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Mages and Mysteries: A Fantasy Pride and Prejudice Variation
A Fantasy Pride and Prejudice Variation
In Regency England, women are expected to confine their magical acts to mending dresses or enhancing their beauty, but Elizabeth Bennet insists on crafting her own spells to fight goblins and protect the people of Meryton. She even caused a scandal by applying for admission to the magical Academy. When Hertfordshire is beset with a series of unexplained goblin attacks, Elizabeth is quite ready to protect her family and friends. If only she didn’t have to deal with the attitude of the arrogant mage, Fitzwilliam Darcy.
Mr. Darcy doesn’t need to be associated with a scandalous woman like Elizabeth Bennet—no matter how attractive she is. But as the goblin attacks accelerate and grow more dangerous, Darcy realizes that he could use her help in identifying the cause—and is forced to recognize her magical ability. Unfortunately, continued proximity to Elizabeth only heightens his attraction to her—which is particularly inconvenient in light of his engagement to Caroline Bingley.
Can Elizabeth and Darcy unravel the mystery of the goblin attacks before more people are hurt? And how can they manage their growing mutual attraction? It’s sure to be interesting…because when Darcy and Elizabeth come together, magic happens.
In Regency England, women are expected to confine their magical acts to mending dresses or enhancing their beauty, but Elizabeth Bennet insists on crafting her own spells to fight goblins and protect the people of Meryton. She even caused a scandal by applying for admission to the magical Academy. When Hertfordshire is beset with a series of unexplained goblin attacks, Elizabeth is quite ready to protect her family and friends. If only she didn’t have to deal with the attitude of the arrogant mage, Fitzwilliam Darcy.
Mr. Darcy doesn’t need to be associated with a scandalous woman like Elizabeth Bennet—no matter how attractive she is. But as the goblin attacks accelerate and grow more dangerous, Darcy realizes that he could use her help in identifying the cause—and is forced to recognize her magical ability. Unfortunately, continued proximity to Elizabeth only heightens his attraction to her—which is particularly inconvenient in light of his engagement to Caroline Bingley.
Can Elizabeth and Darcy unravel the mystery of the goblin attacks before more people are hurt? And how can they manage their growing mutual attraction? It’s sure to be interesting…because when Darcy and Elizabeth come together, magic happens.
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Published November 27, 2021
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Victoria Kincaid
20 books205 followersVictoria has a Ph.D. in English literature and has taught composition to unwilling college students. Today she teaches business writing to willing office professionals and tries to give voice to the demanding cast of characters in her head.
She lives in Virginia with an overly affectionate cat, two children who are learning how much fun Austen’s characters can be, and a husband who fortunately is not jealous of Mr. Darcy. A lifelong Austen fan, Victoria has read more Jane Austen variations and sequels than she can count – and confesses to an extreme partiality for the Colin Firth miniseries version of Pride and Prejudice.
Visit her at www. victoriakincaid. com
She lives in Virginia with an overly affectionate cat, two children who are learning how much fun Austen’s characters can be, and a husband who fortunately is not jealous of Mr. Darcy. A lifelong Austen fan, Victoria has read more Jane Austen variations and sequels than she can count – and confesses to an extreme partiality for the Colin Firth miniseries version of Pride and Prejudice.
Visit her at www. victoriakincaid. com
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December 27, 2021
This is another story that grabs your attention and then doesn't let up.
Darcy is engaged to Caroline Bingley. Can you imagine how that hit me as a true fan of Darcy & Elizabeth as a couple? We read his thoughts as he has decided it is time to marry and beget an heir...Caroline is sophisticated, has a large dowry, knows how society works, who to invite and who to avoid, and she is beautiful. Later we do read that taking her to his bed might be "only necessary to beget that heir". Then the fact that her brother is his best friend, and a fellow Mage also weighs in her favor.
Elizabeth has made a move which then placed her on the shelf despite her looks and personality. She applied to be admitted to the Convocation, an organization to which Mages apply for further training. They must prove their magical abilities before being admitted. Elizabeth was never examined for such but rejected outright. Darcy was one who voted against her. Men look negatively on women seeking any magic role other than for beautification or helping in the home.
So, throughout this tale we read of Darcy being surprised by her abilities and how she sought out and learned various spells, even going so far as to conger her own or enhance others. He is, of course, also attracted to her beauty, wit and intelligence. He seeks her friendship and gains it before coming to the conclusion that he must distance himself and forget her as he is now honor bound to another.
This couple finds themselves brought together over and over as Hobgoblins begin to appear and wreak havoc. Darcy and Bingley, in their Paladin roles, are at the forefront fighting off those attacks. Why are the Hobgoblins appearing? What do they want to accomplish? Darcy and Elizabeth spend days seeking out literature on the subject in various libraries. They also find a circle indicating that Hobgoblins have died or been killed on Mount Oakham.
Darcy's Uncle, Lord Matlock, is coming up for reelection as the archmage of the Convocation. His opponent is Mr. Hurst. As the story develops that rivalry looms large and ominous.
I can't even hint at the spells and counter spells; how certain acts of heroism drain those who act as heroes/heroines and how selfish betrayal threaten both the world of humans and of Hoblins.
Then there is also the relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth. Darcy knows what is right, what is honorable, but the intense feeling that grow and attract him to Elizabeth cause some events which can only bring on heartbreak.
This was a fascinating read...not at all like canon...with many new and very different events and roles for our characters. In the end the role of women in the world of magic undergoes a revolutionary change. I highly recommend this story.
Darcy is engaged to Caroline Bingley. Can you imagine how that hit me as a true fan of Darcy & Elizabeth as a couple? We read his thoughts as he has decided it is time to marry and beget an heir...Caroline is sophisticated, has a large dowry, knows how society works, who to invite and who to avoid, and she is beautiful. Later we do read that taking her to his bed might be "only necessary to beget that heir". Then the fact that her brother is his best friend, and a fellow Mage also weighs in her favor.
Elizabeth has made a move which then placed her on the shelf despite her looks and personality. She applied to be admitted to the Convocation, an organization to which Mages apply for further training. They must prove their magical abilities before being admitted. Elizabeth was never examined for such but rejected outright. Darcy was one who voted against her. Men look negatively on women seeking any magic role other than for beautification or helping in the home.
So, throughout this tale we read of Darcy being surprised by her abilities and how she sought out and learned various spells, even going so far as to conger her own or enhance others. He is, of course, also attracted to her beauty, wit and intelligence. He seeks her friendship and gains it before coming to the conclusion that he must distance himself and forget her as he is now honor bound to another.
This couple finds themselves brought together over and over as Hobgoblins begin to appear and wreak havoc. Darcy and Bingley, in their Paladin roles, are at the forefront fighting off those attacks. Why are the Hobgoblins appearing? What do they want to accomplish? Darcy and Elizabeth spend days seeking out literature on the subject in various libraries. They also find a circle indicating that Hobgoblins have died or been killed on Mount Oakham.
Darcy's Uncle, Lord Matlock, is coming up for reelection as the archmage of the Convocation. His opponent is Mr. Hurst. As the story develops that rivalry looms large and ominous.
I can't even hint at the spells and counter spells; how certain acts of heroism drain those who act as heroes/heroines and how selfish betrayal threaten both the world of humans and of Hoblins.
