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332 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 7, 2022
I'll get my biggest gripe with the book off my chest first. I have a bone to pick with you Alec: ASK FIRST!! The main male protagonist seems to think it's ok to kiss the girl he likes, multiple times, without asking her first.
There is a plot...kinda. It feels like it's episodic, experimental chapters that are tied together loosely because there's a vague overarching plot and the same characters throughout. Kind of like a mediocre fanfiction where the author's like "I want to do this today" and then makes it happen with the smallest tie in with the plot to try and say it was somewhat planned.
Now, I don't know if this is the fault of the translator, or if it's the author, but there's a lot of repeated descriptors within a chapter. It seems like once the author found a descriptor that fit a situation or a person it was tried out a bit within the chapter. A "madder" sky is one that stuck with me. There's also her describing Shiori as the gentle and demure, stereotypical Japanese woman. I don't mind reading that type of character, but knowing that it's the Japanese society's "ideal" woman makes me feel like the characterization is a bit forced to me, especially since Shiori is in her 30s. I have yet to get to know the real Shiori, and instead just know the image Shiori has built around her.