I have just finished this last entry of The Grail Quest and I have to say that for the series as a whole, my feelings are greatly mixed. There is a lot to like in the series, especially in the descriptions of the battles and the details of the people, the places and the things. Unfortunately the series also has weaknesses, the greatest of which being the characters. In Archer’s Tale, the story was so fun and the descriptions of the battles so detailed that I really didn’t care too much that the characters were fairly shallow. I was learning a bit of history, I was having fun and the fate and motivations of the characters seemed more of an afterthought. However, with each subsequent book I found myself less interested in the story and so I was forced to noticed the flaws and lack of consistency in the characters. I also realized after finishing Heretic, that I was much more interested in reading about the Hundred Years War than I was about Thomas’ hunt for the Grail.
While Vagabond still focused a bit on the war between England and France (and even some of the conflict between England and Scotland), Heretic starts with with an actual historical battle (the siege of Calais) but soon after forgets about it as England and France go into a truce. And so the rest of the story focuses on Thomas’ hunt to find the Holy Grail before his evil counterpart, his cousin Guy Vexille. To start, the author says at the end of the book that most of this section was pulled from his imagination, and the places where the action takes place is not real. To me, this makes me incredibly less interested and makes me feel that the book has entered the fantasy territory and strayed from historical fiction. As Thomas and his companions find themselves victorious after the siege of Calais, a treaty is being signed between England and France. And yet the Earl of Northampton, bewitched by Thomas’ quest to find the Grail, gives Thomas a force of men (two of which being Robbie and Sir Guillaume of course) and orders them to sneak into French territory near the fictional town of Astarac and capture a castle. The purpose of this, to draw Guy Vexille to them, capture him and force him to tell them where the Grail is. Um, what? Did the earl miss the part where there was a truce? This decision isn’t even questioned. The characters acknowledge the fact that they are breaking this truce but apparently don’t care. The earl of Northampton has now lost all credibility as a character, willing to risk the diplomacy of his country on the chance that a fairy tale is real.
I wish I could say that the earl was the only character to become nonsensical since the previous books, but it’s just not so. Robbie, the lovable Scottish oaf that we met in Vagabond who was fairly entertaining to read in that book was wildly inconsistent in Heretic and borderline insane. He is suddenly struck with the fear of God and deciding to make things right to save his soul due to the evil deeds done in book two. Now, if the author had left it at this, I would have been fine with it. Characters can have a change of heart and Robbie had a good reason. Except he kept changing his mind about what he wanted and by the end his character was just zig-zagging from one motivation to another until I didn’t care if he fell into a spiked pit or was catapulted through time to fight Napoleon Bonaparte. We also have a new (sigh) love interest for Thomas, a condemned heretic named Genevieve, because apparently Thomas is James Bond and must have a new woman in every entry of the series. The result of this being that each woman is an under-developed, shallow character that we could care less about. Jeanette was an interesting character in Archer’s Tale until we found out that even after all her and Thomas had been through and all he did for her, a shiny set of armor and the promise of wealth was all she needed to turn her tail on him and forget he ever existed. And yet he still bends over backwards for her again in Vagabond? What the hell, Thomas? Then there was Elenor, who was pretty and definitely more loyal, but lacked any other motivation at all. She was essentially a pair of occupied clothing that followed Thomas around. Genevieve’s only traits is that she was tortured by a Dominican priest, like Thomas, and so is fueled with hatred for the church and set on revenge. Other than that, she can handle her weapons and Thomas loves her for no real reason other than that they were both tortured. Ah, young love.
Then we have Thomas... sigh. If anyone asked me now what was noteworthy about Thomas, the main character of the series, I would tell them, “well, he was a very good archer.” That’s it? “Well, he wanted revenge for his dead father and his dead woman.” But that doesn’t really describe his character does it? “Well, he wants to find the Holy Grail.” Why? “Well... because his dad wrote a bunch of crazy ramblings in a book and his evil cousin wants it.” But why does HE want it? And that’s the question. In fact, in every book, at least a couple of times, Thomas claims he doesn’t know if the Grail exists and always seems ready to abandon the search without so much as a care about all of the wasted time he spent searching for it. All he wants is to fight and shoot his bow, and that’s what he’s made for. And so my question is, why is HE the one searching for the Grail? Why does he care? I personally think the author would have done much better to make the Grail hunter a completely separate character with their own motivations for wanting the Grail, and then tying Thomas to that character. This other character would be the historian, or the religious person, or a disgraced royal looking for something to bring back wealth and fortune to his family. Thomas just wants to fight, and so the two of them team up, the other using Thomas’ historical ties to the Grail and Thomas using the quest as an excuse to continue fighting something. But, I spend too much time fixing stories and I digress.
Overall, while I did enjoy the series as a whole fairly well, the glaring problems with Heretic really took things down a peg for me. I think that there is enough rich history in the time period of the Hundred Years War that the author didn’t have to invent three quarters of a story to propel the hunt the an object that’s mythical to begin with. If I’m going to be invested in this quest, give me a rich historical backdrop to throw the Grail into and make me believe it could have really existed there. Also, give a reason to actually care about whether or not the characters find it. The only ones who seem to actually want it in this story are power Hungry religious or political figures who only want it for fame or wealth. The good guys just want it because it’s there and don’t seem to offer any justification that goes against the antagonist’s motivations. My advice if you’re planning to read this series: read Archer’s Tale. If you enjoyed the story about the battles leading up to Crecy but weren’t compelled by the side story of Thomas’ revenge or his half-hearted hunt for the Grail, just stop there and leave it with a good taste in your mouth. But if the real reason you’re reading is to find out what happens to the Grail and see if anyone finds it, by all means, keep reading. I won’t say that that plot thread is unresolved, but I can’t guarantee you’ll care by the time you get there.
As unsatisfied as I was by the end of this series, I am still as eager to read The Last Kingdom as I was to read Archer’s Tale, though perhaps a little bit of that is due to the fact that the show is coming out soon. I’m hoping that these problems I found with this series are specific to The Grail Quest and I won’t have the same problems with the Saxon tales. I’m not ready to quit you yet, Cornwell. Vikings, here I come.