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A Promise of Forever: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
“How dare you think that you can just come along after four years and dictate the course of the whole rest of our lives, Mr. Darcy!” she cried. “You don’t have the right!”
He stood and stepped up to her, and stared down at her with an equally determined expression. “I am your husband and he is my son—I have the only right.”
****
In this new Austenesque tale, Mr. and Mrs. Gardiner are Elizabeth’s parents and she grows up happy and carefree in Lambton. At sixteen, Lizzy meets and falls in love with Fitzwilliam Darcy, future Master of Pemberley. The couple decides to elope but they are torn apart by their closest relatives, and when reunited must determine whether the pain of the years that have passed can be overcome to regain the love that was lost.
He stood and stepped up to her, and stared down at her with an equally determined expression. “I am your husband and he is my son—I have the only right.”
****
In this new Austenesque tale, Mr. and Mrs. Gardiner are Elizabeth’s parents and she grows up happy and carefree in Lambton. At sixteen, Lizzy meets and falls in love with Fitzwilliam Darcy, future Master of Pemberley. The couple decides to elope but they are torn apart by their closest relatives, and when reunited must determine whether the pain of the years that have passed can be overcome to regain the love that was lost.
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March 19, 2022
addendum: Here's a funny story when I wrote this review I felt that I had finished reading the book so imagine my surprise when I sat down to dinner opened my Kindle and was at 59%. Confusion was part of it; I thought did I some how go backwards, but; as soon as I started reading, I was aware this was new material.
So this is another P&P what if that leaves me conflicted about its rating. I loved it and I was indifferent at various times.
There are enough changes from Canon that I am torn between my over used 'Unique' and my also overused 'P&P WTF'
Once upon a time there was a little girl named Elizabeth "Lizzy" Gardiner; who was the daughter of two shopkeepers from Lambton. She was an only child and well educated by her mother who devoted herself to her daughter's education. [Note: it is never explained how the daughter of and wife to a shop keeper was educated enough to educate her daughter to the level of an Oxford scholar but I digress this is fairy tale]
Miss Gardiner was so special that at the age of 16 she was hired by Lady Anne Darcy to serve as a companion to the woman's only daughter Georgiana. When Lady Anne's eldest child and only son returned to Pemberley from his Grand Tour he immediately fell head over heels in love with Lizzy Gardiner and decided to woo and marry her.
Of course his parents were horrified as were hers. The Gardiners knew if they offended the Darcys their business would be ruined. So they planned to send Lizzy away to distant relatives in Hertfordshire.
But before that occurred Darcy and Lizzy fled in the night with the assistance of George Wickham to wed over the anvil in Gretna Green. And they all lived happily ever ... BUT NOT FOR LONG as Mr. Darcy Sr, his brother in law the Earl, and the Gardiners caught ODC napping (literally) and split them up and spirited them away.
The Darcys locked down and Pemberley and the Earl got an annulment and the Gardiners went off to Hertfordshire to the home of Mr. Gardiners sister Mrs. Bennet of Longbourn.
It turns out that you can get pregnant the first time and Lizzy gave birth to a son named Edwards Woods; woods being the imaginary dead husband. Lizzy remains with the Bennets, the Gardiner move to London and open and import business and lots of stuff happens
Bring us to Michaelmas in the year '11 when Mr. Bingley et al arrive in Hertfordshire with his best pal Col. Theodore Fitzwilliam (who?) And while Lizzy is aware of the good Colonel, he is unaware of Miss Gardiner until he meets her son and the light goes on.
And in no time flat Darcy confronts the Earl, hies off to Meryton and gets his family back together.
Lots of stuff happens lickity split and Lizzy and Ned are back at Pemberley and everyone is really sorry ̶a̶n̶d̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶y̶ ̶a̶l̶l̶ ̶l̶i̶v̶e̶ ̶H̶E̶A̶
OOPS I was only 2/3's thru the book.
Now the author is going to slog through the ins and outs of life at Pemberely Lizzy and Darcy being neurotic; them hiring a valet for a 3 year old who sleeps on the floor of a room the child shares with Mary; Lots of stupid angst; a threat against a child; a post Christmas Miracle; and more stuff that just bored me for the most part
One final pet peeve that I had forgotten ; Ned, the three year old, gets a LOT of dialogue in the story. And It is extraordinarily ANNOYING. He seems to often speak in compound sentences and long speeches. Which seem to be almost grammatically correct except for one word which will be an improper tense or incorrect plural. It is annoying and stupid. It makes you wish that children should be seen and not heard
So this is another P&P what if that leaves me conflicted about its rating. I loved it and I was indifferent at various times.
There are enough changes from Canon that I am torn between my over used 'Unique' and my also overused 'P&P WTF'
Once upon a time there was a little girl named Elizabeth "Lizzy" Gardiner; who was the daughter of two shopkeepers from Lambton. She was an only child and well educated by her mother who devoted herself to her daughter's education. [Note: it is never explained how the daughter of and wife to a shop keeper was educated enough to educate her daughter to the level of an Oxford scholar but I digress this is fairy tale]
Miss Gardiner was so special that at the age of 16 she was hired by Lady Anne Darcy to serve as a companion to the woman's only daughter Georgiana. When Lady Anne's eldest child and only son returned to Pemberley from his Grand Tour he immediately fell head over heels in love with Lizzy Gardiner and decided to woo and marry her.
Of course his parents were horrified as were hers. The Gardiners knew if they offended the Darcys their business would be ruined. So they planned to send Lizzy away to distant relatives in Hertfordshire.
But before that occurred Darcy and Lizzy fled in the night with the assistance of George Wickham to wed over the anvil in Gretna Green. And they all lived happily ever ... BUT NOT FOR LONG as Mr. Darcy Sr, his brother in law the Earl, and the Gardiners caught ODC napping (literally) and split them up and spirited them away.
The Darcys locked down and Pemberley and the Earl got an annulment and the Gardiners went off to Hertfordshire to the home of Mr. Gardiners sister Mrs. Bennet of Longbourn.
It turns out that you can get pregnant the first time and Lizzy gave birth to a son named Edwards Woods; woods being the imaginary dead husband. Lizzy remains with the Bennets, the Gardiner move to London and open and import business and lots of stuff happens
Bring us to Michaelmas in the year '11 when Mr. Bingley et al arrive in Hertfordshire with his best pal Col. Theodore Fitzwilliam (who?) And while Lizzy is aware of the good Colonel, he is unaware of Miss Gardiner until he meets her son and the light goes on.
And in no time flat Darcy confronts the Earl, hies off to Meryton and gets his family back together.
Lots of stuff happens lickity split and Lizzy and Ned are back at Pemberley and everyone is really sorry ̶a̶n̶d̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶y̶ ̶a̶l̶l̶ ̶l̶i̶v̶e̶ ̶H̶E̶A̶
OOPS I was only 2/3's thru the book.
Now the author is going to slog through the ins and outs of life at Pemberely Lizzy and Darcy being neurotic; them hiring a valet for a 3 year old who sleeps on the floor of a room the child shares with Mary; Lots of stupid angst; a threat against a child; a post Christmas Miracle; and more stuff that just bored me for the most part
One final pet peeve that I had forgotten ; Ned, the three year old, gets a LOT of dialogue in the story. And It is extraordinarily ANNOYING. He seems to often speak in compound sentences and long speeches. Which seem to be almost grammatically correct except for one word which will be an improper tense or incorrect plural. It is annoying and stupid. It makes you wish that children should be seen and not heard
January 11, 2022
He didn't tell me how to live; he lived, and let me watch him do it. ~ Clarence Budington Kelland
“A Promise of Forever” begins with a very young Fitzwilliam Darcy and an even younger Elizabeth Gardiner. The Gardiners are Elizabeth’s parents this time and live in Derbyshire. The young couple falls in love and makes a rash decision. They escape to Gretna Green and are quickly married and consummate their union.
Parents arrive along with an uncle who arranges everything. Darcy hears one story. Elizabeth hears another. The couple is separated.
The Gardiners move to London. Elizabeth lives at Longbourn with her Aunt and Uncle Bennet. Soon, it is apparent that her marriage has a consequence.
Years later, Netherfield Park is let at last.
Darcy does not go to Meryton, but his cousin the Colonel does. When he sees Elizabeth’s toddler son, he recognizes him at once.
The little fat fellow was absurdly like Fred — just as round, just as red. Anne really could not say conscientiously that she thought him beautiful, but she vowed sincerely that he was sweet and kissable and altogether delightful. ~ L. M. Montgomery
Darcy arrives when summoned by the Colonel.
Questions must be answered:
Was the marriage valid?
