⭐️⭐️⭐️ | At the outset, this had all the tools to be great. But it fell flat for me.
SPOILERS BELOW🚨
One of the key aspects of the friends-to-lovers trope that makes it REALLY WORK is pacing. It has to be right. It has to make sense.
And the reason for that is this trope requires an underlying tentativeness (on the part of both characters). Both or at least one party is afraid to leap because they are either afraid to lose the other or they don’t want it to be too much too fast. Eventually, there is a buildup of shared intimacy, a shift from platonic to romantic thoughts - a pining, if you will, that forces someone to act.
Notice I used the word “buildup.”
And there felt like none of that here.
At the beginning of the book, Allegra is excited about getting engaged…and then suddenly, when that goes awry, and in the next breath: ”My best friend Damon has been right there this whole time.” And while it was clear that she loved him, I wish it could have been flushed out more to feel less reboundish.
It felt like Allegra and Damon “got together” way too early, which ultimately made the whole story feel rushed. Also, because they “got together” so early, but there was still this repeated reference to their natural tentativeness or fear about the transition in their relationship (that you would typically see with this trope), both characters were giving wishy-washy.
It almost made their relationship journey feel like it was starting and then stopping, starting, then stopping…THE WHOLE DAMN BOOK. At one point around 76% into the book, I was like, “ARE YOU BITCHES GONNA DO THIS OR NOT? STOP PLAYING WITH ME!”
Aside from the pacing, I didn’t really get the point of the friendship contract. *cue Cardi B's voice* What was the reason?
Like how the friendship contract was described in the book’s synopsis and how it came into play in the book felt significantly different. Was the contract just a way for them to put their friendship into a binding agreement so they wouldn’t lose sight of it? If so, weird, and also, why?
OR was it a way for them to remain friends per outlined terms even though they were going to Hawaii for Allegra’s brother's wedding and they were going to pretend to be a couple? It was unclear, y’all.
Last point: The smut was meh. I don't know why I’ve consistently seen the use of the words “steamy” and “sexy” when describing this book. It wasn’t either. OVERALL SENTIMENT: I didn’t hate it. And it wasn’t a terrible book. But the weird pacing, coupled with what felt like gaps in the plot, took away from what felt like a foolproof concept with foolproof tropes.