Marguerite has learned this the hard way. Despite her dream of becoming an artist, she quickly realizes that fate has more sinister plans for her...
After her father’s merchant ships are destroyed at sea, Marguerite and her family are forced out of their home to live in a humble cottage by the woods.
But there are dangers in the forest, magic forgotten by the ages, and Marguerite is powerless to stop it from luring her in.
A cursed life is no life worth living.
Count Henri d’Alarie discovered this when an Enchanter cursed him for his selfishness. Now, he must wait for the person who will break the spell and set him free.
He believes Marguerite is that person, and she is sure Henri is her way out of this nightmare too.
They have four months to put this theory to the test.
Are they right, or will their hearts have other plans?
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Enchanting Fate is a new adult, Beauty and the Beast retelling and book one of a fairy tale retelling series. Each book is a standalone novel within the same world.
Perfect for readers who enjoy clean romance, slow burn, forbidden love, and a cupful of angst.
Ashley Evercott was born and raised where it’s mostly sunny and there’s always traffic on the 91. From a young age, she has dreamed of far-off worlds and star-crossed lovers. She is proud to pen these stories to life and combine fantasy and swoony romance. When she is not writing, she consumes as many romance books as possible and hangs out with her cat and supportive husband.
Unfortunately, this book hasn't worked for me and it was difficult to continue until the end. It had a strong start, with Henri, the new Count d'Alarie, coming into his new title upon the death of his father, and facing his abusive stepmother and stepsisters for comeuppance, which I thought he handled well given the women's deeds. And right after, we were introduced to Marguerite, who is promisingly a strong Beauty figure.
But the story went downhill from these two good opening chapters onwards, because when Henri moves to live at the old abandoned castle of his family, an enchanter appears out of the blue and, in a Disney move, accuses him of trespassing deliberately again as he's not supposed to live there. I'm sorry? Nowhere before it's said that the castle is forbidden to be lived in, only that it was abandoned and no reason is given. Henri behaves horribly to the enchanter, so horribly he sounds out of character because he changes from chapter one to chapter three, and as a result of his behaviour, he gets the Disney move and is transformed into a beast as punishment for mistreating an enchanter cosplaying as a beggar, a scene you can see is lifted from Disney's Beauty and the Beast and doesn't appear in the original fairy tale.
There's where my issue with the story began. I felt like this retelling was punishing the victim for the abuse he suffered at the hands of his family. Henri was an illegitimate son of the Count, and hated by his stepmother and stepsisters merely for existing, and his weak father allowed the physical, verbal, and material abuse, which makes him a complicit co-abuser. So when Henri is unexpectedly willed the title and fortune, his understandable reaction is to not want anything to do with such a violent and hateful abuser as his stepmother, and abandons the family estate for an abandoned castle he likes. He doesn't merely throw his stepfamily into the street, though, he makes provisions for them to have someplace to go and generously gifts the estate's contents to his undeserving stepmother. Even so, the enchanter punishes him for this, too.
Furthermore, he's made to spend decades as a beast, falling into alcoholism and despondency, at the end of which, when he regains his human form thanks to a noble action, he goes to apologise to his abusive stepsisters! Who, resentfully, don't want to have anything to do with him ever again. It's incredibly upsetting, this whole plotline punishing a victim of abuse in a way that's disproportionate, and to add insult to injury, the victim is made to apologise to his abusers at the end. This is well past my level of tolerance, and I can't honestly look past this; it ruined any chance of enjoyment of this book for me.
Marguerite doesn't fulfill the promise of her opening chapter either, and her story parallel to Henri's is difficult to understand the point of once you realise she's not the Beauty to his Beast. Why is she even there in the story? She's said to be the key to the curse, but she does so little for him as to be practically irrelevant. The beauty that redeems the beast here isn't her, the true key to the curse isn't her; it's someone else that should've been the main character but is sidelined into a tertiary role and one rather underdeveloped and abrupt. You end up with two parallel stories in which Beauty doesn't end up with Beast because she's no Beauty, and where Beast is made to pay for what are ultimately the sins of others. All the while the problematic issues of past abuse are handwaved and alcoholism is suddenly dropped as if it's like giving up Coca-Cola, with no consequences at all. I wish it had been handled differently because it's rare to find proper abuse representation in a B&B retelling, but I simply can't overlook the plotting issues and the troubling message the presentation of the abuse aspect sends.
I received an ARC through BookSirens in exchange for an honest review.
"Enchanting Fate" is a Beauty and the Beast retelling, in which a Count named Henri is stripped of his title because of his egocentric and rude behavior. He and his servants are cursed and their fate to break this curse now depends on a girl called Marguerite.
This book was honestly a rollercoaster because I found it difficult to connect with the story in the beginning. However, I quickly got attached to a couple and I enjoyed the forbidden love aspect of them, how they were developed and how the story ended for them. It was very sweet and innocent, but also heartbreaking at times.
In general I feel like the book is definitely meant for a younger audience than me since some parts felt a bit cheesy, but I think some people might really enjoy the book for that reason.
All in all, I still think everyone can enjoy some parts of the story and I‘m thankful I got to read and review this before it came out. The writing was definitely very impressive for the fact that it was the author‘s first book.
Disclaimer: I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
First of all, LOOK AT THAT COVER!! The sheer beauty of it was enough to make me want to read this, but add in that it was a Beauty and the Beast retelling and I was totally on board! So, let's dive in to this review of Enchanting Fate.
