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Hidden Species #1.5
Naughty Neil
I’m just an ordinary guy… who feeds on sexual energy.
I never knew my dad. Mom said he was a nice enough guy, fun for a night, but she never did get his name. I didn’t miss him, and my life is good.
Then a government agent shows up at my door and announces that I’m not really human. Dear old Dad was actually an incubus, a being that needs sexual energy to survive, and apparently that means I am too. Gotta be a scam, right?
Or so I think… until Agent Cutie changes into a canine (not a werewolf) in my living room and then eats half a dozen Christmas cookies while making orgasm sounds. Turns out, other species do exist.
On the plus side, being a stripper means that all my incubus needs are being met without me even trying. And now that I know the situation in my pants is normal for an incubus, I don’t feel self-conscious… so a fling with Agent Mark is definitely on the table.
Between being sexy Santa at work, supplying a team of hellhounds with Christmas cookies, and learning what stamina in the bedroom really is, I’m discovering that my old life was kind of empty. Maybe I’m not such an ordinary guy after all.
This novella was previously available free to newsletter subscribers. Only the cover has changed.
I never knew my dad. Mom said he was a nice enough guy, fun for a night, but she never did get his name. I didn’t miss him, and my life is good.
Then a government agent shows up at my door and announces that I’m not really human. Dear old Dad was actually an incubus, a being that needs sexual energy to survive, and apparently that means I am too. Gotta be a scam, right?
Or so I think… until Agent Cutie changes into a canine (not a werewolf) in my living room and then eats half a dozen Christmas cookies while making orgasm sounds. Turns out, other species do exist.
On the plus side, being a stripper means that all my incubus needs are being met without me even trying. And now that I know the situation in my pants is normal for an incubus, I don’t feel self-conscious… so a fling with Agent Mark is definitely on the table.
Between being sexy Santa at work, supplying a team of hellhounds with Christmas cookies, and learning what stamina in the bedroom really is, I’m discovering that my old life was kind of empty. Maybe I’m not such an ordinary guy after all.
This novella was previously available free to newsletter subscribers. Only the cover has changed.
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About the author
Louisa Masters
75 books1,601 followersLOUISA MASTERS started reading romance much earlier than her mother thought she should. While other teenagers were sneaking out of the house, Louisa was sneaking romance novels in and working out how to read them without being discovered. She’s spent most of her life feeling sorry for people who don’t read, convinced that books are the solution to every problem. As an adult, she feeds her addiction in every spare second, only occasionally tearing herself away to do things like answer the phone and pay bills. She spent years trying to build a “sensible” career, working in bookstores, recruitment, resource management, administration, and as a travel agent, before finally conceding defeat and devoting herself to the world of romance novels. Louisa has a long list of places first discovered in books that she wants to visit, and every so often she overcomes her loathing of jet lag and takes a trip that charges her imagination. She lives in Melbourne, Australia, where she whines about the weather for most of the year while secretly admitting she’ll probably never move.
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October 4, 2025
Nice one.
He gives a little wriggle of anticipation that makes muscles flex attractively. I can’t resist; just as I slide the first finger in, I bend and bite his ass.
“Hey!” It comes out with a note of laughter. “Nobody told me hellhounds ate their sexual partners.”
“Oh, I’m going to eat you,” I promise, adding another finger. Incubi rarely need much prep, and Neil’s definitely in that category. “As soon as I’m done with your ass, I’m going to swallow you down. And when you’re drained of every drop, we’ll start all over again.” 😳
Mark: Your cookies are the best I’ve ever tasted. No professional baker could compare.
Neil: *blushing* That’s so sweet.
Mark: Not trying to flatter you here. The only thing better than your cookies is you. 🫠
He gives a little wriggle of anticipation that makes muscles flex attractively. I can’t resist; just as I slide the first finger in, I bend and bite his ass.
“Hey!” It comes out with a note of laughter. “Nobody told me hellhounds ate their sexual partners.”
