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A Trifling Cold: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
Author’s This is the second edition of the book! For those who have already read it, this edition brings no significant changes, except for extensive editing and a new cover.
"A Trifling Cold" is not a matter to trifle with, for it can defeat the strongest of men, at the worst moment and in the worst place. This Regency "Pride and Prejudice" variation is a clean, amusing, moderate angst and romantic full-novel of approximately 87.000 words. It takes place at the same time as in the original - from Mr. Bingley’s arrival at Netherfield, to the Ball, through the Christmas season.
All the major scenes and characters from the original are here, different enough to keep the reader engaged - while new ones are added. And – a surprise for the readers – the author brings Elizabeth and Darcy back to a cottage, during a storm, only this time they are not alone, but accompanied by Mrs. Bennet, Mr. Bingley, Jane, Mr. Wickham and several others. When the ladies are in great danger, who is the one gentleman who can save them and win their gratitude? And what is the price he will have to pay for his generous bravery? What will the Bennets do when they are forced by sad circumstances to face more of the Darcy family than they ever expected? At what point will Darcy realise he can stop the battle between his desires and his duty? Will Elizabeth admit that her feelings for Darcy are stronger and more profound than she imagined she would ever feel for a man?
"A Trifling Cold" is not a matter to trifle with, for it can defeat the strongest of men, at the worst moment and in the worst place. This Regency "Pride and Prejudice" variation is a clean, amusing, moderate angst and romantic full-novel of approximately 87.000 words. It takes place at the same time as in the original - from Mr. Bingley’s arrival at Netherfield, to the Ball, through the Christmas season.
All the major scenes and characters from the original are here, different enough to keep the reader engaged - while new ones are added. And – a surprise for the readers – the author brings Elizabeth and Darcy back to a cottage, during a storm, only this time they are not alone, but accompanied by Mrs. Bennet, Mr. Bingley, Jane, Mr. Wickham and several others. When the ladies are in great danger, who is the one gentleman who can save them and win their gratitude? And what is the price he will have to pay for his generous bravery? What will the Bennets do when they are forced by sad circumstances to face more of the Darcy family than they ever expected? At what point will Darcy realise he can stop the battle between his desires and his duty? Will Elizabeth admit that her feelings for Darcy are stronger and more profound than she imagined she would ever feel for a man?
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December 10, 2025
Mother is a verb, not a noun. ~ Proverb
I admit it. I enjoy the occasional “Evil Mamma Bennet” stories as much as anyone.
But I also enjoy those stories with Mamma Bennet as a loving Mother. In canon, she may have favorites. In canon, she may be a worry-wort. In canon, she may become angry at one or more of her daughters. And in canon, she always loves all her daughters. In other words, she is not so very different from many Mothers.
Mamma Bennet is by far my favorite character in this little story. A protective Mother – first, last and always.
There is an instinct in a woman to love most her own child — and an instinct to make any child who needs her love, her own. ~ Robert Brault
Mamma Bennet’s protection isn’t limited to her own daughters. She brings other men into line when she sees girls being mistreated. I loved her!
I recommend this to anyone who enjoys JAFF.
Mothers are the gardeners of the human race. ~ Anna A. Rogers
I admit it. I enjoy the occasional “Evil Mamma Bennet” stories as much as anyone.
But I also enjoy those stories with Mamma Bennet as a loving Mother. In canon, she may have favorites. In canon, she may be a worry-wort. In canon, she may become angry at one or more of her daughters. And in canon, she always loves all her daughters. In other words, she is not so very different from many Mothers.
Mamma Bennet is by far my favorite character in this little story. A protective Mother – first, last and always.
There is an instinct in a woman to love most her own child — and an instinct to make any child who needs her love, her own. ~ Robert Brault
Mamma Bennet’s protection isn’t limited to her own daughters. She brings other men into line when she sees girls being mistreated. I loved her!
I recommend this to anyone who enjoys JAFF.
Mothers are the gardeners of the human race. ~ Anna A. Rogers
April 28, 2019
I loved this!! I've read it in one sitting and couldn't put it down... Darcy and Elizabeth still get off to a rocky start when Mr Darcy makes his 'she is tolerable' remark... but Mrs Bennet hears him and challenges him straight away. We see a similar but different Mrs Bennet - this lady is noisy, inappropriate and indiscreet (just as we know and love her), but she is also fiercely protective and not afraid to speak her mind.
Just prior to the Netherfield Ball there is a carriage accident which leads to some high drama and results in Mr Darcy developing an illness, which leaves him vulnerable later on. There is a scene where Elizabeth finds him, injured, that I think will be one of my favourite book moments!
This story has a nice pace, there is always something going on. We see more of Wickham and Mrs Bennet. Mr Bingley has a backbone in this book which always adds an interesting twist to the tale. Darcy and Elizabeth's relationship is beautifully written - it's a slow but steady burner. There are less assumptions, fewer misunderstandings and most are on to Wickham straight away.
On reflection, I'd like to have seen more of Bingley and Jane in the latter stages of the book. Also, I hate Epilogues. Especially this type of Epilogue where the characters are talking to each other about what's happened in last 12 months as though they weren't there... but I enjoyed the rest so much I was prepared to forgive it. There are also a few typos but nothing that caused too much distraction.
Lory Lilian is one of my favourite authors in this genre, this book is one of my favourites and definitely one I'd read again.
