2.75 Stars. I’m sorry to say that this book was not for me. However -and there is a big however- I thought this book could be read as a standalone and now I know I was mistaken. Not only is this the third book of a series, but there is also a podcast involved. This seems to be a whole little world that Shippen created with this maybe being the farewell book. Had I known this, I never would have started reading here as I’m very careful about reading order. While I could see someone new, like me, liking this, I don’t think anyone completely new would understand or could even receive all that this book has to give. Therefore, if you are reading this whole series, ignore my review and read reviews from others who also have. I think my review should only really be of interest for people thinking of jumping into the series with this book.
I loved the premise and truly thought this book would be right up my alley. I love superhero books and while this is not that, there are people walking around with every imaginable superhero power you could think of. With the premise being: what would it be like to be a young woman in a family where everyone has super powers but you? That is until you have an accident and realize maybe you are not so different after all.
I thought this would be a lot of fun, but instead I mostly felt like I was reading this book just to be done with it. It is not that big of a book, but it felt twice as long as it should have and it took me triple the time to finish it than normal. I thought this was going to be YA, but it was actually NA with the mains ranging from 19-29. I don’t always do well with NA, and I could not help but feel like the characters acted younger than they were. I think if Rose, who is one of the main, main characters, would have been 16, and her brother maybe 17 or 18, I think a lot of character actions would have made a lot more sense to me.
I struggled with the writing style, but that is more a personal preference. We are in the POV of 4 different characters, two main characters and two main secondary characters. Each character speaks to us through a different media. One journals, one writes letters, one types on a sub/reddit and the last types on a blog or AO3? I could not tell for sure and as this was an early ARC, and the spacing and different line edits for the different media were not finished, they weren’t always the easiest to read. This is something that will obviously be fixed in the final edit so that wasn’t my real problem. My problem was that I just don’t care for readings books in letter and journal form. There were also some obvious inconsistencies and head hoping, but again, that will be cleaned up so while they slowed my reading speed down, I know this will be a better experience for readers who get the new book that is released in a couple days.
A lot of people complained about Rose, how annoying and selfish she is, which I get, but I liked her character’s story much better than the others. While it was nice to be in the POV of her girlfriend –on a super rare occasion- and be in the POV of her brother, I don’t think either was needed. This book should have been a two POV book. Rose, a character who is on her journey of self-discovery, and Damien, a character from a previous book, who is back for closure.?.
Damien, is where I had some pretty big issues. I was interested in Rose and what was going on with her, but then at close to the midway point this new main character appears. While we do get some previous small appearances, Damien is not really back until the second half and then the story changes to all about him and his old group. Now here was the big problem, I just did not care. This is why I say reading the previous books are a must because I didn’t have any feelings for Damien or his group. They just took up space in the book that I wanted to spend with Rose and her girlfriend instead.
Rose and her girlfriend is where the book shined for me. I thought their dates and time together was really sweet. I found them to be an easy couple to root for since they were so cute together. Unfortunately, the girlfriend would just disappear for pages and pages, randomly in another state or something like that, and it ruined all the adorable momentum they had built up together. It’s obvious to me that Shippen can really write some sweet romance, she just spent too much time on older characters and didn’t give the new characters enough romance time.
While I enjoyed the little romance that was present, I had another big issue with all the characters arguing with each other. The problem was the arguing was constant and super repetitive. I hope some of it gets cut out for the finale book as I felt like I read the same few arguments ten times over. Rose and her brother’s arguments especially really started to get to me. Rose is annoying and selfish, but she makes mistakes because she has a brand new power. Her brother, who everyone talks about how he was horrible to be around when he was figuring out his own power, is constantly telling Rose she is so horrible for trying to figure out hers. He got his get out of jail free card for a long time, from the whole family, yet everyone has a problem with Rose. While that double standard was annoying, all the arguing in general really did me in and I ended up feeling like almost half the dialogue was people arguing.
I think in the end I’m not even sure what this book was truly about, besides arguing and dreaming. While there was a lot of mini conflict -all the arguing- there was no major conflict to drive the storyline. This is a book about super powers yet there are no real heroes and no real villains. That message is okay for a lot of books but I don’t think it worked for this kind of premise. I needed some action or even fun to keep me turning the pages but nothing ever really happened. This is almost entirely a character driven read with no major plot points. I think this book more turned into a swan song for the old character of Damien, and I think Rose, and especially her girlfriend, kind of got left behind.
TLDR: If you are a fan of this series, I would ignore this review. I have not read the series and I know that fact absolutely lowered my enjoyment of this book. Had I known how connected this book was to this world Shippen created, I would never have read this book out of turn. If you are new to this series I would highly suggest not starting here. A great premise, but this particular book, read out of order, was not for me.
An ARC was generously given to me by Tor/Forge for a review.