Werewolves and vampires don't mix, or that's what Kieran Callisto, a seventeen-year-old vampire, has believed all his life - until he falls for the Alpha's son.
*****
When Kieran meets his new classmate, Mason Kane, he bristles with an unexplainable disdain. Soon it becomes apparent why: Mason is a werewolf. But when a fight turns into a sudden kiss that neither expects, Kieran's feelings for Mason turn to attraction in an instant. None of it makes sense - vampires and werewolves are supposed to be mortal enemies, so why does Kieran find Mason so irresistible? He knows that each kiss is dangerous, each bite is unpredictable...
wish I could give a 1.5 anyway I read this as a joke and cuz of the webtoon adaptation and the book was so ass so brainrot yet I still ate it up so I guess that's something but again there were many plot holes and the brother had absolutely no character he was just there the dad too, there were so many characters like that and there were so many unnecessary paragraphs I skipped a lot it could've been a much shorter book. It was very predicatable but I suppose I like that with these types of books. There's so many things that didn't make sense but I guess you don't read a book like this for it to make sense
I really enjoyed this! it was funny every now and then with the snarky comments between Mason and Kieran, had the typical 'enemies to lovers' in high school form, The perfect plot twist with Cedric and Mason (i actually cried for Mason and Kieran). And the ending was absolute cinema with Maria finding out about all three of them and the classic cut off. Would 100% recommend to anyone who likes this genre!!
I read this after reading part of the Webtoon. The Webtoon is so much better. This book obviously is a Wattpad novel, and it reads like one. There's a lack of editing, fine-tuning of plot, etc. It was fun though, and I did read it relatively quickly. I don't think I would've finished it or picked it up without first seeing it as a comic though. I did find a lot of parts boring or slow.
won't be rating this one bc it would have to be a one star and i dont want to do that😔 it's as wattpad as it gets, following all the typical schemes and possesing this special flatness of the setting, characters, action... not to mention the actual typos and massive holes in a plot that already doesn't make much sense (bro's punishment for attempted murder and proven possesion of [should be illegal but they dont have any law system] weaponry is literally no phone for a week. oh and then they let murder slide too, i guess they thought it through)
it's important to keep in mind it was originally just a wattpad story and i knew what i was getting myself into - the only thing that actually icks me is the fact it's not free to read anymore, falling under some wattpad coin program, which is bs. if the author wants to make money off a book, they should at least make the effort to fix the typos
it did, however, prove a point to me - i should never, under any circumstances, deprive myself of gay vampires, because that results in searching for them in the darkest corners of the internet
Well, this is clearly a Wattpad story and I honestly feel like that’s enough of a statement to summarize the whole book and enough to tell whether you’ll like it or not.
Everything is so revolved around the main character that every other character besides, maybe the love interest, feels like a plot device or opportunity to show how special the main character is. The one time he faces genuine consequences for his terrible actions is when his best friend “abandons” him because he cheated with the best friend’s boyfriend. This is, of course, resolved by being gay publicly. Forget the fact that she feels like his shadow and that she’s never considered as a person beyond being his friend or how he betrayed her trust multiple times. He’s gay — that’s all that matters now.
To be fair, the punishment for attempted murder and having a collection of weapons made solely to kill a certain group of beings is having you toss out the weapons and no Xbox for the week. Prison is preposterous. He would easily escape prison, quick don’t let him go to any college parties this semester. That’ll teach him. You’re telling me they just… don’t have any form of imprisonment for supernatural creatures because it’s difficult? How is this society run? This is possibly the most interesting thing that happens in this book. And who really cares that you murdered your own brother when you can be gay? Trauma clearly doesn’t. He was definitely radiating heterosexual vibes, anyway.
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complimenti wattpad, mettere le storie a pagamento è stata una grande mossa, adoro quando non posso finire un libro perché devo sbloccare ogni cazzo di capitolo!!
It was pretty okay, like a pretty okay read to ease into reading again hahah. Idk what I would rate it, like 1.5-2 or something? I mostly read it bc I had started reading the webtoon and I was curious how it was going to end. It did make me want to read more werewolf/vampire pairings tho?
Synopsis⭐ (Werewolves and vampires don't mix, or that's what Kieran Callisto, a seventeen-year-old vampire, has believed all his life - until he falls for the Alpha's son.
