Nice:
- A few links to events from the Completionist Chronicles, but don't expect much!
- A few new goodies for the Wolf Pack
- MC makes up his mind about how to advance and it turns out great for him. (arguably, though, he was told to do it by an unexpected new teacher)
Bad:
- The story lacks suspense. The fights that happen lack the possibility of negative consequences due to plot armor.
- No personal conflicts happen or get addressed
- MC and co. want A, ask for it, are told to do B, do so, get rewards - no suspense.
- MC's party commit theft and murder against human civilians and without hardly a thought - just a perfunctory "it is a war".