Dragon's Justice 2

Dragon's Justice #2

by Bruce Sentar

Zach is back. Life has been good since they dispatched a rabid alpha wolf, tricked into dark power.

His hoard is growing steadily, with odd jobs working as Morgana’s partner and they’ve been hired to deal with the swamp troll migration as the trolls pass through Philly on their way to Florida for the winter.

As if he doesn’t have enough to deal with, the Order of the Magi come to town for a convention and tensions grow taut between magi and the paranormal council.

When trolls become overly aggressive and they find a magus skinwalker behind it, Zach can’t stand by. Someone has to answer to an angry dragon for attacking his new mate. Politics between the two groups be damned.

Genres: Harem, Fantasy, Urban Fantasy, Dragons, Smut, Magic, Romance

411 pages, Kindle Edition

First published December 8, 2021

About the author

Born and raised in the agricultural midwest, I moved every year after school even as far as Shanghai before settling down with my wife in Chicago.

I have always enjoyed Wuxia stories and became thrilled when I discovered harem stories spreading to western books. I've written down my day dreams for years as an idle hobby. Inspired by the harem genre I'm finally fleshing them out into full blown novels.

I'm excited to share my stories with you as I turn them into novels and series.

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Reviews

[Jeff]

Great read. I am sincerely angry that I have to wait for more.

The authors writing is only getting better. Dragon shifter is almost as bad as a lion shifter, but this author is able to do it in a way that does not turn the MC into a Chad. Hell. In the first book he kills Chad!! I cannot wait for more. The end is great, and I wanted to growl a little myself. I closed the book with a smile, and sincere anger that I have to wait until the next book comes out.

[Dave Stone]

May be better than book one
Urban fantasy, Magic-Shifters-Vamps, Harem, sex scenes.
I am pleasantly impressed With book 2. This book is very well balanced. If there is any flaw, apart from the MC being a Lunk-head sometimes, it's the too fast rate of the MC's power up. This always comes back to bite the author on the ass later, but there is a tradition of leveling the MC way too fast in book 2, but this is nowhere near as bad as John Conroe did in book 2 of the Demon Accords.
Harem writers have a bad habit of going all in and then doubling down. The MC is almost always too much of something. Too "Nice", or too rich, or too powerful, but usually way too brain dead macho.
Here we have a series that is sexy hot, without being skeevy and romantically sweet without being cloying. That's mainly what I mean about it being well balanced, and that alone is not small feat.
There is also a good balance with world building, character development, and plot vs. action. The MC is also a near perfect balance between good guy and strong man without straying too far into power flexing thug.
Wile I did have to shout at my book very loud to get the MC to stop being an idiot a few times, he eventually heard me and wised up.
This was a well written, fun ride. Thank god book three is out because That end was a bit of a cliffhanger.

[Bill Tillman]

Too much like a porn novel. I like a little romance in my Dragon tales, but this author just too far!

[Kiba Snowpaw]

Final Rating: 3.42/5.00

Starting score: 2.50
+0.36 for Jadelyn's courtship and reciprocal vulnerability
+0.31 for Morgana's emotional development
+0.32 for embodied transformation and practical limitations
+0.26 for collaborative investigation and magical constraints
+0.24 for competing interests within supernatural society
+0.24 for cooperative action and rescue priorities
+0.13 for humour grounded in supernatural daily life
+0.12 for distinctive intimacy and boundary discussions
-0.24 for insufficient scrutiny of Zach's dominance
-0.19 for repeated emotional triggers accelerating power growth
-0.17 for biological pressure and uneven attention to intimate agency
-0.18 for repetitive wording and editing errors
-0.11 for recurring quarrels weakening momentum
-0.09 for underdeveloped antagonist motivations
-0.08 for deferred emotional closure
Calculated final score: 3.42/5.00

Essential Context

Three months of relative stability have passed, but this is a continuation, not a fresh introduction. Consequences of the werewolf conflict still shape obligations, while Zach and Scarlett have an established relationship rather than another first encounter to negotiate. I would not start here without the previous adventure. The sexual balance changes too. Sexual activity and its aftermath enter almost immediately, some encounters are abbreviated, and extended, explicitly described scenes occur later, including late in the story. Frequent innuendo fills the spaces between encounters; calling this merely a fantasy with occasional flirting would be misleading. The expanding relationship is an important attraction, although investigation and action remain substantial. Violence includes graphic dismemberment, and supernatural regeneration often turns damage into grotesque comedy before other scenes insist upon its seriousness. That shifting balance matters to my judgment: a playful tone can make danger entertaining, but it cannot automatically settle the consequences of what somebody does.

