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Fighting For Life
Aubry and her parents’ involvement with a drug syndicate has made her life miserable. Struggling to keep up her studies until graduation, she is forced to sell drugs to make ends meet. Her abusive father steals the drugs she intends to trade, making her drown in debt when her boss discovers her secret.
Desperate, she joins The Underground, a high-paying illegal fighting club where she meets her popular classmate Aiden Clark and asks him to train her. Unexpectedly, a special friendship develops, and Aiden finds himself wanting to protect the girl he initially detests.
Will she win the fight and finally set herself free from her undesirable life? Can she keep her friendship with Aiden without being haunted by her past?
[Trigger Warning: The following story contain mentions of abuse, drugs, and self-harm. Reader discretion is advised.]
Desperate, she joins The Underground, a high-paying illegal fighting club where she meets her popular classmate Aiden Clark and asks him to train her. Unexpectedly, a special friendship develops, and Aiden finds himself wanting to protect the girl he initially detests.
Will she win the fight and finally set herself free from her undesirable life? Can she keep her friendship with Aiden without being haunted by her past?
[Trigger Warning: The following story contain mentions of abuse, drugs, and self-harm. Reader discretion is advised.]
724 pages, Paperback
Published January 1, 2021
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February 26, 2024
Could not put it down finished it at one day it was so gooddddd def one of the best books i reead i laughed.cried.kicked my feet did everything u could think of already want to forget it and read it fir the first time again😭😭😭😭😭💖💖💖💖
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i did read it again and i loved it even more i finished it in 2 days i absolutely love this book🤭💗💗💗💗💗
UPDATE
i did read it again and i loved it even more i finished it in 2 days i absolutely love this book🤭💗💗💗💗💗
November 11, 2023
I SWEAR I’m emotionally attached to this book. It’s been years since I’ve read it on wattpad for the first time and I’ve read it multiple times since and I just can’t get enough of this book. Aubry and Aiden will always have my heart (and Brandon because without him…… 💔)
June 14, 2023
I started reading this and God was it hurtful to read. So much happened to the main female character, I loved her for being so strong and never giving up. This is what I love reading in a novel. I expect authors to not make the women rely upon others
January 25, 2024
i don’t know how to feel about this book. for a Wattpad book, it was good. but as a published book, not so much. i hoped for some serious editing in the kindle version, but i was disappointed 😐.
this book is way too long and very repetitive. i love dual POVs—but the author does this thing where she repeats dialogue/events that just happened in Aubrey’s pov, THEN AGAIN in aiden’s pov. or vice versa. once in a while this is fine, and usually even helps paint the scene the author is trying to portray better. especially if it’s a climactic moment—it’s cool to hear both sides. but that’s not how it’s used at all, and it just got way too confusing after awhile.
like i said, i think the plot is honestly very interesting, heartbreaking and i was rooting for Aubry all the way through. but it just wasn’t executed well.
aubrey’s story was painful, and like i said i was rooting for her the entire book. but after awhile, the constant traumatic situations were so repetitive, i just couldn’t take it seriously anymore. i know it’s a book—but from how tiny aubrey is described as, there’s no way she would have survived her physical injuries she sustains OR been able to fight in any capacity 🙃 i mean this girl was constantly bleeding, had broken bones, scabs all over; she was a mess! it just made no sense to me. also she was living on the streets for months, completely disheveled (?). how is she alive? how does she somehow still look so gorgeous, even if she was beaten to a pulp 2 pages before (?) bizarre.
also, why is every man in this book besides Aiden either a r*pist, an abuser or a hater? again, it’s just over the top with the trauma. it was unnecessary. it was more for shock value than progressing the plot. a lot of these events that happen to aubrey, could have been omitted. and instead, spend more time exploring single painful events more in depth little by little.
overall, i liked aubrey’s resilience as the FMC a lot! aiden was kind of a prick imo. but his family is so pure, especially when they take her in after finding her freezing to death on a bench.
like i said, for a wattpad level read it’s good. but that’s about it . tries way too hard to be edgy.