Lately I've read a lot of fairytale retellings. Beauty and the Beast ones are often my favorite, but Enchanting Fate is completely different from all the rest in a really huge way. When we first meet Henri (the beast) he is downright awful. So awful, in fact, that I almost thought he'd be irredeemable. However, Henri offered character-growth galore! By the end he actually became my favorite character. Now, the twist in this book is a pretty big spoiler and while it became obvious early on in the book what it was, I still had doubts as I read. There were times I really wasn't sure how it would go. I loved that. Again, I had a pretty good idea (and was right!) but I wavered from time to time.
Overall, Enchanting Fate is a super enjoyable read. I highly recommend it for all fantasy lovers, especially those who gravitate towards retellings. And believe me, you haven't read one with a twist like this!! Enchanting Fate is a solid debut novel from Ashley Evercott and I look forward to reading more from her in the future!! 4.5 Stars!!
This was a really fun twist on Beauty and the Beast — one of my favorite fairytales. Marguerite was a delightful heroine who i was instantly ready to root for. Henry takes a looooong time to warm-up to, but Claude easily stole my heart with his gentle and loyal ways. Definitely recommend for B&tB fans!
Every time I see a Beauty and the Beast retelling, I think that there won't be anything new to see, that every variation is already done, and every single time the author leaves me surprised. That's exactly what happened in this case as well. I loved how unique the story was.
When the book started I disliked all the characters because most seemed like terrible people, and the protagonist never stood up for herself. But, as the book progressed, each character developed beautifully. Every individual's personality was explored in depth, and their inner thoughts and turmoil were expressed in a way that made them relatable.
I liked the twists, especially the approach taken in relation to the curse. The complicated relationships also kept things interesting. Though the worldbuilding wasn't elaborate, it was enough to paint a picture, just the way I like it. The interactions between the characters were natural, and I thoroughly enjoyed some of their conversations.
While the book was amazing, there was one thing I didn't agree with. A particular character makes a decision that everyone thinks was cruel. They're shamed for it, but I feel like it was a completely valid reaction for the way they were treated. I understand that forgiveness is important, but some things are very difficult to forgive, and at that moment, they did what they thought was just.
I guessed the solution to the riddle quite early on, but that didn't take away from the revelation at the end. I liked the way the author made it all come together.
I recommend it to all fantasy romance and fairytale lovers. If you like morally grey characters and redemption arcs, then this book is for you.
*I received a free ARC copy and am reviewing voluntarily*
I love fairytale retellings, especially Beauty and the Beast ones, and this did not disappoint. The writing flowed well, I liked the characters, and the author put her own twists on the story that made it feel new and kept me guessing (even though I was fairly certain I knew vaguely how it would end). I enjoyed it and look forward to the next one in the series!
** Thank you BookSirens and the author for access to this ARC. This is my honest review.**
Enchanting Fate is a fantastic Beauty and the Beast retelling. I enjoy retellings a great deal and was intrigued by the synopsis to this one that I'm so glad I chose to read it! From a debut author, this world blew me away with how intricate details were woven into it. From the characters to the world-building, and the presence of the original fairytale, Ashley Evercott succeeded in making this world its own within the boundaries of a retelling. This is a book told from four POVs, though mostly the two main characters Marguerite and Henri, and at no time did I find this confusing or hastily done. Each voice was clear and purposeful towards the story's progression, and I enjoyed having the insight from all four characters.
I really appreciated both Marguerite and Henri's past storylines of struggles. Both have faced a great deal of suffering, and from the heavy expectations of sticking to propriety and birth status. Their families have caused pain that has been long-lasting on how they react to those around them, and I liked watching how they navigated their certain weaknesses in the company of each other and with those who have been kind to them, which helps uncover new desires for their futures. I also liked the level of honesty they established over time whilst enduring the curse. Seeing their building connection blossom into what it was in the ending made the angstier moments worth it. I have to admit that Isa didn't leave nearly a lasting impression on me as Claude did, and whilst I understood her feelings, she was my least enjoyed of the four voices in this novel. Claude, however, was a fantastic character and I enjoyed his thoughts, along with how he prompted action from both Marguerite and Henri along the way.
The curse itself was cleverly strung together, woven in through some of the elements of the original fairytale and by Evercott's skilled imagination. I loved the change that everyone cursed was an animal of some sort, and how that continued to afflict changes the closer to the curse's culmination. I also enjoyed the addition of other fairytales used in some scenes, which again, knowing the plans for the next book in Fairy Tales of Gallia, was a neat touch by the author in setting up the overall series.
Many times throughout reading Enchanting Fate, I was surprised this was a debut novel, from how well-thought the plot and characters were. Because of that, I marked it as an enjoyable 5 star read.
Enchanting Fate is such a unique retelling of Beauty and the Beast. I don't think I have ever seen a version quite like this one before. There was a lot I liked about it, especially the lyrical quality of the writing. It was beautifully done.
There is a wide range of characters and they each had their own wants and problems to deal with it. There was a lot of emotional depth to them. As the story progressed, and had a lot of ups and downs, I found myself being drawn into their emotions, really feeling all of their pain amongst their struggles. We got to see so much about them, but I still found that I wanted more. I wanted their pains and past hurts to have been deeply explored. Had the author chosen to do so, I'm sure this would have been a much longer book. A lot of people probably wouldn't have appreciated that. What was shown in the story was satisfactory. We got all the emotions and backstory we needed, even if I did want more.
The setting had a lot of good things to it, but I think I struggled to feel fully immersed in it. I liked the general concept of everything, but I never gained a vivid picture of the castle.
