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Sweet Surprise
Flora Buchanan doesn’t think a relationship is an option. A variety of mental health issues—anxiety, OCD, and PTSD—make it seem impossible to find love. Instead, she seeks joy in the one thing that is safe and ordered: her sweetshop in Glasgow.
Mack Sharkey is ready to start a new life after being released from jail. As part of the infamous Sharkey family, she took care of business on the edge of the law for the once criminal, and now legitimate, empire. After being sentenced to jail time her cousin should have shared, she’s promised a quiet life running her dream barbershop.
Flora and Mack are bound together by a night that changed their lives two years before and never thought they’d ever see each other again. But when Mack opens up her barbershop right next to Flora’s sweetshop, their connection comes roaring back.
Cover Artist: Tammy Seidick
Genres: Contemporary / Romance
Tags: Animals, Gangsters, Good girls/Bad girls
Mack Sharkey is ready to start a new life after being released from jail. As part of the infamous Sharkey family, she took care of business on the edge of the law for the once criminal, and now legitimate, empire. After being sentenced to jail time her cousin should have shared, she’s promised a quiet life running her dream barbershop.
Flora and Mack are bound together by a night that changed their lives two years before and never thought they’d ever see each other again. But when Mack opens up her barbershop right next to Flora’s sweetshop, their connection comes roaring back.
Cover Artist: Tammy Seidick
Genres: Contemporary / Romance
Tags: Animals, Gangsters, Good girls/Bad girls
7 pages, Audible Audio
First published November 1, 2021
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Jenny Frame
30 books447 followersJenny Frame is from the small town of Motherwell in Scotland, where she lives with her partner, Lou, and their well loved and very spoiled dog. She has a diverse range of qualifications, including a BA in public management and a diploma in acting and performance. Nowadays, she likes to put her creative energies into writing rather than treading the boards. When not writing or reading, Jenny loves cheering on her local football team, which is not always an easy task!
Jenny Frame is the Royal Academy of Bards 2013 Hall of Fame Author.
Jenny Frame is the Royal Academy of Bards 2013 Hall of Fame Author.
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October 16, 2021
Guardian angel.
Jenny Frame's books follow a certain formula - Fairytale romances in a homonormative universe with a gentleman-butch to sweep a femme off her feet. Some stories can get a bit cheesy but the rest are sweet and if this formula appeals to you, you'll love her books a lot.
I have a soft spot for Frame's books and I love this one. It's kinda sweet and a really pleasant read. Mack comes from an infamous triad family. Flora is the owner of a sweet shop and is a bit of a social recluse with OCD, anxiety issues and PTSD. The characters are distinctively different from each other in personality and background but their lives collide when Mack saves Flora from danger one night. They reconnect about two years later when Mack opens a barber shop next door and they share a deep connection. I love Mack's rock-solid character underneath the gangster reputation. She's sensitive, thoughtful, gentle, loyal and fiercely protective of the people she cares about. I love that Mack takes on the role of Flora's 'guardian angel' and becomes what Flora needs most and I love how gentle and patient she is with her and how she cares enough to help Flora step out of her shell.
This book put me in a good mood, as many of Frame's books do. But more than that, Flora reminded me, in more ways than one, of my girlfriend and she sees a bit of the resemblence too. Just the minor stuff.
I'm not sure if this book is part of a series or if Frame intends to do a follow-up book but I really want a book about Mack's cousin, Nikki.
I received an ARC from Bold Strokes Books through Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.
Jenny Frame's books follow a certain formula - Fairytale romances in a homonormative universe with a gentleman-butch to sweep a femme off her feet. Some stories can get a bit cheesy but the rest are sweet and if this formula appeals to you, you'll love her books a lot.
I have a soft spot for Frame's books and I love this one. It's kinda sweet and a really pleasant read. Mack comes from an infamous triad family. Flora is the owner of a sweet shop and is a bit of a social recluse with OCD, anxiety issues and PTSD. The characters are distinctively different from each other in personality and background but their lives collide when Mack saves Flora from danger one night. They reconnect about two years later when Mack opens a barber shop next door and they share a deep connection. I love Mack's rock-solid character underneath the gangster reputation. She's sensitive, thoughtful, gentle, loyal and fiercely protective of the people she cares about. I love that Mack takes on the role of Flora's 'guardian angel' and becomes what Flora needs most and I love how gentle and patient she is with her and how she cares enough to help Flora step out of her shell.
This book put me in a good mood, as many of Frame's books do. But more than that, Flora reminded me, in more ways than one, of my girlfriend and she sees a bit of the resemblence too. Just the minor stuff.
I'm not sure if this book is part of a series or if Frame intends to do a follow-up book but I really want a book about Mack's cousin, Nikki.
I received an ARC from Bold Strokes Books through Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.
October 17, 2021
3.75 stars. When I pick up a book by Frame I generally know what I can expect and this book fits right in with that expectation as it is a sweet (yes sweet) butch-femme romance. A bit different from previous books that I read by Frame is that one of the protagonists deals with mental health issues and I thought (with my limited knowledge) that this was handled well.
Flora does not expect to ever find a partner as she has a social anxiety, OCD and PTSD, she is very introverted and prefers being alone, but deep down she hopes to find this one person who understands her and who she can share her life with. I don’t know much about mental health disorders, but through Flora I got a good feeling for what it is like to deal with this every minute of the day. Her compulsions, that tire her, and also the incomprehension of others who generally think she’s a weirdo. I also liked to see that this is not something that just disappears when you meet someone that you feel safe with (Mack in this case). There was only one moment near the end were the believability on the mental health problems was a bit shaky, but I enjoyed this storyline anyway.
Mack is part of the infamous Sharkey family in Glasgow. They run a legitimate empire now, but sometimes they still have to operate on the edge of the law, which landed her in prison. Now she’s just released from prison and wants to run a quiet business as a barber and it turns out that her shop is located next to that of Flora.
I read ex-con in the blurb and was immediately interested, but this was not the ex-con story I expected. Mack has been in prison for 1.5 years, but it has no real impact on the story line. It hasn’t shaped her mentally (or at least this is not discussed) and it has also no effect on her future life as her connections and family wealth allow her to start her own barber shop without any problems. Also, I expected (maybe I misunderstood the blurb) that she would turn the other cheek to her previous life, and this too is not entirely the case. So, if you’re expecting a book really focusing on an ex-con redemption arc, this is not it.
That said I did very much enjoy the romance between Mack and Flora. They immediately share a connection. Under her tough appearance Mack is chivalrous, gentle and sensitive and puts in a lot of effort to understand Flora and make her feel safe (sometimes she’s a bit too good to be true, but who cares) and Flora is very slowly opening up to Mack. There were a couple of interesting side characters and then there was Dexter! I love a good doggie.
All in all, this is a sweet romance and as with most of Frame’s books there is also a little bit of action in the book as well, which worked well with the storyline of Mack’s past.
I received an ARC from the publisher via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
Flora does not expect to ever find a partner as she has a social anxiety, OCD and PTSD, she is very introverted and prefers being alone, but deep down she hopes to find this one person who understands her and who she can share her life with. I don’t know much about mental health disorders, but through Flora I got a good feeling for what it is like to deal with this every minute of the day. Her compulsions, that tire her, and also the incomprehension of others who generally think she’s a weirdo. I also liked to see that this is not something that just disappears when you meet someone that you feel safe with (Mack in this case). There was only one moment near the end were the believability on the mental health problems was a bit shaky, but I enjoyed this storyline anyway.
Mack is part of the infamous Sharkey family in Glasgow. They run a legitimate empire now, but sometimes they still have to operate on the edge of the law, which landed her in prison. Now she’s just released from prison and wants to run a quiet business as a barber and it turns out that her shop is located next to that of Flora.