Then there is also the relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth. Darcy knows what is right, what is honorable, but the intense feeling that grow and attract him to Elizabeth cause some events which can only bring on heartbreak.
This was a fascinating read...not at all like canon...with many new and very different events and roles for our characters. In the end the role of women in the world of magic undergoes a revolutionary change. I highly recommend this story.
July 31, 2023
A Magical Mystery in Meryton
Rating: 4.5 out of 5 stars
Source: Review Copy from Author
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Fantasy Variation
THE PREMISE: Mr. Darcy and Mr. Bingley are Convocation Paladins (powerful warrior mages charged with defending the kingdom). And the people of Meryton are fortunate to have them around when violent goblins materialize and assault anyone in their path. Elizabeth Bennet, while denied the ability to study at the Academy of Magic because she is woman, is a highly talented mage who is eager to help solve the mystery behind and stop these vicious goblin attacks…
WHAT I LOVED:
- A Spellbinding Premise: Goblin attacks on the rise in Meryton and Mr. Darcy betrothed to Caroline Bingley – what excellent magical and nonmagical twists to explore in this premise! I was especially interested about what is Darcy doing with Caroline?!? And how does he get out of it!
- Elizabeth the Brave: I loved and admired Elizabeth so much in this tale! She is regarded a bit as a social pariah because of her “unfeminine” interests and talent in magic, but that doesn’t hold her back. She still pursues her passion, determinedly develops her skills, and carries through with her charming wit in tact. I loved how Elizabeth continued to persevere through everyone else’s doubts and prejudices. And let me just say, what she is willing to do and to sacrifice to save others….man, she is the true hero of this tale.
- Goblins!: I thought this was such a fun and interesting magical creature to explore. They were dangerous, mysterious, and there was virtually no way to communicate with them. It was so interesting to learn more about them and discover why they were attacking. I especially enjoyed the details about the various types of goblins and the vivid descriptions of their appearances.
- Do You Want To Form an Alliance with Me?: They didn’t call it this, but Darcy and Elizabeth decide to work together to learn more about the mysterious goblin attacks. They spend hours researching and then meet together and discuss their findings and theories. I loved seeing these two characters work together in this fashion. I loved how Elizabeth recognized and cherished the novelty of Mr. Darcy respecting her thoughts and treating her as an equal. And I loved witnessing how Mr. Darcy, who previously thought he was incapable of love, realizes that is precisely what he feels for Elizabeth, and recognizes that he is now in a massive quandary since he is already engaged!
- A New Villain: There is no Wickham in this story. I repeat. No! Wickham! Isn’t that shocking? I found it wonderfully refreshing. This villain was a very interesting choice and had an interesting agenda. I enjoyed learning about this character’s evil schemes and witnessing the dark arts they employed. Especially suasion.
- Comedic Relief: It feels weird to say this but, I really enjoyed Mr. Collins in this variation! He perfectly provided a comedic release from the tension and drama with his stupid optimism that Elizabeth will eventually consent to marry him and his inept attempts at simple spells and magical mishaps.
WHAT I WASN’T TOO FOND OF:
- Wanting More: I think there were just a few times where I wished for more – maybe more about the villain’s (and his accomplices?) background and “why,” maybe more with Darcy’s relationship with Caroline, maybe a little more romantic development between Darcy and Elizabeth.
CONCLUSION:
Mages and Mysteries is a spellbinding adventure full of action, danger, humor, and romance! Victoria Kincaid crafts together such a fascinating, developed, and entertaining world of magic in this tale that I’m dearly hoping we can visit it again! I personally think a sequel about Lydia and Georgiana would make for a most bewitching adventure!
Austenesque Reviews
Rating: 4.5 out of 5 stars
Source: Review Copy from Author
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Fantasy Variation
THE PREMISE: Mr. Darcy and Mr. Bingley are Convocation Paladins (powerful warrior mages charged with defending the kingdom). And the people of Meryton are fortunate to have them around when violent goblins materialize and assault anyone in their path. Elizabeth Bennet, while denied the ability to study at the Academy of Magic because she is woman, is a highly talented mage who is eager to help solve the mystery behind and stop these vicious goblin attacks…
WHAT I LOVED:
- A Spellbinding Premise: Goblin attacks on the rise in Meryton and Mr. Darcy betrothed to Caroline Bingley – what excellent magical and nonmagical twists to explore in this premise! I was especially interested about what is Darcy doing with Caroline?!? And how does he get out of it!
- Elizabeth the Brave: I loved and admired Elizabeth so much in this tale! She is regarded a bit as a social pariah because of her “unfeminine” interests and talent in magic, but that doesn’t hold her back. She still pursues her passion, determinedly develops her skills, and carries through with her charming wit in tact. I loved how Elizabeth continued to persevere through everyone else’s doubts and prejudices. And let me just say, what she is willing to do and to sacrifice to save others….man, she is the true hero of this tale.
- Goblins!: I thought this was such a fun and interesting magical creature to explore. They were dangerous, mysterious, and there was virtually no way to communicate with them. It was so interesting to learn more about them and discover why they were attacking. I especially enjoyed the details about the various types of goblins and the vivid descriptions of their appearances.
- Do You Want To Form an Alliance with Me?: They didn’t call it this, but Darcy and Elizabeth decide to work together to learn more about the mysterious goblin attacks. They spend hours researching and then meet together and discuss their findings and theories. I loved seeing these two characters work together in this fashion. I loved how Elizabeth recognized and cherished the novelty of Mr. Darcy respecting her thoughts and treating her as an equal. And I loved witnessing how Mr. Darcy, who previously thought he was incapable of love, realizes that is precisely what he feels for Elizabeth, and recognizes that he is now in a massive quandary since he is already engaged!
- A New Villain: There is no Wickham in this story. I repeat. No! Wickham! Isn’t that shocking? I found it wonderfully refreshing. This villain was a very interesting choice and had an interesting agenda. I enjoyed learning about this character’s evil schemes and witnessing the dark arts they employed. Especially suasion.
- Comedic Relief: It feels weird to say this but, I really enjoyed Mr. Collins in this variation! He perfectly provided a comedic release from the tension and drama with his stupid optimism that Elizabeth will eventually consent to marry him and his inept attempts at simple spells and magical mishaps.
WHAT I WASN’T TOO FOND OF:
- Wanting More: I think there were just a few times where I wished for more – maybe more about the villain’s (and his accomplices?) background and “why,” maybe more with Darcy’s relationship with Caroline, maybe a little more romantic development between Darcy and Elizabeth.
CONCLUSION:
Mages and Mysteries is a spellbinding adventure full of action, danger, humor, and romance! Victoria Kincaid crafts together such a fascinating, developed, and entertaining world of magic in this tale that I’m dearly hoping we can visit it again! I personally think a sequel about Lydia and Georgiana would make for a most bewitching adventure!
Austenesque Reviews
December 18, 2021
“Those who don’t believe in magic will never find it.” –Roald Dahl
Rating: PG-17 due to violence, fight scenes that were rather graphic and gruesome. Angst Level: medium-to-high, especially during fight scenes with monsters of various kinds. Source: borrowed KU 12-17-21 with no expectations of a review. The views and opinions expressed are my own. Trope: Paranormal, magic, otherworldly creatures: dragons, goblins, etc.
