This was okay but I’m a little disappointed with my rating considering I gave this author's debut five stars. She again has produced a very easy to digest novel, but this one didn't quite hit the same in terms of the pacing, plot and characters unfortunately. Still an entertaining and mildly thrilling storyline that I devoured in a single day, but didn’t blow my mind nearly as much as I anticipated.
I know this is a ya novel so this is probably a very daft complaint, but I don’t remember her writing being so juvenile. It really took me out of the story for this one, because it felt very overly cliche. The characters especially fell victim to this, and their preset personalities seemed to be pre-programmed and cookie cutter. Because it’s such a short novel trying to cram so much information in too, with a cast of suspects this big, it didn’t do their development much justice unfortunately. They were very forgettable, quite bland personalities. I wished it had more perspectives outside of Jess and Jake, it would’ve felt more engaging to pull the other characters and their point of view into the mix as well.
Pacing wise, I think this actually ended up being a little slower than I was hoping for. With her first novel, I thought it was extremely atmospheric and tense and just completely wild from the get go. It had me guessing, it stressed me out, it was wildly unpredictable and full of suspense. I weirdly barely got any of the same feelings with this one?! Of course it was twisty and I was curious about them ending, but the desperation and the thirst to know seemed absent.
I did enjoy the twists in the plot and while I wouldn't have guessed them, I do think maybe it took the deceptive red herring aspect too far, to the point where the end results were unsatisfying. We spend the whole book being pulled in a million different directions, so that by the end of the book when you hear the real truth of what happened it almost doesn’t make sense. Well it did make sense - but we’d neglected certain characters and events so much that it felt like it was very random and coming out of left field, rather than breadcrumbs being placed throughout the story to point you to that conclusion all along. For some people it’ll be a jaw dropping shock that they never would have seen coming in the best way possible, but I felt like the conclusion was too far out of reach to be plausible in a satisfying way.
I’m still really intrigued to keep reading her thrillers in the future, but this one underwhelmed me.