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Wolf Moon
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With Malcom’s fall everyone is looking to Hanna to step up and lead the packs like the prophecy demands. Will her power and strength bloom when her age and inexperience is called in question or will she show the doubters just how powerful she is? The days of homework and winter formals are over, pack mates are dying, the Light Warlocks have been wiped out and the vampires are demanding Atticus’ blood. But everything they have been through already is child’s play compared to whats to come. The portal to Kuningriil is in danger of being opened and with it, horrors like this world has never seen released. Hanna and her allies must build an army quickly to stop the portal from being opened. Will Hanna find the numbers she needs to protect the world? Is she strong enough to lead the packs or was the prophecy nothing but the wishful thinking of an overzealous mystic.
With Malcom’s fall everyone is looking to Hanna to step up and lead the packs like the prophecy demands. Will her power and strength bloom when her age and inexperience is called in question or will she show the doubters just how powerful she is? The days of homework and winter formals are over, pack mates are dying, the Light Warlocks have been wiped out and the vampires are demanding Atticus’ blood. But everything they have been through already is child’s play compared to whats to come. The portal to Kuningriil is in danger of being opened and with it, horrors like this world has never seen released. Hanna and her allies must build an army quickly to stop the portal from being opened. Will Hanna find the numbers she needs to protect the world? Is she strong enough to lead the packs or was the prophecy nothing but the wishful thinking of an overzealous mystic.
254 pages, Kindle Edition
Published December 20, 2021
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February 4, 2023
Who in the world was this editor??
First, the storyline is amazing - just like the other books in the series. However, this particular book had more grammar, punctuation, spelling and sentence structure errors than all the rest combined. It says “revised” in the description but I don’t think the new file is uploaded. There are constant misuses of “there” and “their” and “your” and “you’re”. Almost none of the apostrophes are used correctly. So many completely misspelled words. The tense kept jumping back and forth between present and past in the same scene. Sometimes the whole wrong words are used which completely changes the meaning such as “implicating” instead of “implementing”.
The author is clearly very talented as a weaver of fantasy stories. The profoundly poor editing just makes it all seem so unprofessional which is a shame and something I certainly hate to see for this author.
I almost couldn’t finish it due to the errors but I was completely vested this far into the series so I struggled through it.
First, the storyline is amazing - just like the other books in the series. However, this particular book had more grammar, punctuation, spelling and sentence structure errors than all the rest combined. It says “revised” in the description but I don’t think the new file is uploaded. There are constant misuses of “there” and “their” and “your” and “you’re”. Almost none of the apostrophes are used correctly. So many completely misspelled words. The tense kept jumping back and forth between present and past in the same scene. Sometimes the whole wrong words are used which completely changes the meaning such as “implicating” instead of “implementing”.
The author is clearly very talented as a weaver of fantasy stories. The profoundly poor editing just makes it all seem so unprofessional which is a shame and something I certainly hate to see for this author.
I almost couldn’t finish it due to the errors but I was completely vested this far into the series so I struggled through it.
June 4, 2022
Great series
I'm a real sucker for a wolf series. When I was much, much younger I wanted to be a wolf.....or a vampire. Their lives just seemed so interesting and romantic. This series made me feel like that again. There is a lot of exciting scenes, and a lot of dangerous plots. There is also a lot of romance. I recommend this series to those out there who find the ability to phase into a wolf at will to be an interesting power.
I'm a real sucker for a wolf series. When I was much, much younger I wanted to be a wolf.....or a vampire. Their lives just seemed so interesting and romantic. This series made me feel like that again. There is a lot of exciting scenes, and a lot of dangerous plots. There is also a lot of romance. I recommend this series to those out there who find the ability to phase into a wolf at will to be an interesting power.
January 26, 2022
Great story horrible editing
The story is amazing however it can get very confusing when constantly switching points of views. Plus the energy needs a lot of work. There were a lot of times where I couldn't even figure out What the author was trying to say.
The story is amazing however it can get very confusing when constantly switching points of views. Plus the energy needs a lot of work. There were a lot of times where I couldn't even figure out What the author was trying to say.
May 2, 2023
severe editing is necessary
This entire series needs incredible amounts of editing. The author switches between past and present tense in the middle of paragraphs and sentences. Defiantly is almost always in place of definitely etc. The storyline is decent however.
This entire series needs incredible amounts of editing. The author switches between past and present tense in the middle of paragraphs and sentences. Defiantly is almost always in place of definitely etc. The storyline is decent however.
February 21, 2023
To many typos
The story was great but hard to read with so many errors. I thought after book 1 they would get better but honestly they got worse in book 2 and even worse in 3.
The story was great but hard to read with so many errors. I thought after book 1 they would get better but honestly they got worse in book 2 and even worse in 3.
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