I read ex-con in the blurb and was immediately interested, but this was not the ex-con story I expected. Mack has been in prison for 1.5 years, but it has no real impact on the story line. It hasn’t shaped her mentally (or at least this is not discussed) and it has also no effect on her future life as her connections and family wealth allow her to start her own barber shop without any problems. Also, I expected (maybe I misunderstood the blurb) that she would turn the other cheek to her previous life, and this too is not entirely the case. So, if you’re expecting a book really focusing on an ex-con redemption arc, this is not it.
That said I did very much enjoy the romance between Mack and Flora. They immediately share a connection. Under her tough appearance Mack is chivalrous, gentle and sensitive and puts in a lot of effort to understand Flora and make her feel safe (sometimes she’s a bit too good to be true, but who cares) and Flora is very slowly opening up to Mack. There were a couple of interesting side characters and then there was Dexter! I love a good doggie.
All in all, this is a sweet romance and as with most of Frame’s books there is also a little bit of action in the book as well, which worked well with the storyline of Mack’s past.
I received an ARC from the publisher via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
November 21, 2021
Beautiful!
I've got to admit, I am a fan of Frame's work, and I love Sweet Surprise.
Mack Sharkey, (Always love them badarse characters that have a hint of softness to them! ) has just been released from jail and wants to start a new life by opening up a barbers shop right next door to Flora Buchanan's sweet shop. Flora has her own obstacles to overcome, such as anxiety, OCD, and PTSD. And thinks a relationship will never happen. We get to watch Mack and Flora become close to one another, watch their friendship grow, and earn trust.
I also would like to point out, how fantastically, Mental Health issues were included in this storyline. It was written incredibly well and you can certainly see that research has been done. Not many authors include mental health in their plots and write about it well.
There is a hint of violence in the story, not much and it doesn't go into great detail... but if you 'trigger' to violence please be aware.
The sweet shop tho... remember when you were a child and walked into a sweet shop and your hit with that smell?? All the different smells just overpowering your senses? ... childhood memories. :)
I really did enjoy the story, and would love to see a series. Any chance???
Oh...... and Dexter,,, love Dexter!
4.5 stars.
I've got to admit, I am a fan of Frame's work, and I love Sweet Surprise.
Mack Sharkey, (Always love them badarse characters that have a hint of softness to them! ) has just been released from jail and wants to start a new life by opening up a barbers shop right next door to Flora Buchanan's sweet shop. Flora has her own obstacles to overcome, such as anxiety, OCD, and PTSD. And thinks a relationship will never happen. We get to watch Mack and Flora become close to one another, watch their friendship grow, and earn trust.
I also would like to point out, how fantastically, Mental Health issues were included in this storyline. It was written incredibly well and you can certainly see that research has been done. Not many authors include mental health in their plots and write about it well.
There is a hint of violence in the story, not much and it doesn't go into great detail... but if you 'trigger' to violence please be aware.
The sweet shop tho... remember when you were a child and walked into a sweet shop and your hit with that smell?? All the different smells just overpowering your senses? ... childhood memories. :)
I really did enjoy the story, and would love to see a series. Any chance???
Oh...... and Dexter,,, love Dexter!
4.5 stars.
November 1, 2021
I’m so glad I had the chance to read Sweet Surprise by Jenny Frame. This is a lovely slow-burn romance about a couple who really need each other and definitely belongs together.
This is a story about two women: Mack Sharkey, who has just gotten out of prison, and Flora Buchanan, who has lived most of her life with severe OCD, social anxiety, and PTSD. When Mack opens up a barbershop next door to the sweetshop Flora owns, the two begin to see each other on a daily basis. Mack quickly realizes that there is definite chemistry between the two, but she will have to tread carefully if she wants a future with Flora. There are problems that could sink any chance of a relationship the two might have including Mack’s criminal past, her family ties, and of course Flora’s mental health issues. This budding romance has many hurdles to overcome.
I love a good character driven romance, and these ladies really worked for me. These are well-developed characters that I connected with quickly. Flora’s health issues are treated realistically and only endeared me to her more. Mack is exactly the person she needs to help her thrive. Add in a terrifically described setting and lifelike secondary characters, and you have a tale you don’t want to miss.
There is a scene in the novel where there is a physical attack against a woman. It is not the most graphic I’ve ever read, and I had no problem with reading it myself, but I want to mention it for those who might be sensitive to this kind of action. I truly enjoyed reading this book. It is a beautiful love story, and the way it ends makes me think there might be more to come, maybe with one of the secondary characters in the tale. I hope there is.
I received an ARC from NetGalley and Bold Strokes Books for an honest review.
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This is a story about two women: Mack Sharkey, who has just gotten out of prison, and Flora Buchanan, who has lived most of her life with severe OCD, social anxiety, and PTSD. When Mack opens up a barbershop next door to the sweetshop Flora owns, the two begin to see each other on a daily basis. Mack quickly realizes that there is definite chemistry between the two, but she will have to tread carefully if she wants a future with Flora. There are problems that could sink any chance of a relationship the two might have including Mack’s criminal past, her family ties, and of course Flora’s mental health issues. This budding romance has many hurdles to overcome.
I love a good character driven romance, and these ladies really worked for me. These are well-developed characters that I connected with quickly. Flora’s health issues are treated realistically and only endeared me to her more. Mack is exactly the person she needs to help her thrive. Add in a terrifically described setting and lifelike secondary characters, and you have a tale you don’t want to miss.
There is a scene in the novel where there is a physical attack against a woman. It is not the most graphic I’ve ever read, and I had no problem with reading it myself, but I want to mention it for those who might be sensitive to this kind of action. I truly enjoyed reading this book. It is a beautiful love story, and the way it ends makes me think there might be more to come, maybe with one of the secondary characters in the tale. I hope there is.
I received an ARC from NetGalley and Bold Strokes Books for an honest review.
Rainbow Reflections: https://rainbowreflections.home.blog/
October 12, 2021
This book follows the story of retired gang banger, Mack Sharkey, from the notorious Sharkey clan and Flora Buchanan, the owner of a sweetshop. After taking the fall for her Cousin (leader of Sharkey gang) Mack is looking forward to a simple life running her own small barbershop which happens to be right next to Flora's shop. Immediately infatuated with the shy Flora, Mack yearns to get closer to her except Flora may just be more than she bargained for. Dealing with her own problems of OCD, PTSD and anxiety Flora is instantly flustered by the charming Mack.
I absolutely loved all the characters in this book. Flora is adorable and deserves the world and I liked how Mack was willing to give her that. They had amazing chemistry that I genuinely think Frame did a good job at writing. However, I do have a small problem with it but I'll get to that in a bit. Mack was a nice enough character but does seemingly have a bit of a saviour complex which did get a bit annoying but I still liked her character. That saviour complex definitely wasn't intentional, most likely an exaggerated attempt to make her a caring character.
I think this genre definitely works with Frame's writing and I'd love to see more crime filled stories by her. But a big problem that I've always had with her books, is her pacing. Specifically with the relationship portion of her books. The characters get together and are immediately ready for everlasting commitment and they're exchanging "I love yous". This type of insta-love type story doesn't really work for her and it kind of ruined the tension between Mack and Flora. Also would've liked the conflict to have last a bit longer and see a bit more fallout from it. I will say this book does have significant improvement from the last book I read by her! It's amazing to see her continue growing.
That being said, I do recommend this book. Likable characters, interesting storyline and good writing.
Thank you NetGalley and the publishers for the ARC in return for an honest review
I absolutely loved all the characters in this book. Flora is adorable and deserves the world and I liked how Mack was willing to give her that. They had amazing chemistry that I genuinely think Frame did a good job at writing. However, I do have a small problem with it but I'll get to that in a bit. Mack was a nice enough character but does seemingly have a bit of a saviour complex which did get a bit annoying but I still liked her character. That saviour complex definitely wasn't intentional, most likely an exaggerated attempt to make her a caring character.