Did Lord Disley have the marriage annulled?
How can it be proven that young Ned is the legitimate heir to Pemberley?
Blessed indeed is the man who hears many gentle voices call him father! ~ Lydia M. Child
Darcy and Elizabeth need a lot of heart-to-hearts before their marriage can endure. Communication is not always easy.
Quote from the book: “I don’t want you mad at Papa, we just got him!” Ned went on, his bottom lip beginning to tremble.
Ned is the star of the show. Loved him!
...his babbling, berry lips... ~ Emily Dickinson
“A Promise of Forever” begins with a very young Fitzwilliam Darcy and an even younger Elizabeth Gardiner. The Gardiners are Elizabeth’s parents this time and live in Derbyshire. The young couple falls in love and makes a rash decision. They escape to Gretna Green and are quickly married and consummate their union.
Parents arrive along with an uncle who arranges everything. Darcy hears one story. Elizabeth hears another. The couple is separated.
The Gardiners move to London. Elizabeth lives at Longbourn with her Aunt and Uncle Bennet. Soon, it is apparent that her marriage has a consequence.
Years later, Netherfield Park is let at last.
Darcy does not go to Meryton, but his cousin the Colonel does. When he sees Elizabeth’s toddler son, he recognizes him at once.
The little fat fellow was absurdly like Fred — just as round, just as red. Anne really could not say conscientiously that she thought him beautiful, but she vowed sincerely that he was sweet and kissable and altogether delightful. ~ L. M. Montgomery
Darcy arrives when summoned by the Colonel.
Questions must be answered:
Was the marriage valid?
Did Lord Disley have the marriage annulled?
How can it be proven that young Ned is the legitimate heir to Pemberley?
Blessed indeed is the man who hears many gentle voices call him father! ~ Lydia M. Child
Darcy and Elizabeth need a lot of heart-to-hearts before their marriage can endure. Communication is not always easy.
Quote from the book: “I don’t want you mad at Papa, we just got him!” Ned went on, his bottom lip beginning to tremble.
Ned is the star of the show. Loved him!
...his babbling, berry lips... ~ Emily Dickinson
January 17, 2022
If I listed everything I found off putting and offensive, it would be a long list. Don't get me wrong, there some good scenes and some parts that were well written.
How the couple resolved their initial resentment and lack of trust with each other on learning the truth, I thought was well done.
The use of P&P lines and scenes in the mouths of other characters was interesting.
However, the writing was inconsistent, as were geography and timelines.
The "smoking" gun- so obvious it was going to get a second act.
Darcy's waffling between giving Elizabeth the time she needs vs his lust - his lust won out and it wasn't pretty. The whole scene felt forced (literally from behind) and contrived. It was not hot and sexy! E's response was so bland she might have been commenting on gruel.
I could go on, but suffice it to say, if it wasn't for the few scenes I liked, I'd have given this only 2 stars.
Author- If this is given a revision for 2nd edition, for the love of all that is P&P - Please give the billiards room scene and the convo that follows a major overhaul!!!
How the couple resolved their initial resentment and lack of trust with each other on learning the truth, I thought was well done.
The use of P&P lines and scenes in the mouths of other characters was interesting.
However, the writing was inconsistent, as were geography and timelines.
The "smoking" gun- so obvious it was going to get a second act.
Darcy's waffling between giving Elizabeth the time she needs vs his lust - his lust won out and it wasn't pretty. The whole scene felt forced (literally from behind) and contrived. It was not hot and sexy! E's response was so bland she might have been commenting on gruel.
I could go on, but suffice it to say, if it wasn't for the few scenes I liked, I'd have given this only 2 stars.
Author- If this is given a revision for 2nd edition, for the love of all that is P&P - Please give the billiards room scene and the convo that follows a major overhaul!!!
January 14, 2022
This is one of those variations in which the author places JA's words from canon into the mouths of other characters. I thought that was well done. She also changes all of Elizabeth's social settings. She is the only child of M/M Gardiner, who do not have a successful importing trade in London. No, Mr. Gardiner has taken over his wife's father's shop in Lambton. Elizabeth meets Darcy when his mother (Yes, she is alive as is his father at the beginning.) is impressed by Elizabeth's ability to draw a very shy and reticent Georgiana out and so employs Elizabeth as a companion for G. Elizabeth is only 16 years old, while Darcy is three and twenty.
Elizabeth is aware of the differences in class, connections and wealth and discourages Darcy when he makes a point of meeting with her as often as possible. He persuades her to elope to Gretna Green and they consummate the marriage a.s.a.p. However, Elizbeth wakens to an empty bed and is told by her parents, who have pursued them that Darcy has plans to marry an heiress with £60,000 dowry. Darcy is found by his father and uncle (Lord Richard Disley) as he has gone to a jewelers to buy a gift for Elizabeth. He is told that Elizabeth accepted £10,000 to give him up.
The short marriage has consequences. The Gardiners place Elizabeth with her Aunt & Uncle Bennet at Longbourn. Mr. & Mrs. Gardiner now move to London where he opens up that shipping business attributed to him in canon. (Where did her get the money, you may ask.) Elizabeth supports herself by taking in sewing for a Meryton modiste...working from home so as to care for her son. She gets much help and support from her cousins, Jane, Mary, Kitty and Lydia. Even Mrs. Bennet helps watch over little Ned at times. Elizabeth refuses to seek any social life. She has made up a story about a soldier/husband who went off to and died in the war.
Finally 4 years later however, her arm is twisted to attend the Meryton Assembly where there is excitement about a Mr. Bingley who has moved into Netherfield. He has not brought Darcy with him but the Colonel is visiting. When the Colonel sees little Ned the jig is up. Except for his eyes Ned is the picture of his father. And Darcy soon learns that he has a son and heir. The big question "Is he legitimate or a bastard?" has to be answered.
And so the "fun" begins. Both Darcy and Elizabeth have been poisoned by family members and, what is worse, both are indignant that the tales told were believed by the other. Yes, Darcy wants his son...with him at Pemberley but he also wants Elizabeth and she agrees to go with him.
So the story evolves into many family confrontations. Wickham has a role. Lady Catherine has her part and her sister, Lady Anne Darcy is still in the picture when Elizabeth moves to Pemberley.
This story kept my interest. I found the morals told at the end very insightful. Little Ned learns his life lessons very quickly and reminds adults of what should and should not be!
There is an epilogue.
Elizabeth is aware of the differences in class, connections and wealth and discourages Darcy when he makes a point of meeting with her as often as possible. He persuades her to elope to Gretna Green and they consummate the marriage a.s.a.p. However, Elizbeth wakens to an empty bed and is told by her parents, who have pursued them that Darcy has plans to marry an heiress with £60,000 dowry. Darcy is found by his father and uncle (Lord Richard Disley) as he has gone to a jewelers to buy a gift for Elizabeth. He is told that Elizabeth accepted £10,000 to give him up.
The short marriage has consequences. The Gardiners place Elizabeth with her Aunt & Uncle Bennet at Longbourn. Mr. & Mrs. Gardiner now move to London where he opens up that shipping business attributed to him in canon. (Where did her get the money, you may ask.) Elizabeth supports herself by taking in sewing for a Meryton modiste...working from home so as to care for her son. She gets much help and support from her cousins, Jane, Mary, Kitty and Lydia. Even Mrs. Bennet helps watch over little Ned at times. Elizabeth refuses to seek any social life. She has made up a story about a soldier/husband who went off to and died in the war.
Finally 4 years later however, her arm is twisted to attend the Meryton Assembly where there is excitement about a Mr. Bingley who has moved into Netherfield. He has not brought Darcy with him but the Colonel is visiting. When the Colonel sees little Ned the jig is up. Except for his eyes Ned is the picture of his father. And Darcy soon learns that he has a son and heir. The big question "Is he legitimate or a bastard?" has to be answered.
And so the "fun" begins. Both Darcy and Elizabeth have been poisoned by family members and, what is worse, both are indignant that the tales told were believed by the other. Yes, Darcy wants his son...with him at Pemberley but he also wants Elizabeth and she agrees to go with him.
So the story evolves into many family confrontations. Wickham has a role. Lady Catherine has her part and her sister, Lady Anne Darcy is still in the picture when Elizabeth moves to Pemberley.
This story kept my interest. I found the morals told at the end very insightful. Little Ned learns his life lessons very quickly and reminds adults of what should and should not be!
There is an epilogue.
