I'm not sure what to say here. I was warned about what would happen since I read spoilers, but I still went through with this. I'll start out by saying that I think it all comes down to personal taste and what you think is appropriate for the certain situations in this book.
I did not like Smithy-- and I'm sorry, but his name is really fucking stupid. There was just something about him and this whole book that just seemed off to me; there was a very heavy tone to this book which is supposed to be a part of a light-hearted Christmas series. Heavy as in dragging-down-your-good-mood heavy. I read most of the Naughty or Nice: Season 1 and those books were pretty good; they were a nice mixture of love and light moments with appropriate amounts of seriousness. This is the first book I've read of Season 2, so I don't know if it was just this book or if all of them will be a bit more serious, but I doubt that. I knew going into this that there would be a man mourning his first love, but since I was also expecting the lovey-dovey lightness of the previous books, this one came across as a huge downer in spite of the HEA. I don't think that this book should have been part of this particular series.
On the surface, it was written well and it had good editing. But for how unexpectedly serious this book was, there wasn't much conflict or subsequent resolution. You would think the conflict would be about Smithy not thinking he's ready for someone new or Jessie thinking that Smithy doesn't love him because he's not over his dead lover, Denby, but no, the conflict is sporadic at best: Smithy interferes with Jessie's work life, but that kind of trickles away.
What I thought would be the biggest conflict and would have shocked the shit out of me if I hadn't read the spoilers, is that Smithy donated sperm to his sister, Zelda, and her girlfriend, Lucy. That's fine, but if you're getting serious with someone, they should be forewarned that there's a possibility of someone else having your child someday. Instead it kind of came up as an afterthought, because Zelda announces that Lucy's pregnant. And this really important scene is so fucking quick, which bugged the shit out of me. Fucking talk to each other! For a book that's so wrapped-up in emotion, this HUGE topic is barely touched on.
Smithy and Jessie very quickly get over this, and good for them; I was able to digest it, even though it felt like it was just crammed down my throat and I was forced to accept it. What I found extremely cringey was that Smithy was calling Zelda and Lucy's daughter HIS daughter. I KNOW, technically that is his daughter, but there's something about that that is so... yucky. Not yucky as in incestuous, but yucky as in, I don't like that he's claiming fatherhood over a child that isn't really his? I don't know how to explain myself better; maybe someone else knows what I'm trying to say. Maybe I'm thinking about it like this: since Smithy willingly gave his DNA to another couple so that they could create a child OF THEIR OWN, Smithy kind of gave up his right to call himself "Dad". I don't know if that's any better or if that makes me sound insensitive, but since I didn't like Smithy in the first place and I never really give a fuck about him, I don't think I really care. (Real-life situations involving this are a completely different story and I have more understanding for them. I just hate Smithy and I really hate how the author chose to handle this situation that they created.)
Jessie was sweet and I liked him as a main character. Smithy was better than Jessie's previous abusive Daddy, but I still think that Jessie deserved better than Smithy. I guess I'm just not sure what Smithy brought to the table other than being a better Daddy than Jessie's ex, spoiling Jessie with nice things, and a good sexual relationship. To me, Smithy was lacking something vital and I'm not sure what that is. Maybe because so much of the book was stressed on the whole "Denby was my first love but that doesn't mean I don't have room in my heart for you too, Jessie", Smithy's characteristics and personal qualities seemed to be hidden behind his grief and finally being able to move on. I feel like the author hid Smithy behind that plot point and didn't make his character shine by himself the way he could have.
Back to Jessie real quick-- personally, I found it a little cringey that Jessie gave Smithy a locket for Christmas with his picture in it AND Denby's, but Jessie also possesses some selflessness in that area that I could never have. I liked how compassionate Jessie was, but it also seemed a little unrealistic and since the author already made the tone of the book real heavy, they could have played around with more conflict in that area.
This review is a little all over the place but I hope you get the gist of it. While the writing was good, this book did not belong in this series. But since it is, that fact completely skewed my view of this story since I was expecting something a lot more light-hearted to match the rest of the series. I'm sorry, but I hated it and I especially hated Smithy.