I only recently discovered this author's books when I read THE ACCIDENT. since I loved that, I then read TOO CLOSE TO HOME and loved it too. I then started reading this clunker and was surprised to find that Barclay had written such a dud.
The book begins with look back 25 years into the past when then 14 year old wild child Cynthia wakes up the morning after she had been found making out and drinking in a car with an older boy by her dad Clayton. Once home, she runs upstairs yelling back to dad Clayton and mom Patricia that she hates them and wishes they were dead. She is surprised to find her parents' and even her older brother Todd's beds made up, no one home, no note saying where her mom has gone ( Mom always leaves one.) and no breakfast fixings. At school, the guy she was caught with asks where Todd is. Cynthia had presumed he had been driven to school by their mom and that their mom went shopping afterwards and that her dad is off to one of his trips (he travels a lot in his work.) but now she realizes something is wrong. She rushes home and her neighbor calls the police. One cop suspects she had done something to the family.
Fast forward 25 years and Cynthia is married to high school English teacher Terry and is the mom of 8 year old Grace. They live a short distance from the home everyone disappeared from (she had gone to live with her mother's sister Aunt Tess after that happened)and she works part time in the dress shop of her old friend from high school Pamela.
The crime-stopper program DEADLINE is filming a segment of what happened to her 25 years ago in hopes of breaking the cold case and finding out what happened. Unfortunately it does not bring in any calls but it does disturb something from the past.
What don't I like about this book by an author I do enjoy reading? Here are a few reasons:
(1) I did not like or even empathize with any of the characters. I love children but 8-year-old Grace does nothing but whine about the fact that her mother walks her to school instead of letting her walk alone. She is a pip. It is constant through the book and terribly annoying. I didn't like the young or the grown up Cynthia who has a personality that alternates from a nutcase to a zombie. Who would date this woman, marry her, want to father kids with her? Well, obviously Terry who is so boring who would want him anyway? Mr. Perfect has his hands full with these two females. It is never good when you kind of what somebody bad to get hold of the whole lot of them and shake them up some.
(2) For a high school English teacher, Terry is woefully lacking in grammar, usage, and language skills. Wouldn't he know that it should be "Grace and I went to the store." rather than "Me and Grace went to the store."? He also uses, and has Grace saying, "fox pass" for "faux pas". I would think that a teacher would want to speak properly in front of his own kids and teach her to do the same. In class also, he both uses profanity and allows his students to write it in their assignments which schools do not allow.
(3) The back story of Cynthia's dad defies belief. It turns out that when he was young, he had been tricked into marriage by a truly evil woman named Enid who had pretended to be pregnant. She then faked a miscarriage (the doctor told him there was no pregnancy nor miscarriage). He stayed with her though he had grounds (in those days you needed grounds) for an annulment because of fraud but he stayed and they had a son Jeremy. Enid was obsessed with the child, kept Clayton from having a relationship with him, and turned him against his dad.
Unhappy Clayton met Patricia on a business trip, fell in love, and married her (yes, still married to Enid). The problem here is that he got fake ID but we are to believe that the marriage license bureau for the state would not check the ID with the driver's license office (they DO check). We are also to believe that while he lived in New York with Enid and Jeremy, he also maintained a household in Connecticut with Patricia and their 2 kids Todd and Cynthia using fake ID. In 26 years he never got stopped by cops on the road. Though the last names were different- how did he pay taxes? How did he get insurance in two names? There are many little practical things the author did not think through.
(4) What happened on the day Cynthia's family disappeared is also a flight of fancy. Enid has found a phone bill from the home Clayton shared with Patricia and their kids.She checked things out and found out he was a bigamist and saw Patricia and Todd (but not Cynthia). Todd looks just like Clayton and also Enid's own son Jeremy. We are to believe that this forty-something woman followed Patricia and Todd to the store in broad daylight and cut their throats with no struggle and no one seeing her do it, called Clayton to come help her dispose of the bodies, then forced him to come with her, never travel anymore, and never follow up on Cynthia. Honestly! If I had gotten a call like that, I would have gone where she was with the bodies, police in tow!! Surely no guy is that stupid!
(5) The school principal Rolly is near retirement age and we find that he, Terry's boss, has also killed several people which of course Terry uncovers and is almost killed by him too.
(6) Clayton's will leaves everything to Cynthia. Enid somehow felt suspicious (why?) and gets the lawyer's secretary to show it to her. She and Jeremy then set out to kill Cynthia and Grace and then Clayton and Terry as well.
You would think all of this would be very exciting but frankly I couldn't care less about any of the characters and was distracted by the little details and lack of reality too much to buy it as real. Not recommended.