Just prior to the Netherfield Ball there is a carriage accident which leads to some high drama and results in Mr Darcy developing an illness, which leaves him vulnerable later on. There is a scene where Elizabeth finds him, injured, that I think will be one of my favourite book moments!
This story has a nice pace, there is always something going on. We see more of Wickham and Mrs Bennet. Mr Bingley has a backbone in this book which always adds an interesting twist to the tale. Darcy and Elizabeth's relationship is beautifully written - it's a slow but steady burner. There are less assumptions, fewer misunderstandings and most are on to Wickham straight away.
On reflection, I'd like to have seen more of Bingley and Jane in the latter stages of the book. Also, I hate Epilogues. Especially this type of Epilogue where the characters are talking to each other about what's happened in last 12 months as though they weren't there... but I enjoyed the rest so much I was prepared to forgive it. There are also a few typos but nothing that caused too much distraction.
Lory Lilian is one of my favourite authors in this genre, this book is one of my favourites and definitely one I'd read again.
May 2, 2019
When the “queen of hot mush”, Lory Lilian, has a new book, it’s an automatic download for me. I can count on Lilian to deliver sweet romance and our dear Darcy and Elizabeth in clever scenarios. Lots of LOL moments. Swoonworthy. A perfect way to while a way a few hours on the weekend when in need of my Darcy-fix. Easy to recommend to the fandom!
May 4, 2019
With all the 4 and 5 star reviews from trusted sources I am almost wondering if I got a different copy of the story.
This book isn't very long, a mere 283 pages, but it felt so much longer. If you have asked me I would have reported it had to be 400 or 500 + pages.
This is an unusual P&P what if that takes most of the plot of P&P and CRAMS it into 2 months and locates it all in Meryton.
In previous reviews I have asked for a more reasonable less over the top Mrs. Bennet and MS. Lilian delivered that. I actually liked this Mrs. Bennet she is neither shrill nor ridiculous. She is a bit outspoken a bit like, Oh I don't know Lizzy Bennet, unfortunately neither of her eldest daughter got the memo so they are constantly and bizarrely trying to silence her when she is not only not shrill but dead on target. Then again maybe these are "Mirror, mirror" Jane and Lizzy since both are watering pots.
This book overly tells without sufficient showing until I just wanted to scream "Shut Up!Shut Up!Shut Up!Shut Up!Shut Up!" There are endless discussions. Questions you never asked are answered via dialogue. What was Mr. Bingley's business? He had a sudden inheritance.
Then there are just bizarre changes. Jane doesn't go to Netherfield so Lizzy doesn't go to Netherfield so when exactly does Mr. Darcy have time to fall in love with her? The author moves Lucas Lodge to being a few doors down from Mrs. Phillips. The author has Wickham, who is in the militia driving the Lucas' carriage. Wouldn't Sir William have a driver? Letting a stranger drive your carriage would be like letting a stranger drive you Bentley.
In a bit of plot so confusing I dare not attempt to reveal it Longbourn is crowded and Mr. Bennet and the youngest girls go to stay at Netherfield with Bingley and Mrs. Annesley. But they come home every day for meals? Why Bingley was only absent one day, Caroline couldn't have closed the house because she left with Bingley who planned to return so Netherfield was running the same on Thursday as it was on Tuesday. And Mrs, Annesley is Georgianna's companion she shouldn't be staying at another house. And Georgiana isn't out so she shouldn't be in the Bennet's drawing room during calling hours and MRS. Annesley should have seen to this.
Even the epilogue annoyed me. And not for the standard reason. It is dated October 1813. Now it is a truth universally acknowledged that P&P takes place in 1811-12. So how could Lizzy have been Married for "almost" 3 years?
This book isn't very long, a mere 283 pages, but it felt so much longer. If you have asked me I would have reported it had to be 400 or 500 + pages.
This is an unusual P&P what if that takes most of the plot of P&P and CRAMS it into 2 months and locates it all in Meryton.
In previous reviews I have asked for a more reasonable less over the top Mrs. Bennet and MS. Lilian delivered that. I actually liked this Mrs. Bennet she is neither shrill nor ridiculous. She is a bit outspoken a bit like, Oh I don't know Lizzy Bennet, unfortunately neither of her eldest daughter got the memo so they are constantly and bizarrely trying to silence her when she is not only not shrill but dead on target. Then again maybe these are "Mirror, mirror" Jane and Lizzy since both are watering pots.
This book overly tells without sufficient showing until I just wanted to scream "Shut Up!Shut Up!Shut Up!Shut Up!Shut Up!" There are endless discussions. Questions you never asked are answered via dialogue. What was Mr. Bingley's business? He had a sudden inheritance.
Then there are just bizarre changes. Jane doesn't go to Netherfield so Lizzy doesn't go to Netherfield so when exactly does Mr. Darcy have time to fall in love with her? The author moves Lucas Lodge to being a few doors down from Mrs. Phillips. The author has Wickham, who is in the militia driving the Lucas' carriage. Wouldn't Sir William have a driver? Letting a stranger drive your carriage would be like letting a stranger drive you Bentley.
In a bit of plot so confusing I dare not attempt to reveal it Longbourn is crowded and Mr. Bennet and the youngest girls go to stay at Netherfield with Bingley and Mrs. Annesley. But they come home every day for meals? Why Bingley was only absent one day, Caroline couldn't have closed the house because she left with Bingley who planned to return so Netherfield was running the same on Thursday as it was on Tuesday. And Mrs, Annesley is Georgianna's companion she shouldn't be staying at another house. And Georgiana isn't out so she shouldn't be in the Bennet's drawing room during calling hours and MRS. Annesley should have seen to this.
