ACOMAF Part 2.1: The House of Wind

ACOMAF (Rhys POV) #2

by IllyrianTremors

Chapters 14-27 of ACOMAF from Rhysand's POV.

Starting with Chapter 14: Rhys brings Feyre to Velaris after saving her from Tamlin's prison in the Spring Court. His inner circle crashes their brief landing in Rhys's townhouse, sending Feyre upstairs. Downstairs, Rhys chats with his family and learns about another temple raid from Azriel.

Genres: Fantasy, Fan Fiction, Romance, Fiction, Fae

ebook

Published March 19, 2017

Reviews

[Drusilla · Rating 5 out of 5]

The idea that Rhys is almost clueless about Feyre’s feelings and thoughts gives it a wonderful touch. Somehow, when reading the original, I always had the imagination that Rhys was picking up more from her. But when you imagine that he is almost unaware of her, his understanding of Feyre is all the more wonderful. Awww I'm floored by this.

I just wanted to touch her, to bring her close and hold her until it was okay or less not okay, if such a thing existed anymore. 🥺😢🤧
To hold her. To keep her safe. To live when she lived and die when she died. 😭😩😪

This part is about Feyre's first days in Velaris and includes one of my favorite scenes at the very end when Feyre is winnowing for the first time.

I solidified on the earth and spun, Feyre was right in front of me appearing out of her own mist - winnowing with her powers cascading around her in a frenzy.
It was the most beautiful, wonderful vision I’d ever seen.
And I loved every second of it that she let me witness before her body crushed mine and we landed in a heap of tangled limbs and grinning snarls on the snow. 😍😍😍

[scar! . *. ⋆ (Johnny kavanaghs version) · Rating 5 out of 5]

Part 3 im coming babe

[Issy · Rating 3 out of 5]

Written well, I could almost imagine SJM had written it herself.

[Caz · Rating 4 out of 5]

Is it SJM? No.
Will I devour any crumbs related to her multiverse? Yes.

[Cassandra · Rating 5 out of 5]

NEXT

[Sophie Ponce de Leon · Rating 5 out of 5]

Just keeps getting better and better

[Mel (thebookishmel) · Rating 5 out of 5]

IT BROKE ME AT THE END but damn do I love this tandem read

[Alisha Buchanan · Rating 4 out of 5]

Seriously obsessed with being inside Rhysand’s mind for all of this. The author truly does a great job ✨

[Lauren Stone · Rating 5 out of 5]

You literally couldn’t convince me that sjm didn’t write this.

[Mariejose Agop · Rating 5 out of 5]

pain pain pain

[A girl between books · Rating 4 out of 5]

Como se nota el crecimiento en cuanto a escritura que tuvo la persona que escribio este fanfic. Si en la primera parte me generaba un poco de dudas, en esta parte puedo decir que fue SJM quien lo escribió.
Sabia que me iba a gustar bastante pero no pensaba que iba a amar TANTO leer desde el POV Rhys. Antes de empezarlo yo pensaba que Rhys se iba a re dar cuenta de los sentimientos de Feyre y desde antes de que ella misma se diera cuenta, pero en realidad Rhys está tan negado como a ella en verlo.
Lo voy a volver a repetir: esta persona hizo muy bien en meterse en la cabeza de Rhys porque estoy 1000% que todo lo que piensa es canon.


Porque estoy re manija, voy a proceder a poner partes que tengo marcadas y me encantaron:

“𝘙𝘩𝘺𝘴?” 𝘍𝘦𝘺𝘳𝘦 𝘲𝘶𝘪𝘳𝘬𝘦𝘥 𝘩𝘦𝘳 𝘣𝘳𝘰𝘸 𝘶𝘱 𝘢𝘵 𝘮𝘦 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘐 𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘭𝘪𝘻𝘦𝘥 𝘐 𝘸𝘢𝘴 𝘴𝘵𝘪𝘭𝘭 𝘴𝘮𝘪𝘭𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘭𝘪𝘬𝘦 𝘢 𝘭𝘰𝘴𝘵 𝘧𝘰𝘰𝘭 𝘢𝘵 𝘩𝘦𝘳.

𝐌𝐲 𝐥𝐢𝐟𝐞 𝐟𝐞𝐥𝐭 𝐜𝐨𝐦𝐩𝐥𝐞𝐭𝐞 𝐣𝐮𝐬𝐭 𝐥𝐨𝐨𝐤𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐚𝐭 𝐡𝐞𝐫.

𝙹𝚞𝚜𝚝 𝚝𝚎𝚕𝚕 𝚖𝚎 𝚘𝚗𝚎 𝚝𝚑𝚒𝚗𝚐 - 𝚘𝚗𝚎 𝚙𝚒𝚎𝚌𝚎 𝚘𝚏 𝚢𝚘𝚞𝚛𝚜𝚎𝚕𝚏 𝚝𝚑𝚊𝚝 𝚒𝚜 𝚛𝚎𝚊𝚕, 𝚝𝚑𝚊𝚝 𝚒𝚜 𝚑𝚘𝚗𝚎𝚜𝚝, 𝚝𝚑𝚊𝚝 𝚒𝚜𝚗’𝚝 𝚓𝚞𝚜𝚝 𝚝𝚘 𝚜𝚙𝚒𝚝𝚎 𝚖𝚎. 𝚃𝚎𝚕𝚕 𝚖𝚎 𝚘𝚗𝚎 𝚙𝚒𝚎𝚌𝚎 𝚘𝚏 𝚢𝚘𝚞𝚛 𝚜𝚘𝚞𝚕, 𝙵𝚎𝚢𝚛𝚎, 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚢𝚘𝚞 𝚌𝚊𝚗 𝚑𝚊𝚟𝚎 𝚊𝚕𝚕 𝚘𝚏 𝚖𝚒𝚗𝚎...

