If i had to read "ever so slightly" one more time, i swear i had to DNF. Hannah would be smart to let the stories she wrote proofread and edit. It's not particularly a bad story. But with the first book as well with this one, i feel like there could be more potential. Also, the logical build-up, how a sentence is written or typos... The end was so looong and i feel like it shouldn't had to be. Bummer about that.