Even the epilogue annoyed me. And not for the standard reason. It is dated October 1813. Now it is a truth universally acknowledged that P&P takes place in 1811-12. So how could Lizzy have been Married for "almost" 3 years?
April 30, 2019
There are a lot of wonderful scenes here, and it's a really good Pride and Prejudice variation with a very different storyline.
I have to say that it took me a while to get into it, though. The early chapters don't show much change from canon and felt draggy to me. The first major divergence is that Jane does NOT go to tea at Netherfield with the weather threatening, so that's a non-event. Then, Darcy first sees Wickham in Hertfordshire at Lucas Lodge rather than on the streets of Meryton, which doesn't seem like much of a change. However, it's at the Netherfield ball where things finally sparked my interest: Mrs. Bennet gives Darcy thorough dressing down about his uppity manners. It's in private, so she doesn't make an embarrassing spectacle, but she certainly gets her point across. From there, the story gradually picks up steam (despite a number of occasionally distracting editing-type errors sprinkled about).
Along with showing the growing attraction between Darcy and Elizabeth, the book focuses on the contrast between Wickham's big talk and Darcy's big actions. Wickham is more of a slimeball than usual, while Darcy heroically puts his own life at risk for others. Ms. Lilian amps up the romance/angst when the results of Darcy's efforts leave him unconscious. He struggles to regain consciousness, only rising closer to the surface when he senses Elizabeth is nearby, while she has recognized that she loves him and fears the worst, praying he'll recover even if he doesn't share her feelings. We get to spend LOTS of time at Longbourn, and Mrs. Bennet proves herself a force to be reckoned with.
Along with the aforementioned editing errors, there are a couple of spots where the language is just too modern. (Mr. Bennet telling Darcy to "go for it" is particularly jarring.)
It may start out slow, but stick with it and you'll find a satisfying story.
I have to say that it took me a while to get into it, though. The early chapters don't show much change from canon and felt draggy to me. The first major divergence is that Jane does NOT go to tea at Netherfield with the weather threatening, so that's a non-event. Then, Darcy first sees Wickham in Hertfordshire at Lucas Lodge rather than on the streets of Meryton, which doesn't seem like much of a change. However, it's at the Netherfield ball where things finally sparked my interest: Mrs. Bennet gives Darcy thorough dressing down about his uppity manners. It's in private, so she doesn't make an embarrassing spectacle, but she certainly gets her point across. From there, the story gradually picks up steam (despite a number of occasionally distracting editing-type errors sprinkled about).
Along with showing the growing attraction between Darcy and Elizabeth, the book focuses on the contrast between Wickham's big talk and Darcy's big actions. Wickham is more of a slimeball than usual, while Darcy heroically puts his own life at risk for others. Ms. Lilian amps up the romance/angst when the results of Darcy's efforts leave him unconscious. He struggles to regain consciousness, only rising closer to the surface when he senses Elizabeth is nearby, while she has recognized that she loves him and fears the worst, praying he'll recover even if he doesn't share her feelings. We get to spend LOTS of time at Longbourn, and Mrs. Bennet proves herself a force to be reckoned with.
Along with the aforementioned editing errors, there are a couple of spots where the language is just too modern. (Mr. Bennet telling Darcy to "go for it" is particularly jarring.)
It may start out slow, but stick with it and you'll find a satisfying story.
May 2, 2019
This story has much of canon in it and it took about half way through before it really engaged my interest in a solid way.
We hear Darcy's POV as he again struggles with his attraction to Elizabeth and his sense that duty will not allow him to follow his inclination. His insult is again overheard.
Mrs. Bennet deserves some applause as she verbally confronts young men who have no manners at several times during this story. Wickham is one who faces that scolding. (He has made a repeat of his overtures to Georgiana while Darcy is not there to protect her...later in the tale.)
A big event has Darcy as the hero when he stops runaway horses that Wickham cannot control and thus "saves" those in the barouche and then even further is able start a fire in an abandoned cottage where the party has sought refuse. It is here that a bond is formed with Elizabeth as she steps up to lend a helping hand and is adamant that she will go with him to seek help. Afterall she knows these woods and the shortcuts best is her reasoning. Darcy's act is hailed by many and we see the opinion of the town changing.
However, Darcy hides the aftereffects of being soaked and chilled by the storm that night and continues to plans to return to London to celebrate Christmas with Georgiana. He wants to speak privately with Elizabeth early in the morning before he leaves and it is during that early time that she finds a wounded and comatose Darcy near Longbourn.
When letters sent to London about Darcy's mishap bring both Bingley and Georgiana back to Meryton Jane begins to believe Caroline's assertions that those two are a pair. Darcy's recovery is slow and we read his fevered thoughts as the only voice and presence he wants is Elizabeth's.
There is a short epilogue. I always enjoy those.
We hear Darcy's POV as he again struggles with his attraction to Elizabeth and his sense that duty will not allow him to follow his inclination. His insult is again overheard.
Mrs. Bennet deserves some applause as she verbally confronts young men who have no manners at several times during this story. Wickham is one who faces that scolding. (He has made a repeat of his overtures to Georgiana while Darcy is not there to protect her...later in the tale.)
