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Immoral
The first time Story sees Joe, she is in the middle of a crowded dance floor, making out with three people. Story and Joe are shameless nymphomaniacs who meet and bond over their sexual encounters. His dirty little secret begins to haunt his thoughts. She shows up in his dreams at night. What is supposed to be a hook-up takes a dangerous turn into something more, and he isn't ready.
248 pages, Kindle Edition
Published December 31, 2021
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February 8, 2022
Two crazy characters and two more crazy beings are combined in this book to provide a narrative so unique and engaging that it's hard to put down
The writing in this book has the potential to be considered too basic and simplistic, yet there is something about it that I find captivating. I can't even begin to describe how dysfunctional the book is. It's a train wreck from beginning to end, yet I find myself utterly fascinated by it.
Despite the complete lack of sense in the storyline, I was deeply moved by this book. It hit me at multiple points.
Throughout the book, the most important thing is demonstrating the emotions of the main character. Another theme I like is that of choice. It's up to us to choose who we want to be. But sometimes we need a helping hand to make good decisions.
In the beginning of the book I really didn't have any idea what a thrillride I would go on, and I didn't realize how drastically it would change a lot of my perceptions about books that make no sense.
Story was a character I really liked on a personal level. I enjoyed how he revelled in simple things like finding someone who connected with him or even just going on old-fashioned dates. He was not only chaotic, but spellbinding as he accepted Joe's erratic behavior and she wanted to be with it. The intimate scenes, my goodness, they were fantastic!
Honestly, I was completely unprepared for many of the twists and turns in this tale. It also took us down a road that many of us have traveled before, but gave me a fresh perspective on it.
Through this work, I have gained a whole new level of respect for this author, since it was so well-crafted and exuded grace and knowledge while depicting a very harrowing relationship.
This book has a lot of appeal despite its messed up nature, and although it had a lot of dysfunctional aspects you'd want to scream about, it was charming and unique.
This book was absolutely gut-wrenching for me, and for that I give it a high rating of two and half star.
The writing in this book has the potential to be considered too basic and simplistic, yet there is something about it that I find captivating. I can't even begin to describe how dysfunctional the book is. It's a train wreck from beginning to end, yet I find myself utterly fascinated by it.
Despite the complete lack of sense in the storyline, I was deeply moved by this book. It hit me at multiple points.
Throughout the book, the most important thing is demonstrating the emotions of the main character. Another theme I like is that of choice. It's up to us to choose who we want to be. But sometimes we need a helping hand to make good decisions.
In the beginning of the book I really didn't have any idea what a thrillride I would go on, and I didn't realize how drastically it would change a lot of my perceptions about books that make no sense.
Story was a character I really liked on a personal level. I enjoyed how he revelled in simple things like finding someone who connected with him or even just going on old-fashioned dates. He was not only chaotic, but spellbinding as he accepted Joe's erratic behavior and she wanted to be with it. The intimate scenes, my goodness, they were fantastic!
Honestly, I was completely unprepared for many of the twists and turns in this tale. It also took us down a road that many of us have traveled before, but gave me a fresh perspective on it.
Through this work, I have gained a whole new level of respect for this author, since it was so well-crafted and exuded grace and knowledge while depicting a very harrowing relationship.
This book has a lot of appeal despite its messed up nature, and although it had a lot of dysfunctional aspects you'd want to scream about, it was charming and unique.
This book was absolutely gut-wrenching for me, and for that I give it a high rating of two and half star.
December 22, 2022
i-
this was so terribly written it completely ruined the whole fucked up mood.
this was so terribly written it completely ruined the whole fucked up mood.
February 10, 2022
Definitely strange with that twist
I for one do NOT think Story deserved a happily ever after, after how much he cheated on his husband with anything and I mean anything that walked. His husband didn't deserve what Story put him through especially when is all he did was love the jerk.
And then the twist Joe is cursed to live forever and she saves Story. Not only does Story cheat with everyone but he slaps around women and men or anyone for that matter. I just can't find anything to like about him, sorry.
I for one do NOT think Story deserved a happily ever after, after how much he cheated on his husband with anything and I mean anything that walked. His husband didn't deserve what Story put him through especially when is all he did was love the jerk.
And then the twist Joe is cursed to live forever and she saves Story. Not only does Story cheat with everyone but he slaps around women and men or anyone for that matter. I just can't find anything to like about him, sorry.