Hook and Thesis

A dragon can make everyone kneel and still leave me wondering who is being protected. I love the movement towards a recognisably nonhuman existence and find warmth in people learning to make room for one another. Yet my respect for Zach becomes less secure whenever intimidation serves as sufficient proof that he has grown. My claws catch on the difference between accepting an identity and accepting every impulse attached to it. His circle gains more personal meaning than a collection of admirers, but exceptional status repeatedly softens scrutiny of his conduct. Affection and inventive adventure keep this Ice Wolf interested, but the sharper questions do not disappear beneath golden scales. I want his responsibilities considered as carefully as his desirability. The affection matters precisely because I want more than domination from him. That imbalance limits my recommendation. I want a person worthy of the power, not just impressive demonstrations of having it.

Basic Plot Summary

Zach balances college with mercenary work beside Morgana, his guide to a hidden world he only partly understands. Knowing he is a dragon has not taught him how to become one reliably. Their assignment is to manage migrating swamp trolls passing through Philadelphia, keeping destructive visitors moving rather than allowing the city to become their playground. A convention of the Order of the Magi brings human magic users into uneasy proximity with the paranormal council, and incidents begin looking less accidental. Meanwhile, Scarlett's changing expectations open the possibility of a relationship with Jadelyn, whose public position makes private happiness complicated. An investigation involving skinwalkers connects personal danger to wider hostility. I find the useful question is not simply whether Zach can become stronger. It is whether Zach can understand what others need before deciding that protecting them entitles him to make their decisions. Both storylines meet on that uncomfortable ground.

Praise and Critique

Jadelyn benefits from being courted as somebody with preferences rather than displayed as another valuable acquisition. The outdoor date gives her a break from expensive dinners and guarded appearances. Preparing a simple meal together matters because attention, not expenditure, distinguishes the occasion. Her concern about being wanted for wealth provides a counterpart to Zach's concern about being wanted for his nature. Neither wants the person beneath the valuable exterior to disappear. Her interest predates the important disclosure, so dismissing her attraction as sudden opportunism would be unfair. Scarlett helps without vanishing from the emotional arrangement, and Jadelyn admits that seeing affection shared is different from knowing abstractly that it will happen. Those discomforts give the relationship texture. The later speed of commitment troubles me, but the attraction has a foundation. My ears lift when these people ask what another person enjoys, rather than assuming that access to luxury answers the question.

Morgana gives the adventure its strongest mixture of confidence and vulnerability. Her teasing can dominate a room, but that confidence is not the whole woman. A life dedicated to her clan's root tree makes her exile more substantial than an excuse to dress an ancient character in defiance. She lost a purpose as well as a community. Her partnership with Zach also acquires weight beyond providing equipment and training. She can protect him while keeping parts of herself guarded, and the later cost of protection prevents her competence from remaining a limitless convenience. That affects me more than another declaration that she is dangerous. Her evasions frustrate me, but they belong to a recognisable defence. My thought from the den is simple: “Some creatures bare their fangs because showing the wound underneath would hurt more.” That is the side of her that reaches beyond the leather and spectacle, giving her history an emotional claim on the present.

The physical development gives my furry imagination something solid to grasp. Shifting involves more than announcing strength: mass changes what Zach can resist, a tail becomes useful, and a different throat complicates speech. Kelly's explanation that his larger self is already connected to him provides an intelligible model without pretending anyone has established a complete science of transformation. Morgana can still exploit his size, preventing bulk from becoming a universal answer. I value this movement beyond the earlier book's mostly human-shaped advantages. Discovering that the extraordinary self has genuinely awkward practical consequences makes it more convincing. The growth rate still troubles me. Nor do I treat the prestige attached to gold as evidence of superior character. I want dragons with choices and limitations, not a colour chart standing in for morality. The strongest draconic writing concerns what Zach must learn to inhabit, rather than what others are told to admire.