“I want to survive this world that keeps trying to destroy me.” –Leigh Bardugo, Ninth House
Our story opened at the Meryton Assembly where Caroline called Mr. Darcy… Fitzwilliam. What? It appeared they were engaged. Whut? How the heck did that happen? OMG! Tell me it isn’t true. Something was terribly wrong in Meryton. During the assembly, a creature appeared and was trying to enter the building with evil intentions and I don’t think it wanted to dance.
“Some people are magic, and others are just the illusion of it.” –Beau Taplin
Adventure, mystery, magic… what could be better? Oh, and a mage with an attitude. Yeah, this was fun. ICNPID [I-could-not-put-it-down]. I finished in the wee hours of the morning. I’m too old to stay up this late. Something or someone was opening portals and pulling goblins and other creatures from their world into the human world with disastrous results. Darcy and Elizabeth finally worked together [that was so cool] to solve the mystery and save the world. OMG! I began to follow the clues and sort of had an idea who the villain might be. This was so much fun. I love JAFF with a bit of magic. I highly recommend this for those who love more adventure and magic than romance. It was still a bit romantic but not the hot sweaty kind. LOL! It wouldn’t have worked in this story. Yes, there were errors, but in a fight scene, I didn't care.
Rating: PG-17 due to violence, fight scenes that were rather graphic and gruesome. Angst Level: medium-to-high, especially during fight scenes with monsters of various kinds. Source: borrowed KU 12-17-21 with no expectations of a review. The views and opinions expressed are my own. Trope: Paranormal, magic, otherworldly creatures: dragons, goblins, etc.
“I want to survive this world that keeps trying to destroy me.” –Leigh Bardugo, Ninth House
Our story opened at the Meryton Assembly where Caroline called Mr. Darcy… Fitzwilliam. What? It appeared they were engaged. Whut? How the heck did that happen? OMG! Tell me it isn’t true. Something was terribly wrong in Meryton. During the assembly, a creature appeared and was trying to enter the building with evil intentions and I don’t think it wanted to dance.
“Some people are magic, and others are just the illusion of it.” –Beau Taplin
Adventure, mystery, magic… what could be better? Oh, and a mage with an attitude. Yeah, this was fun. ICNPID [I-could-not-put-it-down]. I finished in the wee hours of the morning. I’m too old to stay up this late. Something or someone was opening portals and pulling goblins and other creatures from their world into the human world with disastrous results. Darcy and Elizabeth finally worked together [that was so cool] to solve the mystery and save the world. OMG! I began to follow the clues and sort of had an idea who the villain might be. This was so much fun. I love JAFF with a bit of magic. I highly recommend this for those who love more adventure and magic than romance. It was still a bit romantic but not the hot sweaty kind. LOL! It wouldn’t have worked in this story. Yes, there were errors, but in a fight scene, I didn't care.
December 6, 2021
4.5
This was fun. Solid worldbuilding (Regency but with magic). Characters circumstances are slightly tweaked but the people are same in essentials - Elizabeth is liked but somewhat shunned because ladies should limit themselves to small household magics and Lizzie isn't one for keeping her strong talent under a bushel. Darcy is all duty and pride and family. Caroline is just as prissy and arrogant and condescending but is actually coming from a strong magical family and was thus much liked by Darcy senior who strongly advocated her engagement to Mr Darcy. ETC.
There is a proper plot that is in parts a bit rushed but still engaging. Some genuinely funny bits (Mr Collins and the exploding cookies). The romance is kinda meh especially considering Darcy put some moves on Elizabeth while very much engaged to Caroline Bingley. Our honourable Darcy would never stoop so low. At least he acknowledges his errors but still... I was Very Disappointed In Him.
This was fun. Solid worldbuilding (Regency but with magic). Characters circumstances are slightly tweaked but the people are same in essentials - Elizabeth is liked but somewhat shunned because ladies should limit themselves to small household magics and Lizzie isn't one for keeping her strong talent under a bushel. Darcy is all duty and pride and family. Caroline is just as prissy and arrogant and condescending but is actually coming from a strong magical family and was thus much liked by Darcy senior who strongly advocated her engagement to Mr Darcy. ETC.
There is a proper plot that is in parts a bit rushed but still engaging. Some genuinely funny bits (Mr Collins and the exploding cookies). The romance is kinda meh especially considering Darcy put some moves on Elizabeth while very much engaged to Caroline Bingley. Our honourable Darcy would never stoop so low. At least he acknowledges his errors but still... I was Very Disappointed In Him.
March 7, 2022
If the Regency world included magic and magical creatures, imagine the enchantment of a Pride & Prejudice variation with such a background. Author Victoria Kincaid is stellar at transposing Austen’s tale into many creative and clever venues and her first dip into gaslight fantasy is no exception.
Paladin mage and warriors, Fitzwilliam Darcy and Charles Bingley arrive in a Hertfordshire neighborhood in time for the local assembly. Mr. Bingley is assessing the nearby Netherfield Park estate and Darcy joins Bingley and his family to evaluate it. The assembly has little country charm to Darcy and he makes himself odious to Miss Elizabeth Bennet when he discovers she is the infamous lone female who dared to approach the mage academy to enroll. Mage magic is for men and her rejection was a foregone conclusion.
Then the monsters arrive in the form of a six-foot goblin and he discovers that Miss Elizabeth might become a valuable ally if he can get past the assumption that women can’t do or control powerful spellcasting. The mysterious concentration of goblin activity where there had been none and the deaths of locals make them form a reluctant partnership when the Council’s investigator does a cursory investigation and finds nothing amiss.
Elizabeth thought Darcy arrogant and detestable, but then his opinion of her and manners changed. She appreciates his change of heart, humble apology, and his support even while she knows they can be nothing more than friends. Their magical detection work leads them into secrets suppressed in the past and the discovery of a danger right in their midst with a deception that will affect the whole magic world and the upcoming Arch-Mage election. Someone will stop at nothing to get what they want and only Elizabeth and Darcy stand in their way.
A well-drawn magical world and I love that goblins are the featured mythical creatures. I enjoyed the take on magic that shows it is intricate, individual, and comes with effort, learning, and cost. There is a broader picture of how magic mixes with the Regency social structure and how it affects individuals within that society. A central message is that women are not inferior magic users and deserve the chance to learn how to work it and become vital, respected magic workers. This is not a close ‘what if’ style variation story, but doesn’t go completely off road from the original P&P, either. Jane Austen’s settings, characters, and key events are there- with magic.
I enjoyed the development of the characters and the twists in some of the relationships. Some original characters are absent while others who were more prominent have lesser roles which leaves the author able to really develop innovative new plot and character choices as well as more deeply develop those that are there.
The engaged couple was a startling surprise that I’ll leave for readers to encounter on their own. I also enjoyed seeing Elizabeth and Darcy go from hostile acquaintances to respected friends and partners to more. Because of magic involved, there is an equality that defies the class divides. Another fun surprise is what magic does with someone like Mr. Collins. Prepare to get some laughs from that one.
The tense mystery plot build to a stunning magical fight scene that was riveting. There are a few magical fights in the book, but they were all practices for the big one.
All in all, this one was abso-fab and I recommend it to Austen lovers, but also those who could care less about Austen, but love them some exciting Gaslight Fantasy romance.
I rec’d an eARC from the author to read in exchange for an honest review.