A big event has Darcy as the hero when he stops runaway horses that Wickham cannot control and thus "saves" those in the barouche and then even further is able start a fire in an abandoned cottage where the party has sought refuse. It is here that a bond is formed with Elizabeth as she steps up to lend a helping hand and is adamant that she will go with him to seek help. Afterall she knows these woods and the shortcuts best is her reasoning. Darcy's act is hailed by many and we see the opinion of the town changing.
However, Darcy hides the aftereffects of being soaked and chilled by the storm that night and continues to plans to return to London to celebrate Christmas with Georgiana. He wants to speak privately with Elizabeth early in the morning before he leaves and it is during that early time that she finds a wounded and comatose Darcy near Longbourn.
When letters sent to London about Darcy's mishap bring both Bingley and Georgiana back to Meryton Jane begins to believe Caroline's assertions that those two are a pair. Darcy's recovery is slow and we read his fevered thoughts as the only voice and presence he wants is Elizabeth's.
There is a short epilogue. I always enjoy those.
April 27, 2019
Avid Reader
I really enjoyed reading this book! As always Darcy and Elizabeth got off to a bad start, but that was the extinct of similarities between this novel and the original P&P. Mrs. Bennet was a force to be reckoned with, and I enjoyed her confrontation with Darcy after he insulted Elizabeth at the assembly. Then she told Wickham off after he failed to control runaway horses in a freezing rain and start a fire to keep them warm. She acknowledged Darcy and his ability as a man who saved their lives and started a fire. As far as Mrs. Bennet was concerned, Wickham was useless in an emergency and only serves a purpose in a ballroom. Wickham had never been addressed in such a manner. Then Mrs. Bennet gave him another piece of her mind when he upset Miss Darcy. I really enjoyed this Mrs. Bennet and eventually so did Mr. Darcy. Wickham injured Darcy and left him for dead, but Elizabeth found him lying on the ground in the cold rain, and her family along with his family do doctor nursed him back to health. These changes made the book more enjoyable. Although Lady Catherine made her entrance, it didn't last very long.
I really enjoyed reading this book! As always Darcy and Elizabeth got off to a bad start, but that was the extinct of similarities between this novel and the original P&P. Mrs. Bennet was a force to be reckoned with, and I enjoyed her confrontation with Darcy after he insulted Elizabeth at the assembly. Then she told Wickham off after he failed to control runaway horses in a freezing rain and start a fire to keep them warm. She acknowledged Darcy and his ability as a man who saved their lives and started a fire. As far as Mrs. Bennet was concerned, Wickham was useless in an emergency and only serves a purpose in a ballroom. Wickham had never been addressed in such a manner. Then Mrs. Bennet gave him another piece of her mind when he upset Miss Darcy. I really enjoyed this Mrs. Bennet and eventually so did Mr. Darcy. Wickham injured Darcy and left him for dead, but Elizabeth found him lying on the ground in the cold rain, and her family along with his family do doctor nursed him back to health. These changes made the book more enjoyable. Although Lady Catherine made her entrance, it didn't last very long.
April 27, 2019
What-ifs are subtle
An in depth look at a slightly changed story of the first assembly and the next few months. What-if people reacted just a little bit more rational and quick, wrong assumptions happened much less frequently.
The story telling is good, the story drags in places and the editing starts well and gets worse slowly as the story progresses.
I recommend this book.
SPOILERS
Some of the intersections of Mrs. Bennet are priceless. She is still a bit of a flibergerbert but not nearly as much and is the rock of the family, emotionally speaking. Wickham is just awful. Darcy’s arrogance and haughtiness is hard to take.
An in depth look at a slightly changed story of the first assembly and the next few months. What-if people reacted just a little bit more rational and quick, wrong assumptions happened much less frequently.
The story telling is good, the story drags in places and the editing starts well and gets worse slowly as the story progresses.
I recommend this book.
SPOILERS
Some of the intersections of Mrs. Bennet are priceless. She is still a bit of a flibergerbert but not nearly as much and is the rock of the family, emotionally speaking. Wickham is just awful. Darcy’s arrogance and haughtiness is hard to take.
March 7, 2021
“… we found that facing a life-threatening illness prodded us to make a dramatic change in our lives.” –Gail Sheehy
Rating: Clean: Angst level: medium: Source: borrowed from KU [3-4-21]: This review may contain spoilers. What a cool title choice.
This was an adorable story and for several reasons. Of course, there was the budding relationship between such a dear couple. Yeah, Bingley and Jane were so cute. Oh, I bet you thought I was going to say Darcy and Elizabeth. Well, I was but thought I’d get B&J out of the way. Poor Jane was a mess and that pernicious Caroline Bingley was at fault. I wanted a damage report but maybe the less said about her the better.
“I’m not afraid to die; I am only afraid of saying goodbye to you forever.” –Shannon L. Alder
Now back to ODC [our-dear-couple]. The evolution of their love story started out on the usual trek Austen chose. Darcy was himself and boy did he do it up-right. The only difference was Mrs. Bennet overheard him and took him to task over his comments. What? Yep, that lady had her feathers ruffled and she came to the rescue of one of her chicks. Oh, she was so funny in this story. Several times she had her ire raised and she took someone to task for their behavior and they were sorry for it. Yeah, you go… Mrs. B… even Mr. Bennet was impressed. I recommend the story just to see her flare-up and take a chunk out of someone’s hide.
