DNF 20%. This paragraph bothered me:
“As for the rest of the recruits, they are poor and desperate, just as you, yourself were. Just as Prime Williams was. Neither of you had anywhere else to go, and both of you needed a way out. Do you see the way the government played you? Do you think a single Manhattanite signed up for the Service last year? How many will there be this year? No, it is always the starving, scrappy lower class who are targeted. Those videos they make to advertise joining the Service are tailored right to you, to your wildest dreams, making them seem possible when they are anything but.” I was floored. I had never thought of it this way before.
It's because that's from the second book, and this excerpt is from the first:
The more I learned about this place, the more the hope of victory was sucked out of me. This had all been nothing but a trap, laid long ago by the military, desperate for victims to throw at the enemy. It made sense, if I thought about it. Without available food, population control was not only important, but desperately needed. The seas had encroached upon our cities, and getting food to the masses was as difficult as ever, but that wasn’t enough to keep people from breeding. And we were the result. We were the excess. Plucked from the worst cities and towns in the most hard-hit places, they sold us a dream of wealth and glory. And we were suckered, every last one of us.
Soooo it would seem you have thought about this before, Riley....
It's discrepancies like this and a slow pace that makes me say, here we part ways. A few parting positive thoughts: the author has really put a lot of thought into world building and has a great writing style. The books are also well edited.