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𝐨𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐚𝐥𝐥 𝐫𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠: 3 stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️
𝐬𝐩𝐢𝐜𝐞: none
𝐭𝐫𝐨𝐩𝐞𝐬: enemies (kinda?) to lovers
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💭𝘪’𝘮 𝘢 𝘭𝘪𝘤𝘦𝘯𝘴𝘦𝘥 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘳𝘢𝘱𝘪𝘴𝘵, 𝘴𝘰 𝘪 𝘵𝘦𝘯𝘥 𝘵𝘰 𝘰𝘷𝘦𝘳-𝘢𝘯𝘢𝘭𝘺𝘻𝘦 𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘳𝘺𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘪𝘯 𝘮𝘺 𝘭𝘪𝘧𝘦—𝘪𝘯𝘤𝘭𝘶𝘥𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘣𝘰𝘰𝘬𝘴 𝘰𝘧 𝘢𝘭𝘭 𝘬𝘪𝘯𝘥. 𝘮𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘢𝘭 𝘪𝘭𝘭𝘯𝘦𝘴𝘴 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘵𝘳𝘢𝘶𝘮𝘢 𝘩𝘢𝘷𝘦 𝘣𝘦𝘤𝘰𝘮𝘦 𝘴𝘰 𝘤𝘰𝘮𝘮𝘰𝘯 𝘪𝘯 𝘭𝘪𝘵𝘦𝘳𝘢𝘵𝘶𝘳𝘦 𝘯𝘰𝘸𝘢𝘥𝘢𝘺𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘪 𝘸𝘢𝘯𝘵 𝘵𝘰 𝘰𝘧𝘧𝘦𝘳 𝘢 𝘶𝘯𝘪𝘲𝘶𝘦 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘳𝘢𝘱𝘪𝘴𝘵-𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘥𝘦𝘳 𝘱𝘦𝘳𝘴𝘱𝘦𝘤𝘵𝘪𝘷𝘦 𝘪𝘯 𝘮𝘺 𝘳𝘦𝘷𝘪𝘦𝘸𝘴. 𝘰𝘣𝘷, 𝘮𝘺 𝘰𝘱𝘪𝘯𝘪𝘰𝘯𝘴 𝘢𝘳𝘦 𝘮𝘺 𝘰𝘸𝘯. 𝘣𝘶𝘵 𝘪’𝘮 𝘯𝘰𝘵 𝘫𝘶𝘴𝘵 𝘢 𝘳𝘰𝘣𝘰𝘵 𝘸𝘪𝘵𝘩 𝘢 𝘥𝘦𝘨𝘳𝘦𝘦. 𝘪’𝘮 𝘢 𝘩𝘶𝘮𝘢𝘯 𝘸𝘩𝘰 𝘩𝘢𝘴 𝘮𝘺 𝘰𝘸𝘯 𝘣𝘢𝘨𝘨𝘢𝘨𝘦…𝘴𝘰 𝘪 𝘸𝘢𝘯𝘵 𝘵𝘰 𝘣𝘦 𝘢𝘴 𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘭 𝘢𝘴 𝘱𝘰𝘴𝘴𝘪𝘣𝘭𝘦. 𝘵𝘰 𝘣𝘰𝘵𝘩 𝘱𝘳𝘰𝘵𝘦𝘤𝘵 𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘥𝘦𝘳𝘴 𝘴𝘵𝘳𝘶𝘨𝘨𝘭𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘈𝘕𝘋 𝘵𝘰 𝘢𝘭𝘴𝘰 𝘰𝘧𝘧𝘦𝘳 𝘢 𝘱𝘳𝘰𝘧𝘦𝘴𝘴𝘪𝘰𝘯𝘢𝘭 𝘷𝘪𝘦𝘸𝘱𝘰𝘪𝘯𝘵. 𝘪’𝘷𝘦 𝘤𝘰𝘮𝘦 𝘵𝘰 𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘭𝘪𝘻𝘦 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘮𝘢𝘯𝘺 𝘢𝘶𝘵𝘩𝘰𝘳𝘴 𝘢𝘳𝘦 𝘶𝘯𝘦𝘥𝘶𝘤𝘢𝘵𝘦𝘥 𝘢𝘣𝘰𝘶𝘵 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘭𝘪𝘵𝘺 𝘰𝘧 𝘩𝘰𝘸 𝘢 𝘮𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘢𝘭𝘭𝘺 𝘪𝘭𝘭 𝘰𝘳 𝘵𝘳𝘢𝘶𝘮𝘢𝘵𝘪𝘻𝘦𝘥 𝘱𝘦𝘳𝘴𝘰𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘬𝘴 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘢𝘤𝘵𝘴. 𝘪𝘯𝘢𝘤𝘤𝘶𝘳𝘢𝘵𝘦 𝘱𝘰𝘳𝘵𝘳𝘢𝘺𝘢𝘭𝘴 𝘤𝘢𝘯 𝘣𝘦 𝘱𝘳𝘦𝘵𝘵𝘺 𝘥𝘢𝘮𝘢𝘨𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘤𝘢𝘯 𝘢𝘭𝘴𝘰 𝘴𝘱𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘥 𝘮𝘪𝘴𝘪𝘯𝘧𝘰𝘳𝘮𝘢𝘵𝘪𝘰𝘯, 𝘸𝘩𝘪𝘤𝘩 𝘪𝘴 𝘯𝘰𝘵 𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘥 𝘢𝘵 𝘢𝘭𝘭.
𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙣𝙠 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙛𝙤𝙧 𝙨𝙩𝙞𝙘𝙠𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙖𝙧𝙤𝙪𝙣𝙙 & 𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙙𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙢𝙮 𝙧𝙖𝙢𝙗𝙡𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙩𝙞𝙡𝙡 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙚𝙣𝙙 💗✨
this book is way too long and very repetitive. i love dual POVs—but the author does this thing where she repeats dialogue/events that just happened in Aubrey’s pov, THEN AGAIN in aiden’s pov. or vice versa. once in a while this is fine, and usually even helps paint the scene the author is trying to portray better. especially if it’s a climactic moment—it’s cool to hear both sides. but that’s not how it’s used at all, and it just got way too confusing after awhile.
like i said, i think the plot is honestly very interesting, heartbreaking and i was rooting for Aubry all the way through. but it just wasn’t executed well.
aubrey’s story was painful, and like i said i was rooting for her the entire book. but after awhile, the constant traumatic situations were so repetitive, i just couldn’t take it seriously anymore. i know it’s a book—but from how tiny aubrey is described as, there’s no way she would have survived her physical injuries she sustains OR been able to fight in any capacity 🙃 i mean this girl was constantly bleeding, had broken bones, scabs all over; she was a mess! it just made no sense to me. also she was living on the streets for months, completely disheveled (?). how is she alive? how does she somehow still look so gorgeous, even if she was beaten to a pulp 2 pages before (?) bizarre.
also, why is every man in this book besides Aiden either a r*pist, an abuser or a hater? again, it’s just over the top with the trauma. it was unnecessary. it was more for shock value than progressing the plot. a lot of these events that happen to aubrey, could have been omitted. and instead, spend more time exploring single painful events more in depth little by little.
overall, i liked aubrey’s resilience as the FMC a lot! aiden was kind of a prick imo. but his family is so pure, especially when they take her in after finding her freezing to death on a bench.
like i said, for a wattpad level read it’s good. but that’s about it . tries way too hard to be edgy.
