I hate read this book, and I have a lot of mixed feelings about that.
I truly can’t figure out why I mostly enjoyed reading this series. I got frustrated with this book so many times that I should have just put it down. But for some reason I wanted to finish this book and see it come to a conclusion.
Really, not a lot happened in this book that hasn’t already happened previously. After the first book in the series, the plot has been basically the same – Marnye swears revenge and somehow slowly works towards that goal as she simultaneously falls for her bullies.
Now that I’ve finished this series, I’m more willing to actually discuss some of the serious flaws that can be found within this book.
Let’s start with Marnye. As a heroine, she’s fairly intolerable. Her inner monologue is tedious and repetitive, and she (oddly) occasionally breaks the fourth wall to apologize to the reader for one thing or another.
She’s also guilty of lamp shading, where she states something is wrong just before proceeding to engage in said behavior. The best example would be slut-shaming. She constantly says she doesn’t judge women for what they choose to wear, then continues on to call them sluts for wearing revealing costumes.
I hate to be the bearer of bad news, but it’s still slut shaming even if you say you don’t judge. Stunich is guilty of that throughout her book. Marnye pays lip service to feminism but can’t help but participate in the same behavior that she’s condemning. Acknowledging the behavior is wrong does not make it any less heinous when you participate in it.
She acts as though there’s no work-around for using the word slut, but I can think of a handful of synonyms right of the bat. Revealing, risqué, sexy, etc. I would be more likely to believe Marnye isn’t judging if the information about revealing clothing wasn’t used in the book to further condemn the females in question. It’s just one more piece of information we’re given to make us hate those girls even more. ‘Cause they’re mean and slutty, which makes them even worse.
Marnye also suffers from an almost terminal case of dumb bitch disease. Literally at 92% into the book Marnye just realizes that Harper and her cronies are actually willing to kill her. Bitch, were you not there when they tried to drown you, beat you, or brand you? How is she just now realizing, after multiple threats and attempts on her life, that they are actually willing to kill her? She has the memory of a gold fish, and I’m convinced the only reason she’s alive at the end is because there are five guys determined to keep her alive.
Which brings me to another issue. Five guys are just a few too many for me. Reverse harems walk a delicate line – having that many MCs makes the book more interesting and diverse, but too much of a good thing can turn confusing and frustrating quickly.
While we got to flesh out the backstories of a few of the guys, there were just too many for Stunich to ever really go into detail. Windsor is still kind of a mystery, and it’s difficult to have truly intimate moments with that many guys.
I feel like this is the book where you can really start to see the quantity over quality issue emerge – despite nearly three years of being intimate with all of the guys, Marnye still seems to be just figuring them out. Which makes sense, considering how many stories she has to keep straight, and how many stories the reader would be forced to keep straight if she ever really went into detail.
But not only does this series suffer for having too many characters – it also suffers for having too few females. There’s only one female that is tolerable other than Marnye, and she happens to be the lesbian sister of one of the male love interests. Literally the only other female in this novel that isn’t lambasted is the only one that would never date or come on to any of the males.
This entire series is also incredibly hypocritical when it comes to bullying. I actually don’t understand why Marnye has a list of rules regarding bullying, because they are literally never followed. Someone breaks a rule and oh well. Her ideas about what is acceptable and what is not are so arbitrary that I think they’re based on the position of the moon and stars and her daily horoscope.
And while the male idols achieve some sort of redemption, not a single female in the novel gets the same treatment. There obviously needs to be someone for Marnye to struggle against, but the gender discrepancies in the novel are kind of ridiculous.
You’re probably reading this and wondering, why did you even bother to read this far into the series if you have this many problems with it? And I have to tell you that I am just as disoriented as you are. Something kept me interested in this series and curious about what would happen, and if I had to point to something it would probably be Creed.
What can I say, I like handsome, lazy, intelligent, and slightly spiteful guys. Anime has kind of ruined my taste in fictional men.
Despite all of my complaints, when Stunich comes out with her Bornsead U series, I intend to at least read the first one.
I don’t really recommend this series to anyone, but if none of the things I listed above bother you, then this might be the series for you.