2 stars
The worst in the series by far. (so far there are 5 books in the series and I’ve finished all of them)
Let’s start with the most obvious complaint - the relationship between Zach and Lyra was an absolute snooze fest. Most of it developed though text messages then they see each other again after months of doing a long distance of sorts and their IRL relationship was as boring if not even more so. There’s just nothing to indicate passion, nothing to indicate a connection beyond anything other that they could have ever found with anyone else.
So really if you go into this for the love story - I don’t recommend it.
If you go into it for the MC portrayal and perhaps some action. Again - don’t. There’s nothing to recommend in this one.
Now - let me also get into the issues I had with it. The above were just observations.
I disliked Lyra. She was a woman who loved to side with men. Who loved to be loved, liked and appreciated by men be them her father, brother, boyfriend etc. And she would probably get along with other women who were elevated as worthy by those said men.
The situation with her mom, and that whole storyline rubbed me the wrong way. Her thinking that her mom should be content with a man who didn’t know how to express his love for her? Her dad couldn’t say the words “I love you” to her mom in order to avoid a divorce. He just wouldn’t do it. He tells it to his son and daughter but he couldn’t say them to his wife, but his daughter swears left and right that her dad loved her mom. So why not show it, why not say it? And all this justification of “it’s just how he is, but she should have learnt to love him the way he was not try to make him give her things he couldn’t give” - and those things he couldn’t give were emotions and words, not the moon or stars - but by that logic the same applies to the dad, why couldn’t he just say ”I love you and I’m sorry I’m shit at expressing myself” - cause as much as her mom should accept some of his husbands needs so should the husband compromise and love his wife enough to understand how important for her soul it was that he tell her his feelings - the mother loved and lived with an emotionally stunted man who damaged her because she always clung to hope that eventually he would thaw. So she left him after giving him an ultimatum. But her daughter chose to stay with her father because he needed a cook and a maid because he didn’t know how to care for himself (although there was also an older brother in the picture) - there was another plot point with the mom having a boyfriend who apparently hit on the heroine (in the present ) and the moms reaction was to not believe her daughter but I feel like that situation was thrown in there to make the mom look worse and reinforce how rotten she was. And tbh, the mom probably did see how much satisfaction Lyra got out of her being her fathers favourite over his own wife, getting spoiled, getting told I love you and all that while he was cold to his own wife, so probably there was a little resentment over her own daughter choosing her dad and enjoying the attention.
I don’t know, I just got bad vibes off Lyra. She would not be a champion for women that’s for sure.
And her dad? He clearly sees her as second to his son for the simple fact of being a woman. When he is asked to join the MC that Zach started in Nevada, he is ecstatic to return to the MC lifestyle and makes decisions about his business (which Lyra is part owner of) without consulting her. He dismisses her from the room whenever the “men talk” and generally gives no shit for her opinion because she’s a woman and she gets angry about it in her mind and realised that now that her father has the chance to join an MC again, he is no longer considerate of her if she gets in the way of the new life he is making. She takes 2nd or even 3rd place (to her brother) to the MC. But guess what? She never stands up for herself. Her mom briefly gets back with her dad and Lyra is jealous that now her mom is the one to play the hostess, party planning, food catering etc, because that had been her place so what right does her mom to do those things now? This girl is the definition of pick me but plays up the role of dutiful daughter and perfect sister and girlfriend.
Also Zach and his dad discussing how Lyra’s mom is a high maintenance woman.. ick. Thank you for mansplaining for it means. “It’s not that they spend too much time on their looks, it’s just that they need too much attention and aren’t satisfied not having it all” - first off they don’t know her or what her marriage was like, they don’t know shit. Women are so easily judged when we don’t accept the bare minimum we are high maintenance apparently.
On the subject of Zach, he had potential but ended up being very blah. I wanted more from Rad’s son.
So yes, those were my biggest issues.
Also a running theme throughout the series is to have every book explore ”timely issues”. And it drags the plot, makes the book seem preachy and it gives us filler scenes.
This series is by far Susan’s weakest. I loved the Horde Signal Bend & SoCal as well as the original Brazen Bulls, they had a different vibe. There was more emotion. The characters were more human and less tokens to represent whatever the writer wanted to discuss in the book.