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𝐨𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐚𝐥𝐥 𝐫𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠: 3 stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️
𝐬𝐩𝐢𝐜𝐞: none
𝐭𝐫𝐨𝐩𝐞𝐬: enemies (kinda?) to lovers
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💭𝘪’𝘮 𝘢 𝘭𝘪𝘤𝘦𝘯𝘴𝘦𝘥 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘳𝘢𝘱𝘪𝘴𝘵, 𝘴𝘰 𝘪 𝘵𝘦𝘯𝘥 𝘵𝘰 𝘰𝘷𝘦𝘳-𝘢𝘯𝘢𝘭𝘺𝘻𝘦 𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘳𝘺𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘪𝘯 𝘮𝘺 𝘭𝘪𝘧𝘦—𝘪𝘯𝘤𝘭𝘶𝘥𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘣𝘰𝘰𝘬𝘴 𝘰𝘧 𝘢𝘭𝘭 𝘬𝘪𝘯𝘥. 𝘮𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘢𝘭 𝘪𝘭𝘭𝘯𝘦𝘴𝘴 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘵𝘳𝘢𝘶𝘮𝘢 𝘩𝘢𝘷𝘦 𝘣𝘦𝘤𝘰𝘮𝘦 𝘴𝘰 𝘤𝘰𝘮𝘮𝘰𝘯 𝘪𝘯 𝘭𝘪𝘵𝘦𝘳𝘢𝘵𝘶𝘳𝘦 𝘯𝘰𝘸𝘢𝘥𝘢𝘺𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘪 𝘸𝘢𝘯𝘵 𝘵𝘰 𝘰𝘧𝘧𝘦𝘳 𝘢 𝘶𝘯𝘪𝘲𝘶𝘦 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘳𝘢𝘱𝘪𝘴𝘵-𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘥𝘦𝘳 𝘱𝘦𝘳𝘴𝘱𝘦𝘤𝘵𝘪𝘷𝘦 𝘪𝘯 𝘮𝘺 𝘳𝘦𝘷𝘪𝘦𝘸𝘴. 𝘰𝘣𝘷, 𝘮𝘺 𝘰𝘱𝘪𝘯𝘪𝘰𝘯𝘴 𝘢𝘳𝘦 𝘮𝘺 𝘰𝘸𝘯. 𝘣𝘶𝘵 𝘪’𝘮 𝘯𝘰𝘵 𝘫𝘶𝘴𝘵 𝘢 𝘳𝘰𝘣𝘰𝘵 𝘸𝘪𝘵𝘩 𝘢 𝘥𝘦𝘨𝘳𝘦𝘦. 𝘪’𝘮 𝘢 𝘩𝘶𝘮𝘢𝘯 𝘸𝘩𝘰 𝘩𝘢𝘴 𝘮𝘺 𝘰𝘸𝘯 𝘣𝘢𝘨𝘨𝘢𝘨𝘦…𝘴𝘰 𝘪 𝘸𝘢𝘯𝘵 𝘵𝘰 𝘣𝘦 𝘢𝘴 𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘭 𝘢𝘴 𝘱𝘰𝘴𝘴𝘪𝘣𝘭𝘦. 𝘵𝘰 𝘣𝘰𝘵𝘩 𝘱𝘳𝘰𝘵𝘦𝘤𝘵 𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘥𝘦𝘳𝘴 𝘴𝘵𝘳𝘶𝘨𝘨𝘭𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘈𝘕𝘋 𝘵𝘰 𝘢𝘭𝘴𝘰 𝘰𝘧𝘧𝘦𝘳 𝘢 𝘱𝘳𝘰𝘧𝘦𝘴𝘴𝘪𝘰𝘯𝘢𝘭 𝘷𝘪𝘦𝘸𝘱𝘰𝘪𝘯𝘵. 𝘪’𝘷𝘦 𝘤𝘰𝘮𝘦 𝘵𝘰 𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘭𝘪𝘻𝘦 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘮𝘢𝘯𝘺 𝘢𝘶𝘵𝘩𝘰𝘳𝘴 𝘢𝘳𝘦 𝘶𝘯𝘦𝘥𝘶𝘤𝘢𝘵𝘦𝘥 𝘢𝘣𝘰𝘶𝘵 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘭𝘪𝘵𝘺 𝘰𝘧 𝘩𝘰𝘸 𝘢 𝘮𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘢𝘭𝘭𝘺 𝘪𝘭𝘭 𝘰𝘳 𝘵𝘳𝘢𝘶𝘮𝘢𝘵𝘪𝘻𝘦𝘥 𝘱𝘦𝘳𝘴𝘰𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘬𝘴 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘢𝘤𝘵𝘴. 𝘪𝘯𝘢𝘤𝘤𝘶𝘳𝘢𝘵𝘦 𝘱𝘰𝘳𝘵𝘳𝘢𝘺𝘢𝘭𝘴 𝘤𝘢𝘯 𝘣𝘦 𝘱𝘳𝘦𝘵𝘵𝘺 𝘥𝘢𝘮𝘢𝘨𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘤𝘢𝘯 𝘢𝘭𝘴𝘰 𝘴𝘱𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘥 𝘮𝘪𝘴𝘪𝘯𝘧𝘰𝘳𝘮𝘢𝘵𝘪𝘰𝘯, 𝘸𝘩𝘪𝘤𝘩 𝘪𝘴 𝘯𝘰𝘵 𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘥 𝘢𝘵 𝘢𝘭𝘭.
𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙣𝙠 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙛𝙤𝙧 𝙨𝙩𝙞𝙘𝙠𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙖𝙧𝙤𝙪𝙣𝙙 & 𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙙𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙢𝙮 𝙧𝙖𝙢𝙗𝙡𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙩𝙞𝙡𝙡 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙚𝙣𝙙 💗✨
December 5, 2021
It's decent read, however....