May 2, 2022
What A Twist!!!
If you haven’t read the first story by Mary Jane please go back and read it, it’s another great story. This story is just along the same lines you’ve come to appreciate and love about this author. It’s filled with everything entertaining under the sun or I should say rainbow to keep you reading till the end. This story has it all from the exciting plot twists, to the drama, to the humour, the mystery and all the hot spiciness you can handle. You will not be disappointed, give it a try today!!!
If you haven’t read the first story by Mary Jane please go back and read it, it’s another great story. This story is just along the same lines you’ve come to appreciate and love about this author. It’s filled with everything entertaining under the sun or I should say rainbow to keep you reading till the end. This story has it all from the exciting plot twists, to the drama, to the humour, the mystery and all the hot spiciness you can handle. You will not be disappointed, give it a try today!!!
February 13, 2022
Weirdest book I ever read in my life.
I can’t tell you the plot, you’d never believe me. Story and Joe are weird af. They met in a gay club. Story has a husband, at home, and Joe is there with her ex-girlfriend. Thus commences a plot full of group sex, adultery, love, mental illness and more.
Would I recommend this book? Maybe, it held my attention, but it’s like nothing I have ever read.
I can’t tell you the plot, you’d never believe me. Story and Joe are weird af. They met in a gay club. Story has a husband, at home, and Joe is there with her ex-girlfriend. Thus commences a plot full of group sex, adultery, love, mental illness and more.
Would I recommend this book? Maybe, it held my attention, but it’s like nothing I have ever read.
April 16, 2022
Tragic and Strange
Not sure what I just read. Fascinating obsessive love story. We’ll written. Felt the angst and the emotion jump off the page, not sure how it got to the ending the way it did. Like I said strange, but I enjoyed it.
Not sure what I just read. Fascinating obsessive love story. We’ll written. Felt the angst and the emotion jump off the page, not sure how it got to the ending the way it did. Like I said strange, but I enjoyed it.
April 20, 2022
This was a story that once you started you were hooked. Hooked and asking yourself what the heck is going on, where is this going? This can’t end good. You keep reading to find that out and boom you wish it weren’t over
April 21, 2022
speechless
I mean my god first the talent is unbelievable this writes pulls you in and spits you out dazed and satisfied. Never predictable is what I love you don’t now where the story will lead you . Must read ..
I mean my god first the talent is unbelievable this writes pulls you in and spits you out dazed and satisfied. Never predictable is what I love you don’t now where the story will lead you . Must read ..
August 10, 2022
I don't know how to even rate this. I can't say I liked the book, but at the same time, I couldn't put it down. It's the first book in months that I haven't been able to stop reading, when most everything else I haven't even been able to finish.
I don't like cheating. So most of this book had my stomach in knots. I like for the Hero and the heroine to be faithful to each other. The problem with this is the Hero in this book is married and loves his spouse. He has no plans on divorcing. Actually the Hero is not very likable. Neither is the heroine really.
Ugh I don't know, they were both kind of rotten, nasty, immoral people. But I wanted them to get one thing right. I kept reading hoping they would finally commit to each other and be all the other one needed.
And in a way I did get that...
But I was also sideswiped by the surprise twist that instead of blowing me away, just confused me.
I felt like the ending left a lot to be desired. The overall feeling I have when I think back on everything I just read is sadness. These people were unhealthy and needed help.
I don't like cheating. So most of this book had my stomach in knots. I like for the Hero and the heroine to be faithful to each other. The problem with this is the Hero in this book is married and loves his spouse. He has no plans on divorcing. Actually the Hero is not very likable. Neither is the heroine really.
Ugh I don't know, they were both kind of rotten, nasty, immoral people. But I wanted them to get one thing right. I kept reading hoping they would finally commit to each other and be all the other one needed.
And in a way I did get that...
But I was also sideswiped by the surprise twist that instead of blowing me away, just confused me.
I felt like the ending left a lot to be desired. The overall feeling I have when I think back on everything I just read is sadness. These people were unhealthy and needed help.