“Oh, I’m going to eat you,” I promise, adding another finger. Incubi rarely need much prep, and Neil’s definitely in that category. “As soon as I’m done with your ass, I’m going to swallow you down. And when you’re drained of every drop, we’ll start all over again.” 😳
Mark: Your cookies are the best I’ve ever tasted. No professional baker could compare.
Neil: *blushing* That’s so sweet.
Mark: Not trying to flatter you here. The only thing better than your cookies is you. 🫠
January 9, 2025
Steamy and sweet!
A nice treat between book one and two from the series "Hidden Species", a easy story, flowed smoothly , just a good relaxing time, it was so cute to see the interaction between the main characters and at the same time so hot, with a little bit of vulnerability, the material was so interesting I wish this story could be bigger, I was really pleased anyway, congratulations to Louisa Masters!!!
On the Audible side, the narrator was superb, great acting, totally committed, high praises to Joel Leslie!!!
I liked both art covers versions, from Winterheart Design and Booksmith Designs BookSmith Design, I think is my favourite maybe because it connected with the other books, there's another version but I didn't had access so a don't know who made that design, I think is equally good!
5⭐️
A nice treat between book one and two from the series "Hidden Species", a easy story, flowed smoothly , just a good relaxing time, it was so cute to see the interaction between the main characters and at the same time so hot, with a little bit of vulnerability, the material was so interesting I wish this story could be bigger, I was really pleased anyway, congratulations to Louisa Masters!!!
On the Audible side, the narrator was superb, great acting, totally committed, high praises to Joel Leslie!!!
I liked both art covers versions, from Winterheart Design and Booksmith Designs BookSmith Design, I think is my favourite maybe because it connected with the other books, there's another version but I didn't had access so a don't know who made that design, I think is equally good!
5⭐️
December 25, 2023
Audiobook Review
Having read and loved the ebook version, I wasn't expecting to love it even more, but Joel Leslie just has a way of making the story better.
So in here we have Mark the hellhound and Neil the unknowingly incubus. It's an instalove and man do I love them both. I really do want more hellhound stories
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This short story was a freebie from the newsletter but its about to be released on Amazon. I highly recommend this one if you love the series, which I do.
In here we have Neil, who did not know he was an incubus. He was making the street he lived on feel warm and happy and did not even know it. He is a stripper who fed on the energy of those who watched him dance. He also did not have sex, which is apparently weird for an incubus.
Mark is a hellhound who worked for the group Sam (from the first book in the series) originally started in. They still miss him and his cookies.
These two meet when Mark had to explain to Neil what he was. It was basically an instalove situation, which I loved.
And there was cookie sex, how can one resist that??
I would do anything to have a series based on these other ones from the agency. I mean, don't get me wrong, I loved the hidden species and the dragons, but the hellhounds are awesome. Would love to have some demon love as well.
Having read and loved the ebook version, I wasn't expecting to love it even more, but Joel Leslie just has a way of making the story better.
So in here we have Mark the hellhound and Neil the unknowingly incubus. It's an instalove and man do I love them both. I really do want more hellhound stories
_______________________________
This short story was a freebie from the newsletter but its about to be released on Amazon. I highly recommend this one if you love the series, which I do.
In here we have Neil, who did not know he was an incubus. He was making the street he lived on feel warm and happy and did not even know it. He is a stripper who fed on the energy of those who watched him dance. He also did not have sex, which is apparently weird for an incubus.
Mark is a hellhound who worked for the group Sam (from the first book in the series) originally started in. They still miss him and his cookies.
These two meet when Mark had to explain to Neil what he was. It was basically an instalove situation, which I loved.
“Uh, this all seems really surreal. Is there anything you can show me to prove what you’re saying?”
His calm smile turns just a tiny bit wicked. “I say this with as much professionalism as I can muster: you can find proof in your pants.”
I blush wildly. “Excuse me?”
“Incubus penis shape is different from human,” he replies matter-of-factly, as though he’s not talking about my dick. “Your penis has two segments, somewhat like the body of a wasp.”
“I swear, I haven’t been peeking in windows. If you like, I can show you—”
“Oh hell no!” I shout, leaping to my feet and sloshing coffee on my rug. “You are not taking off your pants in my living room, you perverted creep! I knew this was some kind of sex cult! I will not be a pawn for your orgies!”