“You can die of the cure before you die of the illness.” –Michael Landon
I loved this Darcy… when he was good, that is. When he was bad… he was really bad… open mouth and insert foot. You know, the usual. But, when he was good, man, he was ever so good, even when he was sick. Whew! This story deserved several fan points. I didn’t break a fan, but it was close. The swoon-worthy parts were so adorable. Poor Elizabeth was constantly having to reevaluate her feelings and emotions. Lory Lilian’s juxtaposition of P&P scenes from one angle to another was so creative. I was impressed to see those pivotal points of Austen’s story told from a totally different direction and even at times from a different location. When Lady Catherine stormed Longbourn [and Darcy’s sick room] with her rector trailing behind… all you-know-what hit the fan. Yep, that was a good scene. I recommend this for those who love a smoldering HEA.
Rating: Clean: Angst level: medium: Source: borrowed from KU [3-4-21]: This review may contain spoilers. What a cool title choice.
This was an adorable story and for several reasons. Of course, there was the budding relationship between such a dear couple. Yeah, Bingley and Jane were so cute. Oh, I bet you thought I was going to say Darcy and Elizabeth. Well, I was but thought I’d get B&J out of the way. Poor Jane was a mess and that pernicious Caroline Bingley was at fault. I wanted a damage report but maybe the less said about her the better.
“I’m not afraid to die; I am only afraid of saying goodbye to you forever.” –Shannon L. Alder
Now back to ODC [our-dear-couple]. The evolution of their love story started out on the usual trek Austen chose. Darcy was himself and boy did he do it up-right. The only difference was Mrs. Bennet overheard him and took him to task over his comments. What? Yep, that lady had her feathers ruffled and she came to the rescue of one of her chicks. Oh, she was so funny in this story. Several times she had her ire raised and she took someone to task for their behavior and they were sorry for it. Yeah, you go… Mrs. B… even Mr. Bennet was impressed. I recommend the story just to see her flare-up and take a chunk out of someone’s hide.
“You can die of the cure before you die of the illness.” –Michael Landon
I loved this Darcy… when he was good, that is. When he was bad… he was really bad… open mouth and insert foot. You know, the usual. But, when he was good, man, he was ever so good, even when he was sick. Whew! This story deserved several fan points. I didn’t break a fan, but it was close. The swoon-worthy parts were so adorable. Poor Elizabeth was constantly having to reevaluate her feelings and emotions. Lory Lilian’s juxtaposition of P&P scenes from one angle to another was so creative. I was impressed to see those pivotal points of Austen’s story told from a totally different direction and even at times from a different location. When Lady Catherine stormed Longbourn [and Darcy’s sick room] with her rector trailing behind… all you-know-what hit the fan. Yep, that was a good scene. I recommend this for those who love a smoldering HEA.
April 29, 2019
Pride and Prejudice variation.
A slow burning, sweet romance.
Rated: chaste.
I was eagerly anticipating Mrs Bennet rebuke of Mr Darcy and I must say, she did it with more poise than I expected. Mr Darcy was not the only one in the receiving end of one of Mrs Bennet's scoldings though.
The book was s little slow in the first half but redeemed itself nicely in the second.
The cottage scene was lovely and I particularly liked what Lilian had done to the Netherfield ball. Ends in a short epilogue.
Recommend!
A slow burning, sweet romance.
Rated: chaste.
I was eagerly anticipating Mrs Bennet rebuke of Mr Darcy and I must say, she did it with more poise than I expected. Mr Darcy was not the only one in the receiving end of one of Mrs Bennet's scoldings though.
The book was s little slow in the first half but redeemed itself nicely in the second.
The cottage scene was lovely and I particularly liked what Lilian had done to the Netherfield ball. Ends in a short epilogue.
Recommend!
April 30, 2019
A Winner!
A charming story with great character description and an interesting plot variation. Add in a fresh approach to portraying Mrs Bennett - a mother hen who critiques more than clucks: I love this version! Very good approach, if only missing a bit more mush... but still, romantic and complete.
A charming story with great character description and an interesting plot variation. Add in a fresh approach to portraying Mrs Bennett - a mother hen who critiques more than clucks: I love this version! Very good approach, if only missing a bit more mush... but still, romantic and complete.
January 11, 2022
Good story
Took me a while to get into this story, but it turned out to be a real great story. I loved Mrs bennet, who set down everyone who messed up in her prescence! Darcy, Collins Wickham and lady Catherine. Loved how Darcy and Lizzy became friends and grew closer and fell in love! The villain got his comeuppance and I enjoyed the epilogue!
Took me a while to get into this story, but it turned out to be a real great story. I loved Mrs bennet, who set down everyone who messed up in her prescence! Darcy, Collins Wickham and lady Catherine. Loved how Darcy and Lizzy became friends and grew closer and fell in love! The villain got his comeuppance and I enjoyed the epilogue!
May 28, 2019
No one dies of a trifling cold, but they can put people in interesting situations.
Mr Darcy proves to be a true gentleman through different situations after being yelled at by Mrs Bennet at the Assembly for his choice of words regarding Elizabeth.
Mr Darcy proves to be a true gentleman through different situations after being yelled at by Mrs Bennet at the Assembly for his choice of words regarding Elizabeth.