It is, actually, really really well though out book. It is interesting. It is entertaining. It is a book full of emotions. However....and I am really sorry...but execution of it is really poor. Although, there were no typing mistake as such, quarter of the word count could have been slashed. So this book is written in dual POV right...Author would finish one POV and start another POV exactly the same...like word to word...And then trail of though about something, on several occasions, same thought repeated twice in one paragraph...
Nevertheless, I read the book and I finished it...just because I loved the plot and it's development. By the way, it is a sloooow burner...and it was fine...it was not the main issue.
In my opinion, this book require professional editing...and then it will have a chance to do good.
Did I enjoy reading it...regardless few glitches, yes.
Would I recommend it to a friend...yes, but will warn them about its quality.
Would I read it again... no.
Rating: ⭐⭐⭐
If I would still 5 ⭐ in a half... I would give 2.5 ⭐ for plot and it's development (rounds up to 3⭐) . The other half would go to the execution and writting style... 0⭐
It is, actually, really really well though out book. It is interesting. It is entertaining. It is a book full of emotions. However....and I am really sorry...but execution of it is really poor. Although, there were no typing mistake as such, quarter of the word count could have been slashed. So this book is written in dual POV right...Author would finish one POV and start another POV exactly the same...like word to word...And then trail of though about something, on several occasions, same thought repeated twice in one paragraph...
Nevertheless, I read the book and I finished it...just because I loved the plot and it's development. By the way, it is a sloooow burner...and it was fine...it was not the main issue.
In my opinion, this book require professional editing...and then it will have a chance to do good.
Did I enjoy reading it...regardless few glitches, yes.
Would I recommend it to a friend...yes, but will warn them about its quality.
Would I read it again... no.
Rating: ⭐⭐⭐
If I would still 5 ⭐ in a half... I would give 2.5 ⭐ for plot and it's development (rounds up to 3⭐) . The other half would go to the execution and writting style... 0⭐
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November 20, 2024
The repeating never stops I can skin pages and still understand what's going on since what happens in the different povs is just repeated and there's no redemption arc the main character just defys all odds of being skinny and weak and untrained and just manages yo become the best fighter ever in a matter of weeks and yes can't seem to not have broken ribs for 5 minutes
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May 31, 2022
4 ⭐
Aubry and her parents’ involvement with a drug syndicate has made her life miserable. Struggling to keep up her studies until graduation, she is forced to sell drugs to make ends meet. Her abusive father steals the drugs she intends to trade, making her drown in debt when her boss discovers her secret.
Desperate, she joins The Underground, a high-paying illegal fighting club where she meets her popular classmate Aiden Clark and asks him to train her. Unexpectedly, a special friendship develops, and Aiden finds himself wanting to protect the girl he initially detests.
book contains mentions of abuse, drugs, and self-harm.
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When I first read this, I thought that I was going to hate it. The horrendous grammar mistakes and predictable characters was enough to make me stop reading but I still felt like there was something more to the book and I was giving up too quickly.. so I continued reading and eventually bought the rest of the book on amazon because the first part on Wattpad was a sample. I love the characters so much. The fact that they met on terms of blackmail and Aiden didn't want to spend time with Aubry makes their relationship so much sweeter when it turns out Aiden can't spend time away from her. I love Brandon, the fact that he was there for Aubry when everyone else hated her and refused to leave her by herself because he knew that there was more to her story 😭❤
I really love this book, at the beginning I didn't think I would even finish it but I did, and I'm glad I didn't stop reading because I can see this becoming a new comfort read in the future.
Aubry and her parents’ involvement with a drug syndicate has made her life miserable. Struggling to keep up her studies until graduation, she is forced to sell drugs to make ends meet. Her abusive father steals the drugs she intends to trade, making her drown in debt when her boss discovers her secret.
Desperate, she joins The Underground, a high-paying illegal fighting club where she meets her popular classmate Aiden Clark and asks him to train her. Unexpectedly, a special friendship develops, and Aiden finds himself wanting to protect the girl he initially detests.
book contains mentions of abuse, drugs, and self-harm.