And there was cookie sex, how can one resist that??
“You had cookie sex? And you didn’t invite us?”
Everyone freezes. Then, as one, we turn to look at Cody.
“What?” he asks defensively.
I rub the bridge of my nose. “Cody, I haven’t had group sex in about twenty years, and I’ve never had sex with someone on this team. Why would I suddenly invite my colleagues to join me in the bedroom?”
I would do anything to have a series based on these other ones from the agency. I mean, don't get me wrong, I loved the hidden species and the dragons, but the hellhounds are awesome. Would love to have some demon love as well.
October 28, 2023
Fab short festive visit to the Hidden Species world
This was a lot of fun, I'm pretty sure I've read it when it available in Louisa's, it's definitely worth a re-read.
Lots of fun with an incubus who doesn't know he is one and a hellhound who's sent to tell him all about the Community of Species.
This was a lot of fun, I'm pretty sure I've read it when it available in Louisa's, it's definitely worth a re-read.
Lots of fun with an incubus who doesn't know he is one and a hellhound who's sent to tell him all about the Community of Species.
December 18, 2022
Short, sweet, straightforward and not as chaotic as expected with the hellhounds. I liked how accepting Neil was, and how quickly he took what he wanted. The cookie interrogation was entertaining. Nice little charistmas extra.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
October 10, 2022
not enough Christmas, plenty of cookies
December 7, 2023
Short, cute, funny, spicy, festive ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
September 29, 2024
★2.87 stars★
i don't even really know what happened it went by so quickly. it was like those wax soda bottle candies - looks pretty but isn't actually that great
i don't even really know what happened it went by so quickly. it was like those wax soda bottle candies - looks pretty but isn't actually that great
March 11, 2025
This was adorable. I loved how sweet Neil was and Mark knew he was disrupting the man's life with the information that no matter what he may have thought, hey you're not really human. Mark was patient and sweet, he gave Neil the time he needed to adjust to his new reality before being the hellhound he is and pouncing on the plaything he wanted. :) Cute, sweet, and a fun little side addition to this series.
May 6, 2024
Cute Christmas story where Mark's tasked with introducing a clueless Incubus to the community.
Charming and totally unconnected to the overarching storyline of the main books in the series. In fact the only thing that suffers in this story are several plates of Christmas cookies.
Charming and totally unconnected to the overarching storyline of the main books in the series. In fact the only thing that suffers in this story are several plates of Christmas cookies.
February 2, 2023
3.4 stars
Adorable, but then again, most hellhounds by this author are!
Adorable, but then again, most hellhounds by this author are!
June 9, 2023
Short and funny. I love it.
December 9, 2023
Another fabulous slice of the Hidden Species series, and a helluva lot of fun!
Joel Leslie's narration made it all feel like coming home.
Joel Leslie's narration made it all feel like coming home.
September 30, 2024
Too cute
June 30, 2025
It's short and cute - doesn't give any new insights in the world building, but yeah... it's just a nice in between fast read i guess :D
November 11, 2022
Hellhound meets Incubus. sexy times ensue.
A very cute Chistmastime short story from the Hidden Species series. I somehow missed it when I read the series, so I had to backtrack a bit to remember where this fit in. Oddly, I don’t recall either MC in any of the other books, but because I read this one out of order, they may have been mentioned, but the names just didn’t register with me.
A very cute Chistmastime short story from the Hidden Species series. I somehow missed it when I read the series, so I had to backtrack a bit to remember where this fit in. Oddly, I don’t recall either MC in any of the other books, but because I read this one out of order, they may have been mentioned, but the names just didn’t register with me.
December 18, 2022
a short entertaining holiday story
Rating: 4🌈🌲
Naughty Neil is a short entertaining holiday story that takes place in Masters’ Hidden Species universe.
Neil is a young guy working as an exotic dancer, happy with his life until a guy knocks on his door, claiming to be some kind of government agent, only from a agency he’s never heard of.
