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Right Place, Wrong Time
Robyn and Lena constantly meet at the most inconvenient times of their lives. Robyn Marcellous is a domestic violence detective for the city. Lena is a business owner who happens to be the Governor's daughter. Will they ever connect or will their lives keep them apart?
- GenresRomance
117 pages, Kindle Edition
First published January 3, 2022
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March 2, 2025
I assumed this would be a romance novella but it's not structured like one.
The initial premise kept me reading but it was very underdeveloped.
Still
- the writing was not great. You need to do more than just say "I was jealous" or "I was angry" to properly convey the emotions on page
- main characters were all stiff as cardboard
- actual love interest was introced too late or properly
- for the setting, her job and their traumas, there was a lot brushed over in terms of actually depicting and discussing those things
And I know it's not what the author intended but the excessive use of male and female made me think of black pill/red pill/incel communities every single time.
CW for SA.
The initial premise kept me reading but it was very underdeveloped.
Still
- the writing was not great. You need to do more than just say "I was jealous" or "I was angry" to properly convey the emotions on page
- main characters were all stiff as cardboard
- actual love interest was introced too late or properly
- for the setting, her job and their traumas, there was a lot brushed over in terms of actually depicting and discussing those things
And I know it's not what the author intended but the excessive use of male and female made me think of black pill/red pill/incel communities every single time.
CW for SA.
February 5, 2021
This was an unexpected story. Robyn is a cop working the streets, defending women at bars. Defending Lena at a bar from her abusive boyfriend. Lena is the daughter of the governor and sick of the restraints of that life. She is involved in the drug trade thanks to her boyfriend LJ. Robyn is struggling with her relationship to Amelia.
This story was short and could have benefited from a few more chapters to further tie things up at the end.
Triggers: domestic abuse, sexual assault
This story was short and could have benefited from a few more chapters to further tie things up at the end.
Triggers: domestic abuse, sexual assault
March 2, 2024
The story has a lot of potential, with the plotlines, it was just a shame that they weren't that well worked out. It felt like the ideas were just put on paper with some words thrown in between them. The characters as well had a lot of potential, but it felt to me like a lot of them were the same. Plus some things came really out of the blue, that made it hard to follow the storyline.
June 20, 2021
RIGHT PLACE WRONG TIME
I will give this book a five....because it was a really good read. But girl you need a proof reader really bad...too many typos and really bad grammar. Really stops the flow of the story when we have to stop and figure out what you are trying to say. 🐼
I will give this book a five....because it was a really good read. But girl you need a proof reader really bad...too many typos and really bad grammar. Really stops the flow of the story when we have to stop and figure out what you are trying to say. 🐼
June 1, 2023
2 stars. This was a damn mess. The writing was choppy and the plot was so unfocused and it was easy to get the characters mixed up since everyone felt the same. The cover is pretty though and is definitely the best thing about this book.
December 24, 2024
Plot Twists I didn’t see coming
First time reviewing a book. I gave this book 5 stars because I enjoyed the story lines. Also the connection to the other book (Queenie). There were plot twists I didn’t see coming and had me hooting and hollering lol. Great book!
First time reviewing a book. I gave this book 5 stars because I enjoyed the story lines. Also the connection to the other book (Queenie). There were plot twists I didn’t see coming and had me hooting and hollering lol. Great book!
January 5, 2025
After Chapter 5.... A.I. maybe... idk
Everything is well constructed and flowing until the end of chapter 5. When Kat enters... the storyline takes a nose dive... Was the direction lost? Contradicting truth...idk...
Everything is well constructed and flowing until the end of chapter 5. When Kat enters... the storyline takes a nose dive... Was the direction lost? Contradicting truth...idk...
March 10, 2025
Nice and sweet!
A nice read I wish the author would have spent a little time exploring why Dudley kept sleeping with Robyn's left overs. The storyline was decent with good characters and evolved as it went on. I enjoyed it.
A nice read I wish the author would have spent a little time exploring why Dudley kept sleeping with Robyn's left overs. The storyline was decent with good characters and evolved as it went on. I enjoyed it.
July 27, 2021
Loved it!
I enjoyed how relatable the characters were and how I can see myself in them. A good amount of drama and wtf moments.
I enjoyed how relatable the characters were and how I can see myself in them. A good amount of drama and wtf moments.
February 23, 2022
Nice easy read
A decent read to pass time. Not to much drama and not to little drama. A book that's not drawn out but also keeps you wanting more.
A decent read to pass time. Not to much drama and not to little drama. A book that's not drawn out but also keeps you wanting more.
January 11, 2023
Short and Sweet
First read by this author. I enjoyed this book. It was very sweet. A Happily Ever After with a twist
First read by this author. I enjoyed this book. It was very sweet. A Happily Ever After with a twist
June 28, 2023
Needed more development
While a good story, it wasn’t really as cohesive as it could have been. So much potential and character development left on the table.
While a good story, it wasn’t really as cohesive as it could have been. So much potential and character development left on the table.
November 17, 2023
Nope! Nope! Nope! So unrealistic in all ways... The story was completely underdeveloped. It felt very choppy and rushed.
not-finished
November 26, 2023i don't remember why i stopped reading this one. should i try again?
December 27, 2023
Quick read
The premise was good, but the story felt slightly fragmented. Characters didn't seem whole.
However, it was a decent storyline.
Rating: 3.5⭐️
The premise was good, but the story felt slightly fragmented. Characters didn't seem whole.
However, it was a decent storyline.
Rating: 3.5⭐️
January 17, 2025
Great Read!
But too short!
I want more!
When is the sequel?
I need more, I read this book n a couple of hours!
But too short!
I want more!
When is the sequel?
I need more, I read this book n a couple of hours!
May 9, 2022
Loved it.
I loved this book and all of the messiness that was Robyn's love life. I didn't know who the hell she would end up with. And somehow I knew that creep had something to do with her too 🤦🏿♀️
I loved this book and all of the messiness that was Robyn's love life. I didn't know who the hell she would end up with. And somehow I knew that creep had something to do with her too 🤦🏿♀️
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