***
When I first read this, I thought that I was going to hate it. The horrendous grammar mistakes and predictable characters was enough to make me stop reading but I still felt like there was something more to the book and I was giving up too quickly.. so I continued reading and eventually bought the rest of the book on amazon because the first part on Wattpad was a sample. I love the characters so much. The fact that they met on terms of blackmail and Aiden didn't want to spend time with Aubry makes their relationship so much sweeter when it turns out Aiden can't spend time away from her. I love Brandon, the fact that he was there for Aubry when everyone else hated her and refused to leave her by herself because he knew that there was more to her story 😭❤
I really love this book, at the beginning I didn't think I would even finish it but I did, and I'm glad I didn't stop reading because I can see this becoming a new comfort read in the future.
January 23, 2022
This book was originally available on Wattpad but I read it after it had officially been published by Typewriter Pub. I thought it was really entertaining! It had a lot of the elements that keep me hooked when I read a Wattpad story!
Still, it had other elements of Wattpad that brought the story down a bit. The writing was very immature and seemed unedited, which is to be expected by a story on Wattpad, but I was expecting the finished product to have a little more work put into it. There were many typos throughout the story.
It was also very repetitive, with lots of POV shifts that repeated each event word for word but added little to the story. I could usually guess Aubry's reaction to something by what she said and did, so an extra few pages going over the same exact conversation again seemed pointless. This made some parts of the story seem to drag on.
This does not mean I hated the book though! I would actually recommend it to people looking for a good Wattpad story to read! Kylie Alyssa Forte worked super hard to write this book, and she got it published! Not many authors (especially the ones from Wattpad) can say the same!! It is more well-written and has a fuller plot than most of the stories I read on Wattpad, and Fighting for Life would have been even better if it had been edited and refined more thoroughly.
Still, it had other elements of Wattpad that brought the story down a bit. The writing was very immature and seemed unedited, which is to be expected by a story on Wattpad, but I was expecting the finished product to have a little more work put into it. There were many typos throughout the story.
It was also very repetitive, with lots of POV shifts that repeated each event word for word but added little to the story. I could usually guess Aubry's reaction to something by what she said and did, so an extra few pages going over the same exact conversation again seemed pointless. This made some parts of the story seem to drag on.
This does not mean I hated the book though! I would actually recommend it to people looking for a good Wattpad story to read! Kylie Alyssa Forte worked super hard to write this book, and she got it published! Not many authors (especially the ones from Wattpad) can say the same!! It is more well-written and has a fuller plot than most of the stories I read on Wattpad, and Fighting for Life would have been even better if it had been edited and refined more thoroughly.
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December 23, 2023didn’t finish physical copy but finished wattpad version
idk how to feel🧍♀️ when i read this on wattpad it was one of my favorite books but reading the physical copy was starting to change my opinion
The writing was so bad, no edits i think it was just copy and paste to a physical version with no revisions
and the exclamation points really bothered me i tried to ignore it but there was exclamation points! every! single! time! to the point i couldn’t take the characters seriously
my favorite scene was when aiden found aubry on a bench while it was snowing and he was so worried
i do remember it had a good plot twist, i think it was demetri (the drug dealer she owes money to) being her real dad or something like that?
and then i recall her sister came back
idk how to feel🧍♀️ when i read this on wattpad it was one of my favorite books but reading the physical copy was starting to change my opinion
The writing was so bad, no edits i think it was just copy and paste to a physical version with no revisions
and the exclamation points really bothered me i tried to ignore it but there was exclamation points! every! single! time! to the point i couldn’t take the characters seriously
my favorite scene was when aiden found aubry on a bench while it was snowing and he was so worried
i do remember it had a good plot twist, i think it was demetri (the drug dealer she owes money to) being her real dad or something like that?
and then i recall her sister came back
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February 8, 2025
I read this book as it was released on wattpad and it will forever have a special place in my heart. Its not the best book thats ever been released but it is still one of my favorites. I loved the story and it had a happy ending that made the emotional roller-coaster worth it
September 21, 2022
The good
The 2stars are based on the fact that there was a plot and the actual writing was good. The author does have the ability to write well and tell a story and some of the pages did keep me engaged.
The bad
700 pages of repetitions - this book droned on and on .... it could have been done in 300 pages. The fact that there is so much of drama with the FMC actually took away any empathy I started to feel for her. The beatings and broken ribs were just unrealistic. I skimmed through most of this book and did not even bother with the epilogue.
Sorry I did not provide a review of the actual story .... but really there are other angsty emotional reads out there that are not as repetitive or monotonous as this one.