Mark Mikakos, Hellhound and CBG investigator ( Community of Species Government ) has come to tell Neil Diaz that he’s a incubus, that there’s a whole hidden world of supernatural beings the he’s a part of , and Mark’s life is about to change forever.
No problem.
What follows is a short, cute story that allows us to see the very start of a relationship and new romance. We meet Mark’s team of investigators and see Neil start to fit into his new world.
It’s over way too soon.
I wish we could have a follow up story to see what happens next. They are a genuinely lovely and fun couple.
Rating: 4🌈🌲
Naughty Neil is a short entertaining holiday story that takes place in Masters’ Hidden Species universe.
Neil is a young guy working as an exotic dancer, happy with his life until a guy knocks on his door, claiming to be some kind of government agent, only from a agency he’s never heard of.
Mark Mikakos, Hellhound and CBG investigator ( Community of Species Government ) has come to tell Neil Diaz that he’s a incubus, that there’s a whole hidden world of supernatural beings the he’s a part of , and Mark’s life is about to change forever.
No problem.
What follows is a short, cute story that allows us to see the very start of a relationship and new romance. We meet Mark’s team of investigators and see Neil start to fit into his new world.
It’s over way too soon.
I wish we could have a follow up story to see what happens next. They are a genuinely lovely and fun couple.
August 3, 2025
Not sure where my reading process is going now...I'm just along for the ride. Here is Louisa Master's "Naughty Neil." It's a novella in her Hidden Species series.
["I’m just an ordinary guy… who feeds on sexual energy.
I never knew my dad. Mom said he was a nice enough guy, fun for a night, but she never did get his name. I didn’t miss him, and my life is good.
Then a government agent shows up at my door and announces that I’m not really human. Dear old Dad was actually an incubus, a being that needs sexual energy to survive, and apparently that means I am too. Gotta be a scam, right?
Or so I think… until Agent Cutie changes into a canine (not a werewolf) in my living room and then eats half a dozen Christmas cookies while making orgasm sounds. Turns out, other species do exist.
On the plus side, being a stripper means that all my incubus needs are being met without me even trying. And now that I know the situation in my pants is normal for an incubus, I don’t feel self-conscious… so a fling with Agent Mark is definitely on the table.
Between being sexy Santa at work, supplying a team of hellhounds with Christmas cookies, and learning what stamina in the bedroom really is, I’m discovering that my old life was kind of empty. Maybe I’m not such an ordinary guy after all."]
This novella was cute!! It was a perfect little meet-cute mixed with Christmas joy and cookies galore. Plus some Christmas confusion and office drama and overgrown puppies being frat boys. And these two were just so freaking smitten with each other!
#demonsdoitbetter #naughtyneil #onebitewithavampire #hijinkswithahellhound #sorcerersalwayssatisfy #allistairsextraordinaries #louisamasters #hiddenspecies #hiddenspeciesseries #books #queerbooks #queererotica #bodicerippers #bookstagram #bookphotography #ilovebooks
["I’m just an ordinary guy… who feeds on sexual energy.
I never knew my dad. Mom said he was a nice enough guy, fun for a night, but she never did get his name. I didn’t miss him, and my life is good.
Then a government agent shows up at my door and announces that I’m not really human. Dear old Dad was actually an incubus, a being that needs sexual energy to survive, and apparently that means I am too. Gotta be a scam, right?
Or so I think… until Agent Cutie changes into a canine (not a werewolf) in my living room and then eats half a dozen Christmas cookies while making orgasm sounds. Turns out, other species do exist.
On the plus side, being a stripper means that all my incubus needs are being met without me even trying. And now that I know the situation in my pants is normal for an incubus, I don’t feel self-conscious… so a fling with Agent Mark is definitely on the table.
Between being sexy Santa at work, supplying a team of hellhounds with Christmas cookies, and learning what stamina in the bedroom really is, I’m discovering that my old life was kind of empty. Maybe I’m not such an ordinary guy after all."]
This novella was cute!! It was a perfect little meet-cute mixed with Christmas joy and cookies galore. Plus some Christmas confusion and office drama and overgrown puppies being frat boys. And these two were just so freaking smitten with each other!
