Creed Cervantes

by HiroYuu101

Unknown Binding

Reviews

[Kathleen Fuentes]

here's my honest hones honest revieww.


I liked it, I liked the story line well maybe hindi ganoon kase naka focus siya sa romance and not sa plot na want ko—the Human Chess game. Hindi siya nabigyan ng pansin masyado, naka detail lang siya nung medyo papaend na yung book. But for the girlies who loves indisturbed romance maybe this'll work for y'all.

In addition to thattt, I'm not mad with the age gap, it's just I think sa writing na-iinvalidate yung age ni Maria. She acts like a highschooler rather than a college student which make me slightly uncomfortable sa age gap trope nila ni Creed, but like I said I enjoyed it!!


So in conclusion, I'm just not into the writing style, got a bit uncomfy sa trope nila. I liked the book, baka sana mas binigyang pansin sana yung EL Orde and how the Human Chess game truly works and sana nakasama yung pagiging in action nila sa game. Overall tho? 3.5!! I loved the special chapters where Maria and Creed bacame parents of 2, got a bit emotional theree!


ps: I also didn't like how naive and very innocent Maria is to the point she asked Creed to marry her in a hostpital://.

[★彡]

Finished reading Fatima and Sir Creed’s story after exactly a month!. this is my second time reading a book from hiro and it’s still one of the best 💯. Love how Fatima was this innocent but smart kind of girl while Creed was a man whose smile is only for her. 💗 aND ALSO AAAAAA I FEEL SO BAD FOR FATIMA’S PARENTS 😭 especially her brother??? he really deserves to live and be with her sister and witness her grow as a woman:(. I was so sad reading the epilogue yung scene nina Fatima and her brother na nasira ni Creed yung laruang sasakyan ni Fatima 😔 but I just know how proud of him for how his sister has become ☹️.

anyway, glad I was part of your lovely journey Maria Fatima Fiestada and chess piece Sir Creed Cervantes. I love you both, hanggang sa uulitin! 🤍

[jervss]

Super sweet ni Maria and sir Creed! Grabee rin yung pinagdaanan nilang dalawa huhuhu. Natouch ako doon sa part na naging fav ni Creed yung lumpia dahil kay little Maria! Kapag kaya naglaw student ako magkakaroon din ako ng 30k a month na naging 100k? Makakabili rin kaya ako ng Iphone 11 na nagkakahalagang 10k? (10 k ba 0 9999?) AHAAh super random ng review ko

[Hyacinth]

ang ganda as the first story of the series, creed is so funny and cute but dangerous lol. Anyways 4 lang kasi the age gap and the says nila na sugar daddy daw si creed kasi nagpapa aral sya, I didn't like it but overall it's good and ang ganda ng flow

[Nueva Gramatica]

This guyyyyyyyyy! I really love him, I’m also addicted to Lumpiang Shanghai! I was questioning his intention at first, not sure about why my mind thought about that. HAHAHAHA! I had some second hand embarrassment reading through this book but overall, it was great! ❤️

[Biancaaa]

I just hate how childish Maria is. I do love Creed though

[Lee]

It was okay po.