The walls might be high, but are they enough to protect the pack, his land, and its people?
Flint thought over a decade in the Iron Army's Building Division gave him enough experience to complete the life quest. He was wrong. Restoring the Slumbering Fort and awakening proved no challenge for a man of his talents. However, protecting it and Lea's Slumber from looming threats is an entirely different story.
The first two attacks were minor. Now more formidable threats are on the way.
Fortunately, Flint has his pack and the Woodson Council by his side. When the Iron Army returns and the Wyld inevitably arrives, they'll need to work together. However, every faction has its own agenda and interests.
Flint must learn where to give ground and where to draw the line. Otherwise, if external threats don't doom the Champion of Equilibrium's future, someone on the inside will.
This is the second series where an important side character gets a harem and the main character doesn't, despite the MC supposedly being the most integral character of the novel. This was especially frustrating when there were two women in the novel who were okay with the idea of sharing and the one left out was completely devoted to him. This caused me to reduce the stars I gave it by one. I hope the author will consider giving his mcs harems in the future, especially when it's culturally appropriate like it would have been in this series. At the bare minimum it'd be nice if he didn't mock us with the inclusion of harems for others who aren't the mc.
I want to say this first for the most part the main body of the story was great however I cannot express how much I hated the last few chapters. First, my major problem is throughout the book The Hearthstone and the table are shown how intuitive and we will say user-friendly they are I mean he doesn't even have to be standing by them to make rules and what not yet he can't just remove the evil guy from the council or to stop him from using the gate or change his mind that only he can use the gate come on! That's to say NOTHING about where the rest of the pack is only ONE dog showed up and not it's not even the mother what kind of crap is that. I don't think I'll be picking up the next book at all even on a very very deep sale the ending on this book is that bad.
This book is great and ends the first arc of the Houndsman. The only complaint I have is he falls into the common trick of authors of having a cliffhanger to end the book off on. While nothing is inherently wrong with that, you do hate to have to wait for the next book. The characters are all clever though not perfect, they prepare for the scenarios they can, but aren't always right. Also, hints of a harem though the main character is fairly sure he isn't polygamist, who knows if that will last.
I've really enjoyed both book until the final chapters , Flint is a good man but he has issues making the hard choices , he's done a good job establishing the community, who knows what will happen next , I've knocked of a fifth star partly for the plot direction at the end and partly because on several occasions I found myself re-reading sections and still not understanding, initially I thought that the book had been translated but it is just a mixture of confusing magic and poor explanations, I'll certainly read the next volume.
Loved the second book in this series. Scratches the itch for base-building elements and LitRPG, while telling a compelling story. The side characters have believable motivations, and the world building is setting up some potentially interesting dramas. I hope the author continues with the series.
There are minor issues where some of the action or thought processes of characters can be a bit confusing, which just comes down to proof-reading. Maybe something to consider for the next book - most of us are happy to wait for polish :)
The like the Base-Building theme and the integration of dogs in the story...but it needs some polish. The author could do a better job of describing what is happening in the world and around the characters. I had to infer what decision the characters made or what happened to them by reading the next paragraph a few times.
The building aspect is drawn out and tedious. The fighting sections are dry and poorly balanced. The story never feels directed, it just meanders along fruitlessly. The ending is just bad, nothing to really say about it but that.
As far as story and editing - still a 5 star book. A squick of mine : the graphic description of death and dismemberment - Plus fighting with powers from 'the underworld.' Way too much for me, I'm done.
A great second book join flint and his pack as the bad guys arrive to threaten his way of life and new more powerful threats appear closer to home , a very good book if you liked book one this builds on it greatly but now i need to read book 3.
This book is decent enough. A tad better than the first, but less Maya when more was warranted and now it seems she'll be separated from our MC for at least the start of the next arc. Le'sigh.
The story is good, but the writing suffers from errors of noun/pronoun agreement, missing words, and obviously misused words. It could stand to have a good editor review it for a second edition.