January 13, 2022
Not a Bennet
*** May contain mild/vague spoilers. ***
In this variation, Elizabeth is the daughter of Edward Gardiner, not Thomas Bennet. Mr. Gardiner now has the store once owned by Mrs. Gardiner’s father in Lambton. The story begins earlier than canon, with Darcy just returning from his tour of the continent. Elizabeth is 16, and as a tradesman’s daughter, has taken a position as companion to 11-year old Georgiana at the specific request of Lady Anne Darcy.
Darcy falls in love with Elizabeth and convinces her to elope to Greta Green, where they marry “over the anvil”. Darcy’s father, Lady Anne’s brother the Earl (in this book, the Earl of Disley), and Elizabeth’s parents conspire to interfere and separate them on their wedding day, but not before the marriage is consummated. The young couple has been deceived by their respective relations. Darcy believes she gave him up for a large sum of money and she believes he gave her up for a woman with a larger dowry and better connections. When Elizabeth finds herself with child, she takes on the identity of a soldier’s widow and goes to live with the Bennets. Eventually, Darcy is made aware he has a son and of Elizabeth’s location.
I thought the story was just ok. I felt it was a bit drawn out and repetitive at times, especially towards the end. I had some problems accepting some things. Don’t hate me.
First, I couldn’t quite reconcile Elizabeth not being a gentleman’s daughter. I realize this book is off-canon, and I’m always quite open to that, but this particular point was an important one in P&P and, while I can appreciate the author’s attempt to show a more tolerant Darcy willing to accept a woman below his station, this didn’t work for me. As such, the author had to give Elizabeth’s infamous “so far we are equal” phrasing a whole different slant. Second, Darcy even considering a relationship with a 16-year old girl under his family’s employment and protection, as well as an elopement was a stretch too far. I felt it put him too much in opposition of the principles that would have been instilled in him by his parents. Just too out of character for me to like. However, I completely respect the author’s right and choice to write her own story.
So, once Elizabeth and their son Ned (Edward) are reunited, ODC basically begin a new courtship to get to know one another again. Darcy indicates he will give Elizabeth the time she needs to accept a physical relationship with him again. This is actually coming along nicely I thought, until his actions in the billiard room. Although they were being playful, he practically assaults her without warning. Lord knows I’m no prude and I don’t shy away from mature content, but I thought this totally out of character for a gentleman Darcy and, at this particular stage of their healing relationship, the manner in which he accomplished it shocked me. At least she was willing, but sheesh. Where the heck did that come from? I found absolutely no romance in it at all. Other than this episode, I liked this Darcy.
There were things I did like very much. Elizabeth and Darcy communicated well once they met again. The dialogue throughout the book keeps the plot flowing well. Little Ned is adorable, Colonel Fitzwilliam is charming, Lady Anne and Georgiana kind and welcoming. The Bennets were also good. So overall, it’s a good book and deserves a read, but for me had flaws I couldn’t overcome.
There were proofreading errors.
Mature content.
*** May contain mild/vague spoilers. ***
In this variation, Elizabeth is the daughter of Edward Gardiner, not Thomas Bennet. Mr. Gardiner now has the store once owned by Mrs. Gardiner’s father in Lambton. The story begins earlier than canon, with Darcy just returning from his tour of the continent. Elizabeth is 16, and as a tradesman’s daughter, has taken a position as companion to 11-year old Georgiana at the specific request of Lady Anne Darcy.
Darcy falls in love with Elizabeth and convinces her to elope to Greta Green, where they marry “over the anvil”. Darcy’s father, Lady Anne’s brother the Earl (in this book, the Earl of Disley), and Elizabeth’s parents conspire to interfere and separate them on their wedding day, but not before the marriage is consummated. The young couple has been deceived by their respective relations. Darcy believes she gave him up for a large sum of money and she believes he gave her up for a woman with a larger dowry and better connections. When Elizabeth finds herself with child, she takes on the identity of a soldier’s widow and goes to live with the Bennets. Eventually, Darcy is made aware he has a son and of Elizabeth’s location.
I thought the story was just ok. I felt it was a bit drawn out and repetitive at times, especially towards the end. I had some problems accepting some things. Don’t hate me.
First, I couldn’t quite reconcile Elizabeth not being a gentleman’s daughter. I realize this book is off-canon, and I’m always quite open to that, but this particular point was an important one in P&P and, while I can appreciate the author’s attempt to show a more tolerant Darcy willing to accept a woman below his station, this didn’t work for me. As such, the author had to give Elizabeth’s infamous “so far we are equal” phrasing a whole different slant. Second, Darcy even considering a relationship with a 16-year old girl under his family’s employment and protection, as well as an elopement was a stretch too far. I felt it put him too much in opposition of the principles that would have been instilled in him by his parents. Just too out of character for me to like. However, I completely respect the author’s right and choice to write her own story.
So, once Elizabeth and their son Ned (Edward) are reunited, ODC basically begin a new courtship to get to know one another again. Darcy indicates he will give Elizabeth the time she needs to accept a physical relationship with him again. This is actually coming along nicely I thought, until his actions in the billiard room. Although they were being playful, he practically assaults her without warning. Lord knows I’m no prude and I don’t shy away from mature content, but I thought this totally out of character for a gentleman Darcy and, at this particular stage of their healing relationship, the manner in which he accomplished it shocked me. At least she was willing, but sheesh. Where the heck did that come from? I found absolutely no romance in it at all. Other than this episode, I liked this Darcy.
There were things I did like very much. Elizabeth and Darcy communicated well once they met again. The dialogue throughout the book keeps the plot flowing well. Little Ned is adorable, Colonel Fitzwilliam is charming, Lady Anne and Georgiana kind and welcoming. The Bennets were also good. So overall, it’s a good book and deserves a read, but for me had flaws I couldn’t overcome.
There were proofreading errors.
Mature content.
January 12, 2022
Lizzy comes from trade
Lizzy and Darcy marry at Gretna Green in Scotland when she is 17. Darcy’s father, u n le who is Earl and Lizzy’s parents work to separate them. Four years pass and…
A really interesting story is told. Darcy has married beneath himself, Lizzy is thought to be mercenary at best and probably child with loose morals. How and if they get back together makes for fun reading. The earls first name is Richard so the Colonel has a different name, Theo.
Is the writing great, no but is good enough to allow me to lose myself in the story.
I enjoyed it a lot.
Lizzy and Darcy marry at Gretna Green in Scotland when she is 17. Darcy’s father, u n le who is Earl and Lizzy’s parents work to separate them. Four years pass and…
A really interesting story is told. Darcy has married beneath himself, Lizzy is thought to be mercenary at best and probably child with loose morals. How and if they get back together makes for fun reading. The earls first name is Richard so the Colonel has a different name, Theo.
Is the writing great, no but is good enough to allow me to lose myself in the story.
I enjoyed it a lot.
January 20, 2022
I love this storyline, which gives Elizabeth and Darcy's story a bit of a Romeo and Juliet twist. The daughter of the Gardiners rather than the Bennets, Elizabeth grew up in Lambton. She became a companion to Miss Georgiana Darcy at Pemberley, where she and young Master Darcy met and fell in love.
When she's only sixteen and he's only twenty-three, they elope to Gretna Green. After one night of married bliss together, Darcy and Elizabeth are wrenched apart by their respective families. Each is told the other left with a hefty financial incentive - Darcy is to marry an heiress with a sixty-thousand pound dowry, and Elizabeth accepted a ten-thousand pound payment to let him go. Both are lies, of course, but the two newlyweds don't know that. They're broken-hearted and furious with the other. In Elizabeth's case, things are even worse when she finds she's pregnant with Darcy's child.
Fast forward four years later, and Colonel Fitzwilliam is at Netherfield with Darcy's friend Mr. Bingley. Because she never wanted to encounter Darcy in London when her parents moved there, Elizabeth chose to live at Longbourn with her Bennet cousins. The Hertfordshire neighbors know her as Mrs. Woods, whose husband was a soldier killed in battle. She is a devoted mother to little three-year-old Ned and terrified that Darcy will discover his son and take him away from her. It doesn't take too long before the insightful colonel discovers her secret and alerts Darcy, who comes racing to Hertfordshire.
There are other departures from canon. Darcy's mother is still alive but in a wheelchair after surviving a carriage accident that claimed her husband's life, and she's also very nervous and reclusive due to the horrific experience. Her brother, the Earl of Disley (Colonel Fitzwilliam's father), is the main bad guy of the piece, motivated by politics and misplaced familial pride to make sure Darcy marries appropriately.
It's Lord Disley who found his nephew in Scotland and said he'd get the marriage annulled. He gets a big assist from Mr. Wickham, who betrayed the eloping couple and later attempted his own elopement with Georgiana, which was foiled.
