I was pretty happy to read the advertising blurb about this book. It sounded like fun. My only apprehension was with the short story itself. Writing a short story requires a skillset different from that used when writing a novel, and yet few writers seem to pay attention to this reality. Still, I was hopeful. I enjoy a good short story; it’s a small investment in time for potential hours of enjoyment. Within this anthology, there are a few good and a few dreadful stories, while most are unexceptional. It is extremely uneven.
Anthologies should lead and end with their best stories, kind of like fancy bookends. That doesn’t happen here, although the last story is one of the best. As a pattern, all but a couple of these stories feature sad little girls grown into sad, conflicted women with low self-esteem that can only be fixed by hot, gorgeous men who lust after curves (figuratively speaking). As each story follows a trope, or set of tropes, there is a distinct lack of creativity and a scarcity of meaningful characters. Once again, I let myself be deceived by the belief that short stories, as an art form, flourish. Well, they may flourish somewhere, but not within the covers of this book.
“Falling Hard” by Nicole Rose (2021) 3.5 stars
This is not my type of story, but it is very well written and I’m going to look for books written by Ms. Rose.
Adrian Kane walked away from a lucrative career in the NFL. Everyone wondered why. Stella Quinn is the reporter who tracks him down for his story, having met him back in high school when he rescued her from some bullies. The result of this second meet-cute? Insta-lust of course.
“Freedom in the Forbidden” by Khloe Summers (2021) 2.5 stars
It’s a very quick read but is so implausible that it just doesn’t click.
Lincoln Maverick is a writer contracted to write 11 novels in 2 years for $20 million. [Yikes! Bet that’s too fast for decent proofreading and editing, similar to problems in the entire romance genre.] Violet Pfeiffer is his first love who got lost in the dust of his fame and fortune. While it’s refreshing to read a story with little requisite drama imposed on the reader, it’s basically unbelievable and the ending is impossible.
“Layla” by Sadie King (2020) 2.5 stars
Argh…full of insta-everything…I’m not a fan. Insta-love makes me roll my eyes.
The eponymous Layla (no last name) is a baker who owns her own bakery/reading room. Kane (no last name) moves into the shop next door and makes a lot of bothersome noise. While I like the premise personally (because I love heroines who bake and own bakeries) the story is cheesy with unrealistic dialogue among all the rather one-dimensional characters.
“Protected by the Mountain Man” by Lana Love (no copyright given) 1.5 stars
Forgettable story loaded with errors. The premise is odd, filled with unbelievable circumstances and ludicrous dialogue.
New hire, Audrey Murray, meets mountain man, Owen (no last name), when she runs away from a team building back-to-nature outing after she overhears her boss talking on his phone about something that sounds illegal. Interesting that her phone barely has reception on the mountain, but her boss is able to make two incriminating phone calls without issue.
There are many errors in this little story. For instance, Owen introduces his dog, Kingston, to Audrey and a few pages later she asks what his name is. Is she forgetful, or is the writer? Also, there’s insta-sex between two strangers and no condom is used: that’s “stranger-danger” taken to a new level.
Typos abound; for example: “…Kingston lays out and my feet, rolling onto his back….” Maybe Kingston “lays AT my feet?”
And, “…he looks at me like he likes he sees me….” What…?
And, “I might kill me if I let you go.” The speaker does not appear to be suicidal. Perhaps, “IT might kill me if I let you go?”
If I list any more errors, this could get longer than the short story.
“Unleashed Love” by Ember Flint (2020) 3.5 stars
At first glance, it’s hard not to like a writer who knows the word, bistoury, and how to use it. In the introductory tropes, they’ve left out “Age Gap.” I liked the story a lot, but there are SO MANY errors in such a short story that it detracts from a pleasant read.
Tess Fetchin (quite the last name, eh?), newly minted veterinary surgeon, meets Axel Constant (oh my, ditto the last name), guide dog trainer.
I think the errors are due to a profound lack of proofreading (either lacking in skills or time). For instance: “…as she moves pass….” That should be “…as she moves PAST….”
And, “…nothing rational about this kind of things….” It’s either “this kind of THING” or “these kinds of THINGS.”
And, “…I check his values, blood pressure, heart rate and breathing….” These are called ‘vitals,’ as in ‘vital signs,’ rather than values. It reads better as “…I check his vitals, blood pressure, heart rate, and breathing….” Although the number attached to each of the vital signs is indeed a value.