The investigation earns more credit than conveniently placed enemies would. Sorting incidents by day reveals a pattern that becomes useful when Sabrina supplies the corresponding ley-line map. Zach's sight complements other people's understanding rather than replacing it. Magic also has material constraints: an intricate working can fail because what carries it cannot withstand the energy. These discoveries expand a society whose groups have competing interests. The magi want authority over their own members, and patron-based magic does not make every practitioner morally identical. Resistance to the council has reasons beyond everybody being foolish except Zach. The same setting supports effective comedy. The Florida Man joke takes the internet's bizarre-headline phenomenon and supplies a supernatural explanation: migrating trolls with little reason to fear stupidity's consequences. The warning about feeding trolls becomes literal practical advice as well as recognisable online language. I enjoy it because it creates a situation instead of dropping a borrowed catchphrase into unrelated dialogue. Supernatural life feels inhabited, although its institutions need more exploration.

Action becomes engaging when knowledge decides what strength should do. Sabrina's prepared frost tool works against swamp trolls where flashier attacks disappoint, while Zach and Morgana create openings to apply it. An inexperienced participant contributes through preparation rather than suddenly matching a veteran in everything. Jadelyn likewise gets an opportunity to defend her own position instead of waiting for her admirer to do it. These scenes keep the women from becoming interchangeable spectators. Later rescue priorities preserve something important from Zach's medical ambitions: an altered, dangerous body does not necessarily make the person inside disposable. He distinguishes victims from the force using them, even when killing would simplify the problem. My Alpha's chest recognises the value of that refusal. Saving someone asks more of the group than proving who hits hardest. I reward cooperation and rescue choices together because they make power useful to somebody other than its owner, while allowing more than one person's skill to determine what happens.

Criticism

The power curve is less satisfying than the physical imagination supporting it. Months of unsuccessful effort establish difficulty, but later breakthroughs arrive in a rush, repeatedly tied to danger and protectiveness. Emotional triggers fit this world; my objection is how readily they become the next answer. Training and assistance remain important, so describing every victory as effortless would be wrong. Yet I want more development between discovering an advantage and facing the next enormous confrontation. The widening threat has motives, including resentment of lost standing, but explanation arrives faster than a developed antagonist emerges. A separate pacing problem lies in recurring jealousy, dominance tests, and teasing that delay matters established as urgent. The case grows from earlier events rather than being replaced by a random finale, but escalation outpaces understanding while intervening conversations outstay their information. My paws keep finding the same tracks before suddenly being asked to leap a ravine.

More damaging is the distance between Zach's compassion and the indulgence granted to his aggression. When a doctor tries to examine him, he lifts the man by his clothing, then threatens him and his practice over a look directed at Jadelyn. His companions intervene, and the narration acknowledges his temper; the behaviour is not invisible. But the scene moves on too readily for someone whose earlier identity centred on helping people. Understanding his urgency does not make the doctor an enemy. I do not require gentleness or perfection. I require recognition of the difference between defending someone and punishing an inconvenient person within reach. That matters when possessiveness is repeatedly treated as reassuring. “My fangs do not become righteous merely because someone I love is standing behind them.” These moments make self-acceptance feel less like maturity and more like permission. They weaken the respect earned by his difficult efforts to save others.

The relationships contain similar tension. Scarlett initiates the discussion about another partner, Zach offers to slow down, and their conversation ends with affection requiring no sex. Jadelyn explains what she wants too. Those choices matter; I do not regard multiple partners as a problem in themselves. Nevertheless, physical exhaustion, supposedly inevitable dragon appetites, and the consequences of being marked narrow their choices. Calling something natural does not explain why it is sustainable. The explicit scenes are more distinctive when species and personality shape them, especially when a siren's voice carries hopes rather than merely decorating a description of beauty. Yet a later passage treats a bodily response as overriding a spoken stop. I trust explicit checking more than that assumption. Permanent commitment receives a direct discussion, but mutual certainty carries more weight than experience together. Desire convinces sooner than the assurance that its consequences are understood. My reservation concerns uneven attention to agency, not explicitness.