Paladin mage and warriors, Fitzwilliam Darcy and Charles Bingley arrive in a Hertfordshire neighborhood in time for the local assembly. Mr. Bingley is assessing the nearby Netherfield Park estate and Darcy joins Bingley and his family to evaluate it. The assembly has little country charm to Darcy and he makes himself odious to Miss Elizabeth Bennet when he discovers she is the infamous lone female who dared to approach the mage academy to enroll. Mage magic is for men and her rejection was a foregone conclusion.
Then the monsters arrive in the form of a six-foot goblin and he discovers that Miss Elizabeth might become a valuable ally if he can get past the assumption that women can’t do or control powerful spellcasting. The mysterious concentration of goblin activity where there had been none and the deaths of locals make them form a reluctant partnership when the Council’s investigator does a cursory investigation and finds nothing amiss.
Elizabeth thought Darcy arrogant and detestable, but then his opinion of her and manners changed. She appreciates his change of heart, humble apology, and his support even while she knows they can be nothing more than friends. Their magical detection work leads them into secrets suppressed in the past and the discovery of a danger right in their midst with a deception that will affect the whole magic world and the upcoming Arch-Mage election. Someone will stop at nothing to get what they want and only Elizabeth and Darcy stand in their way.
A well-drawn magical world and I love that goblins are the featured mythical creatures. I enjoyed the take on magic that shows it is intricate, individual, and comes with effort, learning, and cost. There is a broader picture of how magic mixes with the Regency social structure and how it affects individuals within that society. A central message is that women are not inferior magic users and deserve the chance to learn how to work it and become vital, respected magic workers. This is not a close ‘what if’ style variation story, but doesn’t go completely off road from the original P&P, either. Jane Austen’s settings, characters, and key events are there- with magic.
I enjoyed the development of the characters and the twists in some of the relationships. Some original characters are absent while others who were more prominent have lesser roles which leaves the author able to really develop innovative new plot and character choices as well as more deeply develop those that are there.
The engaged couple was a startling surprise that I’ll leave for readers to encounter on their own. I also enjoyed seeing Elizabeth and Darcy go from hostile acquaintances to respected friends and partners to more. Because of magic involved, there is an equality that defies the class divides. Another fun surprise is what magic does with someone like Mr. Collins. Prepare to get some laughs from that one.
The tense mystery plot build to a stunning magical fight scene that was riveting. There are a few magical fights in the book, but they were all practices for the big one.
All in all, this one was abso-fab and I recommend it to Austen lovers, but also those who could care less about Austen, but love them some exciting Gaslight Fantasy romance.
I rec’d an eARC from the author to read in exchange for an honest review.
December 6, 2021
Action thriller more than a romance, this fantasy novel is angst filled to the brim as well as a showpiece of exemplary writing and editing.
I won't summarize the novel because my report is a technical review and aims to look at those items that niggle as the reader goes through the book rather than reiterate the obvious.
The plot is inimitable, and I am overwhelmed with admiration for Victoria Kincaid for keeping all those balls in the air by managing this complicated plot without any problematic areas. Flow is hasty and tight.
Characterization pays homage to canon well. For those characters that were minor in canon or are new in this book, their styles are drafted well. All are consistent throughout.
Scene setting is done with a deft hand, considering that there is so much action in the book. As far as the backgrounds, they're clear where shared and imaginative so that they add extra sparkle to the story. In the few times I had difficulty following the exact movements where the scene is an action scene, so much was going on that I'm amazed the author took it on.
Language was appropriate to a JAFF reader, keeping with the Regency world with only the minimum of non-Regency words: snorted (I don't know why writers insist upon the gentry doing this in the first place), jerk, downed, and fiancé. There was the non-Regency concept of compromising meaning to force a marriage when it really meant "to settle a dispute by mutual concessions" (Johnson's Dictionary of 1806 and 1839). A non-canon use of the name "Mrs. Jenkins" pulled the reader out of the story as well.
I saw no errors in punctuation and no contractions to mar the work. Formatting was simplistic and easy to follow.
The romance development is realistic, though the
I won't summarize the novel because my report is a technical review and aims to look at those items that niggle as the reader goes through the book rather than reiterate the obvious.
The plot is inimitable, and I am overwhelmed with admiration for Victoria Kincaid for keeping all those balls in the air by managing this complicated plot without any problematic areas. Flow is hasty and tight.
Characterization pays homage to canon well. For those characters that were minor in canon or are new in this book, their styles are drafted well. All are consistent throughout.
Scene setting is done with a deft hand, considering that there is so much action in the book. As far as the backgrounds, they're clear where shared and imaginative so that they add extra sparkle to the story. In the few times I had difficulty following the exact movements where the scene is an action scene, so much was going on that I'm amazed the author took it on.
Language was appropriate to a JAFF reader, keeping with the Regency world with only the minimum of non-Regency words: snorted (I don't know why writers insist upon the gentry doing this in the first place), jerk, downed, and fiancé. There was the non-Regency concept of compromising meaning to force a marriage when it really meant "to settle a dispute by mutual concessions" (Johnson's Dictionary of 1806 and 1839). A non-canon use of the name "Mrs. Jenkins" pulled the reader out of the story as well.
I saw no errors in punctuation and no contractions to mar the work. Formatting was simplistic and easy to follow.
The romance development is realistic, though the
December 22, 2021
Magic and P&P
In the world of P&P there is magic. Only males can attend the academy to learn magic, which means Elizabeth is denied when she applied making her an outcast making many men not look to her for a partner.
The Bingley’s , the Hurst’s and Mr Darcy come to Netherfield. At the Meryton assembly there is an attack. Mr. Bingley and Mr. Darcy try to defend the citizens after Mr. Bennet gets bit. Elizabeth’s magic assist the men in defeating the beast.
Darcy is engaged to Miss Bingley because his father thought the family magic would help make magical offspring. Darcy’s attraction to Elizabeth causes havoc is Miss Bingley’s life. Mr. Hurst believes he should should be elected to run the magical community and runs against Lord Matlock. Things get complicated in London.
I enjoyed the book and thought it was very entertaining.
In the world of P&P there is magic. Only males can attend the academy to learn magic, which means Elizabeth is denied when she applied making her an outcast making many men not look to her for a partner.
The Bingley’s , the Hurst’s and Mr Darcy come to Netherfield. At the Meryton assembly there is an attack. Mr. Bingley and Mr. Darcy try to defend the citizens after Mr. Bennet gets bit. Elizabeth’s magic assist the men in defeating the beast.
Darcy is engaged to Miss Bingley because his father thought the family magic would help make magical offspring. Darcy’s attraction to Elizabeth causes havoc is Miss Bingley’s life. Mr. Hurst believes he should should be elected to run the magical community and runs against Lord Matlock. Things get complicated in London.
I enjoyed the book and thought it was very entertaining.
January 3, 2022
Fitzwilliam Darcy doesn't believe that women can do powerful magic. His whole world is turned on end when he meets Elizabeth Bennet. He can not quite figure her out as she defies most assumptions he has made and he is hopelessly drawn to her. To bad he is engaged to his best friend's sister, Caroline Bingley. As more and more goblins are appearing unexpectedly, Elizabeth and Fitzwilliam work together to solve the mystery.
The author does a great job keeping the story engaging and does make it to a satisfying happily ever after.