And, Didar, the Siberian Husky puppy “has more energies.” Hmmm. One energy is enough: he “has more energy.”
And, “Damn every time I see Axe interact with the injured puppy….” Pretty sure Tess isn’t damning Axel for interacting with the puppy. We need a comma: “Damn, every time I see Axe interact….”
And, “…they were both ran over by a driver….” The wrong tense is used; it should be, “…they were both RUN over by a driver….”
I have no idea what a “gimlet eye” is, but I love the grumpy tortoise who gives it to Axel.
Except for oh, so many errors and a tendency towards run-on sentences, this is an interesting story with an appealing premise and a pleasant writing style. The errors were so prevalent that they lessened the overall enjoyment of the story.
“Melt for You” by Fern Fraser (2021) 4 stars
A sweet story with a strong message and very few errors (nice!).
Gigi attends a New Year's Eve party with her cheating boyfriend, Emmett. Tanner rescues her and then she ghosts him. They meet again, of course. It’s a solid premise, well told. I loved the story until reaching chapter 7 when it appeared to devolve, to lose its momentum; it felt stuck. The sex seemed off, somehow, although the characters remained likeable. There are some very tender moments and deep generosity of spirit.
“A Great Catch” by Lia Violet (2022) 3 stars
Even a baseball backdrop (and I love baseball, particularly the minors) cannot bring life to this story. It is slow moving and filled with cardboard characters, no charisma, no chemistry.
Diana Turran and Hal Quentin meet again after her father dies and leaves them co-owners of a minor league baseball team.
While I like sports, I am not a fan of sport romances. Baseball aside, this story is…well…mmm…oh…boring. There’s no other way to put it. While there are some important issues brought up, and lots of characters populate the story, it was like reading Dick and Jane play baseball with Sally, Spot, and Puff. If you get that reference, then you understand what I mean, yes…?
“His Old Fashioned” by Frankie Love (2022) 2 stars
A very thin and predictable story brings lifeless characters together in a less than satisfying embrace. As advertised, this story is filthy, but it isn’t sweet.
Lucy the virgin waitress (and, yeah, her virginity is a key part of the story) meets Levi the mountain man at a bachelor party in Las Vegas held for Levi’s brother.
The story is told from two points of view (POV’s), Lucy’s and Levi’s. It does not help when the two POV’s get confused by the writer. One example is in Chapter 3, subtitled “Levi,” for his POV. We read what Levi is experiencing and thinking, then in the third paragraph, the view flips to Lucy without warning. The reader must stop and backtrack to figure out what’s going on…it’s off-putting.
It’s a ridiculous story. I get that the writer is making a point that there’s purity and goodness in waiting for marriage before having sex and losing one’s virginity…however…! Just grab a bat and smack the reader over the head several times to make the argument. At one point, Lucy asks Levi why he’s such a “good, honest man.” Really? He’s being neither good nor honest in his pursuit of Lucy’s virtue. He’s a hedonist and she’s being played and pushed into behaviors that she happily falls into. She insists these sexual activities are anathema to her core values, yet here she is, behaving in very unchaste ways. She talks a good game, as does he. But make no mistake, they are playing sex games.
As insistent as she is that there will be no sex until she’s married, they do indeed engage in sexual behaviors, morals and scruples aside. He touches her intimately and she happily gets off; she can’t return the favor until after marriage. You know, sex is an act even without penile penetration. They are both hypocrites.
“Owned by My Biker Boss” by Imani Jay (2021) 2.5 stars
Same old-same old trope: hot boss, weak female employee who loses the ability to think around his hot body. Objectifying overly much, are we?
I am tired of stories about women who are unable to work around a hot boss without turning into mush. Geez! Here’s a professional, accredited CPA who wants to be taken seriously. I don’t think so.
Sofia is that CPA who works for Ren McCabe (“Mac”), partner in a top California CPA firm and a confirmed biker. The writer doesn’t seem to take Sofia seriously so, why would her boss and why should we? We know more about Mac than we do the supposed heroine of this blessedly short story. And Sofia isn’t even given a last name.
To sum it up, Mac is the usual gorgeous male model-biker and Sofia is not independent, just stupid.
“Alek” by Brynn Paulin (2019) 2.5 stars
Caroline (“Caro”) Silver and Croatian eBuddy, Aleksandr (“Alek”) Lebedev finally meet after months of internet chatting. Purpose: lusty sex, of course.