I think this genre definitely works with Frame's writing and I'd love to see more crime filled stories by her. But a big problem that I've always had with her books, is her pacing. Specifically with the relationship portion of her books. The characters get together and are immediately ready for everlasting commitment and they're exchanging "I love yous". This type of insta-love type story doesn't really work for her and it kind of ruined the tension between Mack and Flora. Also would've liked the conflict to have last a bit longer and see a bit more fallout from it. I will say this book does have significant improvement from the last book I read by her! It's amazing to see her continue growing.
That being said, I do recommend this book. Likable characters, interesting storyline and good writing.
Thank you NetGalley and the publishers for the ARC in return for an honest review
June 12, 2022
Another fantastic read!
With Sweet Surprise, Jenny Frame weaves a moving and unforgettable love story between Flora, a sweetshop owner with mental health issues and Mack, the enforcer for the Sharkey family and owner of a barbershop. I loved everything about this book: the characters, Dexter; the cutest dog ever, the sweet moments, the family loyalty and of course the romance. The story is so well written. You can feel every emotion and it feels like I got to know both main characters really well. I hope there will be a sequel very soon.
With Sweet Surprise, Jenny Frame weaves a moving and unforgettable love story between Flora, a sweetshop owner with mental health issues and Mack, the enforcer for the Sharkey family and owner of a barbershop. I loved everything about this book: the characters, Dexter; the cutest dog ever, the sweet moments, the family loyalty and of course the romance. The story is so well written. You can feel every emotion and it feels like I got to know both main characters really well. I hope there will be a sequel very soon.
October 18, 2021
Whenever I read a Jenny Frame book I have mixed emotions. The author’s story are usually very sweet, but there is always this relationship dynamic that just doesn’t sit right with me. To me it borders on the ridiculous.
Flora suffers from several rather severe mental health issues, when she meets Mack she feels instantly safe. Mack is a Sharkey, why should you care? They are former gangsters in Glasgow and their name still has some pull. All there dealings are now legit, but they do fight any and all sorts of bullies they don’t want on their streets and a fiercely protective of their own. Mack has an instant licking to her wee mouse and is overly protective of Flo. Flo has a sort of hero worship going on towards Mack, and this is where the author loses me. Flo is extremely dependent on Mack and I just don't like that. I get how Mack is supposed t be the tough butch and all that but this sort of dynamic just doesn't work for me. It's a standard for this author though so I shouldn't be surprised. I think I would actually really enjoy Frame’s books if this dynamic just wasn't so over the top and a tad more balanced.
I enjoy the author's writing, it's easy and comfortable, just the story that is told doesn't suit me. I'm sure many others will enjoy this for the sweet romance that it is, I just can't get over the dynamic. I do want to say I appreciate how the author handled mental health issues, although it's a bit unbelievable when Flo starts therapy and how she is with Mack, I do feel like it's a good try with showing some neurodiversity.
Check out some other reviews if you are interested in this book, 3 stars from me.
*ARC received in exchange for a voluntary and honest review*
Flora suffers from several rather severe mental health issues, when she meets Mack she feels instantly safe. Mack is a Sharkey, why should you care? They are former gangsters in Glasgow and their name still has some pull. All there dealings are now legit, but they do fight any and all sorts of bullies they don’t want on their streets and a fiercely protective of their own. Mack has an instant licking to her wee mouse and is overly protective of Flo. Flo has a sort of hero worship going on towards Mack, and this is where the author loses me. Flo is extremely dependent on Mack and I just don't like that. I get how Mack is supposed t be the tough butch and all that but this sort of dynamic just doesn't work for me. It's a standard for this author though so I shouldn't be surprised. I think I would actually really enjoy Frame’s books if this dynamic just wasn't so over the top and a tad more balanced.
I enjoy the author's writing, it's easy and comfortable, just the story that is told doesn't suit me. I'm sure many others will enjoy this for the sweet romance that it is, I just can't get over the dynamic. I do want to say I appreciate how the author handled mental health issues, although it's a bit unbelievable when Flo starts therapy and how she is with Mack, I do feel like it's a good try with showing some neurodiversity.
Check out some other reviews if you are interested in this book, 3 stars from me.
*ARC received in exchange for a voluntary and honest review*
November 4, 2021
I don't think this book was really for me though I can see why others might enjoy it a lot. This is my first book by Frame, though I know she has several published.
Sweet surprise follows Flora Buchanan and Mack Sharkey. They own shops right next door to each other but also have a bit of history as well. Flora suffers from several mental illnesses including OCD and PTSD, where Mack recently finished a prison sentence. And instantly when they come back in contact the vibes are on.
There's a lot to enjoy about this book. It was very sweet and tender and watching Flora open up to Mack and learn to trust her was touching and warm.
I liked the representation shown in Floras character for her mental health issues. It was handled pretty well overall and more visibility towards disabilities that she has and showing that they can be real people too is important.
But some things about the book didn't stick as well with me. One was Flora's seemingly dependence on Mack for stability when they got closer together. For as much as I do appreciate Frame giving us a character with OCS, anxiety, and PTSD, I didn't always like the codependence she found in Mack.
Also the whole thing with the Sharkey family being framed as the "good mobsters" who don't push drugs or are involved in criminal activity anymore even though they act like it, it just felt really weird to me. Like the good mobsters vs the bad mobsters. I just didn't really gravitate to that.
This book was pretty sweet overall and did bring some warm feelings, but I also had some part I didn't like as much. 2.5/5
thank you to Bold Strokes Books and Netgalley for this ARC in exchange for an honest review
Sweet surprise follows Flora Buchanan and Mack Sharkey. They own shops right next door to each other but also have a bit of history as well. Flora suffers from several mental illnesses including OCD and PTSD, where Mack recently finished a prison sentence. And instantly when they come back in contact the vibes are on.
There's a lot to enjoy about this book. It was very sweet and tender and watching Flora open up to Mack and learn to trust her was touching and warm.
I liked the representation shown in Floras character for her mental health issues. It was handled pretty well overall and more visibility towards disabilities that she has and showing that they can be real people too is important.
But some things about the book didn't stick as well with me. One was Flora's seemingly dependence on Mack for stability when they got closer together. For as much as I do appreciate Frame giving us a character with OCS, anxiety, and PTSD, I didn't always like the codependence she found in Mack.
Also the whole thing with the Sharkey family being framed as the "good mobsters" who don't push drugs or are involved in criminal activity anymore even though they act like it, it just felt really weird to me. Like the good mobsters vs the bad mobsters. I just didn't really gravitate to that.
This book was pretty sweet overall and did bring some warm feelings, but I also had some part I didn't like as much. 2.5/5
thank you to Bold Strokes Books and Netgalley for this ARC in exchange for an honest review
June 28, 2022
I like Jenny Frame - books look at bigger issues, in this case drugs and gangs, but never loses the fact she’s writing les rom. I assume a 2nd is coming re Nicki? Recommended.
November 8, 2021
A very cute, very sweet story. No more, no less.
November 5, 2021
The premise of the story was interesting with some bright spots here and there.
The challenge I had were the characters read more like caricatures. There was an over the top feel to the story, dialogue and character set up that make it hard to get lost in. There is also good amount of repetition which can wear you down.
I was neutral overall.
The challenge I had were the characters read more like caricatures. There was an over the top feel to the story, dialogue and character set up that make it hard to get lost in. There is also good amount of repetition which can wear you down.
I was neutral overall.