The author does a great job keeping the story engaging and does make it to a satisfying happily ever after.
March 17, 2023
Great Story
Loved it and glad the villain got his comeuppance, I knew it was Mr Hurst, he always claimed he wad such a mage but never tried to help he was hiding from the goblins!
Loved it and glad the villain got his comeuppance, I knew it was Mr Hurst, he always claimed he wad such a mage but never tried to help he was hiding from the goblins!
May 22, 2022
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Mages and Mysteries is a fantasy Pride & Prejudice story set in a Regency England where goblin attacks are a normal occurrence and where the Academy Paladins are required to step up and protect the population. However, even though everyone may possess magical skills, these Paladins are always male because woman are expected to use their magical skills for minor tasks such as decoration and home management.
When Mr. Darcy and Mr. Bingley, two of the Academy’s renown Paladins, travel to Hertfordshire, they are obliged to re-think about the Academy’s decisions as Elizabeth Bennet starts showing them how valuable and strong her magic is.
There are a lot of fantasy P&P stories being released lately, and it is becoming harder for authors to differentiate their stories from the ones previously released. What I loved the most about Mages and Mysteries was the ability Victoria Kincaid had to create a new world and to bring the goblin storyline more depth than one would expect from the enemy. I loved how the goblin storyline progressed and the conclusions Elizabeth and Darcy were able to make as they discovered more about them, their world, the reason for their appearance and behavior.
I also loved the pace of the story and the fact that it was action-packed. From goblin attacks, to travels through the country, investigations being held and evil mages controlling people’s minds, this book didn’t have one dull moment. The writing style was also very vivid and allowed me to clearly picture every battle that was occurring, every tender moment between Darcy and Elizabeth and every look they shared. As always Victoria Kincaid was able to capture my attention and to deliver a very entertaining book.
I also loved Darcy and Elizabeth’s partnership and trust in one another. Their companionship was essential to obtain the tools that allowed them to win that one last battle, and even if their relationship didn’t captivate me from the start, by the end of the book I was completely rendered to it.
Summing up, Mages and Mysteries is an entertaining story with a vivid writing style that will provide readers with mystery, adventure, a different and interesting reality, and a sweet romance. I recommend it to readers who cannot have enough of Darcy and Elizabeth.
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Mages and Mysteries is a fantasy Pride & Prejudice story set in a Regency England where goblin attacks are a normal occurrence and where the Academy Paladins are required to step up and protect the population. However, even though everyone may possess magical skills, these Paladins are always male because woman are expected to use their magical skills for minor tasks such as decoration and home management.
When Mr. Darcy and Mr. Bingley, two of the Academy’s renown Paladins, travel to Hertfordshire, they are obliged to re-think about the Academy’s decisions as Elizabeth Bennet starts showing them how valuable and strong her magic is.
There are a lot of fantasy P&P stories being released lately, and it is becoming harder for authors to differentiate their stories from the ones previously released. What I loved the most about Mages and Mysteries was the ability Victoria Kincaid had to create a new world and to bring the goblin storyline more depth than one would expect from the enemy. I loved how the goblin storyline progressed and the conclusions Elizabeth and Darcy were able to make as they discovered more about them, their world, the reason for their appearance and behavior.
I also loved the pace of the story and the fact that it was action-packed. From goblin attacks, to travels through the country, investigations being held and evil mages controlling people’s minds, this book didn’t have one dull moment. The writing style was also very vivid and allowed me to clearly picture every battle that was occurring, every tender moment between Darcy and Elizabeth and every look they shared. As always Victoria Kincaid was able to capture my attention and to deliver a very entertaining book.
I also loved Darcy and Elizabeth’s partnership and trust in one another. Their companionship was essential to obtain the tools that allowed them to win that one last battle, and even if their relationship didn’t captivate me from the start, by the end of the book I was completely rendered to it.
Summing up, Mages and Mysteries is an entertaining story with a vivid writing style that will provide readers with mystery, adventure, a different and interesting reality, and a sweet romance. I recommend it to readers who cannot have enough of Darcy and Elizabeth.
July 31, 2022
Victoria Kincaid certainly didn't let me down with this fantasy novel. I first thought, 'oh, where's my comfortable VC author?' I also thought that maybe there was too much Austenesque/fantasy crossover stories coming out ot the woodwork and yet..... It's Victoria Kincaid. Well, I was not disappointed in the least. In fact I lost sleep over this, could barely put it down, and marveled at the unique story. And some of the elements from Kincaid's books that I admire most and make me reread them are here in this book. Such a great story.
Darcy, the Bingleys and the Hursts arrive at Netherfield as in canon, but from there on it we barely see the Bennets at all. We see too much of Collins, but he serves a purpose. There are some frightening happenings going on in Meryton starting at the famed assembly where Darcy does his usual rude behavior and comments regarding Elizabeth's handsomeness and consequence. But then all heck breaks loose when a coachman rushes in to announce there was a goblin outside the rooms charging that way. Pandemonium. Mr. Bennet is injured. Bingley and Darcy fight and kill the goblin, although a near thing, and with Lizzy's help. Bingley injured. Hurst 'taking responsibility' for keeping the people inside safe and calm. And Elizabeth extremely magical abilities-exhausted. But Darcy has to change his mind about her abilities, and the possibility of women having more magical power than he previously believed, although he still thinks she's an anomaly.
The shocker for JAFF fans comes right away in the beginning when we find out Darcy is engaged to Caroline Bingley. Oh, no no no! Yuck. But we're privy to Darcy's thoughts about all this and are convinced he thought she was the logical best choice at the time. But as he spends more time around Elizabeth.... Yeah, we know how that's going to eventually turn around. But, we sure don't know how it will all come around in the end. Tons of angst, action, danger, traitorous villains, scary monsters.
And romance, and Darcy and Lizzy working together. Sigh. But omg the last part of the book is so angsty and I can't even touch that part without spoiling it and I won't.
Highly recommended.
Darcy, the Bingleys and the Hursts arrive at Netherfield as in canon, but from there on it we barely see the Bennets at all. We see too much of Collins, but he serves a purpose. There are some frightening happenings going on in Meryton starting at the famed assembly where Darcy does his usual rude behavior and comments regarding Elizabeth's handsomeness and consequence. But then all heck breaks loose when a coachman rushes in to announce there was a goblin outside the rooms charging that way. Pandemonium. Mr. Bennet is injured. Bingley and Darcy fight and kill the goblin, although a near thing, and with Lizzy's help. Bingley injured. Hurst 'taking responsibility' for keeping the people inside safe and calm. And Elizabeth extremely magical abilities-exhausted. But Darcy has to change his mind about her abilities, and the possibility of women having more magical power than he previously believed, although he still thinks she's an anomaly.
The shocker for JAFF fans comes right away in the beginning when we find out Darcy is engaged to Caroline Bingley. Oh, no no no! Yuck. But we're privy to Darcy's thoughts about all this and are convinced he thought she was the logical best choice at the time. But as he spends more time around Elizabeth.... Yeah, we know how that's going to eventually turn around. But, we sure don't know how it will all come around in the end. Tons of angst, action, danger, traitorous villains, scary monsters.
And romance, and Darcy and Lizzy working together. Sigh. But omg the last part of the book is so angsty and I can't even touch that part without spoiling it and I won't.
