I can’t believe I bought this with my own money 🤦🏽♀️ falsely advertised as an MMF but one M is basically none existent.
This is a continuation of the story between Olivia, Jaxon and Ryder. Jaxon and Olivia finally end up in bet together and it’s…kind of hot. I really enjoyed the cockwarming 🥵 part (sorry, not sorry!) and that’s the only reason I rated it 3 stars.
This is a quick dominate daddy story and I recommend it if that is what you like. Olivia has a crazy ex-boyfriend who is causing trouble for her. Jaxon and Ryder and their team are providing security detail for Olivia because they don't trust the ex. Rightfully so. Jaxon develops a relationship with her and Ryder is trying to keep his distance. I don't want to give away any spoilers but the end of the story is really interesting. I received this book as an ARC and I am voluntarily leaving a review.
I just can't get enough of it! Despite my expectation, it just keeps getting better and better so far. Whether we are talking about the plot or the exquisite spicy scenes. 🔥 8,5/10.
Look... I am just going to review all 6 novellas in one because they end in cliffhangers (and they are not even relevant well-thought cliffhangers, some just end abruptly) and have around 100-150 pages each and I find it pointless to review each book when they barely have any meaning individually. Also the fact that each of these novellas are $3 on kindle when you can get a spicy book that's around 350 pages for $5 is a highway robbery!! I am not saying spicy authors should not get paid, but it does feel greedy in this case. Thankfully the books are available on Scribd and I have a Scribd subscription (if you want free 60 days on scribd hit me up!)
Although it's mostly smut - plot, what plot? - there is a lot of suspense though because the FMC is in danger from three different baddies, and there is some emotional plot and I guess character study as the 2nd daddy has to get over some issues before jumping into our soon-to-be polyamorous relationship. Which also brings me to... the first book is lying as there barely is a menage in it (that club scene does not count) and you won't get that in the 2nd one either (although it also has a hot scene where the 2nd guy is there and kinda participating but not really). That being said, I was hooked, no matter how predictable and over the top some things were, and if this book was not split in so many parts, it would've been a 4 star read because it was really entertaining me on a really bad migraine day.
Other than that you have the usual miscommunication and misunderstanding conflicts, the stalker ex-boyfriend, their ex-girlfriend coming back for some trouble etc etc etc. It's all fun emotional turmoil that keeps you reading.
That being said... everything is rushed in this 6-episode book (the author calls them episodes in the preface) and the characters barely get any personality: the guys do have a bit of individuality and charisma, but the FMC has pretty much nothing going on (other than being constantly in danger and a conflict with her mother) and she suffers of the whole annoying insecurity in their relationship, always thinking it will end in a break-up one way or another, which was very uncalled for - I know she had a bad relationship before our MMCs, but really, the guys are trying to communicate and she keeps worrying about a break-up without any reason. But was it a fun read on a day with a huge migraine? Yes, yes, it was! The spice is quite hot and finally something new and more interesting. And I would lie if I didn't say that I was curious about what happened to our two daddies in their previous relationship because they too clearly have some communication issues with each other.
Do I wish there was more talking since she is new to the whole daddydom thing? Sure, yes, but hey, he covered consent and safewords and how it works overall so it's fine by me. Plus she was always reminded that she has a safeword and if she is uncomfortable at any point all she has to do is use it. Also, both guys are a bit sadistic and I loved every second of it!
We get to see Olivia and Jaxon getting to know one another better now that she is living in his penthouse as a roommate (at first) and Ryder starts staying there pretty quickly as well. He is drawn to Olivia but is being very stubborn about acting on any of it. This story was hot and the daddy kink is here. Jaxon is definitely in charge and wants to take care of Olivia but it wasn’t too extreme. Ryder has the same kink he’s just being stubborn and Jaxon knows it. They are trying to keep Olivia safe from her ex as he continues to hurt her and what matters to her. This was a quick read that I enjoyed. This is the 2nd episode of the story so you really should read the first one to really know what’s going on and while this doesn’t end on a cliffhanger the story isn’t finished. It’s written in episodes and we were forewarned at the beginning of the book. I’m looking forward to the next one.
This guy is a big baby. All upset cuz he's being held accountable for his actions!! I mean after what he's done to her apartment & studio? He deserves everything he gets!
Having the very sexy owners of a Security Company as new bf's, helping her to get through the mess that is Daniel, is perfect!! I mean really, who better to have your back than a big burly Security team?
Now to get Ryder to surrender to his feelings. He's anxious & A bit vulnerable after the Genevieve fiasco! Not even sure how bad that was. Just Ryder's fear of falling for & losing another Babydoll, is huge. Can he try again?
As the dangerous situation with Olivia’s ex escalates, she’s going to learn exactly what it means to be cherished by a daddy.
Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️ POV: Olivia, Jaxon, Ryder Spice: 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️ Tropes: Daddy, Age Play, Age Gap, MFM Ending: Part of a series. Story continues on to “episode 3”: Daddies’ Little Angel
I love this series. I just finished part 2 - hard to imagine, but 2 is even better than 1! Ryder still isn't on board - but with Daniel in the picture - there is trouble. Ryder is trying hard to not get involved with Olivia - but Jaxon makes things hot trying to reel Ryder in. Can't wait to start the 3rd episode!
I’ve enjoyed the chemistry between Jaxon, Ryder and Olivia. She’s still being tormented by her ex. I’m not entirely sure if this is the end of that or not. But, of course, there’s another crazy ex on the horizon. Ryder is still coming to terms with his feelings for Olivia. I feel things will progress in book 3 and am looking forward to it.
Plot- or character-driven? Character Strong character development? Yes Loveable characters? Yes Diverse cast of characters? Yes Flaws of characters a main focus? No
Kindle - cute shorter story that’s up beat fun with a small amount of sad/tense moments. Great happy 2dd/lg relationship-building story.
I love this author. I've just discovered her and she is great!!!! I'm totally wrapped up in this series. It has all the food stuff. Its a MFM story line. I think its age gap also but the male ages are not mentioned or I just missed it. The story is super hot with a side of daddy kink. Happy reading!!!!!
I loved this one just as much as the first. The SPOILERS!!! stalker ex plot is fun (is fun really the right word here lol?) to read and the spice is immaculate. It sounds like we'll get double the spice in #3 in the series, and I can't wait!
I liked it more than the first installment in the serial. All the plot building from the first book came to fruition in this one. I loved all the angst and smut. And might I say what a cliffhanger?! Going to read the third one after this!
I am totally invested now and will stay up the entire night if I have to. I will read the entire series! I just know that Genevieve is going to bring all kinds of chaos.
Ryder needs to get his head out of his ASS! Ok rant over. Gawd I feel soo bad or Olivia. Her ex is something else. Can’t get enough, on to the next. As mentioned, Ryder better step up his game and get in there 🤭
I can't even really tell you why I funking love this book series. Just know that it is absolutely perfect. I am completely funking obsessed with everything it. I can't wait to see what happens next. Can't wait for the next book.
Ok first Ryder needs to get his damn act together and figure his shit out! I liked that communication is a key component of their relationship and that the fmc is learning to find her voice.
This book checked all the boxes: Spice 5/5 Carries over story from book one Includes a lot more Ryder Action packed Cliché, yes, but I loved it. Can't wait to continue the story!
Just getting back into it then it goes to a cliffhanger. Such is a series like this, can't wait to get to the next one. What is Genevieve up to now and will Jaxon admit to being in contact with her?