I am a sucker for a heroine baker; I’m impressed by people who can bake well. At this point in the anthology, I’m tired of women with HUGE complexes and insecurities, often nearly debilitating. She fits right into this mold. Come on, writers! Use your imaginations and come up with better plot lines and character flaws. Argh…!
“Persistent Enough” by Barbra Campbell (2019) 2 stars
Extremely short story about the heroine’s inferiority complex and raging insecurities.
Big ol’ hunky, gorgeous (well, of course) firefighter Sawyer rescues a dog and puppies from a burning house and places them in veterinarian Misha’s hands. There’s a connection between them (of course) which Sawyer wants to pursue but which Dr. Misha refuses because she’s scared of handsome men, and she is debilitatingly insecure.
So, OK…the writer has pulled out each sad, unhappy, miserable, poignant, wretched encounter experienced by every woman larger than a size 16. The story is soaked in it and there is no room left for a sweet love story. Too bad. The writing is decent. The story considerably less so. It reads like unhappy confessions written in a diary. Dr. Misha’s insecurities far outweigh any hope for a love story and the unbalanced result is choppy and tiring to read.
“Cheeky Prince” by Megan Wade (2020) 1.5 stars
Hapless chick, Jill, leaves a cruise boat for singles because she hates the man she’s been paired up with and meets Dominic, the 5th prince of Casacco on the French Riviera…or some such. He thinks she’s a whore who happens to be a virgin. She thinks the captain of the cruise ship sent her to a place to stay the night before taking a boat to the mainland the following morning. Merriment ensues. Not.
So…OK…Jill’s a virgin and when Dominic shows her his penis, she’s happy and excited? Nope. Not buying this. And it gets worse. I am not a fan of insta-much. This one is insta-lust. The story is so unrealistic that it is unpleasant to slog through. It’s as if characters change based on the story’s need. For instance, at the end of the story, Jill suddenly becomes an economy expert with contacts that arrange for a multi-million-dollar deal that will save the economy of Casacco. Holy cow.
The writing style is not bad, but the subject matter is outrageously horrid. HEA, but totally unearned.
“Nothing But Trouble” by Ashley Bostock (2018) 4 stars
This last story accounts for 30% of the book. At 67,000+ words, it is not a short story. As a rule of thumb only, a novella is 17,500 – 40,000 words. A novelette is 7,700 – 17,500 words. And a short story is less than 7,500 words. Novels tend to be 70,000 - 100,000 words, so maybe this is a light novel?
Michael Vilander is a billionaire who has been left at the altar by his fiancée (his girlfriend of 3 years). He is portrayed as rich (a billionaire) and gorgeous. His girlfriend, Mindy, is portrayed as a gold-digger. What would possess her to leave a handsome billionaire who was in love with her? Well, yeah, nothing. Closed off after his heart is broken, Michael meets Sophia Baldwin online and they have an epically up and down relationship.
The unbelievability factor is very high in parts; for instance, how did intelligent Sophia miss that her job might negatively affect her billionaire boyfriend? She’s been portrayed as a smart, kind woman; as written, she would have realized the bind she was putting Michael in. But her job is crucial to the plot. It could – and should – have been written better.
There are punctuation and grammatical errors throughout the story, especially the use of past tense. For example, “…he’d never went ahead and ordered….” That should be “…he’d never GONE ahead and ordered...” or “…he never went ahead and ordered….”
And “…while Michael flied high with unlimited possibilities.” That’s “…while Michael FLEW high….” (The past tense of ‘fly’ is ‘flew.’)
“Maybe the crowd tonight is more into country, then…then, whatever it is you are trying to be.” When using a comparison, the word is “than,” not “then,” so it should be, “…the crowd tonight is more into country than whatever it is….”
And, “I’m going to weight an extra hundred pounds.” Pretty sure that’s “I’m going to WEIGH an extra hundred pounds.”
Proofreading is desperately needed here, and a bit of editing to tighten up this Cinderella story. However, the writing style is very good. The problem is the many mistakes that take away from the goodness of the writing.
The overall rating of this book is 2.7 stars which I arrived at by adding up the stars rated for each story, then dividing by 13, the number of stories in this anthology. I rounded up because the average was closer to 3 stars than it was to 2 stars. I was disappointed and think I’ll stay away from anthologies for a while. Only a couple writers held my interest enough to look for other books by them.