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Sharing Jill: The Finale: A Suburban Hotwife Story
Sometimes I looked back and wondered how Jill and I had gotten here. A normal married couple in Miami, now living a life unrecognizable and that would have shocked our friends and neighbors if they known even the half of it.
In a matter of just a few months we’d moved from dipping our toes in the swinging, hotwife lifestyle to a state where all aspects of our life seemed interwoven into the fabric of this all-powerful sexual experience.
Jill’s job had gone from normal and staid to being the manager of a small set of strip clubs – now out all hours of the night, as was inevitable with such a job.
Jill’s trying out of just one new man had spun into something way different. Into a situation where I was fast losing track of the names of the different suitors for her charms.
And to cap it all, in the name of fairness, we’d agreed that ‘what was sauce for the goose was sauce for the gander’. If Jill was allowed to play, then why shouldn’t I? The love interests in my own life weren’t as many and varied as my wife’s. But nonetheless, for a guy so used to emotional and physical monogamy, they were still as disorienting as they were pleasurable.
Faced with all these changes, I often wondered what the end point for Jill and me would be. Often wondered whether we’d bitten off more than we could chew. Whether we’d manage to hold our love and marriage together against the various people and pleasures that now dominated so much of our lives.
I really wondered what the next few months held for us.
In a matter of just a few months we’d moved from dipping our toes in the swinging, hotwife lifestyle to a state where all aspects of our life seemed interwoven into the fabric of this all-powerful sexual experience.
Jill’s job had gone from normal and staid to being the manager of a small set of strip clubs – now out all hours of the night, as was inevitable with such a job.
Jill’s trying out of just one new man had spun into something way different. Into a situation where I was fast losing track of the names of the different suitors for her charms.
And to cap it all, in the name of fairness, we’d agreed that ‘what was sauce for the goose was sauce for the gander’. If Jill was allowed to play, then why shouldn’t I? The love interests in my own life weren’t as many and varied as my wife’s. But nonetheless, for a guy so used to emotional and physical monogamy, they were still as disorienting as they were pleasurable.
Faced with all these changes, I often wondered what the end point for Jill and me would be. Often wondered whether we’d bitten off more than we could chew. Whether we’d manage to hold our love and marriage together against the various people and pleasures that now dominated so much of our lives.
I really wondered what the next few months held for us.
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Published November 12, 2021
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November 30, 2021
it’s a rollercoaster ride
I come to hate Jill here lol sorry but she’s really something else. I know Dave’s at fault too. Oh well, the story it’s just too much for me when Jill had to really do all that. Dave was the honest one but not totally in terms with the C***holding part. but still Jill should have giving him respect, as it is the thing you need to be giving. Over all, the story was very intriguing for me and sad. But Dave got a happy revenge and ending.
I come to hate Jill here lol sorry but she’s really something else. I know Dave’s at fault too. Oh well, the story it’s just too much for me when Jill had to really do all that. Dave was the honest one but not totally in terms with the C***holding part. but still Jill should have giving him respect, as it is the thing you need to be giving. Over all, the story was very intriguing for me and sad. But Dave got a happy revenge and ending.
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March 26, 2025If you are not into angst and heartbreak stay far away from this. I bought this a while ago and was talking to another reader and it set off alarm bells. I opened it and went straight to the end of the final book out of curiosity and there is no way in hell I will read the series in its entirety. It is simply too much for me.
Maybe the early parts of the first book may be interesting, the discovery and indulgence of hotwife or cuckolding but this sounds like it went out of control.
And the author's version of HEA, well, I simply don't share that point of view. His marriage of 20 years dissolved over a fantasy gone wrong. his ex has a series of QoS tattoos, fake breasts and pierced nipples.
Rant: I read erotica for stories of pleasure between consenting partners, to escape from real life, dabble in the pleasures of a debauched lifestyle. I don't want to read the consequences of couples that don't communicate, don't think before acting and don't stop until it is too late, they hurt each other and ruin their marriage. That is simple tortuous for someone like me.
If you enjoy a rough ride, feel free. It's well written but it is utterly heartbreaking to read about a couple that was together for 20 years split apart simply because of cock size, a reluctance to give it up and feelings of limerence for her lover, an infatuation that she mistakes for love.
In my escapist fantasies, couples are dedicated to each other and do not let anyone come between them. This story just brings torment into a space that should be arousing. The drama within this story is too biting for me to find entertaining (ex. Richard Brown’s Chambers Island)
Stories like this can exist and should be enjoyed by those that have the stomach for it, but they should not contain Hotwife in the title, they should have Hard Cuckold and Heartbreak warnings instead.
