From Victory & Glory is kind of a mess, but points for slow burn romance, original ideas, and entertainment value.
The book drops you right into the penultimate scene before a happily ever after. Mate bonds have been formed, the battle against the big bad is about to begin, and em dashes are being painfully and improperly used—the usual. It's a cool place to start a story. Things get somewhat confusing from there.
The worldbuilding is haphazard from a technical standpoint. Important touchstones are lost in too much expository detail. The amnesiac MFC poses rhetorical questions and comes to illogical conclusions based on what she (and the reader!) knows. Concepts are just generally unexplained and annoyingly inconsistent: "The chances of being gifted a second mate are astronomical," claims one of the MMCs, despite another one describing the OW as a "chosen mate, the woman [he's] sworn to love". There's "no sign of an advanced, mechanical civilization" but the MFC wears a mini skirt and modern undergarments and an MMC has genital piercings that can and do have dangerous outcomes in the 21st century. And so on.
The plot relies heavily on convenience, explained away by ancient machinations, god powers, and a hefty dose of fate (which is undermined by the constant reminder that it's not set in stone). The set up to get characters in the right place at the right time is clunky. The MFC remembers she's a dragon rider so it's a good thing there just happens to be a random dragon nearby. The MMCs are struggling with the psychic mate bond connection so it sure is swell that they accidentally broadcasted their thoughts only right after recounting their secrets. Oh look, we found a witch prophecy stone in a shifter rare books collection looking for facts about a children's story told by a random stranger. What a surprise, we stumble upon a witch who takes us to a painting of the MFC where she expresses her heartfelt regrets over the entire situation.
The ideas in this book are great; it's just the execution that falls short of its potential. Where the author excels is in tone, humor, and relationship building. The heroine's POV is charming and unique. The dialogue is witty without being cliché. The pull of a "fated mate" isn't this mindless, true-love-conquers-all trope; choice and free will make things much more interesting, as do the magical penalties of being married to someone else. The characters are distinct and interesting—even (especially!) the secondary characters. Everything is measured and paced to feel natural.
3.5 because, despite all its flaws, the cliffhanger ending had me groaning. Had the second book already been released, I would have started it immediately.