January 31, 2022
3.8 stars
Enjoyable and cute story in true Frame tradition. Mack is the strong but sensitive butch and Flora the fair maiden who needs her help though Flora certainly has her own strength and is a brave woman. Special about this story was that Flora has OCD and social anxiety. Not Frame’s best, but still a very nice read. Needs better editing though.
Enjoyable and cute story in true Frame tradition. Mack is the strong but sensitive butch and Flora the fair maiden who needs her help though Flora certainly has her own strength and is a brave woman. Special about this story was that Flora has OCD and social anxiety. Not Frame’s best, but still a very nice read. Needs better editing though.
November 11, 2021
Jenny Frame books are so swoon-worthy and I Luv it! At times my heart truly did pour out for Flora, but Mack always steps in to save the day like the superhero she is. This is a sweet tooth romance with a clean not so clean family biz in the mix. I would luv to read more about Mack’s cousin Nikki (head honcho) Maybe she will get her fairy-tale ending too.🤞🏽
Thank you Bold Strokes Books and Netgalley for this ARC in exchange for an honest review.
Thank you Bold Strokes Books and Netgalley for this ARC in exchange for an honest review.
January 24, 2022
It's a sweet story to read but it felt a tad over the top. I usually love reading Frame's books but this didn't really hit the mark for me.
October 20, 2021
Flora Buchanan struggles everyday of her life with her social anxiety and OCD. Her life is as ordered and controlled as she can make it until one day she is in the wrong place at the wrong time. Mack Sharkey, the enforcer for the family business just happens to be at the right place and time to save Flora from a harrowing experience. A connection is formed between Mack and Flora which lays dormant for almost two years. They reconnect when Mack opens her barbershop next door to Flora’s sweet shop.
This is an interesting story for many reasons. The setting of the city of Glasgow as well as a ‘family’ business which went legit in the 1980’s but still pushes the legal boundaries creates an intriguing background. Reading about the stresses and pressures Flora lives every minute of every day is enlightening and heartbreaking at the same time.
Jenny Frame is a much published author with many well liked novels. That being said Sweet Surprise is an entertaining novel with issues. The attraction between Mack and Flora happens within the first five percent of the novel. Even with the plot containing a year and a half gap it felt much too quick and forced into the story. As well, Mack’s softer side would be more credible if there was more visibility to it in the gap section. The last thing is the over use of the word ‘safe’ and any variation of it. Frame presents the reasons for Flora to feel protected and guarded in a well thought out manner. The over utilization of the word ‘safe’ is mere repetition.
The end of the novel left me feeling hopeful for many who suffer from mental illness. If there needs to be a reason to read Sweet Surprise this beyond a doubt is a compelling rational.
I received an advance review copy for free from NetGalley and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
This is an interesting story for many reasons. The setting of the city of Glasgow as well as a ‘family’ business which went legit in the 1980’s but still pushes the legal boundaries creates an intriguing background. Reading about the stresses and pressures Flora lives every minute of every day is enlightening and heartbreaking at the same time.
Jenny Frame is a much published author with many well liked novels. That being said Sweet Surprise is an entertaining novel with issues. The attraction between Mack and Flora happens within the first five percent of the novel. Even with the plot containing a year and a half gap it felt much too quick and forced into the story. As well, Mack’s softer side would be more credible if there was more visibility to it in the gap section. The last thing is the over use of the word ‘safe’ and any variation of it. Frame presents the reasons for Flora to feel protected and guarded in a well thought out manner. The over utilization of the word ‘safe’ is mere repetition.
The end of the novel left me feeling hopeful for many who suffer from mental illness. If there needs to be a reason to read Sweet Surprise this beyond a doubt is a compelling rational.
I received an advance review copy for free from NetGalley and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
October 30, 2021
I liked this book, but as the title suggests it was sweet. Possibly a tad too sweet for my tastes, as the way Mack pandered to Flora did get a bit repetitive, as well as the suggestion that Mack is Flora's guardian angel. I lost count of the amount of times this was mentioned in the later part of the book. The repetition was grating.
In saying that though, the romance is lovely and I really liked the characters, who felt quite realistic. The one aspect where I would've liked to have seen more would be exactly why Mack chased Flora and wanted her specifically. There wasn't anything in the story to tell me why Mack liked Flora so much and due to her mental health issues, the chemistry wasn't there between them, so I think my logical brain kicked in and made me feel as though it was a little too constructed and simple for me.
Sweet Surprise is still a good read though and I enjoyed reading about Mack's family and their time on the edges of the law. I'm hoping that Nikki will get her own book, as she definitely intrigued me.
Many thanks to Netgalley and Bold Strokes Books for a copy of this novel. ARC provided in exchange for an honest review.
In saying that though, the romance is lovely and I really liked the characters, who felt quite realistic. The one aspect where I would've liked to have seen more would be exactly why Mack chased Flora and wanted her specifically. There wasn't anything in the story to tell me why Mack liked Flora so much and due to her mental health issues, the chemistry wasn't there between them, so I think my logical brain kicked in and made me feel as though it was a little too constructed and simple for me.
Sweet Surprise is still a good read though and I enjoyed reading about Mack's family and their time on the edges of the law. I'm hoping that Nikki will get her own book, as she definitely intrigued me.
Many thanks to Netgalley and Bold Strokes Books for a copy of this novel. ARC provided in exchange for an honest review.
November 11, 2021
ARC received via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
If you’ve read a book by Frame before, then you will pretty much know what happens here. Frame’s characters follow a definite pattern of butch/femme, with the femme character generally needing protection or saving in some form.
Here, we have Mack, member of a once gangster family (the Sharkey’s) that’s gone legit, and Flora, who owns a sweet shop and suffers from anxiety disorders and OCD. They first meet when Flora is attacked by a group of men and Mack saves her, and then are reunited when Mack sets up a barber shop next to Flora’s store.
Flora is pretty sure she’s a lesbian and this is confirmed for her upon meeting Mack. Flora is shy and sweet and Mack was drawn to her when she saved her, and is delighted to have happened upon her again. Mack, for all her toughness, is a big sweetheart and sets about befriending Flora and wanting to make her feel safe. Mack also owns the best character in the book, a sausage dog called Dexter.
The supporting characters include each MC’s coworker, and Mack’s family, her mother, aunt and uncle, who aren’t given much to do, and her cousin Nikki and Nickki’s daughter Isy, who also suffers from anxiety and spends a lot of time with Mack, Dex and Flora.
The romance between the leads is very sweet, it unfolded organically and they spent a lot of time together. One issue I had with the book is that we hear endlessly about how sweet and in need of protection Flora is and how Mack is her ‘guardian angel’. Mack also ‘saves’ Flora multiple times in different ways throughout the book. The repetition was annoying.
I give Frame kudos for including an MC with mental health issues, and I enjoyed watching Flora blossom through her relationships Mack, Dex and Isy, but I couldn’t help thinking she was becoming codependent with Mack.
The main issue I had with the book though was the ‘mobster’ storyline. We’re lead to believe the Sharkeys are the good guys, but if the turned legit 20 years ago, I had to wonder how they’d held 9nt9 their ‘power’. They seemingly had no trouble using violence to get their way, but that was ok cause they were using their power for ‘good’. There’s quite a few instances of Flora thinking about how she knows Mack can be violent but that Mack would never hurt her. The bad guys are also not well drawn, so they never feel like much of a threat.
Overall though, if you like Frame’s books, you’ll like this. 3.5 stars rounded up.
If you’ve read a book by Frame before, then you will pretty much know what happens here. Frame’s characters follow a definite pattern of butch/femme, with the femme character generally needing protection or saving in some form.
Here, we have Mack, member of a once gangster family (the Sharkey’s) that’s gone legit, and Flora, who owns a sweet shop and suffers from anxiety disorders and OCD. They first meet when Flora is attacked by a group of men and Mack saves her, and then are reunited when Mack sets up a barber shop next to Flora’s store.
