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The Devourer's Oath
From Jenna Moreci, International Bestselling Author of The Savior’s Champion:
"A debut story from a talented force who writes like a veteran author. The Devourer’s Oath is packed with gripping adventure and impossible stakes, all within a lush, vibrant world. Lizabeth Phoenix is a writer to watch."
If you love someone, and something stands in the way of their last chance, is there anything you wouldn’t do to save them? For Norindra, Captain of The Sunfeaster, the answer is “No.” After winning a devastating intergalactic war, she and her crew of celestial pirates found no peace waiting for them. Her lover, Ryonn, has been gravely injured in a raid, and only one thing can save him now: the last Coreopsi–a planet with a golden core that she can use to heal his mortal wound. But when innocents stand between her and her lover’s life, protected by an ancient, near-immortal guardian, whose death will feed the Emptiness?
Experience a tale of love, wrath, war, and rage in this villainous dark fantasy short story set in the furthest corner of space, and decide for yourself how far is too far for love.
Trigger Warnings: Violence, mild profanity, and character death
"A debut story from a talented force who writes like a veteran author. The Devourer’s Oath is packed with gripping adventure and impossible stakes, all within a lush, vibrant world. Lizabeth Phoenix is a writer to watch."
If you love someone, and something stands in the way of their last chance, is there anything you wouldn’t do to save them? For Norindra, Captain of The Sunfeaster, the answer is “No.” After winning a devastating intergalactic war, she and her crew of celestial pirates found no peace waiting for them. Her lover, Ryonn, has been gravely injured in a raid, and only one thing can save him now: the last Coreopsi–a planet with a golden core that she can use to heal his mortal wound. But when innocents stand between her and her lover’s life, protected by an ancient, near-immortal guardian, whose death will feed the Emptiness?
Experience a tale of love, wrath, war, and rage in this villainous dark fantasy short story set in the furthest corner of space, and decide for yourself how far is too far for love.
Trigger Warnings: Violence, mild profanity, and character death
29 pages, Kindle Edition
Published January 1, 2021
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About the author
Lizabeth Phoenix
2 books12 followersLizabeth Phoenix is the woman in the corner of the room, neck-deep in coffee, face buried in her beloved MacBook. She's also hatching wild plots, dreaming up dragon names, and charting time-traveler visits. Her life’s goal is to write morally midnight characters and battle-cry-worthy victories because light shines brightest in darkness.
When not writing or fighting the South Carolina heat, she spends hours immersed in the worlds of A Song of Ice and Fire and Elden Ring. One might say she's a little obsessed...
When not writing or fighting the South Carolina heat, she spends hours immersed in the worlds of A Song of Ice and Fire and Elden Ring. One might say she's a little obsessed...
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March 20, 2025
Daaamn! I was so lost at first, but then daaaaamn! This is a dive into something bigger. The author did a great job telling a story cohesive enough for you to understand what's going on, but cryptic enough to make you curious about what's not revealed yet. The fact that I got attached to the characters in just 26 pages is impressive. I loved this sneak peek into this new universe.
February 10, 2022
The Devourer's Oath is a fast-paced, full of detail story and with a very intriguing question, such "What would you do to safe your loved ones?". Meaning: how far are you willing to go for them? So, of course, Norindra, the MC, could be read as more of a villain, than a hero. Though, the more you read, the more you're unsure who's the actual villain in this universe.
And, talking about the universe, I want to credit Phoenix for her creativity. It was little, but the universe of Norindra felt so real. The different worlds and its people, the backstory of it all that is leading our characters to their destination...
I also enjoyed Norindra's and Ryonn's relationship. I would have liked to know more, but what we get made me smile for them.
I would like to say more: talk about Norindra's abilities, the battle, everything, but I want you to enjoy it without knowing much and, then, getting hooked in by the story (or, at least, that's what happened to me😅😅). I mean, it was short, but it felt like a lifetime adventure. Nevertheless, you could say I *devoured* The Devourer's Oath in one afternoon 😉. What's that? People leaving because that wasn't funny? Oh mate, I guess I'm sorry (not really).
Ejem, returning to the point: I really liked Phoenix's short story. It captivated me. It was not very hard to follow. The universe and emotions felt vivid. And I really recommend it if you enjoy villains MC/more dark leaning characters like me (mix up with my sci-fi/fantasy🙌).
And, talking about the universe, I want to credit Phoenix for her creativity. It was little, but the universe of Norindra felt so real. The different worlds and its people, the backstory of it all that is leading our characters to their destination...
I also enjoyed Norindra's and Ryonn's relationship. I would have liked to know more, but what we get made me smile for them.
I would like to say more: talk about Norindra's abilities, the battle, everything, but I want you to enjoy it without knowing much and, then, getting hooked in by the story (or, at least, that's what happened to me😅😅). I mean, it was short, but it felt like a lifetime adventure. Nevertheless, you could say I *devoured* The Devourer's Oath in one afternoon 😉. What's that? People leaving because that wasn't funny? Oh mate, I guess I'm sorry (not really).
