**Actually a 2.5-rating**
Something about this feels a little "off". Don't get me wrong, this novella is typical Adams.
But, the bigger issue is this might be a first premise where the relationship is well-established PRE opening of the book. Yet, in the midst of this befuddlement of a couple...we are thrown into a night of post uber-great, mega-awesome sex, then it's a few days before there is a ultra-cheesy romantic proposal.
Hero claims fairytale love ( to heroine ) for a fairytale wedding to dive into a fairytale marriage. All this time, the heroine walks around in some fugue state.
This is a singular POV, from the heroine, but I kinda wanted something from the Hero. Only being allowed to bear witness to him through HER disoriented stance, post saying "yes", was a depravement of so much more honesty. Which was what the heroine craved from the Hero.
She had BIG issues that scared her, but we are unclear exactly what was wrong because she's been mainlining the Hero for literally a month, enmeshed in nothing but OUT-OF-THIS-WORLD sex, being treated like his perfect companion, possibly being treated like a princess by a rich society man. We know she feels weird about her "place", being that her childhood was largely having been raised in foster care.
And, so...it makes sense that one discussion from S.I.L. and Hero's Mom sent her into a tailspin...BUT RIGHT ON THE WEDDING DAY!! Hours from the wedding?!?!
My fear was the heroine dove so deep into Hero's world she simply couldn't breathe from drowning from being overtaken. I don't know if I can believe any genuine emotions of care/love from these two as every scene felt like they were always 3seconds from jumping into bed...
...also the co-dependency...or basing feelings on plain sexual chemistry and quantum satisfaction from "said" sex-had felt...awkward. It felt empty.
I want to trust this does end well, but I still feel odd about their emotions because I am unsure what they get from each other except great sex and release.
Their conversations were aggravatingly repetitive and also short-stunted & monosyllabic...like they never had a deep, difficult talk...EVER.
Too busy having five orgasms in a row...