Flora is pretty sure she’s a lesbian and this is confirmed for her upon meeting Mack. Flora is shy and sweet and Mack was drawn to her when she saved her, and is delighted to have happened upon her again. Mack, for all her toughness, is a big sweetheart and sets about befriending Flora and wanting to make her feel safe. Mack also owns the best character in the book, a sausage dog called Dexter.
The supporting characters include each MC’s coworker, and Mack’s family, her mother, aunt and uncle, who aren’t given much to do, and her cousin Nikki and Nickki’s daughter Isy, who also suffers from anxiety and spends a lot of time with Mack, Dex and Flora.
The romance between the leads is very sweet, it unfolded organically and they spent a lot of time together. One issue I had with the book is that we hear endlessly about how sweet and in need of protection Flora is and how Mack is her ‘guardian angel’. Mack also ‘saves’ Flora multiple times in different ways throughout the book. The repetition was annoying.
I give Frame kudos for including an MC with mental health issues, and I enjoyed watching Flora blossom through her relationships Mack, Dex and Isy, but I couldn’t help thinking she was becoming codependent with Mack.
The main issue I had with the book though was the ‘mobster’ storyline. We’re lead to believe the Sharkeys are the good guys, but if the turned legit 20 years ago, I had to wonder how they’d held 9nt9 their ‘power’. They seemingly had no trouble using violence to get their way, but that was ok cause they were using their power for ‘good’. There’s quite a few instances of Flora thinking about how she knows Mack can be violent but that Mack would never hurt her. The bad guys are also not well drawn, so they never feel like much of a threat.
Overall though, if you like Frame’s books, you’ll like this. 3.5 stars rounded up.
November 27, 2021
Not a fav
I love Jenny Frame books. No one seems to do butch/femme like she does. I haven't read her last few books but I saw this one and it intrigued me.
The story itself was fine and in a sense I felt the character Mack was similar to Dale from Unexpected (definitely a favorite of mine). What I discovered while reading the book was that it felt choppy. Not smooth like I remember her previous books being. Things felt repetitive and conversations between characters didn't draw me in. I also felt development overall was lacking and things escalated and then wrapped within a space of a chapter. Hate to say this, and I'm sure I'll get grief for it, but this felt too much like current Radclyffe books...as in early books were well thought out, with characters you wanted to know about, secondary you wanted stories about, and so forth and so on and her new books which don't do that.
Maybe it's just me. Maybe my taste in eeading has changed or my expectations too high. But this was definitely not a fav of mine and I felt was not up to par to what I feel Jenny Frame has done before.
I love Jenny Frame books. No one seems to do butch/femme like she does. I haven't read her last few books but I saw this one and it intrigued me.
The story itself was fine and in a sense I felt the character Mack was similar to Dale from Unexpected (definitely a favorite of mine). What I discovered while reading the book was that it felt choppy. Not smooth like I remember her previous books being. Things felt repetitive and conversations between characters didn't draw me in. I also felt development overall was lacking and things escalated and then wrapped within a space of a chapter. Hate to say this, and I'm sure I'll get grief for it, but this felt too much like current Radclyffe books...as in early books were well thought out, with characters you wanted to know about, secondary you wanted stories about, and so forth and so on and her new books which don't do that.
Maybe it's just me. Maybe my taste in eeading has changed or my expectations too high. But this was definitely not a fav of mine and I felt was not up to par to what I feel Jenny Frame has done before.
October 11, 2021
When anxiety, OCD, and PTSD are the first line in the blurb, it's just going to make me pay double attention to that. And Reading this book on world mental health day, it's somehow reassuring. In the first few chapters, I was afraid this is one of those books that characters with mental health issues will suddenly get better just because they met the right person, and I was so glad this is not one of those.
There are flaws in this book, a few typos, and it got a bit repetitive at times, but overall I think I am enjoying it. Flora is undoubtedly lovable, and Mack is like this person who'd say and do all the right things. It almost feels unreal, but sometimes you just need a comfort character, and Mack will grow on you. Mack's cousin Nikki also caught my attention; it seems there's a lot of potential in this character, and I wish there would be a squeal that is about Nikki(finger cross)
Thank you NetGalley and Bold Strokes Books for an ARC ebook in exchange for an honest review
There are flaws in this book, a few typos, and it got a bit repetitive at times, but overall I think I am enjoying it. Flora is undoubtedly lovable, and Mack is like this person who'd say and do all the right things. It almost feels unreal, but sometimes you just need a comfort character, and Mack will grow on you. Mack's cousin Nikki also caught my attention; it seems there's a lot of potential in this character, and I wish there would be a squeal that is about Nikki(finger cross)
Thank you NetGalley and Bold Strokes Books for an ARC ebook in exchange for an honest review
October 15, 2021
Flora and Mack both been through a lot in their lives. Flora has mental issues that she trying to overcome and it’s a process because of this she doesn’t think she’ll find anyone to love. Mack just got out of prison for taking the fall for her cousin who should’ve share the jail sentence now that she out all she want is to live quiet life running her barbershop. Flora and Mack grow closer I like how Mack helps Flora and vice versus.
It’s two people who found each other when they needed the most. Enjoyable read I hope we get a story with Nikki I like character.
I received an ARC copy of this book from the Publisher via Netgalley and voluntarily leaving my review.
It’s two people who found each other when they needed the most. Enjoyable read I hope we get a story with Nikki I like character.
I received an ARC copy of this book from the Publisher via Netgalley and voluntarily leaving my review.
January 1, 2025
Holy shit.
visibility | sapphic romance, one protag is autistic and has ocd and social anxiety, one protag is butch
rep | I have ocd and social anxiety (I'll get back to you on the autism) so I can attest that was handled with care
reader health | not only was it not harmful, it was spectacular
education | might learn a little about how to be better towards people who are neurodiverse
writing style | technically excellent
plot | as believable as a mafia-ish romance can be!
characters | likable, believable, and swoony! i've never had a crush on a butch gal before but damn hello~
engagement | did not want to put it down
visibility | sapphic romance, one protag is autistic and has ocd and social anxiety, one protag is butch
rep | I have ocd and social anxiety (I'll get back to you on the autism) so I can attest that was handled with care
reader health | not only was it not harmful, it was spectacular
education | might learn a little about how to be better towards people who are neurodiverse
writing style | technically excellent
plot | as believable as a mafia-ish romance can be!
characters | likable, believable, and swoony! i've never had a crush on a butch gal before but damn hello~
engagement | did not want to put it down
November 3, 2021
2/5 stars
I wish I enjoyed this book more, and I really dislike giving critical reviews, but this certainly was not for me. I think this was at least partly a ‘it’s me not you’ situation, but I also think the story could have been improved in general. I say it’s partly me because I’m not a fan of romances where one character is clearly portrayed as a saviour/protector of the other. For me, it reads very much of toxic masculinity, with many of the ‘typical’ masculine characteristics you find books are embedded in Mack. She loves to eat but definitely not salad, she is all about chivalry/ being the one in charge, she uses violence to ‘protect’ Florals and she even says a quote along the lines of ‘she doesn’t know she’s beautiful’. While I’m not suggesting that any of this is problematic, for me it feels quite outdated and just isn’t what I’m looking for in my romance.
I think adding to me dislike of these characteristics is that it was included in a book about a character with mental illnesses, with Flora having OCD, PTSD and anxiety. As a woman with anxiety myself, I am always extra watchful of books that are representing this mental health condition. For me personally, the idea of a saviour character and the many moments in which other people speak for Flora, even without her consent (for example Sandra speaking to Mack about what Flora is feeling early in the book), is not something I like to see. In saying this, in general I think that the feelings of anxiety and struggling with a mental illness are portrayed quite honestly through Flora. I also like that this book didn’t fall into the trap of ‘curing’ mental health issues just because Flora found love, instead the idea of a process and avocation for therapy was a focus.