The wording needs firmer editing. Repeated growls, smirks, possessive declarations, and explanations of the beast's desires make different situations sound too similar. A reaction is often followed by Zach explaining it, then another reminder of his nature. Those explanations cost more than an isolated typo. Identifiable slips include “Sweat prickle up on Jared's face,” which breaks the tense, while a council exchange briefly labels Sebastian as Simon before reverting. That is muddled attribution, not a mysterious development. I would not turn spelling differences that disappear in speech into major listening faults, nor claim every written error survived unchanged in the recording. My deduction principally concerns recurring sentence habits, with those errors showing where precision falters. At its best, the prose is direct and clear. I want more confidence in dialogue and action to communicate feelings without repeatedly attaching labels. A dragon need not announce his species every time he has an emotion.

Evaluation and Personal Impact

What matters most to me is the uneasy border between belonging and possession. As Kiba Snowpaw, Alpha of HowlStrom's Ice Wolf Clan, I need a den where I do not have to explain away every part of myself. That does not make every growl wisdom. I know the desire to keep distance when closeness carries the possibility of hurt, and the appeal of someone making clear that I still have a place. Morgana's guardedness gives that question weight: power and admiration do not guarantee feeling safe enough to be known. Care means staying attentive to another person's vulnerability. The story becomes weaker when certainty about claiming someone substitutes for curiosity about what they fear. I want a pack with room for refusal, uncertainty, and recovery, not merely a protective wall nobody can leave. That is why the affectionate and troubling moments matter together rather than cancelling one another out. Love should make the den habitable, not compulsory.

I usually listen at double speed because a slower pace lets my thoughts wander. Small verbal quirks can matter less that way, but repeated emotional information still occupies space another conversation might use better. The close first-person structure provides a stable centre as the circle expands, and distinct social roles help keep relationships intelligible. Jack Douglas and Jessica Threet return, preserving the principal casting rather than requiring a narrator change. That is the continuity claim I can confidently make; I have no specific performance or production judgment to substantiate about accent accuracy, microphones, or editing, and leave those aspects unscored. My criticism of repeated growling belongs to the writing, not an accusation that either performer invented it. The dialogue offers opportunities for affectionate teasing and genuine anxiety, but those possibilities are not a verified account of vocal execution. My reservations about the story would not, by themselves, prevent another listen to these performers.

Conclusion

This instalment supplies enough warmth and movement to sustain my interest in the series, but I recommend it with clear expectations. Listeners seeking affectionate supernatural relationships, practical magical discoveries, and forceful action have plenty to engage with. Those needing gradual advances, searching moral consequences, or relationships less governed by exceptional biology may find the shortcuts harder to accept. Explicit intimacy and frequent sexual commentary are part of the experience, not incidental material. The immediate conflict receives a consequential outcome, but an important emotional reckoning is redirected towards the next adventure, leaving less closure than the spectacle promises. That earns a small deduction, not a claim that nothing is resolved. My 3.42 recognises a worthwhile continuation without mistaking enthusiasm for flawless execution. I would follow these people further because their bonds matter; I also want those bonds tested with more honesty. Across HowlStrom, I would welcome this dragon's shelter, but keep asking whether its doorway opens from the inside.

[Martin]

awesome

I’ve went through book one and two in one weekend and now I need to know what’s next. I highly recommend it

[Kevin Zigman]

What can I say?

First I read a massive amount of fiction but tend to only leave reviews for indi authors and harem novels because a lot of them get a bad rep. For that I blame lazy writing which leads to a lot of poorly written characters, power trip fantasies, and any number of played out tropes that are just poorly written. You can do them right, and this series is a prime example of doing harem lit right. The women in this series are strong, independent, have their own individual voices and manner of speech, they are in short actual character that add to the plot instead of just people for the MC to save, screw, and add to their stupidly large harem that they have for reasons. There is a legit biological and magical reason for them here and I am particularly interested in the wolf pack and their biology but that's not the point. Kelly is a well written character who has legitimate reasons to both like and be mad at our loveable dragon. Morgana is a person and not just some bloody brooding drow who wants to bang for no reason or because he's powerful. Scarlet and Jadelyn are amazing and interesting in their dynamic, and are actually friends, even Maddy who gets like seven lines has personality because Sentar put effort into making all of these women have legitimate human emotions and be characters instead of just sex objects and as a reader I appreciate that addition more than his well written adult scenes.

Second the plot is fun, as is the dialogue which is key to entertainment. The whole issue with Tiff- which is a spoiler so I won't go into it. But it adds drama and silliness along with addressing a real issue right before- ack more spoilers... But in truth I like the dynamics here and that's not just part of character development but is also key to the plot. Character interaction really does drive this story and that's awesome because you never know who will bring a key piece of information, who is the pivotal point that will help win the fight, its not just another stupidly op mc. Yes, he's ok but he can still and does get his butt kicked.