Highly recommended.
December 2, 2021
Clean fun twist on P&P
It was a cute blend of fantasy and P&P. Sometimes the characters do no behave as they should according to the norms of regency society, but this is a fantasy and a variation so I'll let it slide, lol. It really is an entertaining book, the mystery of the goblins, clean romance, and our ever wonderful Elizabeth Bennet. The Villian was a bit predictable, but it was still fun seeing Darcy and Lizzy reach that conclusion. The most disturbing part of the book is that Darcy is engaged to Miis Bingley, eeeeew gross. But apparently he did it for his Dad. I utterly love how the villian received justice, it was quite poetic. I definitely recommend this book. It's a fun, mostly light hearted clean read. Pure escapism.
It was a cute blend of fantasy and P&P. Sometimes the characters do no behave as they should according to the norms of regency society, but this is a fantasy and a variation so I'll let it slide, lol. It really is an entertaining book, the mystery of the goblins, clean romance, and our ever wonderful Elizabeth Bennet. The Villian was a bit predictable, but it was still fun seeing Darcy and Lizzy reach that conclusion. The most disturbing part of the book is that Darcy is engaged to Miis Bingley, eeeeew gross. But apparently he did it for his Dad. I utterly love how the villian received justice, it was quite poetic. I definitely recommend this book. It's a fun, mostly light hearted clean read. Pure escapism.
March 23, 2022
I wasn't sure about this when I started it, but it got better as it went along and I ended up quite enjoying it.
P&P is my favourite book so I like reading sequels and homages. Some are really good others not so much. This book is a very clever and creative retelling of the story with magic included. The plot has much from the original, but is a quite different story, but well and excitingly told.
My one quibble was the way Darcy's internal thoughts are presented. I had trouble buying that Darcy would be such a drama-queen in his head over Elizabeth. Still this is a minor issue, and did not really impact my overall enjoyment of the exciting and dramatic story the author imagined for these beloved characters.
This was a fast, fun easy read that I enjoyed.
P&P is my favourite book so I like reading sequels and homages. Some are really good others not so much. This book is a very clever and creative retelling of the story with magic included. The plot has much from the original, but is a quite different story, but well and excitingly told.
My one quibble was the way Darcy's internal thoughts are presented. I had trouble buying that Darcy would be such a drama-queen in his head over Elizabeth. Still this is a minor issue, and did not really impact my overall enjoyment of the exciting and dramatic story the author imagined for these beloved characters.
This was a fast, fun easy read that I enjoyed.
July 8, 2023
What a perfect page turner!
I love magical Pride and Prejudice stories, and this one is entertaining and enjoyable. It is wonderfully written and full of unexpected developments and circumstances.
I love magical Pride and Prejudice stories, and this one is entertaining and enjoyable. It is wonderfully written and full of unexpected developments and circumstances.
December 2, 2021
Goblins and dragons and love, oh my!
Shades of Harry Potter's world rolled up with women's rights and even a little snippet of Harvey the Rabbit as Darcy and Elizabeth combine forced on a fantasy world.
Shades of Harry Potter's world rolled up with women's rights and even a little snippet of Harvey the Rabbit as Darcy and Elizabeth combine forced on a fantasy world.
December 1, 2021
What a fun read! I was a bit hesitant to start this one - I’m not a huge fan of magical/mystical stories but I haven’t read anything from this author that I didn’t enjoy.
I did figure out the plot and who the baddies were early on but enjoyed how the events unfolded.
I did figure out the plot and who the baddies were early on but enjoyed how the events unfolded.
January 2, 2022
I loved this fantasy retelling of Pride and Prejudice set in a regency world where magic is an integral part of society. While there are changes to plot and some situations to fit in with the fantasy world, all of the characters are still true to Austen's original.
April 10, 2022
🪄 Mages and Mysteries 👹
A Fantasy Pride and Prejudice Variation
✒️ Victoria Kincaid
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Release Date 11/27/2021
Publisher Meadowbrook Press
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𝗕𝗹𝘂𝗿𝗯
A Fantasy Pride and Prejudice Variation In Regency England, women are expected to confine their magical acts to mending dresses or enhancing their beauty, but Elizabeth Bennet insists on crafting her own spells to fight goblins and protect the people of Meryton. She even caused a scandal by applying for admission to the magical Academy. When Hertfordshire is beset with a series of unexplained goblin attacks, Elizabeth is quite ready to protect her family and friends. If only she didn’t have to deal with the attitude of the arrogant mage, Fitzwilliam Darcy. Mr. Darcy doesn’t need to be associated with a scandalous woman like Elizabeth Bennet—no matter how attractive she is. But as the goblin attacks accelerate and grow more dangerous, Darcy realizes that he could use her help in identifying the cause—and is forced to recognize her magical ability. Unfortunately, continued proximity to Elizabeth only heightens his attraction to her—which is particularly inconvenient in light of his engagement to Caroline Bingley. Can Elizabeth and Darcy unravel the mystery of the goblin attacks before more people are hurt? And how can they manage their growing mutual attraction? It’s sure to be interesting…because when Darcy and Elizabeth come together, magic happens.
𝗥𝗲𝘃𝗶𝗲𝘄
Will they be able to clear the threat against them all…
After Monica Fairview’s Mr. Darcy Magic Book series, I confess I was curious to explore the P&P variation world, so when lucky me won this book in a giveaway, it was as much a surprise than a pleasure.
Another retelling with a magic setting.
Here the impediment for Elizabeth to explore her talent is not her family’s wealth but her sex.
I really enjoyed to read this version of P&P meet Harry Potter.
The Darcy of the beginning is as condescending than the original one but his opinion is quickly altered when he witnesses Lizzie’s abilities at welding and crafting spells.
Elizabeth knows she has destroyed any future prospect when she applied for the Academy, even more when her entry was rejected. So a mage snickering at her is no news, she is used to it, and won’t cower.
It was entertaining to watch Darcy realizes how wrong he has been, to come to see how talented and lively Lizzie is.
The background plot was surprising and fun to watch unraveling. Loaded with action, betrayal and lost of spells.
4.5 stars
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A Fantasy Pride and Prejudice Variation
✒️ Victoria Kincaid
https://www.facebook.com/kincaidvicto...
Release Date 11/27/2021
Publisher Meadowbrook Press
➪ https://www.amazon.com/dp/B09MPRSJ6T/...
𝗕𝗹𝘂𝗿𝗯
A Fantasy Pride and Prejudice Variation In Regency England, women are expected to confine their magical acts to mending dresses or enhancing their beauty, but Elizabeth Bennet insists on crafting her own spells to fight goblins and protect the people of Meryton. She even caused a scandal by applying for admission to the magical Academy. When Hertfordshire is beset with a series of unexplained goblin attacks, Elizabeth is quite ready to protect her family and friends. If only she didn’t have to deal with the attitude of the arrogant mage, Fitzwilliam Darcy. Mr. Darcy doesn’t need to be associated with a scandalous woman like Elizabeth Bennet—no matter how attractive she is. But as the goblin attacks accelerate and grow more dangerous, Darcy realizes that he could use her help in identifying the cause—and is forced to recognize her magical ability. Unfortunately, continued proximity to Elizabeth only heightens his attraction to her—which is particularly inconvenient in light of his engagement to Caroline Bingley. Can Elizabeth and Darcy unravel the mystery of the goblin attacks before more people are hurt? And how can they manage their growing mutual attraction? It’s sure to be interesting…because when Darcy and Elizabeth come together, magic happens.