I enjoyed this story more than I was expecting. I figured I had already read so many Beauty and the Beast retellings that I could kind of guess how it was going to go. I was pleasantly surprised. There is a lot I would still love to talk about, but I always try to avoid spoilers, so I'm going to keep all of that to myself…
I plan to read any other books this author writes. I really liked this book, so I am looking forward to any other retellings this author does.
I received an ARC of this book for free, and I voluntarily left this review.
I’m gonna be straight forward with you in that I received a copy of this e-ARC in exchange for a fair and honest review based on my feelings after reading it.
First, since my summary and breakdown *will* contain some spoilers: I’m giving this book a 3.75- a definite good read! Fun and worth the time, it’s a short romp in an interesting retelling of Beauty and the Beast. (FYI Anything above three stars is firmly in my “Definitely worth a read” rating range)
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Ok, onto the spoilery meat of the review!!
The beast -Henri- is a real mean son of a bitch. Not just your standard gruff, no manners, spoiled young man sort of way. He’s got a mean borne of abuse and neglect and it shows. While I don’t fault his actions in the very beginning of the book (I’d probably even do the same) and feel they’re a bit of poetic justice, his continued behavior justified his condemnation as the Beast.
Marguerite, our hapless heroine is sweet and determined but it seems like everything she does lands her in a further quagmire. Her fathers business is failing and her entitled hag of a mother and wretched twat of a sister place the blame on *her* for not securing a match with a wealthy and shit-stained personality of a husband. When they’re forced to move into the countryside and live within their new means, Marguerite tries to find her spoiled sisters lost dog to make her feel better- thus landing herself in the enchanted manor of the Beast.
Claude is Henri’s valet and loyal friend, and also cursed (along with all the other servants at the manor) because of his masters behavior and poor choices. He is kind, sincere and well meaning and it means he gets run roughshod by not only Henri but by others at the manor, namely Isa.
Isa. She’s a piece of work and the one character I can say I firmly dislike as a person. She’s pretentious and “holier than thou”. She’s a genuinely horrible friend and a bully, and I don’t care that her behavior is borne out of having her feelings hurt. She’s unsympathetic, aloof and honestly I couldn’t find myself caring about her at all. She thinks because she’s had a painful experience it’s her job to henpeck others into line and force them into her idea of propriety.
These characters come together to weave an interesting and vibrant take on a well loved story format and I’m really looking forward to seeing what else the author has in store for the world she’s building.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
Evercott's Enchanting Fate is an interesting twist on the Beauty and the Beast story. It's a solid read for fans of romantic fairytale retellings.
Our beast, Henri, comes into his foul temperment after years of abuse at the hands of his stepmother. The abused is now the abuser, and Henri's ill temper curses his staff to also live as beasts. He is, quite frankly, the worst sort of drunken asshole by the time the story begins in earnest with the arrival of Beauty aka Marguerite. She is the daughter of a merchant with poor business sense and through a series of unfortunate events, finds herself trapped at Henri's estate with him and his cursed servants.
The big twist to the story would be a too big of a spoiler for an Amazon review. I guessed it kind of early, but that didn't take away my enjoyment of the book. I will say that didn't find myself devouring it as I usually do with these sorts of retelligs, however. I'm not sure if it was the pacing or what, but for that reason I can't quite give it 5 stars.
Sometimes fate enters your life when you least expect it.
Ashley Evercott’s debut novel, Enchanting Fate, is everything you want in a fairy tale retelling. Romantic, exciting, and keeps you on your toes. The story has unexpected twists and turns. It’s also deeply emotional and managed to make me cry a couple of times. You really feel for the characters and their situation. Your heart may crack a few times when you read this! But the emotional payoff is the absolute best by the end, filling you with plenty of warm fuzzies. I would recommend this to anyone who loves fantasy romance and fairy tale retellings.
I received a free ARC copy and am leaving this e yew voluntarily.
I always love me a fairy tale retelling and it’s even better when the world it is set in feels real and lived in. The author accomplishes this in spades so don’t be surprised if you completely lose yourself in it.
There are some slow places here and there but it’s nice to have time to catch one’s breath. They don’t detract from the story at all, simply weren’t my favorite parts.
Overall, a worthy fairy tale retelling and one that leaves you enticed for more exploration of the world. Always a good sign!
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
First of all, many thanks to the author and to BookSirens. Ms. Evercott (can I call you Ashley?) deserves praise for trying to do another take on Beauty and the Beast. It has been done many times, but she still managed to make it new and different.
Prepare your expectations to be subverted. Subverted well? That's a matter of opinion.
It's not Game of Thrones level of immense disappointment. Let me back up. That makes it sound like I loathed the book, and that wasn't the case. The folklore built into the worldbuilding was fun, but it wasn't the most creative, but then again, it's a Beauty and the Beast retelling, I wasn't expecting creative. I liked Henri, and I liked Isa, but Marguerite felt flat to me. She likes to paint, wanted to save her family and so selfless.
Then she indulged in copious drinking to deal with her problems, so yay character flaw? If I had a nickel for every time a character developed copious drinking to deal with their problems and then immediately stopped as soon as the problems got solved, I'd have two nickels.
Isa did nothing wrong and she was fantastic. She should've been the main character! She had dreams, she had the tragic backstory, and benefited from the subverted plot! Marguerite… didn't.
I think if I reread this book with the final ending in mind, I would've liked it more, but I didn't like Claude, so maybe not.