Anyway, Elizabeth and Darcy reunite, of course, and it doesn't take long for the lies to be unraveled. But now it's been four years since their impulsive elopement. They've grown into different people than they were, and there's a lot of lingering hurt. Darcy is now the Master of Pemberley; Elizabeth is now a mother. She's particularly distrustful of men after all she's gone through. All of this is excellent.
But Disley's motivation for going to Pemberley and upsetting his sister Anne is never really explained - he's gotta know she'll learn he was lying as soon as her son Darcy gets there. Is he's hoping Mrs. Darcy will convince her son to let Elizabeth go again? It's unclear what he wants to accomplish.
Then there's a long section after that where everything is clear sailing. Elizabeth is a bit too perfect, always saying and doing the right thing in every situation, winning hearts and minds with gentle persuasion. There's a lot of mundane day-to-day stuff - settling into Pemberley with Georgiana and the elderly Mrs. Darcy, shopping in Lambton, Ned enjoying having a papa, Darcy enjoying being a papa, etc. He's working hard to win Elizabeth over, and the romance is nice. However, there's one questionable scene in the billiard room that seems particularly out of place.
Otherwise there's no conflict or obstacle for several chapters. With nothing really driving the plot forward, the pace stalls to a crawl for a while.
Despite its flaws, the book is well-written. The final act brings drama and interest back to the story, so it ends on a high note. As I said at the beginning of this review, I do love the basic premise.
There is some adult content.
When she's only sixteen and he's only twenty-three, they elope to Gretna Green. After one night of married bliss together, Darcy and Elizabeth are wrenched apart by their respective families. Each is told the other left with a hefty financial incentive - Darcy is to marry an heiress with a sixty-thousand pound dowry, and Elizabeth accepted a ten-thousand pound payment to let him go. Both are lies, of course, but the two newlyweds don't know that. They're broken-hearted and furious with the other. In Elizabeth's case, things are even worse when she finds she's pregnant with Darcy's child.
Fast forward four years later, and Colonel Fitzwilliam is at Netherfield with Darcy's friend Mr. Bingley. Because she never wanted to encounter Darcy in London when her parents moved there, Elizabeth chose to live at Longbourn with her Bennet cousins. The Hertfordshire neighbors know her as Mrs. Woods, whose husband was a soldier killed in battle. She is a devoted mother to little three-year-old Ned and terrified that Darcy will discover his son and take him away from her. It doesn't take too long before the insightful colonel discovers her secret and alerts Darcy, who comes racing to Hertfordshire.
There are other departures from canon. Darcy's mother is still alive but in a wheelchair after surviving a carriage accident that claimed her husband's life, and she's also very nervous and reclusive due to the horrific experience. Her brother, the Earl of Disley (Colonel Fitzwilliam's father), is the main bad guy of the piece, motivated by politics and misplaced familial pride to make sure Darcy marries appropriately.
It's Lord Disley who found his nephew in Scotland and said he'd get the marriage annulled. He gets a big assist from Mr. Wickham, who betrayed the eloping couple and later attempted his own elopement with Georgiana, which was foiled.
Anyway, Elizabeth and Darcy reunite, of course, and it doesn't take long for the lies to be unraveled. But now it's been four years since their impulsive elopement. They've grown into different people than they were, and there's a lot of lingering hurt. Darcy is now the Master of Pemberley; Elizabeth is now a mother. She's particularly distrustful of men after all she's gone through. All of this is excellent.
But Disley's motivation for going to Pemberley and upsetting his sister Anne is never really explained - he's gotta know she'll learn he was lying as soon as her son Darcy gets there. Is he's hoping Mrs. Darcy will convince her son to let Elizabeth go again? It's unclear what he wants to accomplish.
Then there's a long section after that where everything is clear sailing. Elizabeth is a bit too perfect, always saying and doing the right thing in every situation, winning hearts and minds with gentle persuasion. There's a lot of mundane day-to-day stuff - settling into Pemberley with Georgiana and the elderly Mrs. Darcy, shopping in Lambton, Ned enjoying having a papa, Darcy enjoying being a papa, etc. He's working hard to win Elizabeth over, and the romance is nice. However, there's one questionable scene in the billiard room that seems particularly out of place.
Otherwise there's no conflict or obstacle for several chapters. With nothing really driving the plot forward, the pace stalls to a crawl for a while.
Despite its flaws, the book is well-written. The final act brings drama and interest back to the story, so it ends on a high note. As I said at the beginning of this review, I do love the basic premise.
There is some adult content.
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January 15, 2022DNF
I got to 65% before my frustration forced me to call it a day on this one. Thankfully for the sake of my Kindle, it did not get tossed across the room.
There is so much telling and re-telling of the same thing. Too much detail in things that don’t add to the story - like the exact number & sex of the dogs in the kennel.
I got to 65% before my frustration forced me to call it a day on this one. Thankfully for the sake of my Kindle, it did not get tossed across the room.
There is so much telling and re-telling of the same thing. Too much detail in things that don’t add to the story - like the exact number & sex of the dogs in the kennel.
March 23, 2024
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Third read:
My rating changed from 4 Stars to 3 Stars and it's DNF at 82%. I may have started to analyze a bit.
The first half of the book was well done, and at one point it seemed like the book is finish and could maybe only use a fine epilogue, when looking at the percentage it was only 59% in.
Things weren't also adding up in my opinion, From Pemberley to Cheshire only few hours by carriage? From Cheshire to Netherfield maybe only 1 day? From Longbourn to Pemberley 1 day Journey even with changing horses. Sorry but that doesn't add up.
Quick Summary: Elizabeth Gardiner and Fitzwilliam Darcy meet younger, and elope with the help of Wickham. Before they are parted, they consummated their marriage which resulted in her having a son named Edward (Ned). After their elopement she lives at Longbourn and Darcy is closeted away at Pemberley. At Michaelmas 1811 Bingley takes up residency at Netherfield Park and Col. Fitzwilliam joins him much to Elizabeth's chagrin when she realized it's Darcy's cousin. One day he meets little Ned, you can imagine what happened. An express to Darcy knowing he would come as soon as possible.
And while Ned (ODC's son) is cute he is talking so much, too much dialogue already.
As for Elizabeth and her parents, what Mr. Gardiner did was in my opinion unacceptable. He saw how she suffered the previous 4 years. Put the money he got away for only a short time then decided to use it and build his business? His daughter worked as a dressmaker to gain a bit money. While he got 10.000 pounds from Lord Disley (as a bribe to let go of Darcy), did he ever think about support her daughter and grandson with the money which was supposed to be for her? NO. She got maybe twice a year a few pounds. I would sever every contact with him.
Coming to a scene with Caroline Bingley, why didn't we get to know Caroline's reaction to Elizabeth's revelations that she is married to him and Ned is her son? When Darcy was there it was stated that Caroline had his cap set on him etc and got jealous when she saw ODC together. But we get no reaction to the news?
And for ODC's love story, I just don't felt the spark, and at 82% it's pretty far in and they made up, fell in love again etc.
Most importantly like also in one of my notes, a Valet for a 3 year old boy? WHY? Is that normal for a 3 year old to get a Valet instead of a nursemaid?
Third read:
My rating changed from 4 Stars to 3 Stars and it's DNF at 82%. I may have started to analyze a bit.
The first half of the book was well done, and at one point it seemed like the book is finish and could maybe only use a fine epilogue, when looking at the percentage it was only 59% in.
Things weren't also adding up in my opinion, From Pemberley to Cheshire only few hours by carriage? From Cheshire to Netherfield maybe only 1 day? From Longbourn to Pemberley 1 day Journey even with changing horses. Sorry but that doesn't add up.
Quick Summary: Elizabeth Gardiner and Fitzwilliam Darcy meet younger, and elope with the help of Wickham. Before they are parted, they consummated their marriage which resulted in her having a son named Edward (Ned). After their elopement she lives at Longbourn and Darcy is closeted away at Pemberley. At Michaelmas 1811 Bingley takes up residency at Netherfield Park and Col. Fitzwilliam joins him much to Elizabeth's chagrin when she realized it's Darcy's cousin. One day he meets little Ned, you can imagine what happened. An express to Darcy knowing he would come as soon as possible.
And while Ned (ODC's son) is cute he is talking so much, too much dialogue already.
As for Elizabeth and her parents, what Mr. Gardiner did was in my opinion unacceptable. He saw how she suffered the previous 4 years. Put the money he got away for only a short time then decided to use it and build his business? His daughter worked as a dressmaker to gain a bit money. While he got 10.000 pounds from Lord Disley (as a bribe to let go of Darcy), did he ever think about support her daughter and grandson with the money which was supposed to be for her? NO. She got maybe twice a year a few pounds. I would sever every contact with him.
