Riley and Connor are best of mates. Riley’s Grandpa has been tinkering in his shed for years but refuses to tell anyone what he has been doing. One day the boys steal the key to the workshop and to their surprise they find a strange machine. They climb in and that’s when their troubles begin for they are flung back into the far, distant past where they are in mortal danger and don’t know how to get home.
Fire your editor immediately, if not sooner. Entire scenes were repeated. Sentences are chopped off. Misspelled words. I could go on, but I won't. Three stars because I liked the story. Could have been so much h more.