April 13, 2023
🥲
I am glad that Story finally saw the light and got his happily ever after. He was so set on making everyone else happy that he forgot about himself. And how could Story’s husband really claim to love him but continue to be so selfish??? why I’m so surprised when i get to the paranormal part of an untamed book I don’t know but every book I read it does lol. I absolutely loved the toxicity of story and joe. Miss untamed described perfectly the way I felt the 1 stupid time I cheated, how u don’t want to leave a relationship b/c it’s comfortable and provides security even though you meet your soul mate and fall madly in love…
I am glad that Story finally saw the light and got his happily ever after. He was so set on making everyone else happy that he forgot about himself. And how could Story’s husband really claim to love him but continue to be so selfish??? why I’m so surprised when i get to the paranormal part of an untamed book I don’t know but every book I read it does lol. I absolutely loved the toxicity of story and joe. Miss untamed described perfectly the way I felt the 1 stupid time I cheated, how u don’t want to leave a relationship b/c it’s comfortable and provides security even though you meet your soul mate and fall madly in love…
January 14, 2022
Sooo good
This author is a great story teller and her books suck you into the drama, love and lust. Its not for everyone but I love how she makes you fall in love with imperfect characters
This author is a great story teller and her books suck you into the drama, love and lust. Its not for everyone but I love how she makes you fall in love with imperfect characters
October 14, 2023
it could’ve been Great
It could’ve been Great, it could’ve been a contender, but it was all over the place, and really didn’t go into much detail about the who, what, and why?
It was also anti-climactic. It made me want more. This book is definitely a steam fest.
It could’ve been Great, it could’ve been a contender, but it was all over the place, and really didn’t go into much detail about the who, what, and why?
It was also anti-climactic. It made me want more. This book is definitely a steam fest.
January 2, 2022
Speechless!!!
I am speechless and don't know where to start. This book was read in one day because I could not put it down not once and I mean literally. When I saw the release first Off was pissed because I was reading a book and didn't find out immediately that Immoral was released until after I finished reading the previous book and checked for this author daily like I always do. Please read this book its a tear jerker, heart breaking erotica tale of two psychos Joe Dawn and Story who love each other but are both crazy and toxic for everyone but each other. This is told in the pov of Story the male character which I love and his journey of love of Joe but is in a situation he is committed to. The end is a twisted mind fuck that you will not see coming. Jesus if I could write a thousand reviews it would not adequately describe every that I feel For this book but I will highly recommend and will be immediately be re reading this again bravo standing ovation.
I am speechless and don't know where to start. This book was read in one day because I could not put it down not once and I mean literally. When I saw the release first Off was pissed because I was reading a book and didn't find out immediately that Immoral was released until after I finished reading the previous book and checked for this author daily like I always do. Please read this book its a tear jerker, heart breaking erotica tale of two psychos Joe Dawn and Story who love each other but are both crazy and toxic for everyone but each other. This is told in the pov of Story the male character which I love and his journey of love of Joe but is in a situation he is committed to. The end is a twisted mind fuck that you will not see coming. Jesus if I could write a thousand reviews it would not adequately describe every that I feel For this book but I will highly recommend and will be immediately be re reading this again bravo standing ovation.
February 14, 2022
This book was crazy and a emotional roller coaster.Please read this book you will not be disappointed.
April 19, 2022
It was one of the most interesting books I have read in a while
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May 16, 2022
Beautiful story, pun intended😁😁
Loved this quick read, I feel like we need a sequel though. Hint hint** on to the next Mary Jane Manson book.
Loved this quick read, I feel like we need a sequel though. Hint hint** on to the next Mary Jane Manson book.
November 18, 2022
Unusual.
December 25, 2022
Loved
This is one of the oddest, weirdest books I've read this year. But oddness / weirdness aside.. I loved this book, will re read.
This is one of the oddest, weirdest books I've read this year. But oddness / weirdness aside.. I loved this book, will re read.
July 15, 2023
The book was a hot mess... I thought I was reading the craziest cheating book ever and then at the end the age of adeline plotline came and I was like WTF did I just read ????
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January 7, 2025
4.5 ⭐️s
February 16, 2025
This book is awesome!!! The story was so real that I’m having a hard time finding my way back to reality! Immoral is for deep thinkers. If you enjoy the darker classics and love intense stories, this book is for you. As one reviewer said, it’s a mind fuck in the best way. I don’t recommended it as light reading. This is heavy stuff.
September 4, 2022
Wow!
This story was awesome, I must be crazy as the characters because I love them. This book had me wanting more and I would recommend it. The twist was awesome
This story was awesome, I must be crazy as the characters because I love them. This book had me wanting more and I would recommend it. The twist was awesome
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