Coming to a scene with Caroline Bingley, why didn't we get to know Caroline's reaction to Elizabeth's revelations that she is married to him and Ned is her son? When Darcy was there it was stated that Caroline had his cap set on him etc and got jealous when she saw ODC together. But we get no reaction to the news?
And for ODC's love story, I just don't felt the spark, and at 82% it's pretty far in and they made up, fell in love again etc.
Most importantly like also in one of my notes, a Valet for a 3 year old boy? WHY? Is that normal for a 3 year old to get a Valet instead of a nursemaid?
January 10, 2022
Loved it
An absolutely emotional but beautiful variation inspired by author Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by Christine Combe. Another delightful story by a talented author. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
An absolutely emotional but beautiful variation inspired by author Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by Christine Combe. Another delightful story by a talented author. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
February 16, 2022
A young Elizabeth Gardiner and Fitzwilliam Darcy are in love and run away to Gretna Green. The fall out from that trip, the wedding night and the behavior of their family defines the course of their lives. That is until a chance trip to Netherfield put Colonel Fitzwilliam face to face with young Ned Woods. This discovery starts a chain reaction where our hero and heroine must find the truth of their individual and combined situation.
March 20, 2022
Very inventive.
I enjoyed this variation. Elizabeth is a Gardiner and the daughter of a merchant and Darcy is young and impetuous. They eloped and are separated by both families for various reasons. This changes Elizabeth and Darcy in ways none imagine. Elizabeth has a child and is hidden away until Darcy’s cousin inadvertently finds her at her uncles home Longbourn. From there the couple faces their own failures and the opposition from family.
This story was inventive and captivating.
I enjoyed this variation. Elizabeth is a Gardiner and the daughter of a merchant and Darcy is young and impetuous. They eloped and are separated by both families for various reasons. This changes Elizabeth and Darcy in ways none imagine. Elizabeth has a child and is hidden away until Darcy’s cousin inadvertently finds her at her uncles home Longbourn. From there the couple faces their own failures and the opposition from family.
This story was inventive and captivating.
January 16, 2023
An interesting plot but not well executed
The plot was an unusual one but really it was over by the 10% mark. This would not in itself be a problem if the narrative and dialogue made up for it. Sadly it definitely did not. There are far too many examples of words and phrases which are far too modern and everyone seems to have a bizarre option with using profanities, especially Elizabeth. If this was an attempt to show her lower rank it missed badly.
There is a rather odd mature scene which other reviewers have referred to and I would have to agree it is clumsy at best. Finally I do wish authors wouldn’t give small children dialogue. It seldom works and didn’t here.
I am sticking with 3* but only because the plot idea was unusual.
The plot was an unusual one but really it was over by the 10% mark. This would not in itself be a problem if the narrative and dialogue made up for it. Sadly it definitely did not. There are far too many examples of words and phrases which are far too modern and everyone seems to have a bizarre option with using profanities, especially Elizabeth. If this was an attempt to show her lower rank it missed badly.
There is a rather odd mature scene which other reviewers have referred to and I would have to agree it is clumsy at best. Finally I do wish authors wouldn’t give small children dialogue. It seldom works and didn’t here.
I am sticking with 3* but only because the plot idea was unusual.
April 15, 2022
They found each other early
And were betrayed...
A lovely and romantic variation with unexpected events and complicated situations. It is a really great read. I the this Colonel Fitzwilliam, and Ned is great!
And were betrayed...
A lovely and romantic variation with unexpected events and complicated situations. It is a really great read. I the this Colonel Fitzwilliam, and Ned is great!
February 7, 2022
Pride goeth before destruction
This is a lovely but sad and angsty story. There are many changes, at times making it difficult to keep everyone straight. There are a couple of situations that could have been omitted or handled differently. There are quite a few errors, none of which would have been recognized by SpellCheck.
Elizabeth Gardiner (yes, different story) is Georgiana Darcy's companion. When Fitzwilliam Darcy returns from his Grand Tour, he becomes fascinated with Elizabeth. She is 16, Darcy is 23. In due time, they fall in love and elope to Gretna Green where they are married over the anvil and the marriage is consummated.
The same day, Darcy is forced into a carriage by his uncle and taken home. He is told that Elizabeth has been bought off with £10,000. Lizzy's parents take her home, telling her that Darcy is to marry a woman with £60,000. When she discovers that she is with child, she sends numerous letters to Darcy but receives no response.
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This is a lovely but sad and angsty story. There are many changes, at times making it difficult to keep everyone straight. There are a couple of situations that could have been omitted or handled differently. There are quite a few errors, none of which would have been recognized by SpellCheck.
Elizabeth Gardiner (yes, different story) is Georgiana Darcy's companion. When Fitzwilliam Darcy returns from his Grand Tour, he becomes fascinated with Elizabeth. She is 16, Darcy is 23. In due time, they fall in love and elope to Gretna Green where they are married over the anvil and the marriage is consummated.
The same day, Darcy is forced into a carriage by his uncle and taken home. He is told that Elizabeth has been bought off with £10,000. Lizzy's parents take her home, telling her that Darcy is to marry a woman with £60,000. When she discovers that she is with child, she sends numerous letters to Darcy but receives no response.
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January 28, 2022
No thanks.
When one reviewer on Amazon wrote that the book was “woke”, another defended the book on the grounds that incredibly minor characters were gay and this somehow translated into moral superiority on the part of the author. In fact, that character insertion was unnecessary and thin, adding nothing to the book. Moreover, the true “woke” criticism still stands: precociously interrupting three-year old guiding the conversations (and referred to as the “glue” of the family), a wicked earl, after being shot and reformed, being called to reckoning by Elizabeth and responding, “tell me what you really think?”, and a game of strip pool in which a bent position leads to barnyard type mounting. No thank you. I can do woke all day long; it is poor story line that offends me.
When one reviewer on Amazon wrote that the book was “woke”, another defended the book on the grounds that incredibly minor characters were gay and this somehow translated into moral superiority on the part of the author. In fact, that character insertion was unnecessary and thin, adding nothing to the book. Moreover, the true “woke” criticism still stands: precociously interrupting three-year old guiding the conversations (and referred to as the “glue” of the family), a wicked earl, after being shot and reformed, being called to reckoning by Elizabeth and responding, “tell me what you really think?”, and a game of strip pool in which a bent position leads to barnyard type mounting. No thank you. I can do woke all day long; it is poor story line that offends me.
October 1, 2022
Hated Elizabeth as a Gardiner, but a lovely sweet story. Perhaps a little too sickly sweet, with one too many God references for my personal taste but I enjoyed it all the same. Oh, & let’s not forget all hail the reigning hero of this book- Master Edward (Neddy) Darcy!!
July 9, 2023
This was a good mix of angst with a reasonably rapid HEA. Sometimes the HEA is dragged all the way to 90% , but in this story you can see that there will be and HEA about half way through.
ODC were each tricked by their parents and Uncle Matlock, which led to a separation and several years of heartbreak. But Bingley’s lease in Netherfield reconnects them and sends them on the way to finding a resolution.
ODC were each tricked by their parents and Uncle Matlock, which led to a separation and several years of heartbreak. But Bingley’s lease in Netherfield reconnects them and sends them on the way to finding a resolution.
February 1, 2022
Modern language used
Dislike modern language and concepts. Dislike 3y old who speaks as if much older and whose mother corrected a verb once but never his poor grammar. Liked that ODC had to work to regain trust. Don't like unlikely scenarios and many typos. Don't think that living with her Bennet cousins for 4y taught her how to be a gentleman's daughter. Disappointing.
Dislike modern language and concepts. Dislike 3y old who speaks as if much older and whose mother corrected a verb once but never his poor grammar. Liked that ODC had to work to regain trust. Don't like unlikely scenarios and many typos. Don't think that living with her Bennet cousins for 4y taught her how to be a gentleman's daughter. Disappointing.
January 13, 2023
This story is quite a different take on P &P. It took me a while to read it and finish it. I felt the story has a lot of angst, not overly angsty but from the beginning there is conflict.
Elizabeth is not a Bennet in this one, is a Gardiner. She is the only daughter of her cannon uncle and aunt. She lived all her early life in Lambton, Mr Gardiner being the general store's owner in that village. At 16 she went to work as companion for Miss Darcy. The Darcy's were concerned Georgiana was too shy and because Elizabeth made her smile and gave her confidence when she visited the store, they decided to offer Lizzy the position.
