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259 pages, Kindle Edition
Published November 30, 2021
Ashton took the hint he wanted some space and time alone with his sister. Ashton rose and walked toward him. When he was beside him, he didn't know if he should kiss Quinn or not. He grabbed him and kissed him quickly {who kissed whom} then gently pushed Ashton toward the kitchen.Next paragraph: "Quinn watched as Ashton leave (sic) the room with his dog and cat trailing behind him." For the record, dog and cat are Quinn's.
Later after the meal was consumed they relaxed in (emphasis mine; lack of commas, the author's) -- he leaning against Ashton -- with Gabe sitting beside them. Zeus and Isis curled up in he (sic) and Ashton's feet.*Gabe is Quinn's sister, Zeus and Isis his dog and cat.