𝗥𝗲𝘃𝗶𝗲𝘄
Will they be able to clear the threat against them all…
After Monica Fairview’s Mr. Darcy Magic Book series, I confess I was curious to explore the P&P variation world, so when lucky me won this book in a giveaway, it was as much a surprise than a pleasure.
Another retelling with a magic setting.
Here the impediment for Elizabeth to explore her talent is not her family’s wealth but her sex.
I really enjoyed to read this version of P&P meet Harry Potter.
The Darcy of the beginning is as condescending than the original one but his opinion is quickly altered when he witnesses Lizzie’s abilities at welding and crafting spells.
Elizabeth knows she has destroyed any future prospect when she applied for the Academy, even more when her entry was rejected. So a mage snickering at her is no news, she is used to it, and won’t cower.
It was entertaining to watch Darcy realizes how wrong he has been, to come to see how talented and lively Lizzie is.
The background plot was surprising and fun to watch unraveling. Loaded with action, betrayal and lost of spells.
4.5 stars
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December 16, 2021
Entertaining
Magical powers are the norm, but women are encouraged to hide the more advanced powers, and only use magic for household chores or personal beautification. Elizabeth is magically talented, and instead of hiding it, tries to be admitted to a school for mages. She's rejected, and Darcy is one member of the panel responsible for her denial. She discovers this when Darcy and Bingley arrive at Netherfield Park, and she's only too happy to challenge him about the absence of women in mage training. A spate of goblin attacks threatens the neighborhood, and Elizabeth proves her magical value by helping Darcy and Bingley repel the attacks. Elizabeth becomes further involved in a subsequent investigation into the purpose of the sudden goblin attacks, and Darcy quickly comes to value and love her.
This is a story about feminism in magical Regency England. No women are allowed in mage training, there are no female instructors, and no female dormitories at the school. Elizabeth would like to break these barriers, and she's exactly the correct intrepid heroine to do it. I like her approach to girl power, nothing over the top, she just lets her actions speak for themselves. What I didn't like was the fact that Darcy was betrothed to Caroline Bingley from the start. This is too icky for me. It's explained away by it being thought a good idea by Darcy's father before he died, and Darcy just going along with it. This lowers Darcy in my estimation, especially since Caroline is her usual snooty and verbally abusive self. Not very admirable that he would go so far as to become engaged to that shrew , just because daddy might have approved.
There is a surprise villain in the story, a character who rarely gets any screen time, so that was interesting. Once Darcy starts recognizing Elizabeth's good qualities, the romance is lovely. However, there's always that cloud hanging over them of his engagement to Caroline, so the romance is somewhat tempered by an "ick factor." That was one facet of the storyline I could have done without. I enjoy these variations based on magic and dragons and all that kind of thing, but I still sometimes have to roll my eyes at the convenient invention of magical abilities, seemingly on the spur of the moment, just to further a plot point. When you keep giving characters greater and greater powers, making them almost god-like, it can tend to border on ludicrous.
The book is well written and well edited. I recommend it highly.
Magical powers are the norm, but women are encouraged to hide the more advanced powers, and only use magic for household chores or personal beautification. Elizabeth is magically talented, and instead of hiding it, tries to be admitted to a school for mages. She's rejected, and Darcy is one member of the panel responsible for her denial. She discovers this when Darcy and Bingley arrive at Netherfield Park, and she's only too happy to challenge him about the absence of women in mage training. A spate of goblin attacks threatens the neighborhood, and Elizabeth proves her magical value by helping Darcy and Bingley repel the attacks. Elizabeth becomes further involved in a subsequent investigation into the purpose of the sudden goblin attacks, and Darcy quickly comes to value and love her.
This is a story about feminism in magical Regency England. No women are allowed in mage training, there are no female instructors, and no female dormitories at the school. Elizabeth would like to break these barriers, and she's exactly the correct intrepid heroine to do it. I like her approach to girl power, nothing over the top, she just lets her actions speak for themselves. What I didn't like was the fact that Darcy was betrothed to Caroline Bingley from the start. This is too icky for me. It's explained away by it being thought a good idea by Darcy's father before he died, and Darcy just going along with it. This lowers Darcy in my estimation, especially since Caroline is her usual snooty and verbally abusive self. Not very admirable that he would go so far as to become engaged to that shrew , just because daddy might have approved.
There is a surprise villain in the story, a character who rarely gets any screen time, so that was interesting. Once Darcy starts recognizing Elizabeth's good qualities, the romance is lovely. However, there's always that cloud hanging over them of his engagement to Caroline, so the romance is somewhat tempered by an "ick factor." That was one facet of the storyline I could have done without. I enjoy these variations based on magic and dragons and all that kind of thing, but I still sometimes have to roll my eyes at the convenient invention of magical abilities, seemingly on the spur of the moment, just to further a plot point. When you keep giving characters greater and greater powers, making them almost god-like, it can tend to border on ludicrous.
The book is well written and well edited. I recommend it highly.
October 20, 2025
I loved it!
Warning: Meant for mature audiences. Contains scenes that would scandalize the ton. Readers of a delicate constitution are advised to keep their fans and vinaigrettes close at hand.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. A Pride and Prejudice meets Fantasy variation.
In Regency England, women are expected to confine their magical acts to mending dresses or enhancing their beauty, but Elizabeth Bennet insists on crafting her own spells to fight goblins and protect the people of Meryton. She even caused a scandal by applying for admission to the magical Academy. When Hertfordshire is beset with a series of unexplained goblin attacks, Elizabeth is quite ready to protect her family and friends. If only she didn’t have to deal with the attitude of the arrogant mage, Fitzwilliam Darcy.
Mr. Darcy doesn’t need to be associated with a scandalous woman like Elizabeth Bennet, no matter how attractive she is, but as the goblin attacks accelerate and grow more dangerous, Darcy realizes that he could use her help in identifying the cause, and is forced to recognize her magical ability. Unfortunately, continued proximity to Elizabeth only heightens his attraction to her, which is particularly inconvenient in light of his engagement to Caroline Bingley.
Can Elizabeth and Darcy unravel the mystery of the goblin attacks before more people are hurt and how can they manage their growing mutual attraction? It’s sure to be interesting, because when Darcy and Elizabeth come together, magic happens. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
Warning: Meant for mature audiences. Contains scenes that would scandalize the ton. Readers of a delicate constitution are advised to keep their fans and vinaigrettes close at hand.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. A Pride and Prejudice meets Fantasy variation.
In Regency England, women are expected to confine their magical acts to mending dresses or enhancing their beauty, but Elizabeth Bennet insists on crafting her own spells to fight goblins and protect the people of Meryton. She even caused a scandal by applying for admission to the magical Academy. When Hertfordshire is beset with a series of unexplained goblin attacks, Elizabeth is quite ready to protect her family and friends. If only she didn’t have to deal with the attitude of the arrogant mage, Fitzwilliam Darcy.