In the meantime, Fitzwilliam Darcy, 23, was not at home. He came back from uni some 3 months later and found himself quite drawn to this girl, and after some time in her company was quite besotted with his sister's companion. Against her better judgment, Elizabeth accepts Fitzwilliam's attentions to her, falling in love with him, even if she knows that, as a tradesman's daughter she is far beneath him (the divide between them is even greater than in canon). This Darcy is very charming to her so it is not surprising she would fall for him, especially being an innocent and younger Elizabeth.
However, reader, don't worry, Mr Darcy has honourable intentions with Elizabeth. They decide to elope and, with Wickham's help (bad idea, I know), Darcy takes Lizzy to Gretna Green, where they marry and consummate the marriage.
Unfortunately, his father and uncle Matlock find Darcy when he is buying a ring for his young bride and tell him some tale to separate them. Poor Lizzy is left crying alone at an inn and found by her parents that insist Mr Darcy doesn't want to see her, that their marriage will be annulled and he will marry a more suitable lady.
Fast forward 4 years. Elizabeth lives at her relations' place in Hertfordshire. The Bennets have been her family for all these 4 years. She pretends to be a widow because ... she has a son. Little Edward is 3 years old and pretty well behaved. He is cared for by everybody at Longbourn and Elizabeth works for the local seamstress and makes beautiful dresses for her cousins and the local people. She has been very lucky that, after being forgotten by her "husband", she has a loving family in the country that accepted her as their own.
Her parents live in London, where her father opened a business after being harassed by the Earl of Matlock to leave their home and business in Lambton, to stop Darcy from seeing Lizzy again (especially after she found herself to be with child).
Mr Bingley comes to rent Netherfield as in canon, but comes with Colonel Fitzwilliam as his friend, instead of Darcy. Lizzy recognises the name and tries to hide her son from the Colonel but he sees him anyway and knows immediately that the child is Mr Darcy's. She tries to dissuade him from telling him but the Colonel's loyalty obliges him to inform his cousin about his finding his son.
So, Mr Darcy in due course, comes to claim what is his. However, there is a big chasm between them, the time apart and the lies they were told have made them bitter and both have resentment toward the other, so a conflict is inevitable, but underneath there is still the attraction and the chemistry, and traces of the affection and passion they shared.
Will they be able to talk things over and reunite? Will they be able to forgive?
That is the premise of this story.
I liked most of it, but there were weird bits that I didn't like (why a valet for Ned?, for example).
The Gardiners are quite OOC, you'll see what I mean. I felt Lizzy's disappointment and sense of betrayal too.
Lady Anne is still alive and she is very important in the story.
Georgiana grew up with her mum so she is a little different than she was in canon.
Lord Matlock carries all the "arrogance and conceit, selfish disdain for the feelings of others" and he is a terrible plotter and liar, but he does get redeemed (after his comeuppance).
Wickham is terrible and is involved in the deceit, paid by Lord M.
Lady Matlock, and the other Fitzwilliams are OK (except for lady C of course).
I do like this Mr Darcy, he is not prejudiced against Lizzy at the beginning, he is though a bit conceited when he comes back but that quickly goes away when he realises that he still wants to keep Elizabeth as his wife and how good a mother she is. He is very protective of her, his son and his family.
Miss Bingley has her hopes dashed very quickly when learning that Mr Darcy is indeed married and out of the market.
What did not work is the dialogue between Lady C and Lizzy as she is not a gentleman's daughter so she can't say they are equal as in canon.
There are some other things but in general, this is a story of love and second chances.
I think there are some intimate moments but they are not explicit (from what I remember).
Nice story with moderate angst, recommended!
Elizabeth is not a Bennet in this one, is a Gardiner. She is the only daughter of her cannon uncle and aunt. She lived all her early life in Lambton, Mr Gardiner being the general store's owner in that village. At 16 she went to work as companion for Miss Darcy. The Darcy's were concerned Georgiana was too shy and because Elizabeth made her smile and gave her confidence when she visited the store, they decided to offer Lizzy the position.
In the meantime, Fitzwilliam Darcy, 23, was not at home. He came back from uni some 3 months later and found himself quite drawn to this girl, and after some time in her company was quite besotted with his sister's companion. Against her better judgment, Elizabeth accepts Fitzwilliam's attentions to her, falling in love with him, even if she knows that, as a tradesman's daughter she is far beneath him (the divide between them is even greater than in canon). This Darcy is very charming to her so it is not surprising she would fall for him, especially being an innocent and younger Elizabeth.
However, reader, don't worry, Mr Darcy has honourable intentions with Elizabeth. They decide to elope and, with Wickham's help (bad idea, I know), Darcy takes Lizzy to Gretna Green, where they marry and consummate the marriage.
Unfortunately, his father and uncle Matlock find Darcy when he is buying a ring for his young bride and tell him some tale to separate them. Poor Lizzy is left crying alone at an inn and found by her parents that insist Mr Darcy doesn't want to see her, that their marriage will be annulled and he will marry a more suitable lady.
Fast forward 4 years. Elizabeth lives at her relations' place in Hertfordshire. The Bennets have been her family for all these 4 years. She pretends to be a widow because ... she has a son. Little Edward is 3 years old and pretty well behaved. He is cared for by everybody at Longbourn and Elizabeth works for the local seamstress and makes beautiful dresses for her cousins and the local people. She has been very lucky that, after being forgotten by her "husband", she has a loving family in the country that accepted her as their own.
Her parents live in London, where her father opened a business after being harassed by the Earl of Matlock to leave their home and business in Lambton, to stop Darcy from seeing Lizzy again (especially after she found herself to be with child).
Mr Bingley comes to rent Netherfield as in canon, but comes with Colonel Fitzwilliam as his friend, instead of Darcy. Lizzy recognises the name and tries to hide her son from the Colonel but he sees him anyway and knows immediately that the child is Mr Darcy's. She tries to dissuade him from telling him but the Colonel's loyalty obliges him to inform his cousin about his finding his son.
So, Mr Darcy in due course, comes to claim what is his. However, there is a big chasm between them, the time apart and the lies they were told have made them bitter and both have resentment toward the other, so a conflict is inevitable, but underneath there is still the attraction and the chemistry, and traces of the affection and passion they shared.
Will they be able to talk things over and reunite? Will they be able to forgive?
That is the premise of this story.
I liked most of it, but there were weird bits that I didn't like (why a valet for Ned?, for example).
The Gardiners are quite OOC, you'll see what I mean. I felt Lizzy's disappointment and sense of betrayal too.
Lady Anne is still alive and she is very important in the story.
Georgiana grew up with her mum so she is a little different than she was in canon.
Lord Matlock carries all the "arrogance and conceit, selfish disdain for the feelings of others" and he is a terrible plotter and liar, but he does get redeemed (after his comeuppance).
Wickham is terrible and is involved in the deceit, paid by Lord M.
Lady Matlock, and the other Fitzwilliams are OK (except for lady C of course).
I do like this Mr Darcy, he is not prejudiced against Lizzy at the beginning, he is though a bit conceited when he comes back but that quickly goes away when he realises that he still wants to keep Elizabeth as his wife and how good a mother she is. He is very protective of her, his son and his family.
Miss Bingley has her hopes dashed very quickly when learning that Mr Darcy is indeed married and out of the market.
What did not work is the dialogue between Lady C and Lizzy as she is not a gentleman's daughter so she can't say they are equal as in canon.
There are some other things but in general, this is a story of love and second chances.
I think there are some intimate moments but they are not explicit (from what I remember).
Nice story with moderate angst, recommended!
January 30, 2022
What if Elizabeth and Darcy met at a younger age? She is Georgiana Darcy's paid companion and her father is Edward Gardiner tradesman, not Mr Bennett gentleman. Despite the differences in their stations in life, they fall in love and elope to Gretna Green. Enter the disapproving relatives, who lie to both Elizabeth & Darcy individually, making it seem that the one chose to leave the other because of money. So begins the story.
There is anger, bitterness, betrayal, and a young boy that doesn't know his father. His father doesn't even know he exists until Col Fitzwilliam comes to Meryton with the Bingley's. Darcy hastily travels to Netherfield on his cousin's information about Elizabeth and her son, but stops at his uncle's estate first to learn that a) his uncle had paid off Mr Gardiner to remove Elizabeth to London; b) Elizabeth knew nothing about the money, but thinks that Darcy deserted her for an heiress; c) his uncle found out that Elizabeth had a son and said nothing to Darcy; d) his uncle paid George Wickham to intercept any letters that arrived at Pemberly from Elizabeth; and e) his uncle, despite saying he would take care of dissolving the marriage had not done so to avoid any scandal, which means Darcy & Elizabeth are still married.
The way the story unfolds is beautifully done, from Darcy and Elizabeth adjusting to the knowledge that neither of them was actually to blame, they are still married, and have a son that is very excited to get to know his father; to the happily ever after at the end.