I would like to finish this review with some positives, because I certainly didn’t think the book was all bad. As I said, I enjoyed the mental health rep and advocation for therapy. I also loved the side characters in this book, they brought a real life and vibrancy to the story, especially little Dexter and Isy (as well as Mack’s other family). I also think Jenny Frame is really great at setting up a romance and making the reader hooked from the beginning.
I wish I enjoyed this book more, and I really dislike giving critical reviews, but this certainly was not for me. I think this was at least partly a ‘it’s me not you’ situation, but I also think the story could have been improved in general. I say it’s partly me because I’m not a fan of romances where one character is clearly portrayed as a saviour/protector of the other. For me, it reads very much of toxic masculinity, with many of the ‘typical’ masculine characteristics you find books are embedded in Mack. She loves to eat but definitely not salad, she is all about chivalry/ being the one in charge, she uses violence to ‘protect’ Florals and she even says a quote along the lines of ‘she doesn’t know she’s beautiful’. While I’m not suggesting that any of this is problematic, for me it feels quite outdated and just isn’t what I’m looking for in my romance.
I think adding to me dislike of these characteristics is that it was included in a book about a character with mental illnesses, with Flora having OCD, PTSD and anxiety. As a woman with anxiety myself, I am always extra watchful of books that are representing this mental health condition. For me personally, the idea of a saviour character and the many moments in which other people speak for Flora, even without her consent (for example Sandra speaking to Mack about what Flora is feeling early in the book), is not something I like to see. In saying this, in general I think that the feelings of anxiety and struggling with a mental illness are portrayed quite honestly through Flora. I also like that this book didn’t fall into the trap of ‘curing’ mental health issues just because Flora found love, instead the idea of a process and avocation for therapy was a focus.
I would like to finish this review with some positives, because I certainly didn’t think the book was all bad. As I said, I enjoyed the mental health rep and advocation for therapy. I also loved the side characters in this book, they brought a real life and vibrancy to the story, especially little Dexter and Isy (as well as Mack’s other family). I also think Jenny Frame is really great at setting up a romance and making the reader hooked from the beginning.
February 28, 2022
A very nice love story with a bit of action. Over-coming several issues to find love and with Scottish accents, what's not to like.
November 6, 2021
First, my favorite character is Dexter the wee spoiled dachshund, who wears sporty jumpers and is almost an emotional therapy dog. He steals every scene. Sweet Surprise is sweet. Mack Sharkey has been an enforcer for the family business but fresh out of short stint in jail she opens up a barber shop. The Sweet Shop next door is owned by Flora Buchanan. They'd briefly met once before when Mack rescued Flora from a scary situation. Flo has mental health issues including social anxiety and OCD. Her shyness brings out the protective side of Mack who wants to get to know her and bring her out of her shell. They start with daily walks (with Dexter) and Mack introduces her niece who also has anxiety.
This is a slow-burn romance and I like that Flo's issues are dealt with realistically. Falling in love isn't a cure all. Mack proves time and time again that she will keep Flo safe. But I got a little weary of her calling herself Flo's guardian angel. I liked that improvement for Flo not only comes with Mack friendship but also medication, counseling and learning coping skills. And I enjoyed that Flo gets her moment to stand for herself near the end. The back story of rival mob families with the Sharkey's gone legit but using force to keep drugs out of Glasgow seemed a stretch but it gave a reason for things to play out as it did. I enjoyed the humor and light touches but the romance was only average for me. Thank you to NetGalley and Bold Strokes Books for an eARC in exchange for an honest review.
This is a slow-burn romance and I like that Flo's issues are dealt with realistically. Falling in love isn't a cure all. Mack proves time and time again that she will keep Flo safe. But I got a little weary of her calling herself Flo's guardian angel. I liked that improvement for Flo not only comes with Mack friendship but also medication, counseling and learning coping skills. And I enjoyed that Flo gets her moment to stand for herself near the end. The back story of rival mob families with the Sharkey's gone legit but using force to keep drugs out of Glasgow seemed a stretch but it gave a reason for things to play out as it did. I enjoyed the humor and light touches but the romance was only average for me. Thank you to NetGalley and Bold Strokes Books for an eARC in exchange for an honest review.
December 8, 2021
The cutest gangster story ever!
Flora runs an old fashioned sweet shop but she struggles with a variety of mental health issues that affect her day to day life. Mack opens a barbers next door after being released from prison, but as a member of the Sharkey family she is well known and connected because of her family. When Mack realises who Flora is and how she might be able to help her the two form an unlikely friendship which quickly blossoms into something much more.
I loved this! Every single second of it was precious and something very special. When I started the story, I didn’t know what to expect but everything about this story had me excited to read more. Jenny has taken a variety of mental health issues and handled each one with sensitivity and care whilst importantly highlighting just how exhausting and difficult it can be when trying to manage multiple things that affect your beyond your control on a daily basis. There really is something everyone can relate to in this story, whether you have a diagnosed mental health condition or you are just battling with demons or life’s struggles.
Mack was a big surprise, such a gentle and sweet soul but passionate and strong. You could really feel how much she cared about not just Flora but everyone and she was remorseful of her criminal behaviour and connections while being realistic about them too. She was a great character, perfectly balanced to demonstrate how you can be strong but still have vulnerabilities of your own. There was a pressure that came with being part of her family but she still thought for herself, made decisions based on her morals not what her family expected. How she was with Flora and others just melted my heart. If everyone in the world took time to truly understand and be patient like Mack was, the world would be a better place.
It was Flora I really connected with though. I understood and empathised with almost everything she thought and felt. This really is a special story in highlighting the fact that mental health conditions are normal and that with love and support your life can be rich and full and you can achieve anything.
It truly was a sweet surprise of a story that I just couldn’t put down and cannot recommend enough. A very special story that everyone should read.
Flora runs an old fashioned sweet shop but she struggles with a variety of mental health issues that affect her day to day life. Mack opens a barbers next door after being released from prison, but as a member of the Sharkey family she is well known and connected because of her family. When Mack realises who Flora is and how she might be able to help her the two form an unlikely friendship which quickly blossoms into something much more.
I loved this! Every single second of it was precious and something very special. When I started the story, I didn’t know what to expect but everything about this story had me excited to read more. Jenny has taken a variety of mental health issues and handled each one with sensitivity and care whilst importantly highlighting just how exhausting and difficult it can be when trying to manage multiple things that affect your beyond your control on a daily basis. There really is something everyone can relate to in this story, whether you have a diagnosed mental health condition or you are just battling with demons or life’s struggles.
Mack was a big surprise, such a gentle and sweet soul but passionate and strong. You could really feel how much she cared about not just Flora but everyone and she was remorseful of her criminal behaviour and connections while being realistic about them too. She was a great character, perfectly balanced to demonstrate how you can be strong but still have vulnerabilities of your own. There was a pressure that came with being part of her family but she still thought for herself, made decisions based on her morals not what her family expected. How she was with Flora and others just melted my heart. If everyone in the world took time to truly understand and be patient like Mack was, the world would be a better place.
It was Flora I really connected with though. I understood and empathised with almost everything she thought and felt. This really is a special story in highlighting the fact that mental health conditions are normal and that with love and support your life can be rich and full and you can achieve anything.
It truly was a sweet surprise of a story that I just couldn’t put down and cannot recommend enough. A very special story that everyone should read.