Back to the subversion. Romance is not a genre that is subversion-friendly. Mysteries are, Sci-fi to some extent, but not romance. Romance is unchangeable. It has centuries of the same boy-meets-girl and the tropes reign supreme. Unlike that last season of GoT, it didn't obliterate character arcs, and the subversion did fulfill them, but I spent so much time invested in the wrong ship that it didn't matter.
As to the actual writing, it was decent. Please never say "So, no one's warned ye yet" in a book again. Never say ye again. Ya might have been acceptable. The rest of the writing was good.
thank you booksirens and publisher for the arc in exchange for an honest review.
so this is a beauty and the beast retelling with a twist. i thought it was fine, i didn’t particularly like or dislike reading this. but the last 20% or so made me wary because all they did was say the same things over and over again (expressing that they love one another but can’t be together etc etc. despite not having talked for a month straight)
Actual rating: 3.8 out of 5 stars. This is a non-spoiler review of Enchanting Fate. I received this advanced reader copy in exchange for an honest review.
Enchanting Fate is a whimsical adaptation of Beauty and the Beast. If you’re familiar with the fable or the Disney version, you’ll see a lot of influences, and new changes to a tale as old as time.
The story follows Henri, a newly made count who is estranged from his father’s family. After a harsh childhood, he now has power, money and the control to live the life he wants. His upbringing and irrational choices catch up to him, causing his downfall and the people who serve him. It also follows Marguerite, the eldest daughter of a once-wealthy merchant who has lost everything. As the eldest, she takes it upon herself to sacrifice her happiness to save her family. Fate brings them together to break a curse, one that can only be cured by love. But can you really fall in love with someone out of obligation?
MY THOUGHTS
This story wasn’t the most thrilling story for me, but it was comforting and familiar, as I am a fan of Beauty and the Beast and its many iterations. It made me get out of my reading slump and had many good parts to it.
This adaption draws on a lot of influences from the source material and makes alludes to the Disney version as well (I really appreciated some of those references sprinkled in). I really like the changes in this story, particularly with the character backstories.
This story follows Henri and Marguerite (who are the Beast and Beauty in this tale), but it also switches perspective with Isa and Claude, two staff members who work for Henri (and are ultimately cursed with him), who get entangled with our two main characters; you do get invested in the personal lives of these other characters, and the dynamics of them as well. Evercott is really good at expanding them and making all the characters well-rounded.
However, as much as I liked it, there are a couple of reasons why I rated this book the way I did.
I felt like Henri, one of the main characters (the Beast), had a drastic change in character from Chapters 1-3. The story starts off with him, and it starts STRONG. However, his personality in that opening chapter and when the inciting incident of his character happens (when he turns into the Beast): seems detached. They seemed like two different people, and it left me confused.
As the story progresses, the conflict and damage of his nature are pieced together, and you get an understanding as to why he acted the way he did when he was transformed, but it was sudden enough for me to notice and personally didn't feel his severe flaws were properly expressed from the top (to add: I felt like his actions, in the beginning, were justified and made sense. Were they nice? No, but considering his upbringing... wasn't entirely selfish). On a positive note: his journey from emotional immaturity to responsibility and humanity was refreshing. It is a slow journey, but he gets there.
The writing was easy to follow, and the story world itself was easy to understand; I just wish we got to know more about it. The world these characters live in, Gallia, actually alludes to a rich culture with peoples who have progressed yet still have these very old beliefs in magic. It mentions gods, Three Hells, and a magic system that includes Enchanters who can curse people. It really is fascinating, and I would be open to reading a story with original characters set in this world.
The plot and conflict were pretty straightforward, but with a familiar tale like this, there are only so many ways to tell it. There were no major plot twists (at least that I perceived), at it was foreshadowed pretty early on/it was easy to piece together what would happen next. Also, this book was marketed as a 'new adult', but it reads more like a young adult novel.
But, as adaptations go, I appreciate how it didn’t follow that conventional ending, and that the rationale behind the character's romantic interests was realistic and grounded-which was refreshing. I think if you're someone that wants to read a fantasy romance that is familiar to get out of your reading slump, this would be the book for you.
MY RATING:
I'm giving this book a 3.8 out of 5 stars.
The driving force behind this story was definitely the characters and their relationships with one another. It wasn't the most complex story, but it brought some new twists to this classic tale. Having people in forced closed proximity to each other with a lot of tension always leads to something—and it always involves chaos and a resolution. And in this case, it was a good and satisfying one.
One thing I can say is that it’s evident Evercott had fun writing this story, and I enjoyed reading it at the end of the day. It's also clear that she cared so deeply about the characters and world she was writing about. She knows how to enthrall her readers, and has a bright future ahead of her as well.