Maybe the early parts of the first book may be interesting, the discovery and indulgence of hotwife or cuckolding but this sounds like it went out of control.
And the author's version of HEA, well, I simply don't share that point of view. His marriage of 20 years dissolved over a fantasy gone wrong. his ex has a series of QoS tattoos, fake breasts and pierced nipples.
Rant: I read erotica for stories of pleasure between consenting partners, to escape from real life, dabble in the pleasures of a debauched lifestyle. I don't want to read the consequences of couples that don't communicate, don't think before acting and don't stop until it is too late, they hurt each other and ruin their marriage. That is simple tortuous for someone like me.
If you enjoy a rough ride, feel free. It's well written but it is utterly heartbreaking to read about a couple that was together for 20 years split apart simply because of cock size, a reluctance to give it up and feelings of limerence for her lover, an infatuation that she mistakes for love.
In my escapist fantasies, couples are dedicated to each other and do not let anyone come between them. This story just brings torment into a space that should be arousing. The drama within this story is too biting for me to find entertaining (ex. Richard Brown’s Chambers Island)
Stories like this can exist and should be enjoyed by those that have the stomach for it, but they should not contain Hotwife in the title, they should have Hard Cuckold and Heartbreak warnings instead.
December 29, 2022
The third book out of the series was as good as the first two. For fear that I spoil the read, I will just say that the book was more of a continuation of the second book. I few twists in the storyline add to the conflict and difficulty of Dave and Jill’s relationship, but no new characters were introduced. As expressed in other reviews, all the storylines didn’t all get wrapped up. I wondered if there was a consideration of writing a fourth book. The author did write a good and comprehensive Epilogue, which made me think he at least outlined a possible fourth book. This book’s erotica side was represented by sex scenes that continued to get hotter. Which in a three-book series, isn’t always easy to do without becoming too outrageous and unbelievable. Yes, the ramp-up of sexual activity may seem extreme, but I know it is not out of the realm of possibility. The characters remained consistent, maybe Dave’s character had a little more development than in the last installment. Overall, I was happy with the series and felt that everyone got what they deserved in the end.
Because I don’t want to spoil the enjoyment of the third book, I’ll take shots from cheap seats about the issues I had with the story in general. What it would have taken pushed this book to a five-star rating. Better editing/ review always helps, the number of errors and typos in the third book picked up. If the exception of the first book (with Chris), the last two book’s story outline was a lot like the “Sharing Claire”. I haven't read Sharing Lisa, but I wonder if it has a similar outline. I like both books and while this took three books to complete, Sharing Claire was wrapped up in one. I had wished those extra pages in this book would have gotten filled up with more of Jill's POV. By her taking on some of the narration of the last two books and sharing it with David. We got her POV in the first book, I felt cheated that the pattern didn’t continue. While some would argue that it would have taken away from the Cuckold angst, I say it is just easier on the writer to build that angst without presenting her side.
One of my major issues with this series is we never got to understand what Jill was trying to give Dave. Dave wanted to give Jill this physical pleasure while enjoying the cuckold experience. Did Jill develop an understanding of the cuckold experience? Did try to stoke that for him or was she just blindly going along with Luther’s suggestions? She had very conflicting and complex feelings for her men, but we didn’t get to experience any of that. What was it about Malcom, besides the nine inches, that she had feelings for? So, without that POV, it is easy to hate Jill, as another reviewer posted. Gaining that insight from Jill would have got another star easily. Secondly, I thought Dave's relationship with Veronica needed to be developed more. Working as a dancer, in a club Jill managed, did Dave have the same voyeuristic fantasies about Veronica that he had of Jill? He developed feelings of love for her, why wasn’t he concerned about her the same way he was concerned about Jill at the club? So I took Dave's expression of love for Veronica and Halley as a little rushed and convenient to move the story along (an easy out for the writer). Maybe because I haven’t dated in over forty years, but I was just taken aback that a married couple, parents themselves, would so easily get openly involved in a relationship with small children involved. Of all the messed-up mind games, relationship issues, and kinky sex in the storyline, that is the one thing that bothered me the most! Again, I know I am writing my opinion from the cheap seats. I cannot produce a great storyline and develop the characters anywhere close to what this author has done, but to get 5 stars, that is what it would have taken.