June 7, 2019
Blegh
Her worst
I was so disappointed 😔 with this. It’s not just long it’s boring. All of a sudden Darcy falls for Elizabeth. And the last couple of pages Elizabeth loves him (she didn’t fall in love she just loves him🤷♀️) I saw her concept. She was trying to put ms Bennett I a better light. She just made her unbelievable. She needs to rework this or get a better editor it reads like a first draft especially toward the end
Her worst
I was so disappointed 😔 with this. It’s not just long it’s boring. All of a sudden Darcy falls for Elizabeth. And the last couple of pages Elizabeth loves him (she didn’t fall in love she just loves him🤷♀️) I saw her concept. She was trying to put ms Bennett I a better light. She just made her unbelievable. She needs to rework this or get a better editor it reads like a first draft especially toward the end
May 19, 2019
2.5 Stars
This book is hard to review. The first half is so repetitive and tedious that I almost decided to abandon it. Then the plot improved, so I continued, but the number of typos and malaprops is staggering. At one point, Longborne is called “Longhorn.” Serious editing is needed.
This book is hard to review. The first half is so repetitive and tedious that I almost decided to abandon it. Then the plot improved, so I continued, but the number of typos and malaprops is staggering. At one point, Longborne is called “Longhorn.” Serious editing is needed.
September 13, 2021
See Debbie’s review. I agree 100%! I enjoyed the tale but parts dragged. The bit about Wickham was not handled as i would have done it. But enjoyable book. Just felt like there could have been more. A few distracting errors in my version, but could have been an issues with getting the updates.
May 13, 2019
Meh. It took me ages to get into, and the spelling and grammar issues were really off-putting.
August 15, 2023
A Trifling Cold
Loved this story after the author took care of the infamous remark at the Meryton Assembly. Also liked that there was very little of Caroline Bingley - just enough to be annoying, but not wanting to clobber her to death as I would have liked in some variations. Of Wickham, the silver tongued devil, he gets his comeuppance from Mrs. Bennet for the unsavory things he said to Georgiana. The author had a better comeuppance for Wickham that ended him in jail. He was supposed to meet Lizzy on her walk before leaving for London, but when he doesn’t show up, Lizzy turns to go home. She finds him and he has fallen off his horse. He is unconscious and she runs to Longbourn to get help. Mrs. Bennet has given up her bedroom for his recovery. Letters are sent to Bingley and Darcy’s home bringing Bingley, Georgiana, Mrs. Annesley, and Darcy’s family doctor. What I liked in particular was as Darcy was unconscious his thoughts were written as the story progressed. Needless to say, Elizabeth was mentioned a good deal. When he recovers, he speaks to the Bennets about his love for his Elizabeth. Mrs. Bennet is stilled and in complete disbelief. But happy she was when her two eldest daughters married the men of their dreams after the new year. Forward in time, the Bingley moved to Derbyshire and the Bennets were due to visit - to see their grandchildren Rose Bingley and Robert Bennet Darcy.
Loved this story after the author took care of the infamous remark at the Meryton Assembly. Also liked that there was very little of Caroline Bingley - just enough to be annoying, but not wanting to clobber her to death as I would have liked in some variations. Of Wickham, the silver tongued devil, he gets his comeuppance from Mrs. Bennet for the unsavory things he said to Georgiana. The author had a better comeuppance for Wickham that ended him in jail. He was supposed to meet Lizzy on her walk before leaving for London, but when he doesn’t show up, Lizzy turns to go home. She finds him and he has fallen off his horse. He is unconscious and she runs to Longbourn to get help. Mrs. Bennet has given up her bedroom for his recovery. Letters are sent to Bingley and Darcy’s home bringing Bingley, Georgiana, Mrs. Annesley, and Darcy’s family doctor. What I liked in particular was as Darcy was unconscious his thoughts were written as the story progressed. Needless to say, Elizabeth was mentioned a good deal. When he recovers, he speaks to the Bennets about his love for his Elizabeth. Mrs. Bennet is stilled and in complete disbelief. But happy she was when her two eldest daughters married the men of their dreams after the new year. Forward in time, the Bingley moved to Derbyshire and the Bennets were due to visit - to see their grandchildren Rose Bingley and Robert Bennet Darcy.
August 30, 2019
Mama Bear Bennet
I believe this is my favorite Mrs. Bennet. Woe to any who threaten (or insult) one of her cubs or anyone in her care. I probably would have given 5 stars but for the poor editing. As always, Lory's stories make up for it.
I believe this is my favorite Mrs. Bennet. Woe to any who threaten (or insult) one of her cubs or anyone in her care. I probably would have given 5 stars but for the poor editing. As always, Lory's stories make up for it.
April 28, 2019
One of my favourite authors but not her best book
Lory Lilian quickly became one of my favourite authors with her ability to capture the spirits of both Elizabeth Bennet and Fitzwilliam Darcy. However, this book was littered with spelling mistakes and grammatical errors that tainted the book immensely and made it harder for me to enjoy.
Lory Lilian quickly became one of my favourite authors with her ability to capture the spirits of both Elizabeth Bennet and Fitzwilliam Darcy. However, this book was littered with spelling mistakes and grammatical errors that tainted the book immensely and made it harder for me to enjoy.