The residents of an old, unused estate anger their gods by entering into the forbidden forest. For trespassing on sacred ground, an Enchanter curses them all. A young woman and her family become near destitute after her father’s ships were destroyed at sea. She tries to save them by marrying the rude son of an old friend of her father’s. Things, though, do not end up as everyone hopes. Instead, while trying to retrieve her sister’s dog, she wanders into the forest and bound to the cursed castle. She then becomes the fated lady, the one who will break the spell they are all under. If only she can help their master love and be loved. There is so much that can be said about Enchanting Fate by Ashley Evercott… When reading this book you can definitely see elements from the root story, Tam Lin. Or as it’s more famously known, Beauty and the Beast. It can be a beautifully romantic tale, if done right. With this book, I would say it is kind of a toss up. It wasn’t the best rendition of Beauty and the Beast, yet at the same time it really wasn’t all that bad. In fact, this book had that special something that keeps you hooked from beginning to end. Which is a pretty good achievement for any book. It also was a fairly quick book to read. The Beauty and the Beast is really a tale that is almost as old as time. A story that is very well used. It is probably one of the most popular background stories to be used in retellings and fractured fairy tales. In this particular book, there were a few similarities between Evercott’s version, and Disney’s and Sarah J. Maas’ renditions. In fact, other than the a few key areas such as the character’s individual backgrounds and development, they are pretty close. But then again, they are all based off the same story and share a lot of those elements. So that could explain why I was seeing so many similarities. Another thought I had about this book was that it was incredibly apparent what was going to happen, and what the answer to the riddle was, shortly after starting the book. It was just so obvious! Then there was how it ended (I will not go into too much detail, so I do not give away the ending). I thought that this book just wrapped up too nicely. There really wasn’t too much major conflict. I mean, there was conflict. You have conflicting feelings from all the parties immediately involved. And the obvious issue of trying to force love or forget past love, as well as the issue with the curse. But other than those issues. There really wasn’t any grand fisticuffs between her suitors, or mobs storming the castle, or a fairy queen trying to force the beast to be her lover. I will say this about Enchanting Fate, I definitely liked the reaction Marguerite had toward the castle denizens’ curse. It was a lot more realistic than what Belle had toward her Beast and the castle residents! The character development was good, and it certainly added more depth to the main characters. With this story I can see the beginnings of a magical world forming. I would like to see more of that in further books in this series. Right now it feels like it was only touched upon lightly. It felt like it could go further. My thoughts on this book were that it was alright. It was easy and quick to read. And it was somewhat entertaining. It kept my interest and I actually found it somewhat difficult to put down. I wanted to know if Marguerite, Claude, Henri and Isa would finally come to their senses and figure out the obvious. Even if it was completely obvious and not as well developed as some Beauty and the Beast retellings that I’ve come across. Compared to some I’ve read, it was a bit more palatable. Though, I do wish there was a bit more action happening in the book, but that is just me. Over all this book was alright; a simple story that was well written, and that some people could even get lost in while reading it. But there is the possibility that others would want more from the story. Personally, I am a bit curious about the next book in this series. I kind of want to see if the world of Gallia can be further developed and to see how the next fairy tale plays out. It has potential of really being a place that could bring imaginations to life.
I received this as an ARC for free, and really wanted to leave a review for those still considering if they want to read this book.
YA romance novels have ruined romance for me time and time again. There's never really any love, it's just lust. So I tend to prefer novels written for juvenile audiences, despite being a young adult myself.
I gave Enchanting Fate a chance besides my preconceptions, and it actually surprised me.
The characters who end up together actually have decent reasons for wanting to be together because for once it's definitely about more than looks. Which you'd think is always a given with a Beauty and the Beast retelling, but you'd be surprised.
{Quality of Writing} The first chapter was a spectacular hook and immediately drew me in. Though I admit that my interest waned as the book went on (especially at the end, which felt both rushed and drawn out at the same time), I devoured the book in a few days (mainly because of my strong attachment to side characters). The writing itself was just the right amount of descriptive, giving enough details to paint a clear picture without dragging on and on. There were a few of what I'll call TMI moments where it described something like a character peeing their pants or sweaty armpits, and whether or not they were intentionally humorous they made me cackle because usually books don't talk about that stuff seriously. All in all, though, it was very well-written. The quality of writing was even better than the actual story itself.
{Characters} I found Henri and Marguerite both difficult to love because they annoyed me. I don't fault the author or the book, though, because main characters (with very few exceptions) always annoy me. Side characters are always my favorite characters, and this book was no exception to that pattern of mine, either. I absolutely loved Claude. Loyalty is a rare and precious thing--often unappreciated, too. I feel that both Claude and Isa were much more lovable, relatable, and easier to connect with than either of the protagonists. Huge points to the author for writing characters that were not bland, that readers care about (regardless of whether those characters are the protagonists). I believe that when characters are believable and able to invoke a strong emotions (whether negative or positive) from readers that is a sign of some freaking good characterization by the author.
{Plot} It was a Beauty and the Beast retelling. Until it wasn't. The character backstories, the huge but very predictable plot twist, the bit of world building that I'd love to see more of later in the series: this story has personality. I wish that there was more side plots that weren't romance driven. But, again, that's just me. I live for side plots and I'm not big on romance. This is a romance novel, so it is what it is. I would love to see more action, adventure, and mystery themes later in the series, though. Anyways, that's off topic. The plot was a pleasant change from a typical B&B twist. It was a little slow in the middle-ish, but maintained a relatively good pace throughout. A very convenient ending, but what do you expect from fairy tales? I have a great fondness for the Grimm's and Andersen's fairy tales that I grew up reading (and that I still read to this day), and I love seeing how different writers put their own spin on such classic stories.
{Content} I cannot tell you, Ms. Evercott, just how awesome you are for writing a clean YA romance. It takes guts, and skills, and morals. Huge respect. They don't take it farther than kisses in case anyone is wondering. As far as language, there are some minor swears. One of the main characters is an illegitimate child and was abused by his family growing up because of it. He also becomes an alcoholic later, then eventually quits. Yeah, I think that's about it for any content warnings.
If you like clean romance and fantasy then you should definitely read Enchanting Fate.