Wickham is his usual slimy, rotten self and gets a much more satisfactory ending than being stuck with Lydia for the rest of his life. Lady Catherine only appears in one scene near the end of the book and is her delusional unladylike self. Mr Collins is only mentioned in correspondence from Longbourne, and the Bingley sisters are as annoyingly supercilious as always.
If you enjoy stories where ODC met in an entirely different way and there are only faint traces of canon, you'll love this one. I highly recommend!
There is anger, bitterness, betrayal, and a young boy that doesn't know his father. His father doesn't even know he exists until Col Fitzwilliam comes to Meryton with the Bingley's. Darcy hastily travels to Netherfield on his cousin's information about Elizabeth and her son, but stops at his uncle's estate first to learn that a) his uncle had paid off Mr Gardiner to remove Elizabeth to London; b) Elizabeth knew nothing about the money, but thinks that Darcy deserted her for an heiress; c) his uncle found out that Elizabeth had a son and said nothing to Darcy; d) his uncle paid George Wickham to intercept any letters that arrived at Pemberly from Elizabeth; and e) his uncle, despite saying he would take care of dissolving the marriage had not done so to avoid any scandal, which means Darcy & Elizabeth are still married.
The way the story unfolds is beautifully done, from Darcy and Elizabeth adjusting to the knowledge that neither of them was actually to blame, they are still married, and have a son that is very excited to get to know his father; to the happily ever after at the end.
Wickham is his usual slimy, rotten self and gets a much more satisfactory ending than being stuck with Lydia for the rest of his life. Lady Catherine only appears in one scene near the end of the book and is her delusional unladylike self. Mr Collins is only mentioned in correspondence from Longbourne, and the Bingley sisters are as annoyingly supercilious as always.
If you enjoy stories where ODC met in an entirely different way and there are only faint traces of canon, you'll love this one. I highly recommend!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
February 15, 2022
This is not ODC
I am astonished this book has such good reviews. The only thing relatable to Pride and Prejudice is the character names. Everything else is 2022 bull. Darcy is happy to pursue a tradesman’s daughter and his sister’s paid companion at that. He convinces her to elope after only knowing her 3 months by running off to Scotland with his boyhood friend Wickham, whom he treats as a servant, not a friend, just saying. No wonder he stabs Darcy in the back. Of course they are torn apart because we need a plot, also, let’s throw in todays values into our Regency period. Elizabeth is working as a seamstress to support herself and her son and when Darcy finds her and wants to stay married (is there really a choice? He pretty much owns her), she balks because he doesn’t want her to work. OMG! A gentleman’s wife working?!? Then we get to Pemberley with Lady Anne in a wheelchair, and by reading, a pretty modern one because she is able to push herself around and up and down ramps. Elizabeth asks her if she had a spinal injury and Lady Anne discloses that the doctor thinks she pinched her spine. I’m not up to date on any medical research, but did they know in that time period about spinal cord injuries? I mean they were still bleeding people to restore their humors… just a thought. Then add in the little detail of their African manager of the estate (that little extra detail wasn’t necessary, but there needs to be some diversity in the book), the possibility hiring of his biracial daughter as elizabeth’s lady’s maid and their butler’s gay lover as a valet to their 3 year old son, which was illegal at the time. Oh! And don’t forget the strip billiards! How out of character can we get? I am almost finished with the book so I have to finish it, but come on. This is ridiculous. Skip this book.
I am astonished this book has such good reviews. The only thing relatable to Pride and Prejudice is the character names. Everything else is 2022 bull. Darcy is happy to pursue a tradesman’s daughter and his sister’s paid companion at that. He convinces her to elope after only knowing her 3 months by running off to Scotland with his boyhood friend Wickham, whom he treats as a servant, not a friend, just saying. No wonder he stabs Darcy in the back. Of course they are torn apart because we need a plot, also, let’s throw in todays values into our Regency period. Elizabeth is working as a seamstress to support herself and her son and when Darcy finds her and wants to stay married (is there really a choice? He pretty much owns her), she balks because he doesn’t want her to work. OMG! A gentleman’s wife working?!? Then we get to Pemberley with Lady Anne in a wheelchair, and by reading, a pretty modern one because she is able to push herself around and up and down ramps. Elizabeth asks her if she had a spinal injury and Lady Anne discloses that the doctor thinks she pinched her spine. I’m not up to date on any medical research, but did they know in that time period about spinal cord injuries? I mean they were still bleeding people to restore their humors… just a thought. Then add in the little detail of their African manager of the estate (that little extra detail wasn’t necessary, but there needs to be some diversity in the book), the possibility hiring of his biracial daughter as elizabeth’s lady’s maid and their butler’s gay lover as a valet to their 3 year old son, which was illegal at the time. Oh! And don’t forget the strip billiards! How out of character can we get? I am almost finished with the book so I have to finish it, but come on. This is ridiculous. Skip this book.
February 16, 2022
Entertaining
To call this a P&P variation is a stretch. The book borrows the names and locations of the original, but completely alters the characters and even their family dynamics. Elizabeth Gardiner lives in Lambton, and meets Mr Darcy during her employment as a companion to Georgiana Darcy. Darcy and Elizabeth fall in love and elope to Gretna Green, are married, and immediately consummate their wedding vows. Then, Darcy's uncle the earl, his own father, and Elizabeth's parents descend on them and separate the newlyweds, lying to each of them separately to force them apart. Eventually, Elizabeth discovers that she's pregnant, she goes to live with her uncle and aunt Bennett's family in Hertfordshire, and gives birth to a son. Three years later, Colonel Fitzwilliam visits Bingley in Hertfordshire, meets Elizabeth, and sees a strong resemblance to Darcy in her son. He asks Darcy to come and look for himself, and Elizabeth is reluctantly reunited with the man who she feels had abandoned her all those years ago.
This story could have been very depressing, given these circumstances. The tone of the story is saved by the Darcy character being an understanding and thoughtful man. Thankfully, the author has made him patient and insightful, and Colonel Fitzwilliam has a lot to do with that. Both of those men are wonderful characters. There's a three year old boy involved, so he's cute and endearing.
The romance is nice. There were a couple of things that struck a harsh chord that didn't feel necessary to me. One episode was Darcy accosting Elizabeth over a billiards table. Not exactly romantic. The other item was the situation between the butler and Ned's valet. That little detail felt contrived and unnecessary. Could have done without both of those scenes.
However, the book is well written and well edited. I recommend it.
To call this a P&P variation is a stretch. The book borrows the names and locations of the original, but completely alters the characters and even their family dynamics. Elizabeth Gardiner lives in Lambton, and meets Mr Darcy during her employment as a companion to Georgiana Darcy. Darcy and Elizabeth fall in love and elope to Gretna Green, are married, and immediately consummate their wedding vows. Then, Darcy's uncle the earl, his own father, and Elizabeth's parents descend on them and separate the newlyweds, lying to each of them separately to force them apart. Eventually, Elizabeth discovers that she's pregnant, she goes to live with her uncle and aunt Bennett's family in Hertfordshire, and gives birth to a son. Three years later, Colonel Fitzwilliam visits Bingley in Hertfordshire, meets Elizabeth, and sees a strong resemblance to Darcy in her son. He asks Darcy to come and look for himself, and Elizabeth is reluctantly reunited with the man who she feels had abandoned her all those years ago.
This story could have been very depressing, given these circumstances. The tone of the story is saved by the Darcy character being an understanding and thoughtful man. Thankfully, the author has made him patient and insightful, and Colonel Fitzwilliam has a lot to do with that. Both of those men are wonderful characters. There's a three year old boy involved, so he's cute and endearing.
The romance is nice. There were a couple of things that struck a harsh chord that didn't feel necessary to me. One episode was Darcy accosting Elizabeth over a billiards table. Not exactly romantic. The other item was the situation between the butler and Ned's valet. That little detail felt contrived and unnecessary. Could have done without both of those scenes.
However, the book is well written and well edited. I recommend it.
May 1, 2023
Romeo and Juliet have their happily ever after
Apart from the initial angst when the feelings between Fitzwilliam Darcy and Elizabeth Gardiner is all but love and affection, there is not much angst in the bulk of this variation which is a bit of a disappointment. Angst comes from tearing them apart from the get go due to pride, prejudice and familial sense of control.
Once Darcy finds her long lost love and their offspring, he soon finds he still retains strong feelings of love for the girl he hastily married in Gretna Green years ago. From then on, there is not much to go on except winning the girl’s regard and affection the second time around. Elizabeth who remains wary for some time, hesitates due to her long-kept yet unfounded resentment and anger towards the man she once vowed to love forever.