#demonsdoitbetter #naughtyneil #onebitewithavampire #hijinkswithahellhound #sorcerersalwayssatisfy #allistairsextraordinaries #louisamasters #hiddenspecies #hiddenspeciesseries #books #queerbooks #queererotica #bodicerippers #bookstagram #bookphotography #ilovebooks
January 8, 2024
I never knew my dad. Mom said he was a nice enough guy, fun for a night, but she never did get his name. I didn’t miss him, and my life is good.
Then a government agent shows up at my door and announces that I’m not really human. Dear old Dad was actually an incubus, a being that needs sexual energy to survive, and apparently that means I am too. Gotta be a scam, right?
Or so I think… until Agent Cutie changes into a canine (not a werewolf) in my living room and then eats half a dozen Christmas cookies while making orgasm sounds. Turns out, other species do exist.
On the plus side, being a stripper means that all my incubus needs are being met without me even trying. And now that I know the situation in my pants is normal for an incubus, I don’t feel self-conscious… so a fling with Agent Mark is definitely on the table.
Between being sexy Santa at work, supplying a team of hellhounds with Christmas cookies, and learning what stamina in the bedroom really is, I’m discovering that my old life was kind of empty. Maybe I’m not such an ordinary guy after all.
Heather's Notes
This was not a bad story, but it did not add anything to the storyline. I am also not even sure who the main character was from the main storyline. I am not sure he is in it. Still it was a nice feel good holiday story.
Then a government agent shows up at my door and announces that I’m not really human. Dear old Dad was actually an incubus, a being that needs sexual energy to survive, and apparently that means I am too. Gotta be a scam, right?
Or so I think… until Agent Cutie changes into a canine (not a werewolf) in my living room and then eats half a dozen Christmas cookies while making orgasm sounds. Turns out, other species do exist.
On the plus side, being a stripper means that all my incubus needs are being met without me even trying. And now that I know the situation in my pants is normal for an incubus, I don’t feel self-conscious… so a fling with Agent Mark is definitely on the table.
Between being sexy Santa at work, supplying a team of hellhounds with Christmas cookies, and learning what stamina in the bedroom really is, I’m discovering that my old life was kind of empty. Maybe I’m not such an ordinary guy after all.
Heather's Notes
This was not a bad story, but it did not add anything to the storyline. I am also not even sure who the main character was from the main storyline. I am not sure he is in it. Still it was a nice feel good holiday story.
December 6, 2023
I am not sure how I feel about this one. It’s cute and funny. It’s not very sexy, which is surprising for a romance between an incubus and a hellhound. It feels like an intro to the world of the series, but it’s listed as second book so that doesn’t make a lot of sense. But if it’s not an introduction, why did so much of the story take place with the characters separately? I enjoy hookup to love stories, it’s one of my favorite tropes but this never took us past the hookup, not emotionally. They jump into bed enthusiastically but with little detail. Why did the author think we would rather have more detail about Mark at work than the couple in bed? Then we are told the couple had tons of great sex over the next few days, with a few naughty but teasing details, and that they decide they want to take the relationship further. Since it’s a novella, I think it’s fine to end with a happy-for-now, but I want to see some kind emotion behind the decision. Even if the emotion is mostly lust, you have to help me see it. I don’t regret this cute little holiday read, but I am not sure I want to read more by the author.
September 24, 2024
Audiobook
Story: ⭐️⭐️
Narrator: -⭐️
I love stories like this that are… let’s call them unique. This one was certainly unique. Neil is an exotic dancer who is very surprised to learn he is also an incubus. A government agent comes to help him deal with that realization. They’re both hot. Things turn interesting. Sort of.
The story isn’t that bad. It isn’t good, but it isn’t that bad. However, if you choose to give it a chance, read the book. Leave the audiobook alone. Trust me.
If you’ve read any of my other reviews of audiobooks, you know how much a bad narrator or bad vocal choices can ruin an audiobook for me. Honestly, I don’t think the narrator is bad, but he certainly made choices that ruined it for me.
Seriously. Book > audiobook for this one. I might have given it 3 stars if it had been different.