November 19, 2021
What a refreshing read with a variety of issues. I really enjoyed how the characters were presented. The story follows the story of, Mack Sharkey, recently released from prison after serving time for her cousin, Nikki, head of the Sharkey clan. Mack is looking forward to a simple life running her own barber shop. Flora Buchanan, shy, introvert, suffering from PTSD, owner of a sweetshop. Neither woman is looking for a relationship but is that not when a relationship finds you? Hummm...
Mack's barber shop happens to be next door to Flora's shop. Immediately infatuated with the shy Flora, Mack yearns to get closer to her. What unfolds is a lovely and entertaining story of family, friendship, and love.
ARC provided by Bold Strokes Books, Inc. via NetGalley
Mack's barber shop happens to be next door to Flora's shop. Immediately infatuated with the shy Flora, Mack yearns to get closer to her. What unfolds is a lovely and entertaining story of family, friendship, and love.
ARC provided by Bold Strokes Books, Inc. via NetGalley
December 7, 2021
I definitely haven't had the best luck with books these past few weeks. I am certainly in the minority on some of them - like this one - so take that as you will.
One evening, Flora Buchanan is hurrying to her car when a group of men start hassling her. Mack Sharkey, enforcer for a crime family, happens to see it on one of the cameras inside the establishment and hurries out with some of her people to rescue Flora. Before Mack can check on Flora, she's gone.
Then Mack spends a year and a half in prison, and it's two years later. Is the prison part important? Nope. It seems to be there just to provide a gap, and to tell us how noble Mack is, by taking the rap and serving the time so her sister, who is head of the family, does not have to. Message received.
The Sharkeys have been legit for ages, it seems, but still police their territory in Glasgow. Mack, with some seed money fro the family, starts up a barber shop. And guess who has opened a candy shop right next door? Of course, it's Flora. I'll be honest, I was a little disappointed it wasn't a flower shop, for obvious reasons.
We find out that Flora is a bundle of mental health issues: social anxiety (same, girl!), OCD, PTSD. This was first thing to stop and wonder about: why on earth does someone with social anxiety open a store where interactions with people are not expected, but required? Not just adults, either: kids. And kids are right little monsters sometimes. It's never really explained what the PTSD stems from, and I guess it doesn't make any difference anyway, but I'd have liked to have known.
In any case, Mack starts up her barbering and the word starts getting out that she's there, so business picks up fairly quickly. Flora's shop also starts drawing people in, including Mack, who remembers saving her from the dudes in the parking lot that night. Little by little, Mack helps Flora work on her mental health issues (and later in the book, helps convince her to get to a therapist).
A pause here, and one of my complaints about the genre (or course). Mack is an (of course) superbutch. Do they all need to have superdudenames? Mack, Ben (another I read right after this), etc. Mack's also the enforcer for the family - but we get no sense at all of what she looks like beyond her eyes, really. How tall is she? Is she a fairly large person? I mean, I know we can fill in the blanks and assume so, but every so often, I wonder what would happen if someone wrote a superbutch character with the name Gloria, who was nicknamed Glo, an who was the enforcer for a crime family, because if you got out of line or did something to the family, she'd light you up. I'd read that. I love gangster stories. But here we have Mack, a solid, one syllable named woman who is not unused to violence, caring for the shrinking violet, Flora, and getting into savior complex territory.
Second pause, this time about Flora and the obvious codependence that was ramping up. It's not a favorite of mine, because it's unbalanced and also toxic in general. I also find it odd that Mack deals with the uncivilized dudes who live above Flora and their harassment of her with a small spot of violence, bu Flora seems to have no real issues with that.
Third pause: I didn't get the romance between these two. Mack references this as what got her through prison. Really? A meeting,if you can even call it that, that lasted less than ten seconds and in which the two of you shared nothing at all? I'd buy it if Mack were some kind of philosopher-warrior type, and it was the ideal of the (perhaps) true love carrying her through, but no, it's Flora, herself, and I didn't buy that at all.
But on we go with the story, and somewhere before chapter ten, we get the first instance of the phrase guardian angel - a phrase I came to hate because it was repeated so very many times, and spoke to that codependence. I stopped here and searched it on my Fire: 13 times! Too many, editor! But as with the last one I read, way to go, editor, with no constant drumbeat of heads snapping up!
Mack promises to always protect Flora, but actually does not: due to another crime family wanting to expand and sell drugs in Sharkey territory, the head of that family tells some lowlife that Mack tuned up before (not in the book) to go grab Flora and Isy, who has been helping out at the candy shop. He does so, and then is stuck with the two, when the boss tells him to kill them both, something he doesn't want to do, but he knows that his boss will kill him or Mack will when she finds him.
But Flora saves herself and Isy by distracting the thug and then whacking him in the head - nothing preventing her from doing these things with adrenaline flooding her body.
No sexytimes of note, explicit or otherwise that made a blip on the page. If you're looking for that, it isn't here. If you're looking for more of a slower evolution without a bunch of sex scenes that sound like human anatomy or gyno classes, though, this could do it.
HEA, etc.
My favorite character: Mack's dachsund, Dexter.
Two stars of five. Not my thing.
Thanks to Bold Strokes Books and NetGalley for the reading copy.
Expected publication date: December 14, 2021
One evening, Flora Buchanan is hurrying to her car when a group of men start hassling her. Mack Sharkey, enforcer for a crime family, happens to see it on one of the cameras inside the establishment and hurries out with some of her people to rescue Flora. Before Mack can check on Flora, she's gone.
Then Mack spends a year and a half in prison, and it's two years later. Is the prison part important? Nope. It seems to be there just to provide a gap, and to tell us how noble Mack is, by taking the rap and serving the time so her sister, who is head of the family, does not have to. Message received.
The Sharkeys have been legit for ages, it seems, but still police their territory in Glasgow. Mack, with some seed money fro the family, starts up a barber shop. And guess who has opened a candy shop right next door? Of course, it's Flora. I'll be honest, I was a little disappointed it wasn't a flower shop, for obvious reasons.
We find out that Flora is a bundle of mental health issues: social anxiety (same, girl!), OCD, PTSD. This was first thing to stop and wonder about: why on earth does someone with social anxiety open a store where interactions with people are not expected, but required? Not just adults, either: kids. And kids are right little monsters sometimes. It's never really explained what the PTSD stems from, and I guess it doesn't make any difference anyway, but I'd have liked to have known.
In any case, Mack starts up her barbering and the word starts getting out that she's there, so business picks up fairly quickly. Flora's shop also starts drawing people in, including Mack, who remembers saving her from the dudes in the parking lot that night. Little by little, Mack helps Flora work on her mental health issues (and later in the book, helps convince her to get to a therapist).
A pause here, and one of my complaints about the genre (or course). Mack is an (of course) superbutch. Do they all need to have superdudenames? Mack, Ben (another I read right after this), etc. Mack's also the enforcer for the family - but we get no sense at all of what she looks like beyond her eyes, really. How tall is she? Is she a fairly large person? I mean, I know we can fill in the blanks and assume so, but every so often, I wonder what would happen if someone wrote a superbutch character with the name Gloria, who was nicknamed Glo, an who was the enforcer for a crime family, because if you got out of line or did something to the family, she'd light you up. I'd read that. I love gangster stories. But here we have Mack, a solid, one syllable named woman who is not unused to violence, caring for the shrinking violet, Flora, and getting into savior complex territory.
Second pause, this time about Flora and the obvious codependence that was ramping up. It's not a favorite of mine, because it's unbalanced and also toxic in general. I also find it odd that Mack deals with the uncivilized dudes who live above Flora and their harassment of her with a small spot of violence, bu Flora seems to have no real issues with that.
Third pause: I didn't get the romance between these two. Mack references this as what got her through prison. Really? A meeting,if you can even call it that, that lasted less than ten seconds and in which the two of you shared nothing at all? I'd buy it if Mack were some kind of philosopher-warrior type, and it was the ideal of the (perhaps) true love carrying her through, but no, it's Flora, herself, and I didn't buy that at all.
