First off, a HUGE thank you to the author for sending me an ARC to read and allowing me to write an honest review.
Before I do that, let me begin with a brief summary of her debut story. It is important to note that if you subscribe to Black’s newsletter, you have free access to her prequel novella entitled Shield of Shadow! Blade of Ash touches a bit on the prequel, so technically you don’t have to read it. However, I insist that you do for several reasons: 1. Black is a fantastic writer so why not? 2. The prequel introduces Weston Grey, a strong wise and handsome character who adds a bit of love tension for Aly and 3. Questions that a reader might have in understanding magic and the evil of the Canyon can look to the prequel for the answers. With all this said, Shield of Shadow is not the book on the hot-seat, Blade of Ash is.
Blade of Ash is a fantasy story that tackles the age old trope of good vs. evil. Aly is a magic wielder who is tasked in protecting the king. Except for one tiny problem: she let the king die. Oops. As she and the kingdom are forced to move on, Aly is tasked to Bind herself to the next king as his protector. If only Red wasn’t so stubborn, strong, and handsome. If only he didn’t hate Aly so much for his father’s death. Then maybe, MAYBE, they could be compatible partners. Rumors of a Beacon and Beholder flow from ear to ear and both Red and Aly brush off the thought that together they are more powerful than if they were apart. Yet when Red finds out he is cursed like his father was, it is up to Aly to find a cure before history repeats itself!
Overall, I really liked this story! It has adventure, romance, and strong Christian values. Everything I love in a book. I really wanted to give this story 5 stars! However, and because this is an honest response I must be so, I gave this debut 4 stars for one reason: Black likes to repeat the stakes as if the reader forgot what was happening in her plot. This happened a few times in her novella and I thought for sure she would not repeat the habit in her full length novel, but alas it was there. Let me explain what I mean: There is a part in the story where a character is badly wounded. Up until now, the reader knows that the character is wounded and therefore cannot help in any way to Red and Aly. Yet the author mentions again “[Character Name] was who they needed, but [Character name] was who they could not ask for help.” Previously, she writes “[Character] was the only other person in the group familiar enough with Kirish to read the poem, but he was also the only other person in the group infected with Canyon magic.” Here is a perfect example where the reader understands so-and-so is needed to help but cannot. The reader does not need a one-line reminder of what the paragraph has already explained. This, and only this, is why I gave this book a 4 star rating. That and also the slow-burn romance is nice BUT it was not quite believable. It is clear that the romance between Red and Aly is what is important, however, it is not until the end of the book that you really see the chemistry. I wanted more! As seeing this is an ARC, I am hoping that Black has realized some of these minor errors and have enhanced her work to even better than what I read! It’s amazing, but it has potential to be INCREDIBLE!