Story: ⭐️⭐️
Narrator: -⭐️
I love stories like this that are… let’s call them unique. This one was certainly unique. Neil is an exotic dancer who is very surprised to learn he is also an incubus. A government agent comes to help him deal with that realization. They’re both hot. Things turn interesting. Sort of.
The story isn’t that bad. It isn’t good, but it isn’t that bad. However, if you choose to give it a chance, read the book. Leave the audiobook alone. Trust me.
If you’ve read any of my other reviews of audiobooks, you know how much a bad narrator or bad vocal choices can ruin an audiobook for me. Honestly, I don’t think the narrator is bad, but he certainly made choices that ruined it for me.
Seriously. Book > audiobook for this one. I might have given it 3 stars if it had been different.
December 29, 2022
Une petite nouvelle paranormale de Noël comme je les aime tant ! Avec des chiens de l'enfer qui n'en font qu'à leur tête, des créatures aussi bien excentriques qu'attachantes et enfin une bonne dose d'humour, de bonne humeur, de situations délirantes, de sensualité et de cookies. Une savoureuse romance feeling good qui fera un bien fou à votre moral et qui est à savourer sans modération. Le style et l'univers de Louisa Masters me plaît de plus en plus. Et je n'ai qu'une hâte faire plus ample connaissance avec ces autres agents de la GCE. Alors vivement l'année prochaine ;) !
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June 13, 2024
I love the Hidden species series, and this was a funny and quirky addition to the universe.
Joel Leslie is excellent, as usual.
Having read the entire series and the follow up, Here be Dragons series, I enjoyed this a lot.
It is a short story (about 1,5 hours listen time), and it is written well for its format. It doesn't try to be more than it is, and avoids the insta-love trope. Insta-like I can get behind :)
As most Louisa Masters books, it has some steamy sex scenes and a lot of innuendo, but also kindness, friendship and humour.
Hellhounds in this setting sound truly exhausting, but so much fun, to be around :)
Joel Leslie is excellent, as usual.
Having read the entire series and the follow up, Here be Dragons series, I enjoyed this a lot.
It is a short story (about 1,5 hours listen time), and it is written well for its format. It doesn't try to be more than it is, and avoids the insta-love trope. Insta-like I can get behind :)
As most Louisa Masters books, it has some steamy sex scenes and a lot of innuendo, but also kindness, friendship and humour.
Hellhounds in this setting sound truly exhausting, but so much fun, to be around :)
July 19, 2024
4.5 stars
This is just a quick, fun, cute, and steamy snack. We have Mark, the hellhound, and Neil, the unknowing incubus. I liked that we got to see a little of the process that was talked about in Demons Do It Better. Neil is probably the sweetest incubus you will ever meet. He's a friendly and welcoming neighbor and bakes Christmas cookies like it's his job. Mark loves that and makes the rest of his hellhound team jealous. Neil learns more about himself and how to safely exist in his nature. Mark and Neil are quite cute together, and steamy af. For a nice little Christmasy bite, this is perfect.
This is just a quick, fun, cute, and steamy snack. We have Mark, the hellhound, and Neil, the unknowing incubus. I liked that we got to see a little of the process that was talked about in Demons Do It Better. Neil is probably the sweetest incubus you will ever meet. He's a friendly and welcoming neighbor and bakes Christmas cookies like it's his job. Mark loves that and makes the rest of his hellhound team jealous. Neil learns more about himself and how to safely exist in his nature. Mark and Neil are quite cute together, and steamy af. For a nice little Christmasy bite, this is perfect.
December 27, 2025
Neil and Mark
PLEASE be aware that this summary/review is meant for my own purposes in order to help me recall this book and definitely has spoilers. It is in no way a reflection of what I think anyone else will like or want out of a book. It is simply a memory aid and a rough voice-to-text which is completely unedited/reviewed for errors. Read at your own discretion.
Little novella about Neil who finds out he is an incubus at 20-something. His initial case officer is Mark, a hellhound on Sam's old team. Cure story about Neil learning about who he is and eventually hooking up with fun and sweet Mark. There isn't much to this story, but it was a cute quick read.
