I think I'm going to have to formally define The Inspector Shan Dilemma. I like the settings of this series, and greatly enjoy many of the character dilemmas presented in the novels, and there is some beautiful and sensitive writing. I intend to read all the rest of the series.
But (hence the dilemma) there are annoying and frustrating parts to the series, some amateur writing flaws, and all but maybe the first one jump the shark at some point. There are generally too many characters and too many plotlines, so that the ending almost always feels contrived. Because of the complexity of the works, and the density of the prose, they are also slow reads. I find myself reading another mystery at the same time, to lighten the mood and keep up my reading pace. [In this case I took the book on an overseas trip, so managed to finish it in less than three weeks, due to being stuck on airplanes and in airports.]
Partway into this reading I posted the following note on Goodreads: If this were the first book of the series or the first I had read, I would throw it at the wall on page 102. A character who nearly died from a head wound and was flat on his back, unconscious for days finally gets up and is immediately coshed unconscious again. Out for a day or so, and the next day he's climbing a mountain with Shan. ???? Utterly stupid and inexcusable. Loses a star right there.
Later Shan himself will be knocked unconscious, will be out for some time, and will show some signs of concussion, but they are quickly forgotten. Later he will be beaten unconscious again (though without head injury?). Is the book about Traumatic Brain Injury? Um, no. This is the stuff of old noir detective novels, where Marlowe and his like seemed to be concussed at least once per book. That stuff should be left to history. There are only three grimaces in this volume, down from eleven in the previous volume, but that makes my list of problems, as well.
One thing that could have been a bit much, but worked for me, is that we have some Navajo characters in this story, searching for data on similarities between Navajo culture and early Tibetan culture. This makes for the third-in-a-row intrusion of Americans (and other outsiders) into the novels, but one of the things I like about the settings is that Pattison reveals that what we tend to think of as simple cultural settings are always more complex than that. When you actually visit places with lengthy histories, you find different ethnic roots from village to village, and you find outsiders wandering across the landscape for various reasons. Today, academics and NGO workers and military folks are slipping in and out of everywhere, and Pattison's character lists have always reflected that.
The world is quite complicated, and that seems to be a theme of these works.
So my dilemma is that I enjoy these enough to keep reading them, but they annoy me enough that I can't really recommend the series. I do recommend trying the first volume, but not buying any further volumes unless you're sold.
This volume starts with Shan being summoned to solve a mystery. There has been a double murder (it will turn out that there have been several murders) on a sacred mountain, and it is hoped he can solve the case quickly, before it brings in outsiders. Why the fear of outsiders? Because the village involved has been flying under the radar for a while, and has avoided direct interference from Beijing until now. But there's a Chinese military base at the foot of the mountain on the other side, a number of mysterious characters wandering around, a group of illegal gold miners, a mysterious compound near the top of the ridge, a State Security team looking for excuses to inspect the place...
Too many characters, too many plotlines. Lots of bloodshed, threat and danger; to the point that it can't really add up by the end.
But still, I like to hang out in the imagined world of these stories, so when Pattison next comes up in my mystery series rotation, I'll be reading the next one.
One reason I'll be reading the next one is that Pattison may not understand the physical effects of coma or brain injury, but he sure knows how to physically torture and emotionally scour his characters. It gets so bad for Shan that we learn in the course of the book that he needs to break with certain folks he's too much of a danger for. I'll have to read the next book just to see if that actually happens, and what life Shan finds for himself if it does.