I guess what I can say in the end is that I love this book enough that I'm buying it and will get the audio when it comes out even though I've read it three times already. Which is really the highest compliment my broke/cheap self can give besides taking the time to give this now long rant of a review. So if you're reading this what are you waiting for? Read the book.

[John]

Solid Developments, Great Relationships
Zach has accepted that he is a dragon, but can not accomplish a shift into his new form. In parallel with his physical blocks, he also has emotional blocks about accepting his needs for accumulating more women in his life.

Scarlett, Jadelyn, and Kelly all have their moments to shine and develop into well rounded characters. Scar dealing with the realities of Zach's needs.

Great scenes with Morgana training Zach, and working together with him in the field to control a troll migration, one troll at a time.

The pace at which Zach's relationship with Jadelyn develops is a whirlwind, planning marriage after their first date. Meet the parents done well. The siren bonding and marriage "ceremony" where creative, exemplary of a larger trend in this series: It feels like every race or type of paranormal has a complete back story and biology that has been thought through, and applied to how the members of the constituency would live differently because of their different circumstances. Werewolves have pack hierarchy and a dominance structure, and express that in how they organize themselves culturally and socially.

Zach and Morgana's jobs are fund, Morgana's driving hilarious, and the convention of magi interacting with the paranormal council excellent.

The first half of the story revolving around Zach starting to learn to shift, and slow reveal of his new characteristics is great. In parallel, the development of the relationship with Jade is excellent. The pacing seems to rush too much, and get completely out of control by the end of the story, where Zach and Morgana are fighting a literal god. A common flaw in this genre, escalation goes way to quickly and there isn't enough time to enjoy the characters as you start to invest in them.

And the reveals on Morgana's background all come in a rush and leave the end of the story with a major cliff-hanger. Morgana, vampire and angelic both?!

[William Moody]

LOVE this series

I’ve been a fan of Bruce’s work for a while, and think he’s a fantastic author. I generally enjoy the harem books, but a common issue with most of them is that it generally comes across as unbelievable how quickly characters just accept the harem or women push for it without issues. It’s never that believable and is a bit jarring when reading. Also, the frequent tumbles in the sheets tend to get old, and the characters tend to stop developing as the story progresses and new characters are inserted.

That was NOT an issue for this series, to my joy and surprise. I’ve read up to book 6 of this series, and the story was fantastic and seemed completely natural. My favorite part was that the character development seemed pretty consistent across the series, and when it seemed like an older character was starting to get ignored, Bruce would add something about that character to keep that character’s development going.

I think one thing that made this series work as well as it did was the paranormal aspect where the characters are mostly not human and have animal instincts that just make harems make more sense and really helped individualize each character in a unique and special way- preventing the characters from becoming bland.

The story here was phenomenal and I look forward to the next installment. My inner fantasy nerd was loving this series and all the paranormal species in it. I’d honestly like to see the harem not growing anymore (past book 6) as it is getting difficult to keep up with all the characters and will be impossible to maintain character development for everyone. That said I would highly recommend this series for any fantasy/harem genre lovers as it’s an incredible read, and this is my new favorite of Bruce’s work.

[Ellwood Bookworm]

Zack has spent a bit more time in the Paranormal world in this book. He’s also starting to act a little more dragon-like, though not enough, in my opinion. Currently, it is swamp troll migration series, and the reason for all the dumb news out of Florida is swamp trolls. Swamp Trolls is an amusing take on the internet meme and a decent way to tie in reality and fiction. We also get an interesting take on how mages work. They are those that are only part paranormal.

The bigotry between paranormal groups is also a decent reflection of reality. It is a sad truth that humans break up into groups and have issues with other groups. All ideas are polarizing. The Author does a decent job of setting up conflicts both now and in the future for Zack and his growing harem. I’m curious to see where he takes paranormal society by the end of this series.

Nothing felt off with the world-building that continues in this book. However, as expected of snack cake reading, I never really felt any tension in any situations Zack finds himself in. Even the fight with the big bad at the end of the book didn’t feel tense. It’s also apparent that the succubus character introduced in this book will eventually end up in his harem.

