A Lot of Good Ideas That Don’t Quite Come Together
To be perfectly honest I feel somewhat bad about this rating, the book isn’t bad exactly, so much as it’s trying to do too much at once. There’s some really solid character concepts and conflicts to work with but I felt like they ended up getting a little lost. I feel like if the structure had been workshopped a bit, ie, cut down the number of conflicts and have the core ones recur and not be immediately resolved, I might really enjoy this book. The other big thing about this book that confused me was that it’s so fixated on the sexual attraction and sexual components of a relationship that part of me thought this was meant to be erotica, however there’s not a single proper sex scene until the end of the book. This leaves me a bit tonally confused, because, for want of a better word, the characters spend the whole book so horny that it kinda kills the romance at some spots but at the same time if you wanted it to be sexy you never get a payoff until the final twenty pages or so. I really do find that this book has a lot going for it, I just wish that the structure of the story and the tone had been a bit stronger.