That Universe Over There

by mytimeconsumingsidehobby

Finding himself in another universe, Harry makes the perfectly logical choice and adopts his younger self, destroys this world's leftover Voldie pieces, and tries his best to avoid happy goblins.

Genres: Fan Fiction, Fantasy

Unknown Binding

Reviews

[Tailtiu]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/237...

[Reader · Rating 1 out of 5]

This could’ve been a decent story for me. The biggest issue is how meandering this is. The second biggest is Harry’s passivity:

Harry knows Hogwarts is very dangerous/deadly but sends his daughter/alt-self there anyway because she really wants to go (doesn’t warn her of the danger). Knows future knowledge but forgets often leading to actual/potential Bad things he didn’t want to happen. A rapist/pedophile (who raped and erased his memory repeatedly as a kid) is now his daughters professor and he does next to nothing to stop the guy (he eventually dies due to deus ex machina). Albus is mind controlling (etc.) his daughter and leading her into deadly situations and he’s doing absolutely nothing to change that.

In this story Harry Potter is supernaturally powerful, immortal, and extremely influential and does almost nothing to protect himself or the people he loves. He actually doesn’t do much of anything at all.

-Dropped Ch 27/57

[SwordDude3000 · Rating 3 out of 5]

I don't think the author had a plot or destination in mind when he started the story. The story is funny sometimes, but not often enough to be crack-fic.

[Allison Henle · Rating 5 out of 5]

Absolutely loved most of it. Really bummed that it hasn't been finished (yet).