PLEASE be aware that this summary/review is meant for my own purposes in order to help me recall this book and definitely has spoilers. It is in no way a reflection of what I think anyone else will like or want out of a book. It is simply a memory aid and a rough voice-to-text which is completely unedited/reviewed for errors. Read at your own discretion.
Little novella about Neil who finds out he is an incubus at 20-something. His initial case officer is Mark, a hellhound on Sam's old team. Cure story about Neil learning about who he is and eventually hooking up with fun and sweet Mark. There isn't much to this story, but it was a cute quick read.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 17, 2022
4.5 stars
Cute addition to the Hidden Species series. Neil is an Incubus but isn’t aware until a government Hellhound named Mark informs him and introduces him to a whole new world.
Originally released as a freebie to newsletter subscribers. No new content. Just a new cover
***
POV… multi first person
Standalone or series… novella in a series I suppose you could read as a standalone but the rest of the series is just as funny and wonderful to read
Hangover… slight
Recommend… yes
Reread… yes
Cute addition to the Hidden Species series. Neil is an Incubus but isn’t aware until a government Hellhound named Mark informs him and introduces him to a whole new world.
Originally released as a freebie to newsletter subscribers. No new content. Just a new cover
***
POV… multi first person
Standalone or series… novella in a series I suppose you could read as a standalone but the rest of the series is just as funny and wonderful to read
Hangover… slight
Recommend… yes
Reread… yes
December 23, 2022
"Naughty Neil" received FOUR stars.
The novel gained *stars* for these items:
* gained for: "The book caught my interest in the first five pages."
* gained for: "I thought about the book when I was forced to set it down and re-enter society."
* gained for: "There were no info dumps, poor writing, or copy edit mistakes that jerked me out of the story."
* gained for: "I was sad when the book ended. I wanted more!"
The novel failed to gain stars for this item:
NO STAR gained for: "That's it. I'm hooked on this author. I will automatically try anything she/he/they writes."
The novel gained *stars* for these items:
* gained for: "The book caught my interest in the first five pages."
* gained for: "I thought about the book when I was forced to set it down and re-enter society."
* gained for: "There were no info dumps, poor writing, or copy edit mistakes that jerked me out of the story."
* gained for: "I was sad when the book ended. I wanted more!"
The novel failed to gain stars for this item:
NO STAR gained for: "That's it. I'm hooked on this author. I will automatically try anything she/he/they writes."
December 14, 2022
Santa Comes Packing and with a Full Sack
This was a really fun intro to the Hidden Species series, which I haven't read before.
Mark is a Hellhound responding to an urgent call to visit Neill who doesn't know he's an incubus.
It's Christmas and Neill world as a pole dancer in a sexy Santa outfit when Mark finds him and Mark is basically an exuberant puppy and his team is too.
Great fun
This was a really fun intro to the Hidden Species series, which I haven't read before.
Mark is a Hellhound responding to an urgent call to visit Neill who doesn't know he's an incubus.
It's Christmas and Neill world as a pole dancer in a sexy Santa outfit when Mark finds him and Mark is basically an exuberant puppy and his team is too.
Great fun
December 16, 2022
Funny, entertaining, love this teams
Contains: Hellhound, newly Incubus, pole dancer, cookies.
So great to be in sam ex team full of hellhounds. They are always entertaining. This one is Mark, he need to investigate about Neil. Neil is an incubus but doesn't know it yet. Then he decide that he want to have Mark like Friend with benefit.. only maybe a lot of friend and hyperenergic intensive hellhoundsnis what is missing. A little bit of chaos. And a whole lot of cookies.
Contains: Hellhound, newly Incubus, pole dancer, cookies.
So great to be in sam ex team full of hellhounds. They are always entertaining. This one is Mark, he need to investigate about Neil. Neil is an incubus but doesn't know it yet. Then he decide that he want to have Mark like Friend with benefit.. only maybe a lot of friend and hyperenergic intensive hellhoundsnis what is missing. A little bit of chaos. And a whole lot of cookies.
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