I’ve been listening to this series while walking or working on other things. It remains an excellent sack cake experience when I can’t sit and read a regular book. The narrators do a fantastic job of bringing the characters to life.

[Chad Martin]

The next installment of the Dragon Justice series continues to deliver. I really enjoyed the Kelly and Jadelyn additional to the group and the development of the growth between Zach and Morgana. The introduction of the Magi, something new and potentially allowing a unique variable in the future, intrigues me what role they will play in the future. Sabrina the Newbie Magi, in a similar floundering position to Zach, will also be someone that I hope can be followed and play a larger role in the future.
I found it interesting to see how Zach is starting to find his role as a dragon in the bigger picture too. Knowing that he will eventually find have some political aspects to his life could be interesting. Mr. Sentar has shows he can write political intrigue well in his other books and I will be interested to see how these earlier books compare.
The new found Pendragon abilities when it comes to his dragon form was a fun introduction and makes his status even more unique and potentially world changing. I continue to be interested to see how this narrative component will be used going forward and how Zach can use it to his advantage.
Once again, the fighting is suspenseful and enjoyable and I just can not put the book down. Thankfully Mr. Sentar has a large number in this series and I look forward to enjoyed them for a while.

[Matthew Shafaf]

10/10 execution

Sure the plot may be predictable and you're not going to read anything you haven't read before, but (and its a big but) the execution is near flawless. Things are given weight without dampening the action/adventure tone. The more romantic scenes are fun and sometimes even swoonworthy. If there is any flaw that comes to mind, it might be descriptions were on the minimal side. Things are called what they are with little in the way painting a picture with words. Zach is a dragon and that's about all your going to get in the way of how he looks. He fights monsters but outside of the offhand descriptor you just kinda need to make up how they look on your own. But this grants the writer the upside of brevity.

Tldr. You liked the first? Read this. Period.

[MV Fantasy Reader]

I continue to love this series. The MC continues to learn his way through, and despite him being completely over-powered, he still manages to face challenges due to not fully understanding his powers and not having grown into them. The characters are mostly believable fantasy characters making reasonable decisions consistent with those developed characters. There haven't been any overtly brain-dead decisions I've noticed thrown in just for the sake of the plot. That, in and of itself, is unfortunately rare for this genre. The MC's romantic relationships grow in this book, as foreshadows in the previous book, so it now truly fits in the harem category, with nods toward future additions to the harem. I'm looking forward to the next in the series.

[Ti]

Zach is back and still working with Morgana to get a grasp on the supernatural world. They take a job on, that seems easygoing but rapidly turns into a greater issue. He is still tangled up with the local pack that is looking for an new alpha and tries to convince him to take on the role as an alph. His Fox Lady and her bff chasing him in the romantic department.
He gets pulled in several directions and needs to find a solution to solve all the current and new issues. Keeping his secret gets getting harder and harder.

[Tim Nielsen]

An urban fantasy with fun and games

The adventure continues and the characters become more and more interesting to me. I really love the dialogue and the main character he's funny and thinks it happened to him are funny as well but it's not all fun and games there is a lot of action evil fighting and horror be at its offset by the lighter side of things as well. This story is a good mix of different things and I like the way the characters are portrayed and hope to read more soon.

[Rachel Swanepoel]

<3

My god the balance of this story and the way it is. I am sad that the sexual details were less cuz i feel its what makes it spicy and alittle more realistic in terms but all in all this was incredible. The author definitely didn’t disappoint when it came to what i needed after the other book :) his growth and some hidden stuff I didn’t expect. This is a book where some things are predictable but in a way its like u know it won’t be exactly how you predict it which makes this so exciting!! Love it!!

[John]

Ohhhh ramp it up

So Things are slowly ramping up. Are super secret new dragon has more mojo than he even knows. Discovering slowly and painfully and awkwardly. Lots of fun that. Play slowly building his harem one Beautiful and extremely powerful and talented lady at a time. He's also learning more about himself and The new community in the world he lives in. He might be getting ready for them but they are certainly not ready for him. Excellent fun in this book. Recommended heavily and enjoyable. Looking forward to the next one.