*****
When Kieran meets his new classmate, Mason Kane, he bristles with an unexplainable disdain. Soon it becomes apparent why: Mason is a werewolf. But when a fight turns into a sudden kiss that neither expects, Kieran's feelings for Mason turn to attraction in an instant. None of it makes sense - vampires and werewolves are supposed to be mortal enemies, so why does Kieran find Mason so irresistible? He knows that each kiss is dangerous, each bite is unpredictable...)💙
Statistics ⭐ Started/Finished: October 19, 2024 - November 5, 2024💙 Time Read: 7 hours and 52 minutes💙 Where to Read: Wattpad💙
Review/Rating⭐ Rating: 4.1|5💙 This is the third Wattpad book I've finished reading. I really love the enemies-to-lovers trope in this book, but there's some ickk part in the story, but I'm not going to tell you that because it's going to be a spoiler if I do. I do think their love for each other estimated quickly, which I was not expecting because the first book I read was slow burn, like really, really slow, but in this book, uhmm flash i guess. If you're planning to read this one, don't expect the high-quality story you see or have read in Kindle or other physical books with new york time best selling books. I just based my rating on my feelings, not on the plot, grammar, or mistakes I saw, but just the feelings I felt while reading this book. This has smut or not I mean, they definitely did the deed, but it's not explained or given any details, just the kissing, you know what I mean, its smut but not really smut.💙 I'd recommend it to any bl lovers out there who wants to read mlm fantasy with an enemies-to-lover trope but less smut, more story.💙
I wanna read the inheritance game after listening to haunting adeline.💙
Ho scoperto questa storia per puro caso su Wattpad, grazie al recente adattamento in formato Webtoon. Visto che al momento sono disponibili solo i primi capitoli, la curiosità ha avuto la meglio (dovevo sapere come andava a finire!) e mi sono tuffata nella lettura della webnovel originale.
L'inizio mi ha conquistata: la scrittura è vivace e coinvolgente, e la voce narrante di Kieran – sarcastica, tagliente, accattivante – riesce a dare subito ritmo e personalità alla storia. Tuttavia, proseguendo, ho iniziato a notare alcune debolezze che hanno inevitabilmente ridimensionato il mio entusiasmo iniziale.
Nel complesso, si percepisce un grande potenziale, soprattutto nella prima parte. Ma la seconda metà dà l’impressione di essere stata sviluppata con meno cura e pianificazione, quasi affrettata.
Peccato davvero, perché le premesse c’erano tutte. L’adattamento Webtoon, seppur ancora agli inizi, ha già introdotto alcuni cambiamenti interessanti – come l’aggiunta di una backstory che spiega l’odio cieco di Cedric nei confronti dei licantropi – e sembra promettere un lavoro di rielaborazione capace di colmare alcune delle fragilità presenti nella versione originale. Speriamo bene!
El libro es bastante entretenido, no lo voy a negar, me lo acabe como en 3 días (eso no pasa cuando estoy ocupada), pero ajá, yo quería saber qué más pasaba con Kieran y Mason y de nuevo, no voy a mentir, me gustaron mucho y se me hizo bonita la relación.
Pero todo lo anterior no evitó que notara que al libro le faltaban muchas cosas. Los personajes podrían haberse desarrollado mejor, el romance también pudo haber estado mejor, había cosas que sobraban y varias situaciones se podrían haber evitado usando la lógica, había otras formas de generar tensión y drama que no implicaran decisiones estúpidas de los personajes, y si, hablo de los adultos.
Pero bueno, le doy un poco de crédito a la historia ya que según mis cálculos, la autora era menor de edad cuando lo escribió entonces realmente no puedo esperar una obra maestra, y no, no estoy demeritando a los adolescentes, solo que realmente el vocabulario y entendimiento general de muchas cosas de los adolescentes no es equiparable al de un adulto, entonces por eso entiendo que no supiera muchas veces como desarrollar o desenredar alguna situación.
En general, si disfrutan a los vampiros y hombres lobo y quieren una lectura ligera, si se las recomiendo porque entretenida de leer sí es!
I’m still writing my review for Vicious, but in the meantime here is my review of this Wattpad story I read.
Like many, I picked this up because I’m reading the Webtoon adaptation, Love Bites, and kinda wanted to scratch the itch of “what’s going to happen next”. Of course, the two are different in some ways, but it did in fact scratch that itch.
Now this story wasn’t the most well written, with some clunky dialogue and a couple misspelled words here and there. At points the characters annoyed me and their actions made little sense, BUT I didn’t step into this expecting anything beyond that. Wattpad writers don’t have access to professional editors and it is a place for young writers to get their start.
There were some broader issues, like with the cheating plotline and progression of Mason and Kieran’s relationship, but I think the author has potential. With some workshopping it could be the first published Klance fanfiction (I don’t know if one already exists or if this was intended to be Klance fanfiction).