𝑭𝒆𝒚𝒓𝒆 𝒘𝒂𝒔 𝒊𝒏𝒇𝒊𝒏𝒊𝒕𝒆. 𝑨𝒔 𝒊𝒏𝒇𝒊𝒏𝒊𝒕𝒆 𝒂𝒔 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒔𝒆𝒂 𝒂𝒏𝒅 𝒔𝒕𝒂𝒓𝒔. 𝑺𝒉𝒆 𝒋𝒖𝒔𝒕 𝒅𝒊𝒅𝒏’𝒕 𝒌𝒏𝒐𝒘 𝒊𝒕 𝒚𝒆𝒕.

[Allie Whitethorn · Rating 4 out of 5]

well, the end of this was gutting!

this novella kinda made rhys seem more like an asshole at times, so it’s kind of interesting seeing how the author perceived him vs how i did when reading acomaf. of course there are sooo many sweet moments with him and how much he cares for feyre. he does seem a little colder in this interpretation than i would have expected overall

it was definitely good! i like seeing it based on rhys’s pov for a fresh perspective. i enjoyed the background of him having feyre hunt for the ring, etc.

there were some really good quotes in this one that i highlighted! definitely excited to see where the next takes the story

[Kelsey · Rating 4 out of 5]

I enjoyed this one better than part one, but it does still feel like some of the thoughts could be developed a little bit better. It seems like there are a lot more scenes in this one where Feyre is not around. And because of that, they do not appear in the original book and so they are completely new scenes to the story. I really enjoy these new scenes because it kind of just fills in the holes from the original author, who just left us kind of an unspoken understanding.

[Erica]

again, wish it had more insight into some of the lines but i don’t fully know what we actually know and what hasn’t been said in the series yet so maybe im being wrongly critical. i think there was one non cannon scene in this entire subsection and i enjoyed it! hope there is some more to come

feel weird about rating these for some reason maybe because so much of the text is directly copied.

[alsie 𐙚 · Rating 5 out of 5]

”Soul divine, I wanted her. Wanted more than just a hand to hold in the dark, more than just a touch to push forward through the crowded passageways of death and decay. Wanted to knit our beings together until we were one and she never cried again for lack of light or love or sun.
I can be your Light, I thought. Though I am the Night, let me be your Moon. I can reflect the Sun. Let me find the light for you, Feyre.”

feyre’s pov: revenge. pain. trauma.
rhys’ pov: feyre feyre feyre feyre feyre ❤️❤️❤️

[Noelia · Rating 5 out of 5]

+++♾️/5⭐

Es que por esto es por lo que leo, para SENTIR tanto que tenga el corazón pleno, llevo a rebosar.

Estoy viendo cómo se enamoran y es tan, pero tan bonito (y lo es más al leerlo desde la perspectiva de Rhys🥹🥹), y esto, esto es la definición de ✨amor✨ que todo el mundo debería sentir alguna vez en su vida🥹❤️‍🩹

[Tiffany · Rating 3 out of 5]

Loved to read about Rhysand’s POV but felt like he was too passionate (almost obsessed) over Feyre. Not sure if I like this overzealous trait of him that we don’t particular see in the original series

[Jade Maree · Rating 5 out of 5]

All of these are so INCREDIBLY amazing! 🤩
Love that she has her shield up so Rhys has absolutely no idea what she’s thinking and he’s super anxious about losing her. Like anything he could do could potentially lose Feyre forever. ♾️

[Ruth Job Salamanca · Rating 5 out of 5]

Losing my mind with these chapters even though I know what happens 🤣

[Madison Hurst · Rating 4 out of 5]

If she wanted to, she could have ripped me into shreds.

And I would have let her

[Shannon · Rating 4 out of 5]

4 stars only because I can’t completely equate it to the actual book

[Savannah Medina · Rating 4 out of 5]

Love this so much!

[Jessica Rempel · Rating 4 out of 5]

A little too cannon for my liking, but I still really liked it! It got me trapped in the world of wings and magic and so now I have to read ACOWAR :)

[Amanda Mathiesen · Rating 5 out of 5]

There's no such thing as too much Rhys, so I will always support works from his stance!

[nocneopowiesci · Rating 5 out of 5]

rhys being completely clueless about feyre’s feelings is my roman empire

[Kayla Marie Lina · Rating 4 out of 5]

Fan fiction told from Rhys POV. Good rendition however some typos throughout. Additionally some parts felt off. Overall very good fan rendition

[Zabeth · Rating 5 out of 5]

⭐️5/5🌶️3/5 🌻15/20📚117/240

🇺🇸okay i can’t stop reading. This is so good.

[Neha Jain · Rating 5 out of 5]

It was so much fun to read from Rhys POV. Didnt feel like i was reading a fanfic. Great job. Some parts, i did tandem read and it was great experience

[Maja · Rating 4 out of 5]

But did i stop with the first one? Ofc not, there was no stopping me now

[Elle · Rating 5 out of 5]

Heeheeheehee