To the author : from the plot and the writing style you do have potential. However just filling up pages and lengthening the book just made this read unpleasant. I wish you the best going forward and hopefully any other new books you publish will not have this issue.
The 2stars are based on the fact that there was a plot and the actual writing was good. The author does have the ability to write well and tell a story and some of the pages did keep me engaged.
The bad
700 pages of repetitions - this book droned on and on .... it could have been done in 300 pages. The fact that there is so much of drama with the FMC actually took away any empathy I started to feel for her. The beatings and broken ribs were just unrealistic. I skimmed through most of this book and did not even bother with the epilogue.
Sorry I did not provide a review of the actual story .... but really there are other angsty emotional reads out there that are not as repetitive or monotonous as this one.
To the author : from the plot and the writing style you do have potential. However just filling up pages and lengthening the book just made this read unpleasant. I wish you the best going forward and hopefully any other new books you publish will not have this issue.
December 25, 2022
i feel bad giving this book a two stars, but i think it fits. first off, why was this so long?? its literally 700 pages of nothingness. i feel like the story should have just ended somewhere around chapter 30 or so.
dont get me wrong, the beginning was really interesting, but then it started getting a little repetitive. there was just so much yet so little.
i am glad that there was character development for aiden cuz he was a real dick in the beginning. i do think that brianna’s story is interesting tho. and cece is ADORABLE.
the book wasn’t even edited as there were wayyy too many spelling and grammer mistakes, like far too many. i did DNF this so i dont know what happens in the end.
one more thing i have to say is i absolutely hated the dual povs. usually, i love them. but in this book there would be two povs on the same situation, and like i said, it was getting repetitive.
if anyone has read this book, tell me if i should finish it. also daniel and his gang can go die.
dont get me wrong, the beginning was really interesting, but then it started getting a little repetitive. there was just so much yet so little.
i am glad that there was character development for aiden cuz he was a real dick in the beginning. i do think that brianna’s story is interesting tho. and cece is ADORABLE.
the book wasn’t even edited as there were wayyy too many spelling and grammer mistakes, like far too many. i did DNF this so i dont know what happens in the end.
one more thing i have to say is i absolutely hated the dual povs. usually, i love them. but in this book there would be two povs on the same situation, and like i said, it was getting repetitive.
if anyone has read this book, tell me if i should finish it. also daniel and his gang can go die.
June 1, 2022
I started this book on wattpad before I realised the author cut off the last half of the book. I was hooked during the first half of the book but when I found the rest of the book online I started to notice that the published version hadn't been edited. The writing was very wattpad and tried to sound professional ig, but it was just unnecessarily long. I got around 3/4 of the way through but I can no longer bring myself to keep reading it even though I do want to know what happens to them. The inner monologue in the characters was also cringy at times, as was the rest of the book (that I read).
December 3, 2024
i first read this book when it was still on Wattpad and i reread it several times on the platform. i never realized just how long this book was. it absolutely 100% did not need to be this long. a third of it could have been cut out and no plot or major development would have been lost. typos and grammar mistakes galore. it’s not an incredibly well written book by any means
despite that, i really do enjoy this book as a quick read (now that i’ve read it a few times and know which parts i can skim/skip) the satisfies the need for angsty, slow burn, and lots of trauma 💀
hoping someday this author will re-publish with some editing
despite that, i really do enjoy this book as a quick read (now that i’ve read it a few times and know which parts i can skim/skip) the satisfies the need for angsty, slow burn, and lots of trauma 💀
hoping someday this author will re-publish with some editing
January 8, 2023
I started this book on wattpad and immediately got hooked to it. I loved most of the good characters like Tommy and Brandon but Aiden sort of got on my nerves.
The way Aiden’s thought process was freaked me out a bit when the story was told in his perspective. Also when he kicked her out of his house because she “killed his dad” was absolutely insane since he knew she was homeless, like he could have at least asked one of his friends to look after her or give her a place to live.
I really enjoyed the relationship Aubry had with Tommy, Brandon, Cece, and partly Briana.
The way Aiden’s thought process was freaked me out a bit when the story was told in his perspective. Also when he kicked her out of his house because she “killed his dad” was absolutely insane since he knew she was homeless, like he could have at least asked one of his friends to look after her or give her a place to live.
I really enjoyed the relationship Aubry had with Tommy, Brandon, Cece, and partly Briana.
