Spoilers.
Alright, I'm torn because I wanted to like this more but for the characters being closer to 30 than 20 this felt a little too YA if you take sex scenes out.we have miscommunication, emotionally shutting down, and a lot of ignoring red flags.
Let's start with my biggest issue. Our main characters ability to not only be naive and not ask any questions while at the same time being annoyingly stubborn about other topics that don't matter. You don't have questions about the birth parents that you didn't know about, and didn't bring it up. But you are upset when you're paired with an extremely attractive and capable partner? You have no questions about the Keir, their motives, why the conflict began, but you are upset that people are making you work out and learn to shoot a gun? I actually agree with Eli when he thinks she's lazy and doesn't want to do anything that needs to be done. She complains and whines every step except when she should! She seems like a teenage character being immature and obstinate despite the fact that she is a 25 year old woman who had job, her own apartment, and at the beginning of this book admitted to sleeping with a married man. How does that translate to the character we end with at the end of this book. ALSO! Why would you not be suspicious of the tall dark hot guy? You see him multiple times, after and before you were kidnapped by the bad guys and it never once crossed your mind to mention it to the people who are keeping you safe, training you and dealing with your annoying personality?
Alright. Moving on. Eli. My guy can you be more of a cliche at times....broody, damaged, cares for everyone but her for some reason. Just stop with this emotionally stunted teenage boy behavior you are supposedly 26 years old! Grow up my guy.
Ryan- I was down with Ryan I'm the beginning because he seemed like a solid character and his POV showed he cared for others. Then he jumps into needy and overbearing in the span of a few chapters and the character completely changed.
Overall I rated this a 3 because the plot has promised despite the main characters best efforts to ruin it.