It's not often that I give a book a 3 star rating. In fact, I rarely ever have done, especially since discovering the LMBPN Indie Publishing group.
Unfortunately, there were some glaring errors in this book, that were just too obvious for me to ignore, this time.
That's not to say that this book was badly written - after all, it's been written by the same authors as both of the James, and Alison, Brownstone series, and those books were awesome.
Unfortunately, aside from the fact that this series appears to be aimed more at the much younger side of the YA scale, the plot blunder in it, was just too obvious for me to ignore.
In this instance, Xander had been poisoned, with such a rare poison that it took him to be nearly dying, before a book was discovered that had the possibility of a cure.
But, then, just a few pages later, the Professors at the School of Necessary Magic were still looking for the cure, to the point that the Headmistress, Mara Berens, goes to some rather dark characters, and takes part in something that she's spent her whole career fighting against, to be then handed a root that has only a 60% chance of curing Xander - which it does.
I can suspend disbelief along with the best of them, but this was either a huge error in the editing process, or in the plotline, or was just too simplistic to swallow, given my age, and reading ability.
I usually do enjoy a YA read, in between something with more heft, but this just didn't grab me enough.
The actual main character, Raine Campbell, seemed very nice - in fact, she reminded me of a much more humble, and American, and nicer, version of Hetmoine Granger - with a love of horses added on.
But, although she's the orphan daughter of a Wizard who worked in the FBI, there's nothing in the story, so far, that explains why the FBI's human Agent, Connors, had to drive her for so many hours, to her new school, when there's a perfectly good - and extremely much faster - magical train system that she could have got to the School on?
Nor does it explain why Connors was actually staying at the School? Is it because he's guarding Raine? Or is he guarding the School? Or both?
Now, there's one thing about me, especially where books are concerned, and that's that I try never to give up on a book that's part of a series.
With all of this, then add to the fact that I also bought this book as a part of a Boxed Set - and I ALWAYS try to read every book of a boxed set - then you have one very stubborn reader!
So, with all that said, I'm going to continue reading this whole series, one book at a time, in the hopes that this first book was just a bit of a stumble on the road to the end.
I'll get on with reading the next book, which is Book Two: Orphan Witch', once I've caught up on some sleep, then I'll catch you on the flip side, to let you know what I thought about it!
Better, hopefully!