3.5-3.75 stars
Before I go any further, The Holiday Swap is a clean romance 🧼. Just an FYI for those who go for that
&
for those who don’t. Tbh, if you look at my shelves, it’s pretty obvious I like my romances steamy (as do most of my GR friends) & I wouldn’t have minded had this had a little bit, but being a Christmas romance 🎄, it wasn’t missed too much either. Idk, I sort of like Christmas-themed ones a little cleaner sometimes than my usual reads anyways.
I’m also not as opposed to a smidge of cheesy -
just a smidge
- in my Christmas romances vs my usual reads. Ready for a little cheese(y) 🧀? — errr, or should I say bread 🍞? 🤔 Falling in their family’s footsteps (their father, grandfather, etc.), our heroines are identical twin chefs, Charlie & Cass, on two different career paths. Cass is working her way to officially take charge of the family business, Woodburn Bread, a beloved landmark of their small hometown. While Charlie’s path has taken her to reality tv as an expert judge for a pastry competition. It’s the Christmas season & after unexpected events off-set at the Christmas edition of her show, Charlie is desperate for her twin to come to LA to her rescue & take her place then in return, she takes over Cass’s life back in their hometown. Despite their intentions to stay on the task at hand of focusing on each other’s work needs, each twin finds romance as well as discovering/rediscovering a part of themselves. Clear Hallmark vibe, right? Except as a book, so no risk of having to deal with watching bad actors 😂. — if you’re like me — Basically The Holiday Swap is like the equivalent of those one or two Hallmark Christmas movies a year that are actually kinda cute & watchable out of the 837 Christmas movies(give or take 😏) the rest of the year. So here just change the watchable to readable.
Anyways, I would say for me Charlie’s story arc returning to her hometown(& a small town at that) & realizing the grass isn’t always greener held my interest more between the two sisters tbh. Cass’s story arc is ok, but small town romances are almost always more my jam. Also, the temperament of Cass & her new love were a little too alike imho. I need some contrast.
This probably won’t be a big deal to anyone else. Nonetheless — clean or not, tHS is written in the third person & I’m typically not the biggest fan of that in romance(outside of a few exceptional exceptions 😉). Often I end up feeling detached from the characters &/or plot. Reading tHS, I barely thought about it, let alone was it the cause of dislike or disinterest. It may not be a 5 star read for me, but that was still a big win out of the gate. Regardless of how I feel about a plot itself, anyone, who can write romance in the third person & successfully keep it from being a sticking point(AND a debut novel no less!), has my respect.
Oh! One critic — Ok listen, I totally get this is an ARC, but formatting needs a thorough cleanup - I do not mean things spellchecking or grammatical errors btw(those were mostly already taken care of), I mean more in the context of words that looked like “th- is”(w/o quotes lol) or lack of spacing between transitions. Believe me, I wouldn’t mention it if it weren’t so frequent, it became a bit distracting(the first mostly). I’m just hoping for the author’s sake & the readers’ it is tidied up. If it is completely taken care of, my rating is 3.75. If it’s not, then my rating is 3.5.
All in all, it’s a pleasant, enjoyable debut & I’m game to give Maggie Knox’s future releases a whirl.
**This ARC was provided by NetGalley UK in exchange for an honest review **