Because I don’t want to spoil the enjoyment of the third book, I’ll take shots from cheap seats about the issues I had with the story in general. What it would have taken pushed this book to a five-star rating. Better editing/ review always helps, the number of errors and typos in the third book picked up. If the exception of the first book (with Chris), the last two book’s story outline was a lot like the “Sharing Claire”. I haven't read Sharing Lisa, but I wonder if it has a similar outline. I like both books and while this took three books to complete, Sharing Claire was wrapped up in one. I had wished those extra pages in this book would have gotten filled up with more of Jill's POV. By her taking on some of the narration of the last two books and sharing it with David. We got her POV in the first book, I felt cheated that the pattern didn’t continue. While some would argue that it would have taken away from the Cuckold angst, I say it is just easier on the writer to build that angst without presenting her side.
One of my major issues with this series is we never got to understand what Jill was trying to give Dave. Dave wanted to give Jill this physical pleasure while enjoying the cuckold experience. Did Jill develop an understanding of the cuckold experience? Did try to stoke that for him or was she just blindly going along with Luther’s suggestions? She had very conflicting and complex feelings for her men, but we didn’t get to experience any of that. What was it about Malcom, besides the nine inches, that she had feelings for? So, without that POV, it is easy to hate Jill, as another reviewer posted. Gaining that insight from Jill would have got another star easily. Secondly, I thought Dave's relationship with Veronica needed to be developed more. Working as a dancer, in a club Jill managed, did Dave have the same voyeuristic fantasies about Veronica that he had of Jill? He developed feelings of love for her, why wasn’t he concerned about her the same way he was concerned about Jill at the club? So I took Dave's expression of love for Veronica and Halley as a little rushed and convenient to move the story along (an easy out for the writer). Maybe because I haven’t dated in over forty years, but I was just taken aback that a married couple, parents themselves, would so easily get openly involved in a relationship with small children involved. Of all the messed-up mind games, relationship issues, and kinky sex in the storyline, that is the one thing that bothered me the most! Again, I know I am writing my opinion from the cheap seats. I cannot produce a great storyline and develop the characters anywhere close to what this author has done, but to get 5 stars, that is what it would have taken.
May 6, 2022
This is the finale of a fairly lengthy three book series on wife sharing, hotwifing, interracial sex and cuckoldry. I enjoyed it because it was fairly in-depth in terms of story and character development. Plus there were quite a few characters involved. There was the odd loose end not tied up (Callan) and parts of the overall tale were somewhat reptitive. A few edits needed here and there. But overall, an enjoyable read.
January 21, 2023
strong book
Dave started out as the idiot but finally got smart. Too bad it was too late. Don’t know what he was thinking letting jill go off again.
Jill was what jill always was. A tramp who got what she deserved. Tried to have her cake and eat it too. She lost.
This is certainly not the ending that I would have preferred. It was certainly a rollercoaster for a while.
Dave started out as the idiot but finally got smart. Too bad it was too late. Don’t know what he was thinking letting jill go off again.
Jill was what jill always was. A tramp who got what she deserved. Tried to have her cake and eat it too. She lost.
This is certainly not the ending that I would have preferred. It was certainly a rollercoaster for a while.
December 21, 2023
Heartbroken and disgusted. I hated them both but couldn't look away from this sad car crash of a tale. Repetitive at times but still a guilty pleasure. Not for the faint of heart.
April 23, 2024
my first Mr Johnson story
I read this story from the start and couldn’t put it down. I had very mixed emotions about it, being my first of his. In all his stories I have read (haven’t read them all) this is the only Cuck that grew a pair of balls.
I have enjoyed reading his stories, but after reading one I can’t read another too soon.
I give this 5 stars, I feel if an author can stir you emotions that is a great story
I read this story from the start and couldn’t put it down. I had very mixed emotions about it, being my first of his. In all his stories I have read (haven’t read them all) this is the only Cuck that grew a pair of balls.
I have enjoyed reading his stories, but after reading one I can’t read another too soon.
I give this 5 stars, I feel if an author can stir you emotions that is a great story
February 13, 2022
Not a lie!! Just not the whole truth
Dave and Jill share an experience of a life time, then lust and addiction change the dynamics of this couple for life. Very hot and unpredictable. Sickness Dave and BBC size queen Jill. Wow
Dave and Jill share an experience of a life time, then lust and addiction change the dynamics of this couple for life. Very hot and unpredictable. Sickness Dave and BBC size queen Jill. Wow
December 12, 2021
Great series of 3. Look forward to reading other from this author
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