Ejem, returning to the point: I really liked Phoenix's short story. It captivated me. It was not very hard to follow. The universe and emotions felt vivid. And I really recommend it if you enjoy villains MC/more dark leaning characters like me (mix up with my sci-fi/fantasy🙌).
February 8, 2022
𝐈 𝐰𝐨𝐮𝐥𝐝 𝐥𝐢𝐤𝐞 𝐭𝐨 𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐫𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐫𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰 𝐛𝐲 𝐬𝐚𝐲𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐭𝐡𝐚𝐭 𝐈 𝐫𝐞𝐜𝐞𝐢𝐯𝐞𝐝 𝐚𝐧 𝐀𝐑𝐂 𝐟𝐫𝐨𝐦 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐚𝐮𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐫 𝐡𝐞𝐫𝐬𝐞𝐥𝐟‧ 𝐀𝐥𝐥 𝐦𝐲 𝐨𝐩𝐢𝐧𝐢𝐨𝐧𝐬 𝐚𝐫𝐞 𝐦𝐲 𝐨𝐰𝐧‧
Some months ago I saw on Jenna Moreci's instagram that an author was looking for beta readers for her short story and it had the word I most love: villainous. And so I was a beta reader for the author. I'm not really a fan of reading science fiction and I was a bit worried this read would be hard to understand and I would lose track of what was happening and therefore wouldn't enjoy it. That wasn't the case. While there were some terms I didn't know, it really didn't affect my reading or pulled me away from what was happening.
This short story was so good, and it delivers exactly what it promises: villainous and a morally gray character who will do anything to save the person she loves the most. Even risk others *****.
Fast paced and with a lot of action since the first word. I enjoyed it a lot, I loved Norindra and her interactions with Ryonn and Sophos, but my favourite character is Matyra. All of them stood out of the page, alive. My heart was in a fist during some scenes...and in the end I was and felt really satisfied. I honestly hope we get more of this world and characters.
Thank you Lizabeth for allowing me to be a beta reader and then an ARC reader.
Some months ago I saw on Jenna Moreci's instagram that an author was looking for beta readers for her short story and it had the word I most love: villainous. And so I was a beta reader for the author. I'm not really a fan of reading science fiction and I was a bit worried this read would be hard to understand and I would lose track of what was happening and therefore wouldn't enjoy it. That wasn't the case. While there were some terms I didn't know, it really didn't affect my reading or pulled me away from what was happening.
This short story was so good, and it delivers exactly what it promises: villainous and a morally gray character who will do anything to save the person she loves the most. Even risk others *****.
Fast paced and with a lot of action since the first word. I enjoyed it a lot, I loved Norindra and her interactions with Ryonn and Sophos, but my favourite character is Matyra. All of them stood out of the page, alive. My heart was in a fist during some scenes...and in the end I was and felt really satisfied. I honestly hope we get more of this world and characters.
Thank you Lizabeth for allowing me to be a beta reader and then an ARC reader.
October 15, 2023
*I was given the opportunity to Beta read this story and later purchased on my own!”
It has been a long time since I traveled the vast galaxy on a pirate spaceship, and yet, these characters have stuck with me ever since the first time I read this story! Truth be told, we need more FMC who are willing to do whatever (and I mean WHATEVER) it takes to show their love interest how much they’d do to keep them alive.
This author wasted no time dropping us into a story that sinks you deep into a world of tough choices and lost souls! It’ll make you wish it wasn’t a short story.
I want more from this author and soon because after this small taste of gold, there’s no way you won’t want more!
It has been a long time since I traveled the vast galaxy on a pirate spaceship, and yet, these characters have stuck with me ever since the first time I read this story! Truth be told, we need more FMC who are willing to do whatever (and I mean WHATEVER) it takes to show their love interest how much they’d do to keep them alive.
This author wasted no time dropping us into a story that sinks you deep into a world of tough choices and lost souls! It’ll make you wish it wasn’t a short story.
I want more from this author and soon because after this small taste of gold, there’s no way you won’t want more!
October 20, 2023
Amazing Short Story 😍
For fans of Sci-Fi Fantasy, The Devourer's Oath is an absolute must-read! From the very beginning, Lizabeth's masterful use of imagery captivates you and immerses you in the story. Prepare to be enthralled by a tale of love with a dark twist, where you'll find yourself rooting for the seemingly monstrous Noriandra who would go to great lengths, even destroying worlds, for the sake of love. This book embraces the thrilling trope of "I will destroy worlds for my love," and I, for one, wholeheartedly embrace it!
If you're seeking an entertaining and fast-paced read infused with emotional depth, I highly recommend giving it a go!
I expect great things from this author.
For fans of Sci-Fi Fantasy, The Devourer's Oath is an absolute must-read! From the very beginning, Lizabeth's masterful use of imagery captivates you and immerses you in the story. Prepare to be enthralled by a tale of love with a dark twist, where you'll find yourself rooting for the seemingly monstrous Noriandra who would go to great lengths, even destroying worlds, for the sake of love. This book embraces the thrilling trope of "I will destroy worlds for my love," and I, for one, wholeheartedly embrace it!
If you're seeking an entertaining and fast-paced read infused with emotional depth, I highly recommend giving it a go!
I expect great things from this author.
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