May 24, 2019
Wonderful
Lory Lillian can always be relied upon to deliver a well crafted and interesting story. I love Mr. Darcy's less implacable attitude. Rather than being stubborn and set in his ways, he's more open to introspection and reason. And I love the subtle change in Mrs. Bennett, also. From the start, at the Meryton assembly, she speaks her mind in an almost rational manner to Darcy, pointing out to him the impression he's making on Elizabeth and the townspeople. She gives this treatment to a few others in the story, and it has an impact on the outcome. She's still nervous and flighty, but she displays some true insight. Elizabeth, also, is more insightful and not so quick to judge.
The story takes place from Bingley 's and Darcy's arrival in Meryton, through Christmas, and much happens in that short span of time. Darcy still struggles with his attraction to Elizabeth, but it seems to overcome his objections more easily. Bingley has a little more backbone in this story, but still relies heavily on Darcy for approval. Elizabeth is not so taken in by Wickham as in the original, and comes to a quicker realization of his true character. Darcy performs some heroic acts when Mrs.Bennett and the girls are endangered, and it changes their opinion of him after. Elizabeth saves Darcy's life after he is attacked and left to die in the woods near Longbourn. He stays at Longbourn for his recovery, and therefore has the perfect opportunity to cement his relationship with Elizabeth.
The story is exciting, dramatic and romantic. The characters are all nice and reasonable, and easy to take (except the villains). It is well written and well edited, with a few minor exceptions. I recommend it highly.
Lory Lillian can always be relied upon to deliver a well crafted and interesting story. I love Mr. Darcy's less implacable attitude. Rather than being stubborn and set in his ways, he's more open to introspection and reason. And I love the subtle change in Mrs. Bennett, also. From the start, at the Meryton assembly, she speaks her mind in an almost rational manner to Darcy, pointing out to him the impression he's making on Elizabeth and the townspeople. She gives this treatment to a few others in the story, and it has an impact on the outcome. She's still nervous and flighty, but she displays some true insight. Elizabeth, also, is more insightful and not so quick to judge.
The story takes place from Bingley 's and Darcy's arrival in Meryton, through Christmas, and much happens in that short span of time. Darcy still struggles with his attraction to Elizabeth, but it seems to overcome his objections more easily. Bingley has a little more backbone in this story, but still relies heavily on Darcy for approval. Elizabeth is not so taken in by Wickham as in the original, and comes to a quicker realization of his true character. Darcy performs some heroic acts when Mrs.Bennett and the girls are endangered, and it changes their opinion of him after. Elizabeth saves Darcy's life after he is attacked and left to die in the woods near Longbourn. He stays at Longbourn for his recovery, and therefore has the perfect opportunity to cement his relationship with Elizabeth.
The story is exciting, dramatic and romantic. The characters are all nice and reasonable, and easy to take (except the villains). It is well written and well edited, with a few minor exceptions. I recommend it highly.
May 6, 2019
Good idea but lacked a good edit
I have read many of this author’s previous books and enjoyed them all very much. I ordered this as a pre-order, excited to receive it as soon as it published. The premise of the book was excellent and Mrs. Bennet was a delight but the lack of a good edit was very distracting. It made the book difficult to read. I was disappointed.
I have read many of this author’s previous books and enjoyed them all very much. I ordered this as a pre-order, excited to receive it as soon as it published. The premise of the book was excellent and Mrs. Bennet was a delight but the lack of a good edit was very distracting. It made the book difficult to read. I was disappointed.
November 1, 2020
Lovely
Another wonderful variation inspired by author Jane Austen’s classic Pride and Prejudice by Lory Lillian. Thoroughly enjoyed this work as usual
Another wonderful variation inspired by author Jane Austen’s classic Pride and Prejudice by Lory Lillian. Thoroughly enjoyed this work as usual
July 9, 2019
I enjoy this writer very much and this book did not disappoint. It this tale, Mr. Darcy saves the Bennet ladies from a runaway carriage, driven by Wickham. This takes place during a severe winter weather storm. He is in the Ivey rain for quite some time, getting the ladies to shelter and then securing the horses. Because of the time he was in the elements and then wet clothes, Darcy succumbs to a severe cold that turns to a high fever. He neglects his symptoms, attending the Netherfield ball in order to dance with Elizabeth. While taking a walk the next day, Elizabeth happens upon Darcy. He is injured and burning with fever. And now it has begun to rain. She must get help for him. She risks her own health to help him. The journey for them is well written and highly entertaining!
January 8, 2023
Very good
I feel like this book gave Darcy really good character growth. Mrs. Bennetts really made the book. I absolutely loved her in this variation. Her antics caused several significant changes to the storyline while also keeping within its general guidelines. She gives some great scoldings in this book that are entertaining to read. Elizabeth was not nearly as quick to believe Wickham and she and Darcy had a smoother, more gentle change of affections. I loved their relationship development in this book. The addition of Georgiana was also a very pleasant change that helped to reinforce characters and relationships.
I wouldn't say it's low angst but it's definitely not high angst. I liked it most for the show building of relationships, so if that is something you enjoy you'd really like this book.
I feel like this book gave Darcy really good character growth. Mrs. Bennetts really made the book. I absolutely loved her in this variation. Her antics caused several significant changes to the storyline while also keeping within its general guidelines. She gives some great scoldings in this book that are entertaining to read. Elizabeth was not nearly as quick to believe Wickham and she and Darcy had a smoother, more gentle change of affections. I loved their relationship development in this book. The addition of Georgiana was also a very pleasant change that helped to reinforce characters and relationships.