Enchanting Fate by Ashley Evercott is a twisted retelling of "Beauty and the Beast" in which the girl destined to break the beast's spell falls in love with one of the other cursed residents of the castle. It is the first book in the Fairy Tales of Gallia series, which is likely to contain other twists on popular stories. Fractured fairy tales are a popular niche, and I'll admit this was a concept I hadn't seen before in a retelling. The characters' motivations are clear, and their struggles are understandable. However, the solution to their problem seems so obvious that some chapters are frustrating to get through. I just wanted to see everyone live out their happy ending with their true love and stop obsessing so much over a misunderstood solution to the curse.
Marguerite is the daughter of a merchant whose business is about to go under. To restore her family's legacy, she must marry a wealthy nobleman who she doesn't particularly care for. However, fate has other plans in store for her. When her prized dog runs off, she finds herself in an enchanted castle where a kind-hearted servant named Claude welcomes her with open arms. The castle's residents are all cursed to take on beastly forms and will lose all sense of humanity after a set period. The only way to break the curse is for Henri, the castle's master, to fall in love and be loved in return. When the Enchanter who set the curse tells Marguerite that she is the key to breaking it, she feels responsible for falling in love with Henri for the sake of everyone residing there.
This story has some good themes and provides an interesting twist on "Beauty and the Beast." It promotes the idea that love can't be forced and must happen naturally. My biggest gripe is that among the cursed residents of the castle is Henri's ex, Isa, a servant who couldn't be with him due to their class difference. Although time moves differently in the castle, they are still cursed for more than enough time to figure out the solution long before Marguerite arrives. Marguerite's developing feelings for Claude are heartbreaking as well because both of them are so convinced they can't be together due to the curse that they never even try.
The book is told from four perspectives: Marguerite, Claude, Henri, and Isa. The characters are difficult to keep track of at first but become easier as the book progresses. Every character is conflicted about their feelings toward each other, to the point that the Enchanter seems like a cruel sadist for toying with their hearts in such a serious manner. There have been many complaints about the curse from "Beauty and the Beast" being too cruel a punishment not just on the beast, but the other residents of his castle as well. This book makes it worse by having an Enchanter who dangles the solution over their heads the whole time without telling them what it is. Despite the cruelty of the spell, the book has a satisfying resolution.
Enchanting Fate by Ashley Evercott offers an unexpected twist on the classic 'Beauty and the Beast' tale, exploring the complexities of love, fate, and redemption. While the book's pacing and character development may have some frustrating moments, the story's themes and emotional resonance ultimately shine through. With its unique spin on a beloved fairy tale, Enchanting Fate is a compelling read for fans of fractured fairy tales and romance. Despite some minor flaws, the book's satisfying resolution and thought-provoking themes make it a worthwhile introduction to the Fairy Tales of Gallia series.
I think this book was confused on what to do with itself.
Some ideas of the book were so original and promising, but the execution of those ideas stalled the movement in the plot and disrupted the reader's suspension of disbelief.
The beginning of the book was beautiful. It set up this tragic MMC who, despite a lifetime of abuse, still chose to react with restraint and grace. Yet almost immediately, this character is negated by one who acts selfishly and horribly. Henri's characterization throughout the book was confusing and inconsistent. His development did not seem like s steady climb towards the betterment of his person, but rather a light switch that was flicked on and off.
Marguerite was alright. She had some good moments, but other than that she did not stand out to me too well.
I think my biggest issue with the book was my own wariness. Obviously, when you are adapting or retelling a well-known story, you are allowed to reimagine things. However, you must also be aware that your audience will be going into the story with preconceived notions and expectations. *SPOILERS AHEAD* Now, I don't mind the "a servant girl is actually the one to break the curse" trope because I think it's cute and I've seen it done before well. But this book leaves the romance aspects of the story way too murky for too long for me to become immersed into the story. I spent most of the book questioning the characters and the author's intentions than I did supporting the characters and their journey. I'm not asking for authors to spoon-feed readers every little tidbit of information. I just think this book could've been clearer about how it was deviating from the original fairy tale to prevent this confusion.
I thought the physicalization of the curse was interesting. But that's it. And the thing about time slowing down, sure, I'll buy it. HOWEVER, time has only slowed down 30 years, not 100. So it really bugged me that everyone in the castle (who were all around their 20s) was lamenting about how everyone they know is probably dead. UM, no????? They're probably OLD, sure, but not DEAD??? If I were locked in a time stasis chamber for thirty years RIGHT NOW, everyone (except my parents and grandparents) would just be 30 years older when I came out, not DEAD.
I also haven't gotten into the odd grammar. Some words were misused and some sentences didn't make sense. For example, this sentence in Chapter 18: "Her family was not perfect. She could be the first to admit that." COULD?? Wouldn't the correct word be would??
This line also stuck out to me as odd: "Isa's tan complexion clashed with his own, but their hands laced together by their sides like a complete puzzle piece" (Chapter 36). Tell me, why did their skin tones CLASH together? And also, a complete puzzle PIECE???? NOT THE WHOLE PUZZLE??
Enchanting Fae is a retelling of Beauty and the Beast with a fresh take. Thoug the basic setting remains French and the curse, Ashley Evercott does a brilliant job changing the story as the plot progresses.
The book has all the fairytale elements of magic and destruction and business ruin and societal rules but without giving out any spoilers, the interaction of the characters and the love story that followed had me cheering them.
The author was smart with not adding the typical villainy expected in this fairytale but rather weaved the supposed antagonist traits within the lead characters themselves. Henri being a bastard child scorned by his stepmother throughout his life. Upon the death of his father he turns vengeful towards his step mother and step siblings and decides to stay in a chateau that was long abandoned owing to the rumours of magic and fae. Henri's character growth is intrinsic where he realises that he is the product of his upbringing and the turn that he decides to take to change is personality. Marguerite, falling into poverty is thrown into Henri's world where she realises that love is above all class. Her character isn't as deep as the others as there seemed to be little growth for her. However the friendship these characters strike is heartwarming.
