly game of chess between the Imperium and the rebellion. Jessica navigating the Sisterhood as it splits into factions around her decision to bear a son has been an interesting arc to follow as well. The story isn’t completely without its virtues. I look forward to seeing if they can manage to make the last book of the trilogy somewhat more coherent and less contrived than things have been thus far.
3 out of 5 stars.