I wouldn't say it's low angst but it's definitely not high angst. I liked it most for the show building of relationships, so if that is something you enjoy you'd really like this book.
January 5, 2020
Most Pleasantly Surprised
Once again I am taken to a good and warm place by Ms. Lilian’s work. I have loved so many of them but none has hit me as strongly since “Rainy Days” or “Remembrance of the Past”.... that is until this novel, “A Trifling Cold.” I really enjoyed it and could not put it down until I finished it. I am surprised at how much I loved it since I could not detect any huge changes initially. So many opportunities arose for characters to talk frankly in ways I always wished them to. And the closer view of Mrs. Bennett in this light was also most enjoyable. I fell even more deeply in love with Darcy ... if that is even possible! When I finished I was very satisfied. Thanks
Once again I am taken to a good and warm place by Ms. Lilian’s work. I have loved so many of them but none has hit me as strongly since “Rainy Days” or “Remembrance of the Past”.... that is until this novel, “A Trifling Cold.” I really enjoyed it and could not put it down until I finished it. I am surprised at how much I loved it since I could not detect any huge changes initially. So many opportunities arose for characters to talk frankly in ways I always wished them to. And the closer view of Mrs. Bennett in this light was also most enjoyable. I fell even more deeply in love with Darcy ... if that is even possible! When I finished I was very satisfied. Thanks
April 10, 2020
I might have given 5 stars, but...
I enjoyed this story very much, but unlike other books by this author, there were repeated problems with editing, missed errors, including multiple times of the wrong use of "intimating" instead of the obvious intent for the word "intimidating". Read Me Lillia
I enjoyed this book very much, but was disappointed that the editing was wanting, different from her previous books, such as the incorrect use of "intimating", instead of the obvious need for the word "intimidating". Dear Ms. Lillian, please note the need for more editing! This took away from my otherwise very good enjoyment of this story. I recommend it very much but hope for better editing, especially from such an experienced author. I still recommend it.
I enjoyed this story very much, but unlike other books by this author, there were repeated problems with editing, missed errors, including multiple times of the wrong use of "intimating" instead of the obvious intent for the word "intimidating". Read Me Lillia
I enjoyed this book very much, but was disappointed that the editing was wanting, different from her previous books, such as the incorrect use of "intimating", instead of the obvious need for the word "intimidating". Dear Ms. Lillian, please note the need for more editing! This took away from my otherwise very good enjoyment of this story. I recommend it very much but hope for better editing, especially from such an experienced author. I still recommend it.
May 22, 2024
Fanny Bennet steals the show
I did not expect to enjoy this as much as I did. The description made it look like they would be stuck in the cabin for the majority of the book. But it was such a small part of the book. It's more like a turning point. My FAVORITE character was Mrs Bennet. I think it's the first time I've ever said these words. Mrs Bennet had the best lines. He anger was righteous instead of frivolous. She was discerning, and her set downs were the best. I enjoyed the building up of Darcy and Elizabeth feelings for each other as this book was not loaded with angst and the frustrating scenarios of misunderstanding like most P&P variations do. Oh and Bingley had an actual backbone. I truly enjoyed this story. I was a nice change.
I did not expect to enjoy this as much as I did. The description made it look like they would be stuck in the cabin for the majority of the book. But it was such a small part of the book. It's more like a turning point. My FAVORITE character was Mrs Bennet. I think it's the first time I've ever said these words. Mrs Bennet had the best lines. He anger was righteous instead of frivolous. She was discerning, and her set downs were the best. I enjoyed the building up of Darcy and Elizabeth feelings for each other as this book was not loaded with angst and the frustrating scenarios of misunderstanding like most P&P variations do. Oh and Bingley had an actual backbone. I truly enjoyed this story. I was a nice change.
April 16, 2021
A Trifling Cold and so many consequences!
Loved this book! I have yet to read anything by this author that I do not like. As the first chapters progressed, I tried to determine who would suffer from the illness implied by the title, and I was very wrong. How interesting and exciting! Without giving anything away, I was glad to see the minor role of some of the characters and enjoyed the new nuances given to others. Relationships were well developed over the timeline of the story.
No editing errors noted, whether I failed to notice them or no errors were present. Highly recommended!
Loved this book! I have yet to read anything by this author that I do not like. As the first chapters progressed, I tried to determine who would suffer from the illness implied by the title, and I was very wrong. How interesting and exciting! Without giving anything away, I was glad to see the minor role of some of the characters and enjoyed the new nuances given to others. Relationships were well developed over the timeline of the story.
No editing errors noted, whether I failed to notice them or no errors were present. Highly recommended!
April 29, 2023
This was a bizarre story. Everyone was aggressively OOC; the instalove that happened between the ODC DIRECTLY after the insult gave me a whiplash. Darcy's change of mind felt especially ridiculous, -- it took him what, about 35 pages to fall in love with Lizzy? Who, btw, felt more like Jane to me as the author did not even give her leave to feel any of the well-deserved resentment towards Darcy after the assembly.
Also, the amount of directly (and quite liberally) borrowed original passages felt kind of insulting; I could've just re-read P&P now could I? Skipping page after page of original text took me away from the story, and re-reading it made me feel rather ridiculous.
Also, the amount of directly (and quite liberally) borrowed original passages felt kind of insulting; I could've just re-read P&P now could I? Skipping page after page of original text took me away from the story, and re-reading it made me feel rather ridiculous.
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