There were times I actually felt that the romance was lacking and could have been written more but the book as a whole gives a very satisfying end and leaves the reader content. I would highly recommend this book. It may seem that it is just a retelling of the same old premise but this story is more than just that meets the eye and a much read for all us fairytale lovers. You will meet a certain character that will worm their way into your heart and that is the defining distinction of this marvellous book.
Happy Reading!
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
I fell for both boys... But like, how could I not?
Claude is such a kind, compassionate soul who just wants to be to be able to freely express his feelings and not have no worry about his position in life. Unfortunately, fate may not be so kind to him...
While Henri has had a tough childhood but he’s trying to be better, for himself and those he cares for deeply. But will his kindling love be enough to break the curse?
Love can be powerful.
And this book shows that love is unexpected, but it is powerful...
Memorial Quotes and/or scenes –
“Henri, I will say this once and only once. If you have a shred of a heart or any decency left, you will get up, you will stop drinking, and you will go out and break this curse for us. It’s the very least you could do.” - Isa to Henri (page. 148)
“And I know it might be selfish to even admit it here and now that I care for you but, fine. Let me be foolish. I know what’s at stake, I understand my life is forfeit under this curse. But I have lived my whole life living on the whims of others. I have lived my whole life living on the whims of others. I have never felt more alive and seen as I have felt with you. And perhaps it’s selfish of me to say all this to you now, but I could not live with myself knowing I never had the chance to stand before you as I am. Not as a dog but... as a man that is falling in love with you.” - Claude to Marguerite (page. 306/307)
“And I... I wish... I wish I were the one you were meant for.” - Claude to Marguerite (page. 307)
I scrolled through BookSiren's catalogue. I scrolled past this book. I scrolled back. I scrolled again. I scrolled back again and eventually I decided that even though my schedule was tight I was just gonna make this work. This cover looks amazingly pretty, the story sounded interesting and I have some trouble not accepting a fairytale themed arc. Even though Beauty and the Beast isn't my favorite fairytale. So, this morning I dived in.
Actually I had not expected to finish this book today, but the story was amazingly gripping and the characters really interesting and layered. I therefore read just one more chapter and one more and one more and eventually I was so close to the ending I decided to just finish it. And that's partly because the tension is amazingly well done. It's not an action packed book. There's no violence in this book, but I was never bored.
That's mostly because this take on the well known fairytale is really refreshing and original. Of course, the basic elements of the story are there. There is a curse, there is a beast and people have to prove that they can love and be loved. However, we have a few more characters involved than just a Beauty and a Beast though. And that's exactly what makes the story more complicated, more interesting and a little heartbreaking even.
I don't want to give away too much, but it's quite clear that this is an old fashioned society. Standing matters, money matters, status matters. There are all those written and unwritten rules and therefore not too many people get the chance to truly follow their heart. In a way, exactly because this is the society this story takes place in, this story is therefore truly about true love. The kind of love that is seldom easy, but worth fighting for and for sure worth reading about.
Note: I received a free copy in exchange for an honest review.
Ashley Evercott's debut novel, Enchanting Fate, is a Beauty and the Beast retelling with shades of Downtown Abby and Upstairs, Downstairs. Told through four POVs by characters of varying social standing, this version stays true to the original tale's spirit by focusing on money and social class without sacrificing romance.
That romantic side of the story is where Evercott's writing excels. I only wish there was more of it. For Marguerite, who has fallen on hard times like Belle, breaking the Beast's curse is mostly transactional. Yet those tuning in for the romance won't be disappointed with descriptions like "All she wanted was to be looked at like how he was looking at her now--like she was spring itself, breathing life into his soul" and "He remained the keeper of her prickly heart." Not to mention "If she had the choice, she would capture time, rearrange the stars, and hold this moment in her hands forever."
Because I enjoyed these moments of pure romantic storytelling so much, I wished the rest of the story was as polished. The pacing of Enchanting Fate can be rushed. I also thought the characters needed deeper exploration. In particular, the POV-wielding servants in the cursed manor, Claude and Isa, could've used more backstory and personality separate from their situation and love interests.
That being said, the plot and overall message of being true to yourself is told in a unique and interesting way. Evercott has the potential to write like Sylvia Mercedes or Hannah Whitten (both authors of swoony fantasy romances with darker backbones). As this series of fairytale retellings continues, I hope to see more wonderfully described romance and the character-driven storytelling to match it.
Okay, I didn’t finish this, so perhaps it’s not fair to rate it, but I need to move it off the currently reading shelf.
This is a Beauty and the Beast retelling, and on the one hand I love fairytales, and enjoy the retellings, but on the other hand I’ve read a lot of them recently, and perhaps it’s making me more picky than usual. When it comes to Beauty and the Beast, I am not super crazy about the versions where the Beauty character has to actively reform the Beast character, and I think, like many things in fairy tales, this reflects a thing from real life. I am not particularly interested in growing a romantic parter up or into someone who is worthy of me. They need to be worthy of me to win me in the first place. And that may be the root of my dislike of Beauty-reforms-the-Beast tales. I far prefer BatB retellings where the Beast either isn’t really very beastly as all, or where the Beast has by virtue of living under a curse, reformed himself of all but the beastly appearance prior to even meeting the Beauty character.
