Bonded

by Ahimadala

Draco Malfoy had always known that he was going to be an Alpha, like his father and his father's father.
What he didn't know was that the day Hermione was tortured under his eyes, something never seen before in the magical world happened: their magic created a bond.

Being an omega was a rare privilege among young purebloods girls. The gene was disappearing even in the oldest and purest families.
So how was it possible for that trait to show up in a muggleborn girl?

Fandom: Harry Potter - J. K. Rowling

Dramione - Dramione is the ship between Draco Malfoy and Hermione Granger

Rating: Explicit

Words: 103,887; pdf: 264 pages

Genres: Fan Fiction

278 pages, ebook

First published September 17, 2021

Reviews

[Sarah Elaine · Rating 1 out of 5]

Ugh, I had to DNF halfway through. This was so painful to try to read. It reads like a teen trying to be sexy. Why on earth does it keep referring to him as "the young man"!?!?! 97 damn times! Or her being called "the girl" 202 times! Seriously, they have names! For real though, this was just awful. I feel like only an underage person would say penis during spicy scenes, which made reading it feel so wrong.

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[Curiousgem · Rating 2 out of 5]

This story should be named “The girl and the young man” given the countless times these words are used in every paragraph. The storyline was interesting enough but the quality of writing is very stilted. I had a really hard time with the repetitive style of this author’s writing. DNFed pretty early on. Giving it 2 stars.

[Brooke · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was pretty good. Honestly the writing wasn’t the best, but it wasn’t terrible. The characters honestly didn’t really feel like Draco and Hermione. I did like Draco’s friendships. I do wish we got a little more jealousy and protectiveness. Also it’s smutty, but not if that makes sense like more telling then showing.

[Claire · Rating 2 out of 5]

To be fair, it was translated from Russian into English so perhaps the original is better.

But, to me it reads like a second rate “All You Want” (SenLinYu).

It’s fine, but nothing special in my opinion. I couldn’t finish the last 3 chapters.

[Reya Reychelle · Rating 4 out of 5]

Despite the author’s use of the word penis in smut scenes- Fucking Gross- Maybe Don’t do that & not entirely grasping the English language…. I still surprisingly enjoyed it very much.

[Steph]

DNF 19%

[Milena Amaral · Rating 3 out of 5]

A história é simples então eu gostaria de ter tido mais alguns detalhes, como a punição da Astroria, mas mesmo assim é uma história legalzinha.

[Penny · Rating 1 out of 5]

So so bad. I know it was translated but even so, it was bad. So much miscommunication and a lot of plot points that didn’t add up. Plus the use of the word penis…gross.

[Catherine Connor · Rating 2 out of 5]

The writing style is horrific. It needs a major overhaul. The storyline could have been so much more. Fantastic concept and yet so poorly executed.

[elenorisabel · Rating 4 out of 5]

omegaverse dramoine is always so spicy AND I LOVE IT

[Tuva · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was a reread … accidentally. I first read this book on ao3, and this time I read it on Wattpad. I feel like my my taste in books have not changed😌

Anyways, it was an enjoyable read that could be classified as a guilty pleasure. I would say that it is very similar to the fic “all you want”. But I like that book so I don’t really mind it. I will say that I do not really remember a lot of things from this book, specifically, but I feel like that could be due to the fact that Dramoine fics can be very similar to each other, so it is hard sometimes to distinguish them. I did think it seemed familiar, but as it was so similar to “all you want” I disregarded it. Now I know there’s a reason why it seem so familiar…