The other type of angst comes towards the end in form of Wickham’s creating havoc in the lives of the Darcys and Fitzwilliams. Needless to state, he gets his comeuppance eventually.
What makes this variation noticeable is what makes this reader somewhat reluctant in giving this high marks. It’s length, though with much to do about nothing, and it’s detailed descriptions of matters insignificant irritates. It’s not to say that there are no endearing and heartwarming moments between Darcy and Elizabeth that can be had. There’s just too many pages that prove unnecessary, and feels that they are meant only to lengthen this novel.
Nevertheless, this variation is still an enjoyable and welcome read given the new additions to the facets of the characters of Elizabeth and Darcy, due to the inclusion of their child, the revelations of why they were nefariously separated, and the rediscovery of their feelings for each other despite the hurt and long separation.
Apart from the initial angst when the feelings between Fitzwilliam Darcy and Elizabeth Gardiner is all but love and affection, there is not much angst in the bulk of this variation which is a bit of a disappointment. Angst comes from tearing them apart from the get go due to pride, prejudice and familial sense of control.
Once Darcy finds her long lost love and their offspring, he soon finds he still retains strong feelings of love for the girl he hastily married in Gretna Green years ago. From then on, there is not much to go on except winning the girl’s regard and affection the second time around. Elizabeth who remains wary for some time, hesitates due to her long-kept yet unfounded resentment and anger towards the man she once vowed to love forever.
The other type of angst comes towards the end in form of Wickham’s creating havoc in the lives of the Darcys and Fitzwilliams. Needless to state, he gets his comeuppance eventually.
What makes this variation noticeable is what makes this reader somewhat reluctant in giving this high marks. It’s length, though with much to do about nothing, and it’s detailed descriptions of matters insignificant irritates. It’s not to say that there are no endearing and heartwarming moments between Darcy and Elizabeth that can be had. There’s just too many pages that prove unnecessary, and feels that they are meant only to lengthen this novel.
Nevertheless, this variation is still an enjoyable and welcome read given the new additions to the facets of the characters of Elizabeth and Darcy, due to the inclusion of their child, the revelations of why they were nefariously separated, and the rediscovery of their feelings for each other despite the hurt and long separation.
February 8, 2022
overall good story but a few jarring details
Overall I liked the story. The pace varies and it lags at points. I would have given it 4 stars except for 2-4 paragraphs about a minor character. It doesn’t need to be in the story makes one think worse of several characters including the main characters as it’s revealed without batting an eye that the butler and Master Ned’s Valet (who by the way is likely 25 years or more younger then the butler) are lovers. It’s clear the author just wants to be politically correct on this and also making a ladies maid black to be politically correct making the story bad. Mainly because of the description of the relationship between the two men and their influence on Master Ned and that it’s implied that due to the younger man’s age in comparison that the older man will likely pray upon his charge himself as he himself likely was. It ruins an otherwise good story which is sad as it’s completely unnecessary to the plot and actually makes things weaker.
Overall I liked the story. The pace varies and it lags at points. I would have given it 4 stars except for 2-4 paragraphs about a minor character. It doesn’t need to be in the story makes one think worse of several characters including the main characters as it’s revealed without batting an eye that the butler and Master Ned’s Valet (who by the way is likely 25 years or more younger then the butler) are lovers. It’s clear the author just wants to be politically correct on this and also making a ladies maid black to be politically correct making the story bad. Mainly because of the description of the relationship between the two men and their influence on Master Ned and that it’s implied that due to the younger man’s age in comparison that the older man will likely pray upon his charge himself as he himself likely was. It ruins an otherwise good story which is sad as it’s completely unnecessary to the plot and actually makes things weaker.
February 8, 2022
Elizabeth Gardiner?
My 4 rating is very generous; this novel really is about a 3.5 and that’s only for originality of major plot which is the elopement of Elizabeth and Darcy at a very young age. What I liked: Elizabeth not/not the daughter of Mr and Mrs Bennet. Something about her having different parents just seems right to me.; I also thought little Edward was really cute (the attempts to make him sound like a toddler a bit much though); I equally appreciated that there was little of the story that featured Lydia, Mr/Mrs Bennet and Kitty. As well, I liked the hero Col Fitzwilliam and that he alerted Darcy of Elizabeth and his son’s whereabouts. I actually liked the villain of Lord Disley. What I didn’t like: the tired old Lady Catherine, Caroline and Louisa and the Jane and Bingley romance storylines (worst matched couple ever); Mary in a lackluster nanny role again; the same Wickham and a static Georgiana.
My 4 rating is very generous; this novel really is about a 3.5 and that’s only for originality of major plot which is the elopement of Elizabeth and Darcy at a very young age. What I liked: Elizabeth not/not the daughter of Mr and Mrs Bennet. Something about her having different parents just seems right to me.; I also thought little Edward was really cute (the attempts to make him sound like a toddler a bit much though); I equally appreciated that there was little of the story that featured Lydia, Mr/Mrs Bennet and Kitty. As well, I liked the hero Col Fitzwilliam and that he alerted Darcy of Elizabeth and his son’s whereabouts. I actually liked the villain of Lord Disley. What I didn’t like: the tired old Lady Catherine, Caroline and Louisa and the Jane and Bingley romance storylines (worst matched couple ever); Mary in a lackluster nanny role again; the same Wickham and a static Georgiana.
December 28, 2022
I read a lot of P&P variations, some good and some really bad. This was not the worst of those I have read, but there were so many elements where I found myself shaking my head and saying, "Wtf"?
1. A grown man is thrown into the carriage by his father and uncle?
2. Said grown man professes to love Elizabeth "forever" but leaves her behind without talking to her.
3. One of my personal favorites, he explains to Elizabeth that he has already had sex with another woman, supposedly so he would know what to do with his wife. BTW, he leaves said wife completely unsatisfied and with a baby.
4. Elizabeth's parents accept money and tell their daughter lies for years, even though they love her and a three year old grandson. Oh and they dump them at Longborn to build a thriving business in London while Lizzy works as a seamstress to provide for her child.
5. And even more ridiculous scenarios continue.
1. A grown man is thrown into the carriage by his father and uncle?
2. Said grown man professes to love Elizabeth "forever" but leaves her behind without talking to her.
3. One of my personal favorites, he explains to Elizabeth that he has already had sex with another woman, supposedly so he would know what to do with his wife. BTW, he leaves said wife completely unsatisfied and with a baby.
4. Elizabeth's parents accept money and tell their daughter lies for years, even though they love her and a three year old grandson. Oh and they dump them at Longborn to build a thriving business in London while Lizzy works as a seamstress to provide for her child.
5. And even more ridiculous scenarios continue.
January 15, 2022
I really loved this book and look forward to reading more from Ms. Combe. At first, this book was reiminescent of The Coming of Age of Elizabeth Bennet - Author Caitlin Williams (which is one of my favorites). I love the way Ms. Combes gives us a glimpse of the early life of each character but not so much as to be overpowering. Just enough. It was perfect in that way. I love the complications and always love a happy ending. Thank you so much for this most enjoyable read.
January 29, 2022
wonderful, hard to put down story.
First off, the main storyline between Lizzy and Darcy is thoroughly enjoyable. Yes, the heartbreak is terrible, but just like the reunion both are believable. However, I do not like the use of the Gardiners as partial villains. Wickham and Lord Disley, yes. The ending may be too perfect for some, but I think it a fitting tribute to our favorite heroine.
First off, the main storyline between Lizzy and Darcy is thoroughly enjoyable. Yes, the heartbreak is terrible, but just like the reunion both are believable. However, I do not like the use of the Gardiners as partial villains. Wickham and Lord Disley, yes. The ending may be too perfect for some, but I think it a fitting tribute to our favorite heroine.
August 5, 2023
Interesting emotional realistic
This story hit many favorite sub genres for me. Not a Bennet, love through thick and thin, strong Jane, and a dedicated Mr Bennet. I love how intense the love between Darcy and Elizabeth was. I loved how Colonel Fitzwilliam is so helpful. Lord Disley, Lady Catherine, and Wickham are horrible. Mary will surprise you.
This is well written, interesting, and highly recommended to read. The family unit is so realistic its a great story.
This story hit many favorite sub genres for me. Not a Bennet, love through thick and thin, strong Jane, and a dedicated Mr Bennet. I love how intense the love between Darcy and Elizabeth was. I loved how Colonel Fitzwilliam is so helpful. Lord Disley, Lady Catherine, and Wickham are horrible. Mary will surprise you.
This is well written, interesting, and highly recommended to read. The family unit is so realistic its a great story.
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