MAY HAVE TINY SPOILERS IN THIS REVIEW:
I can’t say I really enjoyed this book. Kind of unfortunate. It was super inconsistent and Rocky. The idea of the story was decent, but the execution struck it down for me. That and the fact that the characters felt super flat and cliche. I didn’t connect with any of these characters as much as I tried.
I’m not a fan of Madison. At all. I see a lot of people liked her and it confuses me. She would talk about how she’s tough and was raised to stand her ground but any time someone breathed in her direction, she started crying??? I don’t know why that’s a likable trait. Might just be me. But regardless, I didn’t like her, no one likes a crybaby that tries to play off the “I’m super tough” card.
Kyler...I suppose decent. Closed off, hard to be around, and super up and down. He was so very inconsistent though. He was also pretty dang sure about his skills in the bed...but how does he even know how he’s going to be? The whole virgin for the hero thing would’ve been okay had he been more..reluctant? I’m not finding the correct word. After (unfortunately unsurprising) finding out Kyler was a victim of abuse, it didn’t fit the profile.
The part that was realistic about Kyler and his abuse was not letting anyone close to him, or touch him. That is a thing victims do.
There were also a lot of moments that were very problematic for me. She tells him she’s a virgin, he freaks out, she leaves, he chases her down and says sorry, he takes her virginity.
“She forgave easily.”
What was even redeemable at that moment? He made her feel ashamed of her virginity, he said sorry, and she gave it up?
Another thing... where’s Black Mountain Academy? Besides the brief moments of mentioning it. This book doesn’t seem to fit in with the other books. The idea, FOR SURE, not the execution or premise.
I want to say right now, this is just my personal opinion. A lot of people enjoyed this, but I didn’t.