…this was Earth. Its departed children had returned to it without welcome and were now paying the price.
Truth be told, I'm still a little on the fence about I.O.Adler's "The Seraph Engine", which I downloaded as part of the "Old Chrome Box Set" (books 1 - 3). It's not badly written per se and I don't have any issues with editing either. But even though the action works out fairly well, it's completely lacking in what I'd consider to be sufficient exposition. I just feel like we don't know nearly enough about our main players or the world in which they inhabit. I couldn't make heads nor tails about the different locales mentioned or even where it seems most of mankind has wound up after… something? Sure, we get some hints dropped a few times - including an extremely vague indication of how Earth is the way it is now (but not why) - but I never felt informed if you will. Definitely not to the point where I could say "aha, this is what makes this story UNIQUE!"
For the briefest eternity he believed some stygian hell had been breached and overflowed into the cramped space in its awful darkness.
In fact, I had a lot of trouble establishing any kind of connection with Miles Kim who never really gets to show much emotion beyond some mild remorse and what I assume is a fairly decent conscience. Is he truly much of a "cowboy" type or was that just a projection made on someone that finds himself under duress in the middle of the desert after a train robbery? Sure, one could argue he makes for a fine gun-slinger but his background being such a big blank right now really hurt things. It didn't help either that just when we finally meet his nemesis face-to-face that door gets slammed shut pretty quickly. I'll just say then that if you asked me to describe Miles to you, well, I wouldn't be able to say much without resorting to assumed clichés.
Imagine a network of a hundred minds, a thousand, each node bringing a lifetime of expertise and skills.
I also have to point out that this is the first time that any of the books I've marked as being from the "weird west" genre have not included a fantasy element, of which this had none. So maybe that had something to do with my reaction, I'm not sure. No, this was definitely what I guess you could call 'soft' scifi with all the robots, drones and, yes obviously, cyborg elements. Well, not to be redundant, but it was as scifi as I could tell it was. There weren't too many elements that HAD to be defined as such but there we are.
Thinking about it all felt as if he were juggling a dozen objects of differing sizes and shapes, some round, some sharp, and some on fire.
I will say I was honestly very disappointed in the ending of this first chapter. This story was written with little to no option but to continue reading if you want ANY kind of closure or to find a decent stopping point. To say then that the way Adler ends Book 1 was abrupt is putting it mildly. I won't send the box set back to the KU library just yet, but I'm also not feeling like continuing the trilogy (or is it more?) at this stage either. We'll see, a few days away from it is probably a good idea.