That said, this appears to be a tale where the Beast continues to be and act quite beastly to everyone around him prior to meeting the Beauty character. And at 25% of the way through the story, these two still haven’t properly met or begun interacting in any kind of meaningful way. I had started to skim. Then set the book aside to read two other books. Then picked it back up and skimmed some more. A lot more. And finally wondered why I was bothering when there are so many other books out there to read. Maybe I’ll come back. Maybe I won’t.
First of all thank you to Book Sirens for the e-arc!! ❤️🥰
This book is charming!! It’s beautiful and exactly what you think it’s going to be, a wonderful fairytale with a twist that is not at all disappointing. The main and ‘Belle’ character, Marguerite, is headstrong, loving and you really feel that she would do anything for her family, despite them taking advantage of her. She definitely has ‘Belles’ determination and strong will. I want to make this review as spoiler free as possible so I won’t go into too much detail but I will say that there is another character who shares the strong will and I love how the author has done this!! 😍❤️
I’m a really big fan of retellings of fairytales and this was a brilliant one!! I love the twists and how it’s different to the original version of Beauty and the Beast but at the same time it still has the heart of it. I love how the characters are there but they vary slightly from how we know them, for example, Gaston is around but he plays a slightly different and smaller role.
I’m a fan of Henri. His life when he has a child was more than hard and being tuned into a massive beast can’t be all that much fun but we see him become more and more human and the story progresses ❤️❤️ But for me the heart and soul of this book really belongs to the valet Claude, he’s simply wonderful!! I won’t go into to details but he has totally stolen my heart ❤️🥺
I’ve given the book ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Slow burn and friends to lovers? How could I not? I’m so excited for the next book in the Fairy Tales of Gallia series, I just know it’s going to be amazing!!
Thank you @booksirens for the eARC in exchange for an honest review
✑ Henri is the "Beast". Marguerite is "Belle" but instead of loving books, she loves painting and is a painter. Henri has been curse along with everyone in the chateau. For him to break the curse, he must find true love and be love in return.
Can the curse be broke in time?
✑ Enchanting Fate is a Beauty and the Beast retelling and since this is my first time reading a retelling I actually didn't know what to expect. I never actually realized how much of an ass was the prince before he was cursed. This book just opened my eyes on that aspect.
✑ Enchanting Fate has some similarities and differences with beauty and beast. Of course, there's the curses, breaking the curse by one's true love and the rose (except this one has a garden of rose). Instead of turning into furnitures, Henri's valet and helpers, were all turned into animal like creatures. The book also took true love to a different perspective, not what you'd expect from a beauty and beast retelling. But, I like it because it's different.
✑ I do appreciate that we as readers were able to see Henri's past and why he turned out the way he is. I was happy with the ending because true love did after all, win. The best character development that I thoroughly enjoyed was Henri's ♥︎
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** I received this book for free. Thank you BookSirens and the author for access to this ARC. This is my honest review**
I dont normally read retellings, so please understand that my opinion would be from someone who is not accustom to books based on retellings.
When I first started, I gasp at the treatment that Henri received from his stepmother. More so, when even his step sisters are the same. Although, character wise it would make sense that they would. I just thought maybe one of them would be sad to see him go. That one person who is different. To make it a bit more sad for him to do what he did, but he had no choice. But that’s just me.
I find the story soooo confusing. Henry went from being someone traumatized with abuse to someone cruel and mean. And when the Enchanter came to curse him, he was so out of character — I felt like the story was forced.
I was excited to see what Marguerite would be like �� but she felt flat after a few chapters. Even the dynamic between her and her family seemed uninteresting.
The writing is not that bad, and i know it’s the author’s first book — so Im okay with it. Just that i feel the way the character talks and what is described of them feels disconnected. Like i know they’re talking but they’re a bit out of character. Which makes me confused most of the time.
All in all, I enjoyed it — it’s just wasnt really my cup of tea.
From being selfish to becoming selfless and vice versa.
Henry is cursed to become a beast until a beauty rescues him from his fate. Marguerite finds herself in the same enchanted forest surrounded by others cursed into animal forms. She comes from a rich merchant 's family who has gone bust and the only way to regain her life as it was is by falling in love. She believes that Henry who is a rich Earl is that person. He believes the same and they decide to make a go of it. It has to be true love though. Is it really true love or do their hearts belong elsewhere?
This is an entertaining story where the hearts don't look at status and riches for true happiness. The enchanter who is responsible for the curse can see right through them and things take a turn for the worse before getting better. Henry proves that he has really changed for the better by making his announcement at the end and Marguerite who always put others first changes her mindset too. It gives the fairy tale ending as promised, but with a twist.
I received an eARC from BookSirens and the views expressed are my personal opinion.
I received an advance review copy, and I am leaving this review voluntarily
“I don’t care what others may think now. I am making my path, and I choose you”
Enchanting Fate is a Beauty and The Beast retelling. It’s such a quick read. I absolutely enjoyed reading every second of this book. I was hooked from the start. I really loved the take on this one. I didn’t expect this book to have a twist, but once I was into a few chapters I kind of just knew that there was something different about to go on. The writing is beautiful, and the characters are great. I wasn’t fond of Henri at the beginning but his character development is so good that I came to love him in the end. Claude is my favorite character in this book, he’s just too precious.
Overall, I really loved the ending and I loved how it all played out. I didn’t expect to love this book as much as I do right now but it’s a five-star read for me with how much I enjoyed it. I look forward to reading more of the author’s books in the future. If you like reading Beauty and The Beast retellings, then this book is definitely for you.