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October 6, 2021
this book will stay with me for the rest of my life! For the first time, I finished a thick book and thought... I want to know more! Aubry, how you did the things you did while facing the things you had no other choice but to face amazed me. I AM ABSOLUTELY IN LOVE WITH AIDEN AND THE WAY HE WAS ALWAYS THERE FOR AUBRY MADE ME LOVE HIM EVEN MORE! Anyways read the book you'll love it because I sure as hell did!
February 25, 2022
I remember this book from the wattpad days. It was a great book then and it’s a great book now. Love Aubry and Aidens relationship. Even though Aubrey was the one that sold Aidens dad the drugs that he overdosed on. I don’t understand why people would ever hate her for that when the dad was the one taking them. He took the drugs, and she was just trying to make it to see tomorrow. Loved this book and proud of the author since she was able to get it published.
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March 22, 2024
there’s like a 20 chapter sample of this out on wattpad and i read that about 3 years ago and have been searching for the book ever since to finally finish it. and guess what I FINALLY FOUND IT. the book was pretty good too. it just didn’t need to be as long as it is and it kind of made me cringe and get second hand embarrassment and had very weird pacing but i liked the story. i’m still in shock ive finally finished it after three years.
August 18, 2024
I originally read the beginning of this book on Wattpad, and REALLY loved it so much to buy the rest of the book. Don’t get me wrong, the idea and plot of the book is AMAZING. I love the idea of the drug syndicate and an enemies to lovers trope. But the writing style and characters drive me up the wall. The writing style is so very Wattpad and you can really tell. And the characters are so cringy I had to constantly take breaks from ready this book. Good plot, bad characters/writing.
January 11, 2025
Good story line, but seriously the author just kept dragging everything out and the majority of the book was pure rambling. This should not have been a 700+ paged book, it could have easily been a 300-400 paged story.
The story it self was pretty good, the author sure knows how to connect you to the characters and really feel the roller-coaster of emotions.
But seriously, there was so much unnecessary rambling, it was painful.
The story it self was pretty good, the author sure knows how to connect you to the characters and really feel the roller-coaster of emotions.
But seriously, there was so much unnecessary rambling, it was painful.
May 4, 2022
This would have to be on my favourite books list. It was Phenomenal. My eyes certainly hated me for the number of hours I couldn't put this book down or how many tears leaked out of them. The length of this book was one of it's biggest assets as it gave the time to explore Aiden and Aubry's relationship and the journey it took them on. So sad, but so beautiful.
January 7, 2022
honestly it was so good i read this online originally and wanted it so much when it became a book although i loved it some of the things are dark so check tw before reading because it can go deep into sensitive topics
March 17, 2022
Im dnfing this bcs of how long it is. But I read most of it so I'm just going to mark it as finished. I only recommend it if your okay with it being long. I liked the first half better but it was good.
March 30, 2022
Great story line with plot twist and the really really cool mc but every time she’s left alone she gets herself in trouble no sens of self-preservation whatsoever, kinda heartbreaking at times but it’s balanced
Overall a great book :)
Overall a great book :)
May 2, 2022
I could not put this book for the life of me, it was a lot of pages but there was never a dull moment. This story was tense but I loved the couple and love story soooooo much. Definitely one of my favorite book couples! ❤️
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May 9, 2022Sehr gutes Buch, der Inhalt ist super spannend. Das Buch hat definitiv Suchtpotential. Leider ist es an manchen Stellen nicht allzu gut geschrieben, der super Inhalt gleicht dies allerdings wieder aus. Kann ich nur weiter empfehlen, vor allem wenn man sich für Kampfsport, etc. interessiert.
May 17, 2022
This book was more than anything I could have imagined . It had me sobbing one minute and dying laughing another. This beautiful book has changed my perspective on so many things and made me more grateful for what I have. This is a must read.
November 5, 2022
i loved this book i first read it on wattpad to begin with and i literally cried when i got it for christmas i was so happy 😭😭😭 this book is dark like with drugs suicide and self harming but the way it portrays it and her emotions is really good.
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January 8, 2023
OMG! this book 😭 this is the first book i’ve read in over a month and i loved it. the couple dynamic in this book reminded me a lot of johnny and shannon from binding/keeping 13 just a little darker so make sure you look up tws!
aubrey and aiden are the definition of soulmates 🥹
aubrey and aiden are the definition of soulmates 🥹
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