[Karla Schneider]

This is where everything starts to fall from the seams. Scarlet was great up to this point, but fair warning, this is the last time she gets ANY spotlight. Girls pile on his dick, and this turns into another fantasy of a 12 year old. Morgana offers to teach him magic and he refused... and a premed student mistook melanin for melatonin. The main character went apesht in less than 2 books over his ego issues. And the sex scenes were unfortunately written by someone who's clearly never got any before. It's over.

[Jon Svenson]

In book 2 Zach starts coming into his own. He can shift, but only partially, and he's still dealing with the kind of people who deserve nothing less than a punch to the face.

While all that is going on, he gets involved with Jadelyn and her family of sirens.

Again, just like in book 1, we have a good mix of action, funny bits, and the harem thing. It's not original, but I still enjoyed it. I'm already in book 3 and I'm beginning to see cracks, so time will tell how long I keep reading this series.

5/5*

[Desert Lumens]

okay, there we go!

See? I knew I just needed to give Zach one book and he’d grow on me… just like Dar… the first book really had me disliking Zach. This book wa so much better, but that’s just a tribute to how good a writer Sentar is. His world building and storytelling is superb. I really fell in love with the characters depth in this book. Naturally Zach still has some quirks and annoyances to work out but he’s so much better than he was in book one. This book was literally night and day to book one. I’m excited for book three…. Onward lads!

[Shana]

I gave the last book a 4 star, but this one I'll say 3.5. I still enjoy this book a lot, listened to it for several hours at a time, just...

I know Jaylin is the main girl of this one and Morgana is likely to be the next focus from the way this series seems to be going, but I'm honestly cheering for Kaylee to get her time in the light with Zach or to find her own mate. Zach seem like he's not interested in her, but I at least hope she finds someone for her if it can't be Zach.

[Tracy S McCoy]

Wow wow amazing!!!

Five stars isn't enough!!! This series really gets better and better!!! Wonderful and enjoyable characters throughout!!! Unique customs, great character interactions and outstanding adult fantasy activities!!! Fellow readers you won't go wrong reading this series!!!

[Darrin]

Strong series

It has a surprising amount of humor and detailed characters that drive the story. It’s similar to the Dresden Files world, but from the monster perspective.

The MC is a somewhat of a geek, but leans into his brute nature more than expected. Would love to see him explore his magic on his studious side

[Jamie Ross]

It just gets better!

I was hooked on the first book, but that was just an appetizer compared to the second!

New threats, new allies and secret pasts that haunt,l. It was a thrilling and pulse pounding read that I didn't and couldn't put down until I was finished.

Can't wait for the next book!

[Bob Anderson]

Bruce Sentar has become my favorite Litrpg author. His ero scenes are average, but his plots are well above average. In his Mana Cultivation series, his ero scenes started taking away from the plot. It often feels like he's just copying and pasting the last ero scene. But the ero scenes do not negatively affect the plot in this series... so far.

[Joseph K.]

Wow what a book two

Book one was great, book two was even better, though it had the same good problem of once you start reading, you just have to finish it in one go. The characters continue to get more detailed, the world is being filled out and becoming more interesting and expansive, and there was a ton of action. I recommend this book and series.

[H.C TOWERS]

Book 2 was as good as book 1

Book two was amazing and well written the adventure was a great ride with new twist and turns, you will enjoy this book it was fantastic. No spoilers but make sure you pay attention to detail it will help you along with figuring stuff out before the reveals its fun

[Edwin]

Dragons are great to read

Second book of this series is great.
The plot continues to develop along nicely and the MC's bond with his girls is also a good thing to see here as well.

All in all, this was a good book.

I am looking forward to the next book and what is happening to Morgana.

[Ron Butler]

I just knew it was going to be great!

Dragon's Justice (and it's author) did not disappoint!
Another awesome story filled with love, laughs, and plenty of action. I cannot wait to get my claws on volume 3 and lose myself in the story once more. I've come to the conclusion that if the author is Bruce Sentar, I'm going to read it!

[Leather]

A second part that manages to be more enjoyable and more interesting to read than the first: it's not very common.
If Zach is a character who lacks a little depth, it is largely compensated by Morgana, a vampire elf magician with many mysteries.
The great creativity of the author, and his lightness, make this harem-oriented Urban Fantasy digestible enough to continue the series.

[Andrew Erb]

Better then the first

This is by far my favorite book from this author so far. I just finished it and want to read it again just to make sure I didn't miss anything. The only down side is now I have to wait for the next book to see where Zack's life take him.