Recommended despite some objections
This reader gives this a 3 1/2 rounded up to 4 stars.
The humorous banter/exchanges between Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet are worthwhile enough to venture into this variation, not to mention the circumstances on how the beloved couple came about an unplanned and forced engagement, despite it being a well-tried plot in past variations.
What this reader finds objectionable is the somewhat uncertain and shaky expression of feelings in Darcy and his actions, which begs the question does he truly love Elizabeth Bennet enough to genuinely want to marry her. Given the situation in which they found themselves in, this somewhat hot-and-cold treatment he gives Elizabeth Bennet creates the angst although it’s forced and/or unnecessary. All he could’ve done was explain in a sentence or two where he is going, what Wickham truly is, why there is a need to be wary of Wickham being in Longbourn, etc. so as to give Elizabeth the assurances she needs to feel stability in Darcy’s affections and feelings for her. The secrecy is uncalled for considering they are already engaged; and even Darcy of canon would have told Elizabeth Bennet even if they were mere friends.
However, there are more good in this variation, especially the focus on the beloved couple, and one cannot get enough of them in a novella like this.