Mr. Darcy doesn’t need to be associated with a scandalous woman like Elizabeth Bennet, no matter how attractive she is, but as the goblin attacks accelerate and grow more dangerous, Darcy realizes that he could use her help in identifying the cause, and is forced to recognize her magical ability. Unfortunately, continued proximity to Elizabeth only heightens his attraction to her, which is particularly inconvenient in light of his engagement to Caroline Bingley.
Can Elizabeth and Darcy unravel the mystery of the goblin attacks before more people are hurt and how can they manage their growing mutual attraction? It’s sure to be interesting, because when Darcy and Elizabeth come together, magic happens. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
December 6, 2021
I'm going to be honest I didn't know anything about this book when I went into it. However, I have read a few Pride and Prejudice variations with magic and mages so this was right up my alley. I was really not a fan of Darcy being engaged to Caroline even though that was his father's wish more than his. I love how Darcy's and Elizabeth's relationship developed over time and many discussions over magic. You can sort of see who the main villain was but at the same time you sort of question it because of who it is. It was great how Darcy got himself out of his engagement to Caroline and almost immediately compromised Elizabeth so they had to get engaged. I'm happy by the end of the book that women were on their way to being accepted as being able to do more than household magic in society.
This book was good and a definite read if you enjoy fantasy in your JAFF books.
Rating: 4 stars
*I received a copy of this book from the author. All opinions are my own.
This book was good and a definite read if you enjoy fantasy in your JAFF books.
Rating: 4 stars
*I received a copy of this book from the author. All opinions are my own.
January 26, 2025
a very fun story
4.5 stars. I usually think that P&P variations that depart so wholly from the original should be crafted as fantasy books in their own right rather than JAFF. This is one of the few that I've felt truly blends the P&P characters well with a story that's totally different from the original. I still think it would've done well as fantasy in its own right, but the quotations from the original story were at least integrated fluidly. I liked this Elizabeth a lot. Darcy was frustratingly chauvinistic at first but quickly bowed to reason so it wasn't intolerable. I did get a bit annoyed that he refused to break off his engagement once he realised he was in love with Elizabeth. THAT dithering was a little annoying. But the great banter and comedic situations made up for it in the end.
4.5 stars. I usually think that P&P variations that depart so wholly from the original should be crafted as fantasy books in their own right rather than JAFF. This is one of the few that I've felt truly blends the P&P characters well with a story that's totally different from the original. I still think it would've done well as fantasy in its own right, but the quotations from the original story were at least integrated fluidly. I liked this Elizabeth a lot. Darcy was frustratingly chauvinistic at first but quickly bowed to reason so it wasn't intolerable. I did get a bit annoyed that he refused to break off his engagement once he realised he was in love with Elizabeth. THAT dithering was a little annoying. But the great banter and comedic situations made up for it in the end.
December 13, 2021
Its magically delicious!
We are in Meryton surrounded by mages who protect the public from goblins and other dangerous creatures. Elizabeth Bennet applied to be admitted to study magic but they don't accept women. The feeling is that women can't do serious magic, only household magic. But she's been trained by her father all her life and is able to even create realistic creatures to confuse the goblins. Darcy is a Mage and is betrothed to Caroline Bingley who is just as horrible as always. Charles is also trained in the protection magic and the men are kept busy by a sudden invasion of dangerous goblins intended to kill humans.
It's an enjoyable read and the magic isn't as confusing as in some stories.
We are in Meryton surrounded by mages who protect the public from goblins and other dangerous creatures. Elizabeth Bennet applied to be admitted to study magic but they don't accept women. The feeling is that women can't do serious magic, only household magic. But she's been trained by her father all her life and is able to even create realistic creatures to confuse the goblins. Darcy is a Mage and is betrothed to Caroline Bingley who is just as horrible as always. Charles is also trained in the protection magic and the men are kept busy by a sudden invasion of dangerous goblins intended to kill humans.
It's an enjoyable read and the magic isn't as confusing as in some stories.
December 16, 2021
Fantastic!!
5 Stars is an easy rating for a Pride and Prejudice Fantasy Variation that I can not find one single thing to be unhappy with. I truly could not set this book down for any reason until I had read it twice through. I almost hope that are dear authoress Victoria kinkade Would be so kind As to write a follow up Showing us what life is like With women Attending magical colleges.
5 Stars is an easy rating for a Pride and Prejudice Fantasy Variation that I can not find one single thing to be unhappy with. I truly could not set this book down for any reason until I had read it twice through. I almost hope that are dear authoress Victoria kinkade Would be so kind As to write a follow up Showing us what life is like With women Attending magical colleges.
June 2, 2024
A great read
A magical variation where Darcy is betrothed to Caroline! Lizzy and Darcy are at odds as usual at the beginning but gradually start to find they need to work together to find a way to stop goblin attacks. When they discover the mage responsible for the attacks, and why, there is a fight to restore goodness. I do enjoy magical variations as well as the romantic and I can recommend.
A magical variation where Darcy is betrothed to Caroline! Lizzy and Darcy are at odds as usual at the beginning but gradually start to find they need to work together to find a way to stop goblin attacks. When they discover the mage responsible for the attacks, and why, there is a fight to restore goodness. I do enjoy magical variations as well as the romantic and I can recommend.
December 3, 2021
2.5 stars
This book rubbed me the wrong way.
The big mystery was obvious, I didn't like this Darcy the pace was slow and Elizabeth was too good to be true.
This book rubbed me the wrong way.
The big mystery was obvious, I didn't like this Darcy the pace was slow and Elizabeth was too good to be true.
December 8, 2021
A Wonderful Tale
This was a delightful story with Darcy and Elizabeth which includes magic. There is mystery, intrigue, and other wonderful adventures. When you are reading a long Victoria interspersed some great lines that was so Austen with some other delightful phrases. A great read.
This was a delightful story with Darcy and Elizabeth which includes magic. There is mystery, intrigue, and other wonderful adventures. When you are reading a long Victoria interspersed some great lines that was so Austen with some other delightful phrases. A great read.
January 13, 2022
An enlightening delightful read
Again, Victoria Kincaid has another win with magic and all it entails. I was a bit surprised in a character that is usually so boring in other variations being at the forefront of extreme evil-doing. A MUST READ….if for any other reason, Victoria Kincaid wrote this book!!!!
Again, Victoria Kincaid has another win with magic and all it entails. I was a bit surprised in a character that is usually so boring in other variations being at the forefront of extreme evil-doing. A MUST READ….if for any other reason, Victoria Kincaid wrote this book!!!!
October 27, 2023
A delight
Kincaid creates a mash-up of P&P and fantasy whilst keeping her characters true to canon, except when they aren’t. The world-building is terrific , the goblins depicted in detail, and the writing is good. I’ve just discovered Kincaid and I’m binge reading all I can get my hands on.
Kincaid creates a mash-up of P&P and fantasy whilst keeping her characters true to canon, except when they aren’t. The world-building is terrific , the goblins depicted in detail, and the writing is good. I’ve just discovered Kincaid and I’m binge reading all I can get my hands on.
December 6, 2021
Enchantingly Magical
Loved the story. It was well written and I loved the ending. Such a fun magical story. 5 ☆☆☆☆☆
I really enjoy your stories, wonderful story, I can't wait for the next one!
Loved the story. It was well written and I loved the ending. Such a fun magical story. 5 ☆☆☆☆☆
I really enjoy your stories, wonderful story, I can't wait for the next one!
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