Book Review: Coming Dawn (Devin Gray #2) by Steven Konkoly
Published by Thomas & Mercer, October 25, 2022
★★★☆☆ (3.25 Stars)
Flashback to Steven Konkoly's Devin Gray Book 1 "Deep Sleep" (Feb. 1, 2022), which sets the tone.
Enemies from within!
It opens with the promise of a sensational Russian "sleeper" spy program reminiscent of those classic cold war themes a la John le Carré /Richard Condon, decades in development, deeply concealed with training camps in the Ozarks.
Sleeper agents, hundreds upon hundreds over three generations infiltrating into the highest levels of government (the US Senate), the US Defense Industry, and academia.
This was a story, I thought, that had legs, quite relevant and could go far.
However...
Devin Gray Book 2 "Coming Dawn" (October 25, 2022).
Gone is the theme of deep Russian sleeper agent infiltrations.
Instead, what is served in three-quarters of the book is a humdrum protracted skirmish of attrition (nobody wins) between negligible forces, irrelevant in the greater scheme of things.
We are treated to spy-by-committee discussions with indecisive peons - on both sides (what to eat for dinner comes in several times, for God's sake), and learn that the main protagonist, Devin Gray himself, is a teeny blot in the landscape imperiled with jail time with the female Marine helicopter pilot teetered to his belt as an accessory love interest.
Who is writing this stuff?
The prose certainly doesn't feel like a Konkoly adrenalin-pumped military thriller.
We even see the insertion of women's reproductive healthcare rights, sheltering at risk women, the gender-pay-disparity, workplace discrimination. Plus a segue to an obscure country in the Black Sea, certainly in today's headlines with a beleaguered senile excuse for an American C-I-C, the least said of which, the better.
It's as though Steven Konkoly has suddenly decided to pander to a certain readership market alien to his military thriller readers.
Quite a disappointment.
Review based on an advanced reading copy courtesy of Thomas & Mercer and NetGalley.