Based on the reviews on goodreads and Amazon, I knew that I was in for an absolutely unique experience with this book, which definitely got me excited. It's somewhat outside of my normal realm of epic and modern fantasy, but once I read the reviews and the synopsis, I was hooked into the possibilities. From an overarching plot standpoint, the book absolutely did not disappoint. I could immediately visualize the gritty, almost dystopian world that Harrison built after just the first few chapters, which the front and back cover of the print version absolutely contributed to (highly recommend looking it up if you're an eBook or audiobook reader). The premise is compelling: the question of advanced AI ethics, dooms of corporate greed, and inequity of a rigid tiered social structure makes it absolutely stand out from other science fiction books on the shelves today. Not to mention the novel creation and characterization of one of the coolest premises of the book - the ability that some characters mysteriously have to control and manipulate light. For these distinctive elements alone, this book is worth the read.
That being said - this is a self published book. And to be clear, there is absolutely nothing wrong with self publishing books, but it generally means that the quality of the writing, the clarity of the plot, and the focus on character development may not be up to par with what you find from books associated with mainstream publishing houses. This book absolutely could have benefitted from going through a formal development- and copy-editing process. Harrison attempted a massive undertaking with Starfall by condensing what could justifiably be a 3-4 book series into one 700-page book, and as a result, a few of the main characters were left underdeveloped in favor of efficient plot movement. I often felt like some of the characters lacked justification for their actions and choices as a result. Character-driven mysteries, such as the identity of the Hunter or the Basilisk, were revealed nonchalantly and far too soon, leaving me feeling dissatisfied and wondering where this was all headed. These issues were not resolved by the end of the book, but the conclusion was still absolutely show stopping.
In terms of formatting, the print version of the book was not type set, so if you're a stickler for book formatting, that may bother you. I got used to it a few chapters in. This next feedback point is no fault of Harrison's, but I'd describe Amazon's book binding for the print version to be shoddy at best, resulting in pages towards the center of the book pulling out with little effort. As a result I highly recommend the eBook or the audiobook version if you're looking to give this a read!
Overall, I'm glad that this made it onto my book shelf. If nothing else, I hope the author revisits Starfall and considers expanding it into a multi-book series to give the characters the breathing room they deserve to do all of the amazing plot points and set pieces featured throughout the book. With a premise this unique, I hope that a major publishing snags it and makes the realm of Starfall everything it has the potential to be!