Caveat, I didn’t realize this was book 3 in a series, and I figure most of the people who’ve made it this far in the series are big fans so take my saltiness with a grain of…salt. Hehe.
The fem MC got on my nerves. If she’s famous enough to be on talk shows and get fan/hate mail, she shouldn’t go anywhere without security, I don’t care how “secure” the property is. At the end of the day, property security needs to balance guarding the property itself and all the people on site. That’s potentially a lot of directions to be pulled in depending on the day, but private security is only concerned about you. Plus, why not bring your guys who know you, have your trust, and who you’re comfortable with? It’s not an impenetrable shield, but with the craziness of paparazzis and regular fans, a stalker on the loose to boot, I thought she was nuts.
The fem MC also bitched about the stereotypical problems of being famous, and I say “bitched” because I couldn’t take her seriously. She whined about paparazzi getting in her business and she whined about being a female in a frequently sexist field but I kept thinking everything rang hollow. It was all superficial talking points I’ve heard a quadrillion times and I felt like it was fan/lip service because she didn’t change anything after she got down off her soapbox. And when I thought about the flow of the story, those inner monologues felt out of place. Just all of a sudden she was thinking about xyz and then the story would continue on and nothing about what she’d just spent 5 audiobook minutes bitching about would come up again. It was dumb. Also I can’t stand being told how a character feels. Show me.
The antagonists are so thin rice paper is more sturdy. They were so comically EEVVIIILLL that it wasn’t funny, it was just painful. And the fem MC stopped being a reasonable adult whenever they came around. You open the door and see your ex and his gf comes out on your porch? You slam the door in their faces and call property security (because of course you don’t have your own guys with you or this wouldn’t have happened in the first place). You don’t stand there and let them spew their crap all over you. I’m not even a confrontational person, but she didn’t have to stand there and listen, and it’s not even like she had an attack of self-consciousness or anything like that. There was no real emotional or mental processing going on on her part, no human reactions either, she was just a prop to hold the door open (or fuck in front of and bully) to advance the plot in those moments.
She’s also over dramatic as fuck. At one point the male MC says something that hurts her feelings and in her inner monologue she talks about “being broken” but in the very next sentence she steps out of his reach because “if he touched her she was afraid he’d break her.” Which is it? Are you broken or about to get broke? Later, when she’s talking about the resort, she refers to it as “the place that’s been my home,” for five fucking seconds. Your place there was always meant to be temporary. You said it many many times. On top of that, there was just a lot of moaning (and not the sexy kind) and false strength (“I’ll spare him the pain of dealing with paparazzi by breaking up with him weeks too late even though the cat’s already out of the bag.”) but I never felt like we got a look into the fem MC’s motivations and actual thoughts. The focus was on how she (irrationally) reacted to her supposed thoughts, not what her thoughts were to begin with. I never understood her character as a person. The male MC either, but I feel like this book focused more on the fem MC.
There was also drama for no reason sometimes. Like after the male MC showed up and the fem MC’s ex and his gf left the resort. Instead of immediately calling security to accost them at the gate as they left, then talking to the fem MC about what happened, he immediately hops down her throat and tries to pry it out of her with a bucket of water and a rusty pair of pliers. If he’d given her space and she closed up like a clam afterwards, then I could see maybe pushing a little, but he just went for it, then started talking about “don’t close me out, I’m not your ex blah blah.” Like, bitch. Did I say that’s what I was thinking? Maybe I just needed a minute after being thrown for a loop, and you all up in my face isn’t. fucking. helping? Bruh. He made me so angry with that. Jumping to conclusions and not honoring her request for space. Why do so many romance books treat personal space like the Black Death? It’s healthy. Having space is healthy. Asking for space when you’re upset and need to process for a bit is. healthy. What he shoulda did was apologize for breaking his promise to keep her privacy intact. Cause he failed. Even though he should’ve never made that promise because he’s not part of security.
I didn’t see why it was necessary to kill off one of the MCs, except that it set up another MC to take her spot in one of the later books in the series. Drama for drama’s sake is annoying. Drama as a ploy to set up the next book in a series (and try to drag you in) is worse. Frankly, I lost track of who the person was that died because there were a. fricking. lot of side characters and I didn’t give a crap about any of them. Honestly, this book felt more like a book about the family than a book about the romance between MCs. But another fine example of the fem MC being over-dramatic, she said “nothing will ever be the same,” in one of her inner monologues after the death and my eyes about rolled out of my head and down the street to the grocery store. SOMEBODY DIED, NO SHIT NOTHING WILL EVER BE THE SAME. DUH. I can understand someone saying this in real life, but with all the other “woes of the world” crap that came out of her mouth, I was tired of her shit.
Maybe the previous books built up the characters of these MCs a little better so this book was just a bow on their story. But as it was I felt their romance was missing a sturdy foundation. Yeah, they’d met before, but look how that all turned out. They basically needed to start over to clear the air and then I felt their romance book focused more on what was going around them, and by the time it got to the end they were a suddenly a full item and I was baffled as to when/how the heck that happened.