But on we go with the story, and somewhere before chapter ten, we get the first instance of the phrase guardian angel - a phrase I came to hate because it was repeated so very many times, and spoke to that codependence. I stopped here and searched it on my Fire: 13 times! Too many, editor! But as with the last one I read, way to go, editor, with no constant drumbeat of heads snapping up!
Mack promises to always protect Flora, but actually does not: due to another crime family wanting to expand and sell drugs in Sharkey territory, the head of that family tells some lowlife that Mack tuned up before (not in the book) to go grab Flora and Isy, who has been helping out at the candy shop. He does so, and then is stuck with the two, when the boss tells him to kill them both, something he doesn't want to do, but he knows that his boss will kill him or Mack will when she finds him.
But Flora saves herself and Isy by distracting the thug and then whacking him in the head - nothing preventing her from doing these things with adrenaline flooding her body.
No sexytimes of note, explicit or otherwise that made a blip on the page. If you're looking for that, it isn't here. If you're looking for more of a slower evolution without a bunch of sex scenes that sound like human anatomy or gyno classes, though, this could do it.
HEA, etc.
My favorite character: Mack's dachsund, Dexter.
Two stars of five. Not my thing.
Thanks to Bold Strokes Books and NetGalley for the reading copy.
Expected publication date: December 14, 2021
November 10, 2021
Jenny Frame mainly stood for me for a certain elegant kind of book.
Her stories almost always take place in a royal/countryside universe and a dashing butch sweeps the attractive femme off her feet.
And to be honest as I read the blurb for „Sweet Surprise" I was doubtful! An OCD and anxiety tormented femme meets the butch family member of an ex criminal family which name still makes people gasp, whether out of fear or respect.
But Jenny Frame weaves a romance story with even some light thriller elements and introduces very colourful side characters! Dexter the dog steels the show!
When the two of them meet, Flora has an old fashioned sweet shop like there are very few left. And Mack is opening her barber shop by coincidence right next to her. After spending some time in prison for a crime she did not commit there seems to be too much of a difference between them to overcome.
I felt every OCD flare up and Flora‘s social anxiety. And the slow burn was therefore totally believble and you rooted with Mack and her every small thoughtful and creative step she made to get Flora to let her closer than shouting distance. I was so happy to read my first book with ASMR content and I instantly saw Mack in my mind in an youtube video as an ASMR barber.
Most wlw romance feature really sexy people being sexy without ever hesitating or having awkward problems which would be too much for a romance book.
But Frame did it and put together flawed women who show that not every wound is seen on the outside and a first spark needs nothing more than Rasbperry Fizz bombs!
This book is in my opinion not part of a series but I would love to read more about Nikki „the Queen of the Glasgow Streets"
(I received an ARC via netgalley)
Her stories almost always take place in a royal/countryside universe and a dashing butch sweeps the attractive femme off her feet.
And to be honest as I read the blurb for „Sweet Surprise" I was doubtful! An OCD and anxiety tormented femme meets the butch family member of an ex criminal family which name still makes people gasp, whether out of fear or respect.
But Jenny Frame weaves a romance story with even some light thriller elements and introduces very colourful side characters! Dexter the dog steels the show!
When the two of them meet, Flora has an old fashioned sweet shop like there are very few left. And Mack is opening her barber shop by coincidence right next to her. After spending some time in prison for a crime she did not commit there seems to be too much of a difference between them to overcome.
I felt every OCD flare up and Flora‘s social anxiety. And the slow burn was therefore totally believble and you rooted with Mack and her every small thoughtful and creative step she made to get Flora to let her closer than shouting distance. I was so happy to read my first book with ASMR content and I instantly saw Mack in my mind in an youtube video as an ASMR barber.
Most wlw romance feature really sexy people being sexy without ever hesitating or having awkward problems which would be too much for a romance book.
But Frame did it and put together flawed women who show that not every wound is seen on the outside and a first spark needs nothing more than Rasbperry Fizz bombs!
This book is in my opinion not part of a series but I would love to read more about Nikki „the Queen of the Glasgow Streets"
(I received an ARC via netgalley)
December 19, 2022
This story has been shocking at first, because its two protagonists are so different from each other that it almost seems impossible that they can form a couple. Mack is a prominent member of a family with businesses on the verge of legality and Flora is a woman suffering from anxiety and OCD. But everything seems to be in cahoots for them to end up together.
The first time they meet is brief but leaves an impression on both of them. Then a time passes while Mack is in jail but as soon as she is released, they coincide again since Mack opens a barbershop next to the candy store run by Flora.
Flora is so shy and withdrawn because of her mental disorder and Mack has so much self-confidence that a relationship between them doesn't seem viable. But Mack really wants that and puts so much interest in it that Flora isn't going to be able to resist.
It must be said that Dexter, Mack's Dachshund, is going to have a great role in the thing. Also, Mack's family, especially Isla, who also suffers from trauma after having lived a violent situation very close to her.
The story is not perfect, since the author repeats too much the problems of the two protagonists, which have already been sufficiently clear. It also has an undercurrent of violence that at any moment seemed like it was going to explode in a huge drama but that has not been much in the end.
So this was a butch/femme story with the addition of an apparent incompatibility for so many things that in the end end up complementing and healing the two women in some way.
The first time they meet is brief but leaves an impression on both of them. Then a time passes while Mack is in jail but as soon as she is released, they coincide again since Mack opens a barbershop next to the candy store run by Flora.
Flora is so shy and withdrawn because of her mental disorder and Mack has so much self-confidence that a relationship between them doesn't seem viable. But Mack really wants that and puts so much interest in it that Flora isn't going to be able to resist.
It must be said that Dexter, Mack's Dachshund, is going to have a great role in the thing. Also, Mack's family, especially Isla, who also suffers from trauma after having lived a violent situation very close to her.
The story is not perfect, since the author repeats too much the problems of the two protagonists, which have already been sufficiently clear. It also has an undercurrent of violence that at any moment seemed like it was going to explode in a huge drama but that has not been much in the end.
So this was a butch/femme story with the addition of an apparent incompatibility for so many things that in the end end up complementing and healing the two women in some way.
November 26, 2021
Set in Glasgow Flora runs an old school sweet shop and Mack the knife freshly out of prison opens the barbershop next door. The romance started a year ago when Mack met Flora during a stressful event.
Flora suffers from mental health issues and is socially awkward, Mack is surprisingly understanding and totally into Flora. Slow burn romance with a happy ending.
The description of the sweet shop takes me back to my childhood and the shop I visited as a kid! Jenny Frame is very good at describing the shop, you feel that you are there !
It is a slow burn and a little too slooow for me, I was an impatient reader and didn't appreciate each scene described in such detail. You know Macks gangster past will catch up with them at some point and when it does, it happens so quickly,
Its great that a main character has the health problems that Flora has and the positive way it is dealt with..
I can see a follow up book featuring the 'Queen of Glasgow" Nikki!
I was given an ARC by NetGallery for my honest review.
Flora suffers from mental health issues and is socially awkward, Mack is surprisingly understanding and totally into Flora. Slow burn romance with a happy ending.
The description of the sweet shop takes me back to my childhood and the shop I visited as a kid! Jenny Frame is very good at describing the shop, you feel that you are there !
It is a slow burn and a little too slooow for me, I was an impatient reader and didn't appreciate each scene described in such detail. You know Macks gangster past will catch up with them at some point and when it does, it happens so quickly,
Its great that a main character has the health problems that Flora has and the positive way it is dealt with..
I can see a follow up book featuring the 'Queen of Glasgow" Nikki!
I was given an ARC by NetGallery for my honest review.
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