I recommend this for fans of romance, vampires, werewolves, Klance, and cheesy wattpad stories.
bingeread this w no sleep in 13 hours. LOVED IT. I'm so grateful that there was no smut, bc it definitely was NOT necessary. ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS STORY. this is the first time that I read a Wattpad story and genuinely, *WOW*. I'm so glad that it was a happy ending. I'm still confused about their heights tho, but it was still amazing. I feel bad for Cella still, since Kier is a shit friend, but I'm glad she has her gentleman now. I kinda feel like I love Kieran in the start more tho... IM SO BLESSED. I loved the tiny details w the "oh god" and Kieran wincing at that. loved it. I love Mason being worried about Kieran's blood intake. and I love little Casper. I feel like Kier feels guilty about killing his brother tho especially bc he wanted to shove him away at first, but I'm sort of happy that he did bc Cedric was an a-hole.
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It had all the ingredients for something great vampires, werewolves, but somehow managed to turn it into a long-winded Wattpad fever dream. The plot dragged, the side characterswere flatter than a pancake and uninteresting (the writer shows them but they arent really that well build to be interesting alingside the main story of romance). The story ha unnecessary interactions so u could say there were a lot of situations which didnt add to the main story and just carried the story longer. The story itself would take 23 chapters to end but theres just so many unnecessary stuff happening.By the end, I was rooting for a interesting ending but it was just a really predictable end. :/ Kierens brother wanst well written at al, dude is just there for nothing.
Me empecé a leer este libro al ponerme al día con la adaptación de Webtoon, por lo que sabía que sería un libro sin mucha trama. Por esa razón me da pena tener que ponerle tan poca nota ya que sabía lo que me iba a encontrar y mis expectativas eran bastante bajas y, aún así, me ha decepcionado. Los personajes no tienen ninguna personalidad, la trama es totalmente previsible y la autora ni se ha molestado en invertir un poco de tiempo en elaborar la resolución del problema. Creo que la base sobre la que se sustenta el libro es buena, pero al redactarlo pierde muchísimo. Definitivamente, la historia gana en formato comic.
Do I easily give things 5 stars? Maybe… but I can’t lie I enjoyed it a lot😭😭 I read the WEBTOON and saw there was only 11 chapters I FOUGHT to get more coins but I can’t get them and I’m not buying them so I just read the book version and I couldn’t put it down 😞 I can admit it was cringey at times but it was written in 2017 so I’ll cut it some slack🫡 I love Kieran and this is TOTALLY KLANCE IN DISGUISE
Came here from the webtoon and glad I was able to read it while it's currently free. For an unpublished story, it was an enjoyable read, but I struggled with all of the plot holes around Cedric, I think I lot of their problems could have been solved by just talking to Kierans Dad. One of my favourite moments was also right at the end, with Maria walking in on the "supernatural moment". Also, I would have liked to hear about/have more scenes with Mason in his wolf form.
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Creo que leer el libro en inglés hizo que no pudiera disfrutarlo tanto como si lo hubiera leído en español y así entenderlo por completo, dejando eso de lado me encanto serían unas 3,5 estrellas para mi debido a eso a que creo que hay varias cosas que me perdí por el idioma si alguna vez lo leo en español vendré rectificar esta reseña.
Pero me gustan muchísimo un buen libro y sumamente adictivo lo empecé a leer y no paré hasta terminarlo. 🤭❤️🩹
3.5 bunun yenı cıkmıs webtoonundan dolayı baslamıstım aslında onda bolum azdı ve gerı kalan uc dort bolumde paralıydı ama sardıgı ıcın merak edıp kıtabını okuyayım dedım bı de klanceyı anımsattı webtoon hallerı. neyse guzeldı ama enemıes to loverssal kısmında daha ıyısını beklerdım ya. o yuzden daha ıyı olabılırdı kıtabı bı tık ama guzeldı yanı
generally obsessed with the book despite its flaws some i feel like could do with a rewrite which i guess was put in the form of the webtoon but it does need a full rewrite for the ACTUAL book i cant bring myself to hate it though because i loved this too bits but it is as cleshe as a wattpad gets hey at least its gay and has vampires and werewolfs
Is it grand literature? No. Are there no plot holes? No. Are all the characters round and intricate? No. But did I enjoy it? Yes. Did I read it extremely quickly? YES. It was fun and funny and the chemistry between the characters worked really well and I ate it up. And that's really all that matters in the end.
Kieran and Mason’s chemistry is off charts. Their banter is to live for. Just about a month ago I remember telling my best friend that I don't like to read smut, and here we are, I guess I have a tiny little thing for smut, especially queer smut😭
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Started this because of the WEBTOON ‘love bites’ and wanted more content ok the main couple, but was left significantly disappointed with all the plot holes and bland side characters.
Was an easy read to get through…it was just so cliche and so wattpad coded…